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Subj:  Malice

Date:  96-04-16 14:55:35 edt

From:  KLouise         

Posted on:  America Online


This from Mary at Mysteries From the Yard:


If you are planning to attend Malice Domestic next weekend (Apr. 26-28) do

drop by the hospitality suite of Mysteries From The Yard Online.  Mary

Frost-Pierson will be set up in suite 526/527 all weekend and will happily

take as many 10 minute online interviews as everyone's busy Malice schedule

will permit!  Demonstrations of the new area will be designed to show off the

promotional opportunities within MFTY Online to writers and publicists.  So

drop by for a drink and a chat!  If you would like to schedule a particular

time for an online interview before next weekend, write MsTeries@aol.com or

call 513-767-2111 and leave a message.



Thanks - Mary Frost-Pierson



Subj:  Jean Taylor Does the Northwest

Date:  96-04-18 22:36:41 edt

From:  JTaylorRED      

Posted on:  America Online


Ok, this one I'm gonna get right (forgot to include the book title in SinC

BSP--groan). 


I'm on tour with my second mystery, The Last of Her Lies (Seal Press, 1996,

$10.95 trade paper), leaving my beloved SF for the wet and frozen north.

Come say hello, I'm afraid my publisher hasn't done much. . . 


Portland:  

Thurs. 4/25 @ 7:00 PM: In Other Words, 3734 S.E. Hawthorne

Fri. 4/26 @ 7:30 PM: Powell's, 1005 W. Burnside


Seattle:

Sun., 4/28 @ 7:00: Red & Black Books, 432 - 15th Ave East

Mon. 4/29 @ 5:00: Elliott Bay Books, First & Main


And in the Bay Area, I will be all over the place with MWA during the

fabulous Mystery Week festivities laboriously constructed by the great Janet

Dawson...



Subj:  Different writing forums

Date:  96-04-19 10:34:51 edt

From:  DFlanagan       

Posted on:  America Online


While the AOL writing board was down I did some surfing with the writing

forums on other services. For those interested, I posted my comments in the

Multicultural Writer's Group folder.


- Dale


Subj:  Re:Different writing forums

Date:  96-04-21 12:14:35 edt

From:  Ardwin          

Posted on:  America Online


I thought these WC boards were fixed but I just visited a half-dozen and

found that "Find New" still doesn't work.  Had to sift through by date.  Does

anyone know when "Find New" will be working reliably so we don't have to

cycle through postings we already read?


Ardwin, still perplexed


Subj:  Re:Find

Date:  96-04-21 16:48:44 edt

From:  ANDIDVM         

Posted on:  America Online


Haven't tried them all but 'Find Since', then give # of days seems to work

pretty well.  Haven't tried 'Find New' at all, but this might be an

alternative.



Subj:  1996 Edgar Winners

Date:  96-04-26 10:42:59 edt

From:  Kate 234        

Posted on:  America Online


Hi everyone! Here are the 1996 Edgar winners which were announced Thursday

April 25 in New York City at the Edgars Banquet. For more information,

contact: Priscilla Ridgway, Mystery Writers of America, 17 E. 47th St., New

York, NY 10017, (212) 888-8171.


THE 1996 EDGAR ALLAN POE AWARDS


Best Novel: Come to Grief by Dick Francis (Putnam)


Best First Novel by an American Author: Penance by David Housewright (Foul

Play/Countryman Press)


Best Original Paperback: Tarnished Blue by William Heffernan (Onyx)


Best Fact Crime: Circumstantial Evidence by Pete Earley (Bantam)


Best Critical Biographical: Savage Art: A Biography of Jim Thompson by Robert

Polito (Knopf)


Best Short Story: "The Judge's Boy" by Jean B. Cooper (EQMM, Aug.)


Best Young Adult: Prophecy Rock by Rob MacGregor (Simon & Schuster)


Best Juvenile: Looking for Jamie Bridger by Nancy Springer (Dial)


Best Episode in a Television Series: "Torah! Torah! Torah!" teleplay by

Theresa Rebeck (NYPD Blue/Steven Bochco Productions/ABC-TV)


Best Television Feature or Miniseries: Citizen X written by Chris Jerolmo

(HBO)


Best Motion Picture: The Usual Suspects screenplay by Christopher McQuarrie

(Gramercy Pictures, PolyGram Bad Hat Harry, Blue Parrot)


Grand Master:  Dick Francis


Ellery Queen Award: Jacques Barzun


Robert L. Fish Memorial Award: "The Word for Breaking August Sky" by James

Sarafin (AHMM, July)


Raven: The Library of America for their publication of the collected writings

of Raymond Chandler



Subj:  Re:1996 Edgar Winners

Date:  96-04-26 14:50:37 edt

From:  RAINDEAD        

Posted on:  America Online


Thanks for posting the winners' list, Kate.


Phyllis


Subj:  Re:1996 Edgar Winners

Date:  96-04-26 17:54:32 edt

From:  KAHarmeyer      

Posted on:  America Online


I was sorry to see that neither my neighbor, Harlan Coben (nominated for best

paperback original) or my teacher, Kathleen Dougherty (nominated for best

short story) were winners.


Oh, well.  I guess it's up to me! <g>


Congrats to all the winnners!


Keith Harmeyer


Subj:  Re:Expertise

Date:  96-04-26 21:16:23 edt

From:  Reclues         

Posted on:  America Online


I'm working on a mystery about a person who works for a large government

agency. Can I name the agency in my book, or do I have to make up a fake name

for it? I understand that if you write about, say, a Chicago Police officer,

there's no way you can disguise the agency the officer works for. Or if you

write about a public school teacher, you can legitimately identify the person

as such, and the issue of liability is only a concern if you name or identify

actual people in your text. Does this work the same way for other government

agencies? Let's say I want my character to be a nurse at Cook County

Hospital. Can I name the hospital itself as long as I don't defame it

intentionally? Or if I want my character to be a caseworker in the Department

of Public Aid-- there's only one such-- how can I write about this setting

without setting myself up for a nasty lawsuit? I don't intend to write about

real people, but I would like to be able to identify the agency by its

correct name-- seing as how it's the only agency with that role in the state.

Also, how does a disclaimer work when you're basing your writing on fragments

of real experience? I want to say something like: "This is a work of fiction,

based on a combination of actual and imaginary experiences. The author had no

intention of depicting actual persons."  I'd appreciate help from folks who

understand this stuff. Thanks!


Subj:  Re:Expertise

Date:  96-04-29 15:38:32 edt

From:  FGSnyder        

Posted on:  America Online


You can't libel a government agency.  Where it gets sticky is if the agency

is small enough that somebody might think you were writing about a real

person.  Ordinarily, a disclaimer such as "Although the [Insert Name of

Agency Here] is a real agency, all of the persons and events in this story

are fictitious and no resemblance, etc." is enough.  But try to do some

research to make sure that you haven't inadvertantly drawn a picture of

someone who actually does work there.


Hope this helps.


-- Frank


Subj:  responding to KLouise

Date:  96-04-30 12:55:42 edt

From:  DianneDay       

Posted on:  America Online


Yes, by all means add me to whatever MWA list.  I've been trying to put your

screen name with a face from that meeting without much luck.  Thanks for the

welcome aboard!

DianneDay


Subj:  greetings

Date:  96-04-30 12:59:31 edt

From:  DianneDay       

Posted on:  America Online


I've just come on-line and am learning my way around, but have been an MWA

member and writing mysteries and suspense for some time.  My current

published series is the Fremont Jones Mysteries.  Will be glad to dialogue

on-screen, and am grateful for the opportunity to share with other mystery

writers whatever comes up!

DianneDay


Subj:  Re:greetings

Date:  96-04-30 21:04:13 edt

From:  Kthirty         

Posted on:  America Online


Dianne - welcome! Lots of baby writers hang out in 'writing your first

mystery'. We need lots of help!

Kathy


Subj:  Howdy

Date:  96-05-01 02:45:16 edt

From:  ESFowler        

Posted on:  America Online


Hi Dianne--I've heard lots of good things about your first book. (And I'll

even read it someday, I promise.  My to be read pile is only about hundred

books currently).  Welcome.


Earlene Fowler


Subj:  Re:responding to KLouise

Date:  96-05-01 12:41:40 edt

From:  KLouise         

Posted on:  America Online


Dianne --


Susan Holtzer introduced us.  It was before things "officially" began, when

we were milling around with drinks.  A very brief meeting, but long enough

for you to give me your card!


Karen


Subj:  Author signings

Date:  96-05-02 12:56:33 edt

From:  ESFowler        

Posted on:  America Online


I've posted my May signing schedule on the author appearances board.  Drop by

and say "howdy" if you have a chance.  If nothing else I can point you toward

the bathrooms (I always find out where they are since that is the question

I'm asked most frequently...)


Earlene Fowler


Subj:  HI

Date:  96-05-06 12:54:37 edt

From:  LindaBell1      

Posted on:  America Online


Just wanted to drop in and say HI! I'm a member of the Florida chapter.


Linda


Subj:  Re:HI

Date:  96-05-06 14:50:31 edt

From:  KLouise         

Posted on:  America Online


Hi Linda!  Glad to have you aboard.


Karen


Subj:  Re:HI

Date:  96-05-06 16:15:26 edt

From:  RAINDEAD        

Posted on:  America Online


Hi Linda,


Welcome!


Phyllis


Subj:  RAVEN FEATHERS  MAY  '96

Date:  96-05-06 23:02:20 edt

From:  RAINDEAD        

Posted on:  America Online


Call for signing info, pub dates, column suggestions...Next issue of Raven

Feathers coming soon. Please don't keep the good news to yourselves~!!~

Phyllis


Subj:  Re:HI

Date:  96-05-07 06:30:39 edt

From:  RCHERIN         

Posted on:  America Online


Linda, it's about time you said hello. Glad to see you. Another event in

Cedar Key soon?


Robert


Subj:  Raven

Date:  96-05-07 07:27:15 edt

From:  CapeCodCat      

Posted on:  America Online


I used to get the mystery online newsletter/notice, but haven't gotten in a

while.  Hmmm??


Subj:  Re:Raven

Date:  96-05-07 09:30:49 edt

From:  RAINDEAD        

Posted on:  America Online


I'll check my mailing list.  what was old name again...something wire?


Phyllis


Subj:  Re:Raven

Date:  96-05-07 09:31:47 edt

From:  RAINDEAD        

Posted on:  America Online


Adjustment made!  : )


Subj:  Re:Raven

Date:  96-05-07 13:49:47 edt

From:  SLBWrites       

Posted on:  America Online


I haven't received a notice lately, either.


Subj:  Re:Raven

Date:  96-05-09 11:57:47 edt

From:  MWANorCal       

Posted on:  America Online


The schedule for MWA/NorCal Mystery Week is now on-line, on our webpage.

Point your browser at 


        http://user.aol.com/mwanorcal/week.htm


Festivities begin Wednesday, May 8, and continue through Monday, May 20. If

you're in the area, drop in to one of these events -- we'd love to see you

there.


Subj:  MWA May chat

Date:  96-05-12 19:39:08 edt

From:  KLouise         

Posted on:  America Online


MWA monthly online chat is Tuesday, May 14, 9 pm ET, in the Writers

Conference Room.  Our guest this month is Barbara Shapiro.


Barbara Shapiro is a New England writer who sets her novels in the Boston

area.  Her first novel, Shattered Echoes, is a psychological thriller set in

the Boston's Back Bay.  The Boston Globe said that “Shattered Echoes

repeatedly touches a raw spot that can be soothed only by turning each page

until it’s over”.  Her second, Blameless, is set in the Fenway area of

Boston.  Mostly Murder proclaimed the climax of Blameless to be “explosive”

and the reviewer noted that, “In twenty years of reviewing mysteries, I’ve

never come across a more effective yet logically inevitable ending”.  Her

newest, See No Evil will be released in May.  Her books have been translated

into German, Greek and Japanese, and film rights have been optioned.

     A sociologist, Barbara has taught at Tufts University and is the author of

the non-fiction book, The Big Squeeze: Balancing the Needs of Aging Parents,

Dependent Children and You.  She currently teaches creative writing at the

Cambridge Center for Adult Education and is the co-founder of “Novel

Enterprises”, a firm for which she produces and teaches one- and two-day

seminars and workshops on novel writing.  A member of the board of directors

of the New England Chapter of Mystery Writers of America, and president of

the New England Chapter of Sisters in Crime, Barbara lives outside of Boston

with her husband and two young children.  She is at work on her fourth novel.


Here's the jacket copy for See No Evil (Avon Books, 5.99): 

     "Lauren Freeman in researching her own death...  

     Recently separated with a young child to raise, Lauren Freeman is more

determined than ever to complete her doctoral thesis.  But the pursuit of

knowledge is leading her into dangerous, hidden places--toward a secret

closely guarded for over three hundred years.

     NOw the past is reaching out for Lauren with lethal

tendrils--threatening her family, her friends, her future...her life.  For

there are those who gather in moonlight for strange, unholy purposes--those

who believe Lauren Freeman has lived before...and now must dies again."


We will use protocol for the meeting.       

    When you have a question or comment, please type ?

     or ! and you'll be called on in turn by the moderator. 

     When you're done asking or commenting type GA (go

     ahead).  After the response, if you have no further

     comments to make or questions to ask, indicate your

     thanks and type END.  This will signal the moderator to

     call on the next ? or !in line.  Be concise and we'll

     be able to make the most of our time.

        Please refrain from IM-ing the guest so she can

     concentrate on the interview.  Thanks.


See you then!

Karen


Subj:  AHMM Sale

Date:  96-05-15 15:55:32 edt

From:  RAINDEAD        

Posted on:  America Online


 I've just sold my third 

story -- "Stop Thief!" -- to Alfred Hitchcock. (The first was over 30 years

ago; the second appeared in last June's issue.)  Needless to say, I'm quite

happy about this.  Still working on more short stories as well as finishing

my novel (sort of a thriller cum mystery), and am in the initial stages of

plotting a Long Island PI series. 

--Dan


Subj:  Re:AHMM Sale

Date:  96-05-15 16:18:18 edt

From:  SLBWrites       

Posted on:  America Online


Dan--


Many congratulations on your sale.  Way to go. 


Sherry (Lewis)



Subj:  Re:AHMM Sale

Date:  96-05-15 18:44:16 edt

From:  B Pomidor       

Posted on:  America Online


Congratulations, Dan!

   AHMM is where I got started, too--and sold my series after my third story

was published there.  Good luck!

~~Bill


Subj:  Re:AHMM Sale

Date:  96-05-16 09:39:21 edt

From:  JeHager         

Posted on:  America Online


Congratulations, Dan.  I think short stories can be harder to write than

novels.


Jean  


Subj:  Re:AHMM Sale

Date:  96-05-16 10:26:28 edt

From:  FGSnyder        

Posted on:  America Online


Congratulations!  AHMM is known for their excellent taste, you know . . . .


-- Frank


Subj:  Re:AHMM Sale

Date:  96-05-16 12:52:34 edt

From:  ESFowler        

Posted on:  America Online


Congrats, Dan.  I KNOW short stories are harder to writer (I never have been

able to write a mystery short story). 


Earlene


Subj:  Re:AHMM Sale

Date:  96-05-16 15:49:39 edt

From:  Bolitar         

Posted on:  America Online


All right, Dan!!!  You da man, babe.  You da man!


Best,

Harlan

PS Dan, why was the post listing RAINDEAD insteady of you as the sender?


Subj:

Re: AHMM -- Thanks to all!

Date:  96-05-16 17:45:50 edt

From:  EQ451           

Posted on:  America Online


Sherry, Bill, Jean, Frank, Earlene, and Harlan:


Many thanks for the kind words about my AHMM sale.  The

encouragement means even more coming from fellow writers.


Harlan -- Phyllis posted a copy of my message to her, which

is why her name appeared as the sender.  Sorry DEAL BREAKER

didn't get an Edgar, but, hey, you got a chance to dress up

and go dining and dancing, right? <g>.  Besides, from the

reviews I've read about DROPSHOT this one has a good chance

of making it next year.


Bill -- Sorry you too missed snagging an Edgar.  "A Plain

and Honest Death" was a great story.  Haven't yet read your

novels (the stack on the night table is starting to totter),

but that gives me something to look forward to.


Frank -- "Carnival Ride" was a real zinger.  Kept me reading

and interested right to the end.  Allow me to add my

congrats to the others who've already posted here.


Jean and Earlene -- Short stories aren't harder to write

than novels, just shorter.  With all the successful books

the two of you have published so far, short stories might be

a welcome change of pace.  I'm being selfish, of course,

since the more good writers like you two start turning out

mystery short stories, the more receptive readers will

become and the more editors will want short stories from the

rest of us writers . . .


Sherry --  If, in my ignorance, I've omitted any your work,

my apologies.  Can I add you to my tottering pile?


And now, all warm and happy and pumped up, I'm off to write

more "deathless prose" (still trying to get my wife to think

of my work in those terms, but for some reason I can't fool

her <g>).


Best wishes to all -- Dan


Subj:  Re: AHMM -- Thanks to all!

Date:  96-05-16 18:08:40 edt

From:  SLBWrites       

Posted on:  America Online


Why, Dan, I'd love to have you add me to your teetering TBR pile(s).  I have

two books in my series out at the moment, "No Place For Secrets" and "No

Place Like Home" both featuring a 72-year old, very stubborn but loveable man

named Fred Vickery.  "No Place For Death" will be on the shelves in about a

month (it's actually a July release) and "No Place For Tears" is scheduled

for January of '97.  


re: short stories v. novels, I've gotta cast my vote with Earlene and the

rest who say they're harder.  I've tried short stories, (been rejected by

AHMM, btw, so I really, truly applaud your success).  Novels I can do.  So

far.  I hold my breath with each one until my editor says she likes it.  


Sherry


Subj:  Tottering Pile Gets Higher!

Date:  96-05-16 20:38:45 edt

From:  EQ451           

Posted on:  America Online


Sherry --


Thanks for the quick response and for the info on your

books.  I'll add them one at a time to my TBR stack.  My

apologies again for not being aware of them.


Best wishes -- Dan


Subj:  Re:Tottering Pile Gets Highe

Date:  96-05-17 00:20:33 edt

From:  SLBWrites       

Posted on:  America Online


Dan,  


I'm honored that you'll add my books to your stack, and please don't

apologize.  I may not have burst out of the starting gate (does anyone

really?), but that's OK.  I want to spend the entire rest of my life writing,

so I'm content to build a nice, steady readership.  This is how it happens

for everyone.  One book at a time.  


Best,  Sherry


Subj:  Phyllis/Dan combo

Date:  96-05-17 03:05:26 edt

From:  ESFowler        

Posted on:  America Online


I'm so glad you asked that, Harlan.  I thought I was going nuts (and that's

not a long trip these days) but was too embarrassed to ask fearing I'd

somehow only thought RAINDEAD was Phyllis or that Phyllis all along has been

Dan or Dan and Phyllis are married or...well, just glad you asked.


Earlene (who is often not sure of who she is these days...)


Subj:  AHMM Sale

Date:  96-05-17 10:16:10 edt

From:  LTBerenson      

Posted on:  America Online


Dan,


I'm arriving late at this party (so what else is new?) but many

congratualtions on your sale! Like Earlene, I think short stories are harder

than anything.


Laurie Berenspm


Subj:  Me again

Date:  96-05-17 10:18:23 edt

From:  LTBerenson      

Posted on:  America Online


The only person who has to go back and correct the spelling of her own name.


That's Laurie Berenson (I think)


Subj:  ClueFest Author Update

Date:  96-05-17 17:38:05 edt

From:  BookTree        

Posted on:  America Online


Here is an update of the authors scheduled to appear:


CLUEFEST '96 GUEST OF HONORS 

Carolyn G. Hart, Fiction Guest Of Honor

Robert Crais, Fiction GOH

Jay W.K. Setliff, (Editor/Publisher of Mostly Murder) Non-Fiction GOH

Marlys Millhiser, Toastmistress

Terry Klebba, Fan GOH


Mystery Authors In Attendance:   

Steve Brewer

Jan Burke

Lillian Stewart Carl (Sat only)

Meg Chittenden (Sun Only)

Joyce Christmas

M.E. Cooper (Mary Ellen)

Camilla Crespi

Bill Crider

Deborah Crombie

Sandy Dengler

D.J. Donaldson

Carole Nelson Douglas

Janet Evanovich

Jean Hager

Jonathan Harrington

Charlaine Harris

Tammi Hoag 

Teri Holbrook

Christine T. Jorgensen

Leslie O'Kane

James W. O'Keefe

Denise Osborne

Walter Satterthwait

Trish Macdonald Skillman

Aimee Thurlo (Sat only)

David Thurlo (Sat only)


Other Panelists & Writers in Attendance

Scott A. Cupp

Geraldine Galentree

Barry Gardner

Marv Lachman

June Moffatt

Len Moffatt

Don Sandstrom

Linda Toole

Ann Williams


As you can see we have a wide assortment of authors attending.  If you would

like to join us this summer (July 12, 13, 14), please email me for more

information.  There's always room for more authors!


Terry Phillips

BookTree


Subj:  AHMM Potpourri

Date:  96-05-17 20:25:51 edt

From:  EQ451           

Posted on:  America Online


Laurie -- thanks for the kind words, and I knew it was you

even though you spelled your name wrong <g>.


Sherry -- picked up a copy of NO PLACE LIKE HOME today, and

it's gone right to the top of the tottering pile.  Looking

forward to reading it.


Earlene -- Yes, Phyllis and Dan are solidly married -- to

their respective spouses.  Sorry about the confusion.


Best wishes -- Dan


Subj:  Re:AHMM Potpourri

Date:  96-05-18 01:34:43 edt

From:  SLBWrites       

Posted on:  America Online


Dan,


I'm honored.


Sherry


Subj:  MWA May chat log

Date:  96-05-19 16:52:32 edt

From:  KLouise         

Posted on:  America Online


The log of the May MWA chat, with guest Barbara Shapiro, is now available for

downloading in the Chat Log Library.


Karen


Subj:  HWA

Date:  96-05-23 08:04:09 edt

From:  AHDN64          

Posted on:  America Online


Anyone going to HWA meeting in NY June 7 and 8?

My daughter and I will be there. Harlan Ellison will be speaking and be the

toastmaster for the Stoker Awards Banquet.

Mitzi


Subj:  Wondering

Date:  96-05-23 12:53:30 edt

From:  Ardwin          

Posted on:  America Online


I am sitting at my computer, munching on Oreo's and catching up a a few days

away from the Writer's Club boards.  I couldn't help but be struck, as I went

from the SinC board to the MWA board, by the noticable difference in the

frequency of postings.  Why's dat?  Anyone got any ideas?


Ferd


Subj:  Way To Go, Sherry!

Date:  96-05-23 16:21:31 edt

From:  EQ451           

Posted on:  America Online


As I mentioned to Sherry Lewis, I had picked up her new

book, NO PLACE LIKE HOME and had placed it atop my tottering

TBR stack.  I've just finished reading this Colorado Cozy

(my designation, Sherry <g>), and I'd like to recommend this

one to my fellow mystery writers.  It reads smoothly, with a

nice build-up of suspense, a strong sense of place and time,

and -- very important IMO -- the characters and their

relationships to one another come through with a clarity

that avoids the kind of cluttered confusion you sometimes

find in more fast-paced "action" novels.  It was something

of a relaxing change of pace for me to read a good mystery

that has no profanity ("good billy hell" is the worst

expletive), no gory violence, and no graphically explicit

sex, kinky or otherwise.  It was downright refreshing!


Best wishes -- Dan



Subj:  Re:Way To Go, Sherry!

Date:  96-05-23 19:19:31 edt

From:  SLBWrites       

Posted on:  America Online


Dan,


Thank you!  I'm so pleased that you liked Fred and cronies, and that you

enjoyed reading "No Place Like Home".  And to recommend it to other

writers----I'm . . . speechless, and that's no easy task, let me assure you.

<G>  


---Sherry (ducking her head and indulging in a modest blush) 




Subj:  Re:Wondering

Date:  96-05-23 20:07:16 edt

From:  DianneDay       

Posted on:  America Online


No, but I'm relatively new here, and I've been wondering the same thing.

dianne


Subj:  Re:Wondering

Date:  96-05-24 09:10:31 edt

From:  JeHager         

Posted on:  America Online


Ferd, 'cause Sisters in Crime are a mouthy bunch, maybe?


Jean


Subj:  Re:Wondering

Date:  96-05-24 09:54:38 edt

From:  DFlanagan       

Posted on:  America Online


>> 'cause Sisters in Crime are a mouthy bunch, maybe?<<


Belonging to both MWA and SinC, I'd have to say Sisters in Crime is more fun.

Less costly, too.


- Dale


Subj:  Re:Wondering

Date:  96-05-24 10:30:21 edt

From:  SAKwriter       

Posted on:  America Online


Wait a minute.  I'm fun.  Aren't I?


I belong to both MWA and SinC (also American Crime Writers League), and I

strive to be fun no matter how stodgy the other members are.  


Shirley



Subj:  Re:Wondering

Date:  96-05-24 11:27:43 edt

From:  LTBerenson      

Posted on:  America Online


Yes, Shirley, you're fun.


Me too. I just tend to spend more time on the SinC board. (There's more talk

about chocolate over there.)


Laurie


Subj:  A Plug from Lary

Date:  96-05-24 12:00:44 edt

From:  EQ451           

Posted on:  America Online


In Issue #52 (March/April) of Mystery Scene Magazine, Lary

Crews not only gives a fine write-up of our own Phyllis

(RAINDEAD), but also provides a complete listing of the

scheduled guest writers for the monthly MWA online chats.

Just thought I'd pass this one on for those who haven't yet

seen Lary's column.  Nice going, Lary.  Every plug helps.  <g>


Best wishes -- Dan


Subj:  Re:Wondering

Date:  96-05-24 12:30:25 edt

From:  Kthirty         

Posted on:  America Online


Another dual member of MWA and SinC here. I kind of think of SinC as a

sandbox to play in and the serious adults hang out in here.

I am willing to drag my sand pail all over the folders.

Gimme a topic.....right now I know of a toad line in 'medical', foot fetishes

and Disneyland in 'writing your first', we have been serious and talking

about writing influences in SinC but that won't last long.

Kathy


Subj:  Re:Wondering

Date:  96-05-24 14:22:24 edt

From:  SLBWrites       

Posted on:  America Online


Dual membership here, too.  Like Kathy, I'm willing to play anywhere <g>.  


Sherry


Subj:  Re:Wondering

Date:  96-05-24 18:51:24 edt

From:  RAINDEAD        

Posted on:  America Online


There's the added perk that my MWA local's membership is included in the $

paid out to the National.  That's two newsletters in the mailbox.  I love

newsletters!


Phyllis


Subj:  Re:Wondering

Date:  96-05-24 19:17:07 edt

From:  SLBWrites       

Posted on:  America Online


Phyllis--


I'm with you.  I love getting newsletters.  


Sherry


Subj:  Re:MWA membership

Date:  96-05-25 15:33:21 edt

From:  Beckett119      

Posted on:  America Online


Is the membership limited to published authors?  Beckett


Subj:  Re:MWA

membership

Date:  96-05-25 17:00:56 edt

From:  MsMcL           

Posted on:  America Online


Beckett - No.  I am not published, but I am an affiliate member of MWA.  They

will ask you to show that you are seriously trying to become published,

though, which means they may want to see some of your rejection letters.

Hey, they're good for something!  Kate 


Subj:  Re:MWA membership

Date:  96-05-26 11:11:04 edt

From:  DFlanagan       

Posted on:  America Online


Hi Beckett,


Prepublished authors can join MWA, but there's a limit on the number in each

region, based on the membership size for published authors. Write MWA and ask

them for information.


- Dale


Subj:  Re:Prepublished authors

Date:  96-05-26 14:04:53 edt

From:  Beckett119      

Posted on:  America Online


Dale,


Thanks for that term, "prepublished".  It's great.


Subj:  Re:Prepublished

authors

Date:  96-05-27 11:33:15 edt

From:  DFlanagan       

Posted on:  America Online


Hi Beckett,


>>Thanks for that term, "prepublished".  It's great.<<


I got the term from Sisters in Crime, and started using it because I think it

describes most of the writer's I've met there better than unpublished. MWA is

very good on the business and professional aspects of mysteries, but (at

least the local L.A. Chapter) SinC is outstanding in the training and support

it gives, especially to prepublished authors. If you an afford to, it's good

to belong to both.


- Dale


Subj:  Re:MWA membership

Date:  96-05-28 06:46:35 edt

From:  CapeCodCat      

Posted on:  America Online


I photocopied about 50 rejections.  And offered to 5th class send all my

books and stories in a box!  They sent a note back......laughing.  Yup!

Guess your serious


Subj:  Re:A Plug from Lary, plus BSP

Date:  96-05-28 11:32:20 edt

From:  SAKwriter       

Posted on:  America Online


<<In Issue #52 (March/April) of Mystery Scene Magazine, Lary Crews not only

gives a fine write-up of our own Phyllis (RAINDEAD), but also provides a

complete listing of the scheduled guest writers for the monthly MWA online

chats.  Just thought I'd pass this one on for those who haven't yet seen

Lary's column.  Nice going, Lary.  Every plug helps.  <g>


Best wishes -- Dan>>


Ok, Ok, I can feel my arm being twisted - I just have to mention that my

first book Gray Matter got a plug in Lary's column, too.  Isn't he a sweetie?


In the same issue of Mystery Scene, I have an article about getting published

for the first time.  It seems especially appropriate to me that it's my first

article ever (besides local circulation stuff) and it's about my first book.

Shirley


Subj:  Re:A Plug from Harriet

Date:  96-05-28 14:10:41 edt

From:  HKlaus6073      

Posted on:  America Online


Shirley-just got your galley 2days ago-picked up book-and next thing I knew-

it was the end. It was SO good that I didn't even know time was passing!


                                     Harriet


Subj:  Re:A Plug from Lary, plus

BS

Date:  96-05-28 15:16:39 edt

From:  RAINDEAD        

Posted on:  America Online


Shirley,


I wish I could get the same kind of mail you received in October of '95.   I

read your article in Mystery Scene and I'm delighted for you.  Will you come

be a guest in the Monday Mystery Forum soon?  I'll e mail with more info.


Phyllis


Subj:  Re:A Plug from Harriet

Date:  96-05-29 10:06:42 edt

From:  SAKwriter       

Posted on:  America Online


Harriet,

I'm floating on air from your compliment.


Shirley


Subj:  Re:A Plug from Harriet

Date:  96-05-29 10:09:18 edt

From:  SAKwriter       

Posted on:  America Online


And when my feet finally touched ground again, I printed out your post so I

could stare at it when the going gets tough (and the tough head for the

chocolate).  

Shirley


Subj:  Re:A Plug from Harriet

Date:  96-05-29 13:34:25 edt

From:  HKlaus6073      

Posted on:  America Online


All I did was tell yhe truth-you have agreat career ahead of you

                   Harriet


Subj:  Re:Wondering

Date:  96-05-30 12:54:53 edt

From:  KLouise         

Posted on:  America Online


I'm a member of both.  I've heard before about SinC being more fun and more

accessible.  Since I don't live close enough to attend regular meetings of

either organization, I can't offer up an opinion on that aspect of things.


But surely it doesn't have to extend to us online dual-members, does it?  Do

we have to be stodgy over on this board and whoop it up in the SinC one?  


More to the point, can't we have chocolate over here too?


Sure we can.  

Karen


Subj:  Re:Wondering

Date:  96-05-30 16:00:28 edt

From:  SAKwriter       

Posted on:  America Online


I'm up for chocolate.  


I find it hard to be stodgy no matter where I am.  (Excuse me while I blow

rasperries on my 5 yr old's tummy...  There.  That's out of the way for a

while.)  

Anybody heard any good jokes lately?  If they pertain to writing, so much the

better.  It will look like I'm doing some work here.


Shirley


Subj:  Re:Wondering

Date:  96-05-30 21:16:16 edt

From:  Kthirty         

Posted on:  America Online


No jokes for posting that don't involve much censoring ---- how about some

funny quotes?


"In six pages I can't even say hello." Jame Michener


"There are three rules for writing a novel. Unfortunately, nobody knows what

they are." W. Somerset Maugham


"Why don't you write books that people can read." Nora Joyce to her husband,

James.


and my all time favorite--


"If once a man indulges himself in murder, very soon he comes to think little

of robbing; and from robbing he next comes to drinking and Sabbath-breaking,

and from that to incivility and procastination." Thomas De Quincey


Subj:

Re:Wondering

Date:  96-05-30 22:48:29 edt

From:  Note On         

Posted on:  America Online



Has anyone had experience with copy edit changes *after* the galley stage?

I'm just wondering if that's done.


Thanks!



Subj:  galley changes

Date:  96-05-31 02:26:34 edt

From:  ESFowler        

Posted on:  America Online


Yes, you can change things after the galley stage but the publisher doesn't

encourage it.  Usually if it's only a word or two they don't hassle you.  If

it's whole paragraphs I've heard that the author has to pay for the changes.

I personally have changed words at that stage, as well as punctuation.  But

big changes are costly and won't endear you to your editor because in all

fairness to them, you should have done all your changing when it was still in

manuscript stage.  


Earlene FowlerSubj:  Re:galley changes

Date:  96-05-31 02:27:52 edt

From:  ESFowler        

Posted on:  America Online


One thought to clarify--I've never heard of a copy editor doing changes then.

They are mostly freelance so I don't think they even see the galleys.  So any

changes would be yours or your editors.


EarleneSubj:  Re:Wondering

Date:  96-05-31 10:11:29 edt

From:  SAKwriter       

Posted on:  America Online


Great quotes.  I especially like the James Joyce one and the one about going

from murder all the way down the drain to procrastination.  Printed them out

for future yucks.


Shirley


Subj:  Re:galley changes

Date:  96-05-31 18:03:31 edt

From:  Note On         

Posted on:  America Online



Hi, Earlene,


Thanks for the response.  I was wondering more about changes made on the

editorial side of things than about changes on the authorial side, but I

think you answered that in your second note.


Thanks!



Keith


Subj:  Where Is Everybody?

Date:  96-05-31 21:52:47 edt

From:  SLBWrites       

Posted on:  America Online


Whew!  I thought you'd all packed up and moved away while I wasn't looking.

Had to come into the boards the long way, my favorite places connection gave

me 0 topics and 0 messages.  


I have nothing to say except that.  


=-Sherry


Subj:  Re:Where Is Everybody?

Date:  96-05-31 23:53:19 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

Posted on:  America Online


Sherry,


That's funny because people on the science fiction boards were wondering

where everyone was. That's because last weekend was so quiet.

Gail (Hayden)


Subj:  Rice U Conf (multiple post)

Date:  96-06-05 00:12:02 edt

From:  MKC TX          

Posted on:  America Online


(I'm posting this elsewhere, too. I hope that's okay.)

I'm heading off to the Rice conference. Will any of you be there? Other than

our own KTrocheck, do any of you have any advice on whose workshops to

take/avoid? (You can email me if you'd rather not post your comments)

Speakers include (short list) Rita Mae Brown, Janis Arnold, Gail Donahue

Storey, Heather Sellers, Anita Richmond Bunkley, Carlos Nicolas Flores,

Janice Hewitt, Steven Saylor, Austin Bay, Dean James, Doug Swanson, Lynda

Robinson, Lauri Lynn Drummond.

(Actually, I'd prefer an email - I may not get back here before I leave)


Subj:

MWA June chat

Date:  96-06-09 22:13:37 edt

From:  KLouise         

Posted on:  America Online


MWA's June chat

Join us Tuesday, June 11, at 9 pm ET in the Writers Conference Room.  Our

guest this month will be Bob Berger.


Bob Berger is the author of The Risk of Murder and The Risk of Heaven, the

first and second in the Dr. Risk Mystery series.  He got into the whole

risk business a few years ago by writing Beating Murphy's Law, a

non-fiction book on the science of risk.  He writes a column for NetGuide

Magazine, plays the piano at fancy hotels like The Plaza, and takes both

grave and trivial risks in New York City with his wife and five month old

son. 


I asked Bob if there were anything in particular he'd like to offer up as a

subject for discussion, and this was his suggestion:


Is child molesting, the subject of The Risk of Heaven, suitable

for the mystery genre? 


As usual, we'll use protocol.


     When you have a question or comment, please type ?

     or ! and you'll be called on in turn by the moderator. 

     When you're done asking or commenting type GA (go

     ahead).  After the response, if you have no further

     comments to make or questions to ask, indicate your

     thanks and type END.  This will signal the moderator to

     call on the next ? or ! in line.  Be concise and we'll

     be able to make the most of our time.

        Please refrain from IM-ing the guest so he can

     concentrate on the interview.  Thanks.


See you then!

Karen


Subj:  Writing the Series

Date:  96-06-10 03:24:34 edt

From:  LeeGoldbrg      

Posted on:  America Online


The Mystery Writers of America, SoCal chapter, is hosting a day-long seminar

Saturday, June 22 entitled "Writing the Series: Books and TV" Join leading

authors and writer/producers as they discuss the challenges and pitfalls of

writing, creating and sustaining the mystery series in books and television.

Panelists include...


Michael Connelly, Earlene Fowler, Wendy Hornsby,  Abigail Padgett, Robert

Ward.

Paul Bishop, Gar Anthony Haywood, Roger Simon, Gayle Lynds and Michael

Collins


and


Writer/producers Howard Gordon (X Files) Dean Hargrove (Columbo), Lee

Goldberg (Diagnosis Murder), Jacqueline Zambrano (Under Suspicion), Morgan

Gendel (X Files) and Carleton Eastlake (Equalizer).


For more information, contact me at LeeGoldbrg@aol.com


Subj:  Dumb Question

Date:  96-06-12 01:26:45 edt

From:  Burnthis1       

Posted on:  America Online


I joined Sisters in Crime at the suggestion of my former editor and attended

one of their wonderful conferences, but I don't know anything about MWA.

What are the benefits of joining?  I'll be published as of this October under

the "thriller" genre (although the book sure looks like a mystery to me.  You

know, dead bodies, some cops, a bunch of suspects.  But, then, what do

writers know about marketing?)  I'd appreciate any info about MWA.

Thanks!


Subj:  Re:MWA June chat

Date:  96-06-12 01:35:31 edt

From:  Burnthis1       

Posted on:  America Online


I just missed the chat, learning about it at 1:30.  Ah well.  Since my first

novel centers around the topic of child molestation, I'd be thrilled if

anyone wanted to either post or e-mail me about the topic whether it is a

suitable subject for a mystery.  My publisher and I both hope the answer is

yes.


Subj:  Re:Dumb Question

Date:  96-06-12 09:14:30 edt

From:  JeHager         

Posted on:  America Online


Burnthis, congrats on your upcoming publication date!  For info on MWA you

can write MWA headquarters, 17 E. 47th St., 6th Floor, New York, NY 10017.

Annual dues are $65.


Jean Hager


Subj:  Re:Dumb Question

Date:  96-06-12 09:24:14 edt

From:  RAINDEAD        

Posted on:  America Online


-

MWA,Inc.

Dues are $65.00 per year


Mystery Writers of American will accept not yet published mystery writers for

membership. Write for conditions.


This organization has offered mentoring on a first come basis for not yet 

published members.  A valuable resource for information.  Great newsletter,

ten times a year.


Mystery Writers of America, Inc. 


Priscilla Ridgway, Exec. Director

17 East 47th Street, 6th floor

New York, New York 10017

212 888-8171




Phyllis


Subj:  Re:Dumb Question

Date:  96-06-12 12:56:19 edt

From:  DianneDay       

Posted on:  America Online


Burn, it's not a dumb question.  To a certain extent, what you will get out

of MWA, whether you are published or not yet published (no longer a problem

for you--congrats!) depends on where you live and if you will be able to

attend meetings of your local or regional chapter.  We mystery writers are

wonderfully supportive of one another, no matter which one--or all--of many

available organizations one joins.  But do check out your local scene, as

well as write to MWA headquarters at the address Jean already gave you.


Dianne, who used to be local in the Southeast but now is local in Norcal.

Check out our MWA Norcal webpage: http://user.aol.com/mwanorcal/


Subj:  Organizing Your Work

Date:  96-06-20 12:12:35 edt

From:  ETogneri        

Posted on:  America Online


     If anyone lives in the New Jersey area, I will be speaking at the Garden

State Horror Writers meeting on Saturday, July 13, at 10 a.m. at the

Manalapan Library on Symmes Drive, off Route 9. The topic will be "Organizing

You Work".  Using my background of 17 years of computer systems design and 4

years of writing, I will concentrate on the data needs of writers.  My speech

will focus on how to store and use information to make writing easier.

     I’ve posted messages a few times, but mostly lurk.  I’m in the midst of

writing my second mystery while my agent tries to sell the first.  There’s

been some interest, but no one has been willing to buy my paranormal story

yet.  It sure is challenging to stay motivated writing the second in series

when the first hasn’t sold!

     If anyone is able to attend the meeting, please introduce yourself to me.  I

really enjoyed meeting all the other AOLers at Sleuthfest.


Elaine Togneri


     

     

Subj:  Re:Organizing Your Work

Date:  96-06-20 23:01:02 edt

From:  B Pomidor       

Posted on:  America Online


   Good luck, Elaine!  I won't be there (as I live in Ohio), but it sounds

like a great premise for a talk.  Knock em, er, dead...

~~Bill Pomidor


Subj:  CONGRATS TO ANTHONY NOMINEES

Date:  96-06-21 12:24:13 edt

From:  B Pomidor       

Posted on:  America Online


  The Anthony nominees (Bouchercon attendees' "Readers' Choice" awards) were

announced today.  I saw them on DorothyL and, although I don't remember

everyone's names, there were a couple of people who were VERY familiar.  Not

surprisingly, Harlan's DEAL BREAKER was nominated for Best PB Original, and

Martha Lawrence was nominated for MURDER IN SCORPIO.  Teri Holbrook's A FAR

AND DEADLY CRY was also nominated in PBO, as was BAD MEDICINE, by Eileen

Dreyer (an SinC member, though she's not on AOL).

   Congratulations to all the nominees!!!

~~Bill Pomidor


Subj:  Re: MWA/NorCal web site

Date:  96-06-21 23:03:15 edt

From:  Holtzer         

Posted on:  America Online


I don't think anyone's posted this yet, so I'd like to announce that the

NorCal chapter of MWA now has its own web site up and running. It's at


http://user.aol.com/mwanorcal/


Besides local chapter news and information, it's got a page of links to

Resources for Mystery Writers, a downloadable list of mystery bookstores, and

other goodies. Come on by and check us out.


Subj:  Re:Congrats

Date:  96-06-24 15:50:51 edt

From:  FGSnyder        

Posted on:  America Online


Add my congratulations to Harlan and all the nominees.  Great job!


-- Frank


Subj:  Re:Congrats

Date:  96-06-24 21:28:03 edt

From:  SLBWrites       

Posted on:  America Online


And mine!  Congratulations to all.


--Sherry


Subj:  details

Date:  96-06-24 22:27:58 edt

From:  Kthirty         

Posted on:  America Online


Details of the St. Martin's Press contest in 'writing your first mystery.

Kathy


Subj:  New weekly chat in MFTY

Date:  96-06-25 22:25:08 edt

From:  JTaylorRED      

Posted on:  America Online


I've found an innovative way to avoid writing my third book. I'm going to be

the resident author for a weekly chat in Mysteries from the Yard, AOL's

online mystery bookstore site, every Monday evening at Midnight EST.  Left

Coasters and East Coast night owls, your time has come!  The topic is Women

of Mystery, a topic I hope will be broad enough to accommodate everyone from

cozy lovers to Sparkle Hayter aficianados to all those hard to categorize

books coming out these days. Male readers are welcome.  


Authors who would like to be the guest at a "Meet YOUR NAME HERE"-type

evening should contact  me (JTaylorRED).  Otherwise, please stop by (Keyword

MFTY) and share what you're reading or writing.


Jean Taylor



Subj:  Re:New weekly chat in MFTY

Date:  96-06-25 23:44:24 edt

From:  JKenn10050      

Posted on:  America Online


Hey - I found an innovative way not to write my first book!!!  My first few

thousand words, and chapters disappeared totally after I saved everything,

and exited WordPerfect.  Got that Windows 95 Message - "you have performed an

illegal function".   I don't feel very well.


Subj:  Re:New weekly chat in MFTY

Date:  96-06-26 01:10:46 edt

From:  Burnthis1       

Posted on:  America Online


JKenn, my condolences.  That's everyone's nightmare -- and also the reason

I'm still on 3.1.  Good luck



.Subj:  Win'95 Dilemma

Date:  96-06-26 07:16:55 edt

From:  RAINDEAD        

Posted on:  America Online


You have my sympathies too, Kenn.  Perhaps it's still in there SOMEWHERE?  Do

you know anyone who might help find out and locate and retrieve it?  


If no one who knows Windows '95 hangs around at your house, try the keyword

Windows 95 and see if you can find help on one of the Windows 95 message

boards or from a Windows techie.  

Good Luck.

Phyllis


Subj:  Re:Win'95 Dilemma

Date:  96-06-26 12:36:34 edt

From:  DianneDay       

Posted on:  America Online


JKenn: I know this is like closing the barn door after the horse is gone, but

if you back up (i.e. copy to a floppy disk) before leaving your program, that

would help.  But on second thought, I'm not sure you can do that without

going to the Explorer in Windows 95.  I hired a free-lance computer nerd to

help me because these inexplicable things with Windows 95 bothered me a lot,

and it was obvious that the computer nerds on the 800 number had no idea what

it's like to earn one's living on a computer, when content--as in writing--is

the product, not one's supposed knowledge of the hardware.  I ended up, with

the free-lancer's help, deleting from the hard drive everything I don't use

that pulls power--mainly the kids games and other kids' programs since I no

longer have kids at home.  It helped, a lot.  When I went from aol 2.5 to 3.0

recently, I began to have the same problems again until I went in and

completely removed 2.5--just trashing the icon off the desk top hadn't done

it.  On the SinC board recently there was a discussion about zip drives, but

the zip drive isn't going to solve the problem you mention because you'd

still be exiting your program to back up to the zip; so again I recommend

always backing up to a floppy disk--why do we still call them that when they

aren't floppy anymore?--because at least that way you only lose one day's

work.

Dianne Day


Subj:  Re:Win'95 Dilemma

Date:  96-06-26 14:03:29 edt

From:  LiseMac         

Posted on:  America Online


Is it possible you turned off your computer without exiting win95? I did this

once (I had actually been trying to shut down the computer from WordPerfect

6.0 for Dos without returning to windows which is a total no-no). Anyway, if

that's what you did you will have to reinstall windows but your data should

still be there somewhere. When you reinstall windows it just covers over the

appropriate files (ask me, I've reinstalled it about 3 or 4 times). So once

it's running again you can try to find your files. Good luck!

Lise McClendon


Subj:  Re:Win'95 Dilemma

Date:  96-06-26 18:56:35 edt

From:  JKenn10050      

Posted on:  America Online


I did call Windows 95 in a flap, and they suggested I call WordPerfect, THEN

they would help me get rid of that error message doohickey.  I e-mailed Corel

and they 3-mailed me 3 pages of backup retrieval.  Since it is too

complicated for my poor little mystical mind, I hope my computer fixer-upper

can figure it out!!  Thanks for your condolences.  I needed them!!!


Subj:

Re:Win'95 Dilemma

Date:  96-06-26 18:59:20 edt

From:  JKenn10050      

Posted on:  America Online


Dianna - I was on my way out to dos to backup on disk, when I got that ruddy

message.  I have to learn to backup to disk within the ruddy program somehow.

Maybe my computer fixer upper can show me how - although I did ask him that

once.  He's the one who showed me how to back up using dos.  Thanks for your

suggestions and concern.  I appreciate it .


Subj:  Re:Win'95 Dilemma

Date:  96-06-26 19:53:29 edt

From:  SLBWrites       

Posted on:  America Online


JKenn--


I keep a disk poking halfway out of my little "B" drive all the time I'm

working.  Just as often as I don't want to recreate what I've done (about

every page---I'm such a lazy thang) I save to my hard drive (Alt F10 in WP5.1

or ctrl S in WP6.1---but beyond there, I'm lost).  Then, every so often, I

pop the disk in and copy the file to the floppy by listing files through the

file manager and copying.  Takes only a few seconds, and I rarely lose more

than a page or two. Backing up's another thing I do regularly, with

grandfathered backups, etc.  but this is in addition as I work, just in case.

Ya know?  


all right--- who said I was compulsive?  


~~Sherry


Subj:  Re:Win'95 Dilemma

Date:  96-06-26 22:51:17 edt

From:  DianneDay       

Posted on:  America Online


Dear JKenn, you're probably going to get sick of everybody offering you

solutions, but anyway: It's really very easy to backup in Windows 95 using

the Explorer and the right mouse button.  I don't have WordPerfect, I have

Works for Windows (which I hate but the new computer came with it), but I

assume it should work the same way.  It's a heckuva lot easier than when we

had File Manager.  Good luck.  I hope your computer guy knows Windows

95!


Subj:  Re:Win'95 Dilemma

Date:  96-06-26 23:22:52 edt

From:  Holtzer         

Posted on:  America Online


This, too -- keep a floppy disk in your drive, and before you pull out of

your program, do a

Save As... to the floppy drive, then another Save As... back to your hard

drive.


And another -- if you have decent laser-print hard copy, if EVERYTHING else

fails you can always just have it scanned in. (Yes, scanners these days do a

fine job if the hard copy is clean.)


But sorry, I still don't understand why anyone is using Win95.


Subj:

Re:Win'95 Dilemma

Date:  96-06-27 00:31:56 edt

From:  JKenn10050      

Posted on:  America Online


SLBwrites - Hi!!I was only shown how to back up through finding the file in

dos, and copying to a or b.  That's what I was on my way to do, when the

light on the path dimmed, and I lost my way.!!

Thanks for your description of what you do.  What great people you all are!!

Thanks, so much.


Subj:  Galley Anxiety

Date:  96-06-27 02:16:22 edt

From:  Burnthis1       

Posted on:  America Online


Just got a copy of the galleys for my book and my publisher is sending them

out for blurbs.  (We can discuss the morality of the cover blurb at another

time.  I'm new to this and it sounded like a swell idea to me.) Plus I'm

afraid this version is going out for reviews.   Anyway, the cover art looked

terrible, some things I'd put in as a lark thinking I'd have a chance to make

changes after copyediting are still in there and the description of my book

on the back gives away too much and lists the wrong person as a suspect.  I

didn't expect this version to go out as "the book" so I'm now having a minor

nervous breakdown and am anxiously awaiting blurbs like this--"Makes a nice

coaster for your coffee mug -- and you can put it down."  Anyone have any

comforting galley stories to share or feigned reassurances like nobody really

reads galleys anyway, they just consult their psychics to see if they should

say something nice?  Help, I'm rambling and incoherent and I can't stop.  

Shari



Subj:  Re:Galley Anxiety

Date:  96-06-27 11:18:22 edt

From:  DianneDay       

Posted on:  America Online


Shari, talk to your agent without delay about your concerns.  Really.


Subj:

Re:Galley Anxiety

Date:  96-06-27 13:04:27 edt

From:  B Pomidor       

Posted on:  America Online


Hi, All!  Believe it or not, my enter key doesn't work in AOL today, so

you'll have to bear with me--there'll be no paragraph breaks.  Anyway, as far

as galleys go, I have little experience since my publisher never sends

galleys out (I'm in PBO, so maybe that's why).  Even the review copies never

get sent out until about a month after publication, which may be part of the

reason I'm rarely reviewed!  But you can make certain small changes in the

galley proofs and they will go into the book (that may not help with

reviewers who've already received the galleys--if they're glaring faults--but

at least it helps with the final product).  As far as the cover, my

understanding is that the galleys are being sent out in the hopes of

garnering cover blurbs, so they should certainly be able to change the copy

on the back cover as well.  They did that with mine AFTER the cover was done,

when I got my nomination.~~Bill


Subj:  Re:Win 95, backup problems

Date:  96-06-27 13:06:52 edt

From:  B Pomidor       

Posted on:  America Online


I had a few early snags with Win 95, but now I enjoy the program

tremendously.  There's a lot of stuff in there (like object-orientedness,

dragging and dropping from one program into another) that you don't

appreciate until you've worked with it a while.  On the other hand, if you're

using a Dos-based program (did someone say they were using WP for DOS?),

there's not much point in using Windows 95--except for the fact that it's

less prone to crashing DOS-based programs.  As far as backing up, I never use

the file manager or the Explorer for that--it's far too cumbersome and wastes

space.  I mainly write in Word for Windows, and I've written a neat little

macro that I've turned into a click button.  When I click on it, it saves the

file on the hard drive, saves it again (under the same name) onto the floppy,

then saves it onto the hard drive again.  Why do I do it that way?  Two

reasons--one is because if you just save onto the floppy (or the hard drive,

then the floppy), you end up running the file from the floppy after that

(which can be VERY slow) until you back up to the hard drive again.  The

other reason is rather obscure and has to do with disk space.  Each time you

save a file under the same name, it gets longer because the changes are

generally added on rather than overwritten.  So if you've deleted a huge

block of text and put a new chapter in, the deleted block might just be

marked out, but the space is unavailable until you save the file under a new

name (that's a type of compression, but different from hard drive

compression).  Saving the file to A, then back to C, serves the function of

compressing the file (by the way, merely copying to A from the file manager

won't do this)....<para>....Finally, I STRONGLY recommend using the auto

backup function in whatever word processor you use (virtually all of them

have it now).  My word processor backs up the file every four minutes, in the

background, while I'm working, without me even being aware of it.  I also

have an EZ drive (like a ZIP drive) AND an APC power back-up unit which

blocks surges and keeps the computer running for an hour even if there's a

power failure.  Am I paranoid?  Yes.  But I haven't lost anything major

yet--knock on wood!  Anyway, good luck with the galleys and the file

back-upping!....~~Bill


Subj:  Re:Galley Anxiety

Date:  96-06-27 13:16:40 edt

From:  SAKwriter       

Posted on:  America Online


Shari-

I know exactly how you feel.  I thought the copy-edited ms for my book was in

great shape.  Then I saw the galleys that were produced from it.  The copy

editor had made a mistake with the proofreader's marks.  He used two

underlines to indicate capitalization instead of three.  So things that were

supposed to be capitalized came out in small caps (a couple of point sizes

smaller than the regular caps), which stand out on the page and look awful.

Making the situation worse was the fact that my main character goes by

initials PJ, which came out in small caps on nearly every page.  In addition

there was jumbled text introduced, sentence fragments repeated, etc.  I

phoned the proof editor as soon as I saw the galleys, and she said she would

correct the PJ initials right away, and to mark all the other changes.  I

did, and sent back almost the entire manuscript because there were

corrections on nearly every page.  At this point in production, there should

have been only a handful of pages returned for correction.  (The editor told

me each page costs about $6 to correct at this point.)

When I got the bound galleys, I was mortified to see that only the PJ had

been corrected; everything else was the same, plus some pages were actually

bound out of order.  There was a disclaimer on the front which said

"Uncorrected Proof" - no kidding!  There hadn't been time to make all the

changes in the galleys before binding them into advance reading copies, but

the changes did get into the final book.  (So I've been told.  I won't see

one for a couple of weeks.)  I was so embarrassed to hand out the advance

reading copies in that condition, but hand them out I did - hundreds of them,

at the ABA show in Chicago.  I have already gotten feedback from people

saying they really enjoyed the book, so I guess  they can read around the

errors and understand that things like that can happen.  But I still shudder

to think that my slaved-over work is being presented to reviewers and book

store owners looking like that.

Talk to your editor & agent.  Let them know your concerns.  But you probably

won't get anything but a shoulder to cry on, and assurance that the final

version will be better.


Shirley


Subj:  Re:Galley Anxiety

Date:  96-06-27 14:28:34 edt

From:  LiseMac         

Posted on:  America Online


I do think reviewers understand about that "Uncorrected Galley" business... I

think everybody has it on theirs, unless, like apparently Shari who had cover

art on her galley-- is that right? Sometimes they do send out specially

bound, with art, galleys. For Painted Truth, the galleys came back to me and

everywhere there was supposed to be an end quotation mark, ", there was some

sort of word processing flub, and they came out 3@% or some such. And, of

course, that's the way they came out in the galleys for reviewers too. Ah,

well. I thought all was corrected but then the final book came out and there

were several large gaps, three or four lines in the middle of a paragraph, at

different places in the text. These showed up nowhere, no-how, in galleys. Go

figure. I used to hear about authors who, if they found uncorrected errors in

the final manuscript, had some clause in their contract where they got 50

cents, or whatever, per error. Anybody do that any more??


Good luck with your galleys, Shari. Keep after them and it'll all get cleared

up, here's hoping.

Lise


Subj:  Re:Win'95 Dilemma

Date:  96-06-27 14:59:34 edt

From:  SLBWrites       

Posted on:  America Online


JKenn--


Ah, well, I tried.  Surely there must be some way to retrieve the file --

maybe through Norton Utilities.  .....


...gotta run,  I'll chat more later

Sherry Lewis


Subj:  Re:Win 95, backup problems

Date:  96-06-27 15:06:19 edt

From:  Carito          

Posted on:  America Online


After three days of reading these messages, I went and kissed my Macintosh on

its little head.   In eight years of heavy documentation writing, marketing

writing and now mystery writing, it's never lost a thing.  I have no idea

what goes on inside it and I very much want to keep it that way. It's a tool

that I use like a pen, for gosh sake, not a hobby.


Subj:  Re:Galley Anxiety

Date:  96-06-27 15:18:54 edt

From:  Burnthis1       

Posted on:  America Online


Everyone, thanks for the feedback.  Shirley, nice to know reviewers can see

beyond the mess!   I'm glad they take "uncorrected" seriously.   Maybe

there's still hope.  Dianne, talked to my agent . She was upset but wasn't

sure what we could do to pull the blurb copies out of circulation, they've

already been printed and I think it's too late to stop them.  But, we're

keeping our eyes on it for the final version!


Subj:  Re:Win 95, backup

problems

Date:  96-06-28 00:17:52 edt

From:  Note On         

Posted on:  America Online



Hi, Carito,


Yes, it's amazing what IBM users have to go through to accomplish the

simplest things.  I do graphic design, multimedia authoring, digital audio,

and music sequencing on my Macintosh.  It's simply a superior platform that

works right.


...Unless, of course, you just *like* messing around inside the case and

getting confused by drivers...  :)



Keith


Subj:  Re:Win 95, backup problems

Date:  96-06-28 00:18:47 edt

From:  Note On         

Posted on:  America Online



Um... I'm not trying to start a flame war, by the way.  Just happy I don't

have an IBM.



Keith


Subj:  Re:Win 95, backup problems

Date:  96-06-28 00:32:58 edt

From:  Kthirty         

Posted on:  America Online


Well, count me in as another person who will tuck her MAC into bed tonight

with extra kisses and hugs.

Kathy xoxoxoxoxoxo


Subj:  Re:Win 95, backup problems

Date:  96-06-28 01:21:35 edt

From:  Holtzer         

Posted on:  America Online


>>Yes, it's amazing what IBM users have to go through to accomplish the

simplest things.  I do graphic design, multimedia authoring, digital audio,

and music sequencing on my Macintosh.  It's simply a superior platform that

works right.<<


>>Um... I'm not trying to start a flame war, by the way.  Just happy I don't

have an IBM.<<


Oh, really?.... Okay, I won't go there, except to say that I've been doing

the same things on a PC for more than five years, and I'm just happy that

when I want to upgrade I don't have to remortgage my house.   :-)


Subj:

Re:Win 95, backup problems

Date:  96-06-28 02:34:06 edt

From:  Note On         

Posted on:  America Online


 As I said, I'm not trying to start a flame war, so I won't go around on this

one.


Keith



Subj:  Mac vs IBM, put up yer dukes

Date:  96-06-28 16:00:36 edt

From:  B Pomidor       

Posted on:  America Online


   Okay, okay, let's just say that PC people generally like theirs and Mac

people are rabid about theirs (do you all NAME your computers, by the way?).

My wife and I have tried both and were impressed at the lack of intuitiveness

behind Mac's latest (System 7) interface.  We had to learn how to do

everything all over again, and simple things (like auto backup) weren't there

(or else we couldn't find them).

   I think we tend to prefer the machine we started out in; it's as simple as

that.  So let's all just stay friends, okay?

~~Bill

BTW, Kathy, I'm e-mailing you directly; you've become my friend for life (for

reasons you probably know), and I wouldn't insult your Mac for the

world!


Subj:  Re:Mac vs IBM, put up yer du

Date:  96-06-28 18:52:54 edt

From:  Carito          

Posted on:  America Online


Okay, since I kinda started this, let me say I'm all for live and let live.

In fact, I have a mixed marriage. I've had a Mac since there were Macs and my

husband's a PC man.  The problem is--how to raise the children?


The children, of course, use both with equal ease, (and go back and forth

from Word to WordPerfect without even noticing), just the way any of us can

drive a rental car or use the neighbor's phone, and I'm sure that's what it

will be like with these smart little terminals or whatever they become  in

the future


.Subj:  Re:Mac vs IBM, put up yer du

Date:  96-06-28 19:36:27 edt

From:  SLBWrites       

Posted on:  America Online


So, um, how's the weather out there?  How 'bout them Jazz?


~Sherry, who only refers to her computer by name (and I ain't tellin' which I

got) on bad days.  



Subj:  Re:Mac vs IBM, put up yer du

Date:  96-06-28 21:02:06 edt

From:  JKenn10050      

Posted on:  America Online


I'll bite.  Mines a Packard Bell PC -- and Windows 95 plus a lot of other

programs I'll never use were already preloaded.  The OTHER PC I have is a PC

IBMClone built for me four years ago. has Windows 3.0 and while she (her name

is Victoria Regina) has crashed 4 times and lost everything,   I lost words

only once, when I forgot to save.  Those 4 crashes weren't anything I did,

funnily enough - two were due to a technician I don't have anymore, one was

the mother board taking a dump, and the 4th was the wiring in my power bar

had been reversed during the manufacture!! - and it gave out during a storm.

My very favorite PC was my first in l986  An IBM personal computer with 20

mg. hard disk.  Her name was Isabelle, and she never let me down.  


Subj:

Re:Mac vs IBM, put up yer du

Date:  96-06-29 00:25:25 edt

From:  Kthirty         

Posted on:  America Online


Haven't named my MAC but he (it's a he, I don't know why) has his own teddy

bear (Editor Bear - wearing a cardigan, glasses and frowns at me a lot).

Kathy 


Subj:  Re:Mac vs IBM, put up yer du

Date:  96-06-29 00:51:01 edt

From:  Holtzer         

Posted on:  America Online


>>...the computer we started out with...<<


Hell, I started out on an Apple ][+ -- and you can always tell the folks who

did, because that's they way it HAS to be typed. And back then, square

brackets were part of an extended character set that had to be accessed

through an arcane set of keystrokes -- it was how you knew the really "in"

people.


I managed to figure out one word processor program well enough to type basic

text, and watched with amazement as my son, then barely a teenager, swooped

back and forth between word processors without even noticing. I'm definitely

one of those people whose kids taught them everything they know about

computers. (And I'd still never survive if he weren't on the other end of a

phone line.)


Subj:  Re:Mac vs IBM, put up yer du

Date:  96-06-29 16:01:37 edt

From:  Ardwin          

Posted on:  America Online


We writers fall in love with our implements.  Although I write on a PC I

still get a charge picking up a real writing implement, a fountain pen, and

writing something long hand.  There's something about the way the width of

the line varies and the ink flows onto the paper.  Then, after a few days,

and ink-stained fingers, I go back to the mass-produced ball pens that do the

job so much more efficiently but with no romance or history.  (I still

remember when my job in third grade was filling the ink wells in the desks

every morning)


I did just buy a laptop that has Windows 95 loaded on it and I'm hopping back

and forth between it and my desktop that has Windows 3.1.  I'm too old.  I

still like Windows 3.1 with it's Program Manager and File Manager better.


Ferd


Subj:  Re:Mac vs IBM, put up yer du

Date:  96-06-29 21:12:16 edt

From:  Fontella        

Posted on:  America Online


My dukes are firmly planted on my MAC keyboard. Use PowerBook for most

writing for its intimacy.


Subj:  Re:Mac vs IBM, put up yer du

Date:  96-06-29 23:01:03 edt

From:  SAKwriter       

Posted on:  America Online


I've used both PC & Mac for years, including various word processors on both

machines.  Since I've been in the computer field for 25 yrs, you'd think I'd

be pretty flexible.  But I can admit it here:  I just love my Mac.  That

little rainbow apple logo is so cute, I don't know how anyone can resist it.

I've got a Centris 650, a considerable step up from the old SE I used for

years.  I still have that SE (which is named Neptune and has the nameplate to

prove it), but I did manage to part with its Apple predecessors.  I

practically have to be chained down to use the PC for anything.  Mostly, my

son plays games & educational software on it.  In our family, it's very

telling that the PC is the machine with the joystick.  Sometimes I use it to

print out greeting cards because I have a color inkjet printer on that

system, but a b&w laser printer on the Centris.  I also use it in my

consulting business when I connect to mainframes.  But that doesn't mean I

have to like it.  I do think we develop a strong fondness for whatever we

used first.  The main problem I have now is that when I visit a software

store, the Mac selection is non-existent or pathetic.  I've been in several

stores which eliminated their Mac software altogether to make space for the

proliferation of inexpensive PC CD's.  Money talks, and PCs have the market

share to shout big time.  Mail order is the way to go for software selection.

I've also noticed that PC owners (especially those whose only exposure to

computers has been through micros) automatically assume that everyone else

uses a PC too.  Why is that?  I don't assume everybody else has a Mac.  

I say use what you feel comfortable with, and live and let live.   

Shirley


Subj:  Re:Mac vs IBM, put up yer du

Date:  96-07-01 20:43:57 edt

From:  WillMize        

Posted on:  America Online


<opening up ANOTHER can of worms>

Heck, I'm one of the last people on the planet who still use WORDSTAR <ver

7.0 for DOS> and ADORE it.  I have WORD and WP and all that, but I always go

back to WS.

<cue nostalgic music>


- Bill in St Petersburg, FL


Subj:  Re:Mac vs IBM, put up yer du

Date:  96-07-02 18:18:06 edt

From:  Carito          

Posted on:  America Online


Yes, Bill.  I worked for a company that made templates for all the

word-processing packages and you are the last one.Subj:  Long Live WordStar!

Date:  96-07-02 20:50:26 edt

From:  EQ451           

Posted on:  America Online


Sorry, Bill, you're not quite the last.  I've been using

WordStar since 1985, starting with version 3.3 on my old

Kaypro II (CP/M), and am now using v. 5.5 (DOS) on an IBM

PS/1.  Have written many words and made a good amount of

money with  WordStar, and will load it again into any

computer I buy in the future.


Best wishes -- Dan


Subj:  Re:Long Live WordStar!

Date:  96-07-02 21:10:41 edt

From:  WillMize        

Posted on:  America Online


Thanks Dan -

      I stand corrected.  When the New World Order (tm) comes, we'll ensure

that the word processor of mandatory choice is Wordstar.  Then you and I can

get the respect, honor and money that we deserve teaching others how to use

WordStar :>


- Bill, who has NOT made a lot of money using Wordstar YET. But has written

muy words.


Subj:  Membership query

Date:  96-07-04 08:19:14 edt

From:  J0EJ0HNS0N      

Posted on:  America Online


Is there a "must be published" stipulation to MWA membership?



Subj:  Re:Membership query

Date:  96-07-04 09:51:18 edt

From:  DFlanagan       

Posted on:  America Online


>>>Is there a "must be published" stipulation to MWA membership?<<<


MWA allows prepublished writers, but there is a limit by chapter on the

number of Associates. You have to show you are actively seeking publication

through submission of rejection letters (finally, a use for them!), etc.

Contact MWA HQ for details.


- Dale


Subj:  MWA July chat

Date:  96-07-06 17:52:06 edt

From:  KLouise         

Posted on:  America Online


MWA's July chat will be this Tuesday, July 9, at 9 pm ET, in the Writers'

Conference room.  This month our guest speaker is Rich Barre.  Here's his

bio:


------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Richard Barre is the author of two thriller/mystery novels to date: The

Innocents, published in 1995, which has been nominated for both Shamus and

Anthony awards in the category of Best First, and Bearing Secrets, which he

is currently touring. Both feature Wil Hardesty-Vietnam survivor, lifelong

surfer, Southern California PI-a man still mourning the loss of his young

son. 


Rich was born in Los Angeles and raised in California. Prior to taking the

leap and quitting his day job to write full time, he was copywriter and

creative director for fifteen years at his own advertising agency. Also a

travel writer and editor, he lives in Santa Barbara with his wife, Susan. He

is currently at work on his third Hardesty novel, The Ghosts of Morning . 


-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------


You can read more about Rich's book The Innocents in the 1995 edition of

Mystery Writer's Sourcebook.  In Section VI (Editors at Work) Michael Seidman

talks about his decision to acquire Rich's first novel.


We'll use protocol, as usual, for this meeting.

     When you have a question or comment, please type ?

     or ! and you'll be called on in turn by the moderator. 

     When you're done asking or commenting type GA (go

     ahead).  After the response, if you have no further

     comments to make or questions to ask, indicate your

     thanks and type END.  This will signal the moderator to

     call on the next ? or !in line.  Be concise and we'll

     be able to make the most of our time.

        Please refrain from IM-ing the guest so he can

     concentrate on the interview.  Thanks.


See you Tuesday!

Karen


Subj:  Re:Long Live WordStar!

Date:  96-07-08 21:22:39 edt

From:  FUBOP           

Posted on:  America Online


I dont use Wordstar anymore, but still find it difficult to perform a task

with a mouse when I can use keyboard commands. The first always makes the

deepest impression.....in all things.


DTM


Subj:  Sherlock & Nero

Date:  96-07-13 11:07:35 edt

From:  ScotMcBaen      

Posted on:  America Online


What other series are written first person from the viewpoint of the second

banana?  If not series, standalones?  I can see why Conan Doyle and Stout

did, or at least, why I would've, given the genius of the title characters.

Any contemporaries using this device?  Probably somebody obvious that I'm

overlooking.  Thanks for helping.


smb


Subj:  Furutani Web Site

Date:  96-07-14 11:19:23 edt

From:  DFlanagan       

Posted on:  America Online


I’d like to invite fellow SINC members to visit my Web site. It not only

discusses my upcoming mystery, Death in Little Tokyo, featuring Asian

American Ken Tanaka, it also has articles which may be of special interest to

other writers. The site is:


     members.aol.com/dfurutani


At this site is an article on how I put together this Web site, using space

provided as part of my American On Line (AOL) subscription and free software

from Microsoft which allows MS Word to edit and format Web pages. There’s

even a link to allow you to obtain the free Microsoft Software for yourself,

if you’re interested in creating your own Web site. 


The site also includes a copy of the Reader’s Group Guide to Death in Little

Tokyo. This guide suggests discussion questions about the book, plus other

useful information about Asian Americans. It’s modeled on the guides author

Jean Hager developed, and may be something you’ll want to do for your own

books.


The site has the usual author’s photo, biographical information, discussions

of why I’m writing this series, and quotes about the book from both the

mystery community and (an unusual touch) prominent members of the Asian

American community.


Thanks!


Dale Furutani Flanagan

(Author of Death in Little Tokyo by Dale Furutani)



Subj:  Looking for an author

Date:  96-07-14 19:46:37 edt

From:  RIGHT4FUN       

Posted on:  America Online


I am looking for the name of an author and a series of books they've written.

All I know is that the main characters name is "Rachel"  and I think the

authors name is Daly or something like that. Can anyone help me.

Thanks


Subj:  Rich Barre, MWA's July guest

Date:  96-07-16 16:12:16 edt

From:  KLouise         

Posted on:  America Online


Download the file for the July MWA chat and hear Rich Barre talking about his

book The Innocents, nominated for both an Anthony and a Shamus, and his

newest book Bearing Secrets.


Check it out!

Karen


Subj:  Writers Who Love Libraries 

Date:  96-07-22 23:02:26 edt

From:  Wirono          

Posted on:  America Online


Can anyone tell me how to contact a group called Writers Who Love Libraries

(WWLL)? Our local library, which is staffed by volunteers and exists solely

on donations and fund-raising efforts, is losing its facility to a

multi-screen movie theater? We must vacate the premises by Sept. 1, 1996, and

are frantically seeking help!


Subj:  Re:Writers Who Love Librarie

Date:  96-07-23 07:49:37 edt

From:  AHDN64          

Posted on:  America Online


I don't know about the organization, but I do know that I am apalled by what

you wrote. How can a community allow this to happen.  Is the building

historic (get it on the historic registery)? Contact authors. Get a big name

interested in the project. E-mail some of the authors who are on-line (e-mail

instead of posting on the board). Get some publicity going.  Is there a local

paper that can help?  A school (s)?  How about a story about the history of

the library and prominent people in the community who started going there as

a child?

Is there a large company in the area who can back you? There's always civil

disobedience (peaceful). Sit (live) in the library as protest. (Boy, have you

got me stirred up!) 

Are they making provisions for another library?

Where are you and how can I help?

Mitzi


Subj:  Re:Writers Who Love Librarie

Date:  96-07-23 14:00:27 edt

From:  DianneDay       

Posted on:  America Online


I second Mitzi.  Please tell us where you are.  I may know people who will

help if it's geographically possible.

Dianne


Subj:  Quick Before It's Deleted

Date:  96-07-24 23:59:08 edt

From:  Holtzer         

Posted on:  America Online


I thought those of us committed to freedom of expression should all be aware

of this, from the SF Chronicle:


     America Online, the largest commercial forum in cyberspace, has

forbidden people who use its sports discussion groups to post their messages

in any language other than English. 

     AOL has been erasing messages posted in Spanish and Portuguese since

last week because its discussion group monitors don't understand them,

infuriating a group of subscribers, led by Bay Area soccer fans, who want to

talk about their favorite Olympic sport in whatever language they choose...

     The on-line service posted this explanation: "While it's wonderful to

see so many folks who are multilingual, unfortunately there is no way we can

verify whether every language one might choose to use in a post meets the AOL

terms of service (for politeness). Posts not made in English will be deleted

without notice." 


I expect this posting to be deleted as soon as our Censor reads it, of

course. Ain't it a treat to know that we're all members of an Amurricuns-only

online service? (If you care to, you can make your feelings known at KEYWORD:

TOS, the only place I know of to actually communicate with the Powers That

Be.)


Subj:  Re:Writers Who Love Libraries 

Date:  96-07-25 00:47:11 edt

From:  JSW52534        

Posted on:  America Online


Form a "friends" group.  Contact local politicans. Interest the local

newspapers and provide feature articles on the current facility.  Contact the

developer and pressure him to assist in finding a new location.  Sometimes

the local planning board can put stipulations on the approval for occupancy

that would cause the developer to provide alternate facilities for the public

good.  Try working with the system first then go to the protest mode.  Good

luck!


Subj:  Re:Quick Before It's Deleted

Date:  96-07-28 16:00:57 edt

From:  KLouise         

Posted on:  America Online


At the risk of incurring the wrath of every writer who exists:


One of the features about AOL that's nice is their terms of service; the fact

that if someone turns up in a chat room who is being inappropriate, you have

someplace to go, you can call someone to take care of the problem and return

to your business.  When you receive an obscene email (I don't know about you,

but it's definitely happened to me) you have an option -- there's something

you can DO about it.


The only solution I can think of, in order for AOL to keep their current

policy and allow people to post in different languages, is to either only

hire multilingual people (making the jobs available to fewer people) or some

tedious business of carefully noting where each posting in a different

language is located, communicating it to a multilingual person, who will then

check it out.  Time consuming and probably not the best use of their time.


OR, they could consider having a board in each language available, and have

it vetted by someone who knows the language.  That seems the only workable

approach to allow them to keep their policy and allow for a multilingual

usage.


Now that I've alienated everyone in this community --

Is anyone still speaking to me?  


Karen


Subj:  Re:Quick Before It's Deleted

Date:  96-07-28 16:23:41 edt

From:  Kthirty         

Posted on:  America Online


Guten tag Karen!

;)))))  Kathy


Subj:  Re:Quick Before It's Deleted

Date:  96-07-28 21:31:24 edt

From:  SLBWrites       

Posted on:  America Online


What?  We're not going to speak to you because you have an opinion?  It's not

as if the rest of us don't :-))))))


Sherry


Subj:  Writers Who Love Libraries

Date:  96-07-28 22:12:31 edt

From:  Wirono          

Posted on:  America Online


Thanks for the response! If you think you're stirred up, imagine how we feel!

We've had excellent coverage in the local newspapers and several politicians

seem to be trying. Our local fire department has even offered to donate land

for a permanent facility. However, we are a very young library (established

May 1993) and located in a newly developed unincorporated area of the county.

Seems we were just getting on our feet good when this hit. I work in the

tecnical services department of another library and ran across a brief

reference to the WWLL group in a book I was cataloging about a year ago. It

is a non-profit group whose members include Mary Higgins Clark and a number

of other "greats". Unfortunately, I can't for the life of me remember which

book it was! :(  


We are the East Lake Community Library, located in Pinellas County, Florida

(on the west coast -- St. Petersburg/Tampa area). Mailing address: P. O. Box

4894, Palm Harbor FL 34685. My e-mail address is Wirono@GTE.Net


We will be eternally grateful for help of any kind from anyone!!  P.S.

Because we do not receive any government funding, we are registered as a

non-profit. Any donations are tax-exempt.



Subj:  Re:Quick Before It's Deleted

Date:  96-07-28 23:11:09 edt

From:  DFlanagan       

Posted on:  America Online


Karen,


Wakarimaska? Hai, wakarimasu.


- Dale


P.S. Do I understand? Yes, I understand (translation in case AOL doesn't have

Japanese speakers online yet).

P.P.S.  And of course we'll talk to you, but it will be in the same

smart-mouth manner as always<G>.

P.P.P.S. I once got a death threat via AOL (in english). There's a journalist

named Dale Flanagan, so I was never able to figure out if it was directed at

me or him.


Dale _FURUTANI_ Flanagan



Subj:  Re:Quick Before It's Deleted

Date:  96-07-29 12:08:53 edt

From:  Holtzer         

Posted on:  America Online


Karen:


I agree that keeping things civilized here (not to mention safe) is

worthwhile. And I also got an obscene e-mail once -- a really gamy gif file.

The thing is, when I got it, I reported it to the TOS people. I didn't need

AOL reading every piece of my mail to "protect" me in advance. (They don't

read e-mail, of course.)


The same thing holds true for the boards -- why not simply wait until someone

reports a problem? (Yes, I've done that too -- you should see some of the

slime that oozed onto the 49ers board before they started enforcing some

rules.) In other words, why not approach it with a "no harm, no foul"

attitude?


I also have to say that I'm very pleased with AOL's response to this -- they

backed off quickly, admitted they were wrong, and moved on.


Subj:  Last weeks

of MFTY

Date:  96-07-29 16:13:56 edt

From:  JTaylorRED      

Posted on:  America Online


Mysteries from the Yard is being shut down for lack of business by AOL at the

end of August (sigh, growl, sob).  I've only been hosting a chat on it for a

month, but I feel a strong sense of loss at a venue for chats, interviews,

and of course buying books you can't get other places.


If you want to send a note of support to its owner, Mary Frost-Pierson (MS

TERIES), I'm sure she'd appreciate it. I'm afraid it's too late to send a

protest to AOL, though it might be a rewarding exercise in venting.


And if you want to drop by the Women of Mystery Chat on any Monday Midnight

edt (9:00 San Francisco time) before the end of August, we'd love to see you!

(Keyword MFTY, then go to Searching for Clues, and Go to Chat)


Jean Taylor


Subj:  Fan letter to Holtzer

Date:  96-07-29 16:20:18 edt

From:  JTaylorRED      

Posted on:  America Online


Besides her fiesty upholding of free speech on AOL,  Susan also gets my big

thanks for organizing the MWA table at the Books by the Bay independent

booksellers' event in San Francisco last week.  I had a great time and even

sold a few books!


I was lucky in that my shift at book signing preceded the live, gawdawfully

dreadful performance of saccharine songs by the seller of kids books, which

the gallant Susan and husband must have endured all day. . . .


Subj:  Re:Fan

letter to Holtzer

Date:  96-07-29 22:58:46 edt

From:  Holtzer         

Posted on:  America Online


Thanks, Jean. I'm personally partial to things you don't have to plan for --

in this case, because there just wasn't time. What's great is that we got

eight authors together for this in less than 48 hours -- AND impressed the

hell out of the booksellers by doing it. Good karma all the way around. I had

a fine time, and wouldn't have had a complaint in the world if the

temperature had been about 15 degrees cooler.   :-)


Subj:  Re:Quick Before

It's Deleted

Date:  96-07-30 14:10:38 edt

From:  KLouise         

Posted on:  America Online


Susan,


Good ideas.  I agree with you, basically.  It's just that I could see the

problems AOL was facing in trying to maintain their standards, and I think

sometimes in the interest of free speech (which I fully support) people are

awfully quick to interpret things as anti free speech when they may be driven

by other forces.  I do not believe in censorship, but I do believe in ratings

(I know, I know, they're imperfect:  but as a parent I support them in

principle), and I think people confuse the two.


Dale and Kathy -- Merci beaucoups.  A bientot.  :)  And Dale, feel free to

smartmouth me all you like.  


Karen


Subj:  Bookshops

Date:  96-08-01 17:45:28 edt

From:  DFlanagan       

Posted on:  America Online


I'm making an expensive mailing to bookshops in conjunction with the launch

of my book "Death in Little Tokyo" (well, it's expensive for me. It's

probably what Patsy Cornwell spends on donuts for her bodygaurds...) and I

would appreciate it if anyone could email me the addresses of good mystery

bookshops. I'm especially interested in shops on the west coast, NYC and

Hawaii, but my main criteria is an independent mystery bookshop that will

look at a new writer's work and recommend it to customers whose taste matches

the writer's book.


Thanks for your help,


Dale Furutani Flanagan


Subj:  Re:Bookshops

Date:  96-08-01 17:58:01 edt

From:  Holtzer         

Posted on:  America Online


Dale:


There's a list of mystery bookstores on our website (MWA/NorCal), in a

comma-delimited, zipcode-ordered .zip file ready to download and dump into a

mailmerge. The URL is:

         http://user.aol.com/mwanorcal/


Go to the "Resources for Mystery Writers" page and you'll see it there. (Let

us know what sort of responses you get!)


Subj:  Re:Bookshops

Date:  96-08-02 14:00:41 edt

From:  DFlanagan       

Posted on:  America Online


Thanks for the information on the MWA northern cal website. It sounds great.


I've gotten good response to my request for email bookshop recommendaitons.

I'll know in a week of two if the bookshops respond (there's a return

postcard if they're interested in signings, etc.).


- Dale


Subj:  Re:Bookshops

Date:  96-08-03 14:17:27 edt

From:  PVJasper        

Posted on:  America Online


Dale,


Murder By The Book in Houston, Texas


email me if you need more info


Subj:  Re:Bookshops

Date:  96-08-03 19:56:53 edt

From:  DFlanagan       

Posted on:  America Online


Dear PV,


Thanks for the recommendation. I'll track down the address!


- Dale


Subj:  College Scholarships...

Date:  96-08-04 12:24:10 edt

From:  DElngtnPI       

Posted on:  America Online


Is there any type of college scholarship for young mystery writers through

the Mystery Writers of America or any other group?  I am in my second year of

school and desperatly searching for ways to pay for my last two.


BryonS


ubj:  Re:College Scholarships...

Date:  96-08-05 14:16:51 edt

From:  RAINDEAD        

Posted on:  America Online


Bryon,


Contact the MWA Executive Director, Priscilla Ridgway at 212-888-8171.  Good

Luck in your search!



Phyllis



Subj:  MWA August chat

Date:  96-08-11 15:41:17 edt

From:  KLouise         

Posted on:  America Online


MWA's monthly chat will be Tuesday, August 13, at 9 pm ET in the Writers

Conference Room.  Our guest speaker is Jean Hager.


----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Jean Hager is the author of more than 50 novels in several genres.  For the

last several years, she has written mysteries in three different

series--Mitch Bushyhead Cherokee mysteries, Molly Bearpaw Cherokee mysteries,

and Iris House Bed and Breakfast mysteries.  Her most recent releases are The

Fire Carrier, a Mitch Bushyhead mystery, published by Mysterious Press/Warner

Books in hard cover, and Death on the Drunkard's Path published by Avon Books

in paperback.  


Jean has been a two-time Agatha mystery award nominee (a national award) and

a five-time winner of the Oklahoma Tepee Award (for best book of fiction).

She has been named Oklahoma Writer of the Year by the University of Oklahoma

and inducted into the Oklahoma Professional Writers Hall of Fame.  She is a

frequent speaker at writers conferences and occasionally teaches mystery

writing workshops.


----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

The meeting will be conducted under protocol, as usual.   This month RAINDEAD

will be the moderator.


 When you have a question or comment, please type ?

     or ! and you'll be called on in turn by the moderator. 

     When you're done asking or commenting type GA (go

     ahead).  After the response, if you have no further

     comments to make or questions to ask, indicate your

     thanks and type END.  This will signal the moderator to

     call on the next ? or !in line.  Be concise and we'll

     be able to make the most of our time.

        Please refrain from IM-ing the guest so he can

     concentrate on the interview.  Thanks.



See you Tuesday!

Karen


Subj:  Plot: Four Arcs?

Date:  96-08-11 15:56:52 edt

From:  WillMize        

Posted on:  America Online


Greets -

  In this month's Raven Feathers, it was mentioned that at the Book Passage

conference, Carolyn Wheat gave a lecture entitled "Building A Plot",

discussing four arcs of plot and how they  are used in mystery writing.

  Could anyone enlighten me as to what these four arcs are with specifics to

the mystery?  I've read a great many books on writing and am unfamiliar with

this method.  Any book conver it in greater detail?


thank you kindly,


 - Bill, in St. Petersburg, Fla.


Subj:  Jack Bickham

Date:  96-08-12 15:28:28 edt

From:  WillMize        

Posted on:  America Online


With regards to the prior post and Jack Bickham, all I can say is that I'm

jealous!  I keep his "Writing Novels That Sell" next to my desk and pick it

up at least once a week for guidance and inspiration.  It's incredibly nuts

and bolts and direct to the point (like Stein's "On Writing" to a degree) and

I highly recommend it.  Wish I could be there :>


- Bill, who's still in St. Petersburg.


PS: His series of articles (6 in all) on writing the short story in WD was

quite excellent also.


Subj:  Re:send us your promo!

Date:  96-08-12 16:30:14 edt

From:  SAKwriter       

Posted on:  America Online


I've been known to slobber and sniff at any promotion opportunity, so my

bookmarks for GRAY MATTER are on the way.  Though I must admit, the book

lacks romance, unless you count that quick little fantasy scene...


Shirley


Subj:  Re:Plot: Four Arcs?

Date:  96-08-13 15:29:09 edt

From:  KLouise         

Posted on:  America Online


Bill --


Golly, you mean someone actually READ my article about Book Passage?


I'm honored.


I will attempt to put together a short paragraph or two describing Carolyn's

Arcs (boy, does that one raise possibilities and/or eyebrows) and post them

here.  Keep yer eyes tuned.


Karen


Subj:  Four Arcs

Date:  96-08-13 16:09:32 edt

From:  KLouise         

Posted on:  America Online


From my notes on the four arcs according to Carolyn:


For the sake of example, let's assume the book is 20 chapters.  Carolyn

suggests that the first seven chapters, approximately, would represent Arc 1.

In a mystery, these chapters would end either with the body or, if the body

was earlier in the book, with the amateur taking on the case.  For a

suspense, she suggests this is used to show the way things are now and to

introduce the problem, and would end with a reversal, a threat of some sort.


Arcs 2 and 3 comprise something along the order of the next ten chapters,

during which time the mystery sleuth would be trying to discover what

happened, would meet with at least one reversal in thinking,  Arc 3 ends with

a "challenge to the reader" -- not necessarily literally, but with some

information that leads into Arc 4, the final 3 chapters, in which the mystery

is solved.  In suspense, Carolyn suggests that Arcs 2 and 3 represent a

pendulum of emotion, as things compound and get worse, with the protag

hitting bottom around the end of Arc 2 and beginning to climb out in Arc 3.

(This is what I have in my notes, and while it seems a little confusing, I

think Carolyn is saying not that the SOLUTION to the problem is reached

during the 3rd Arc but rather that the protag is more assertively trying to

deal with it.)  Arc 4 is when the protag overcomes something, whatever the

problem was.


By coincidence I read "The Screenwriter's Workbook" by Syd Field at the same

time I attended this workshop, and I found that he uses a similar prototype:

he divides Act 2 of a 3-act play into two parts, with the midpoint halfway

through it, thus ending up with four arcs.  Act 1, "The Setup", with the 1st

plot point at the end, would correspond to Carolyn's first arc; Act 2,

"Confrontation", with it's two sections ending in the 2nd plot point, would

be Arcs 2 and 3, and Act 4, "Resolution", is her 4th Arc.


I hope I've presented her material accurately; apologies to her if I've

goofed anywhere.  It was a good lecture and I enjoyed it.  


-Karen


Subj:  Re:Four Arcs

Date:  96-08-13 18:26:55 edt

From:  WillMize        

Posted on:  America Online


Karen -

  I thank you kindly for the explanation of the arcs - a book that I would

recommend to others who, like myself are looking for a skeleton to hang some

clothes (and a murder) on would be Christopher Vogler's "The Writers Journey:

Mythic Structure For Storytellers and Screenwriters"  Based on Joseph

Campbell's "The Heros Journey" Vogler uses movies such as Indiana Jones, Star

Wars, The Wizard of Oz, Beverly Hills Cop and others to explain each of the

12 steps in the Heros Journey.

If anyone is interested in a brief synopsis of the steps, here we go!


1)  Heroes are introduced in the ORDINARY WORLD, where

2) they recieve the CALL TO ADVENTURE.

3) They are RELUCTANT at first or REFUSE THE CALL but

4) They are encouraged by a MENTOR to

5) CROSS THE FIRST THRESHOLD and enter the special world where

6) they encounter TESTS, ALLIES and ENEMIES

7) They APPROACH THE INMOST CAVE, crossing a second threshold

8) where they take the SUPREME ORDEAL,

9) take posession of their REWARD and

10) are pursued on THE ROAD BACK to the Ordinary World.

11) They cross the third threshold, experience a RESURRECTION

and are transformed by the experience.

12) They RETURN WITH THE ELIXIR, a boon or treasure to benefit the 

Ordinary World.


This is a very very rudimentary explaination of the journey.  Each of the

above 12 is explained in detail in the book along with tons of examples of

each.   The book also covers about 10-15 different archetypes of people that

can be used for characters.  Highly recommended.  A bit pricy at $22.95

though.


Yer welcome !


- Bill Mize


Subj:  Re: 4 arcs

Date:  96-08-14 10:35:57 edt

From:  Figcar          

Posted on:  America Online


May I suggest that we reconsider these "formulas" and read the works of

writers who actually write stories for a living, instead of self-proclaimed

gurus who write how to books for a living.  Conversations with Henry Miller

and Jorge Borges and Ingmar Bergman and Jean Luc Godard and Federico Fellini

and Jack Kerouac and dozens of others, (plus some Fritz Perls for a good

understand of the functions of ego,) would be a little more in order this

late in the century.  Unless of course, you want your book for feel and read

like everyone elses.  


Subj:  Re:four arcs?

Date:  96-08-14 12:53:30 edt

From:  WillMize        

Posted on:  America Online


Figcar wrote:

>May I suggest that we reconsider these "formulas" and read the works of

writers who actually >write stories for a living, instead of self-proclaimed

gurus who write how to books for a living.  >Conversations with Henry Miller

and Jorge Borges and Ingmar Bergman and Jean Luc Godard >and Federico Fellini

and Jack Kerouac and dozens of others, (plus some Fritz Perls for a good

>understand of the functions of ego,) would be a little more in order this

late in the century.  >Unless of course, you want your book for feel and read

like everyone elses.  


Interesting point and it brings up a debate that will last until time

immemorial: Art vs Commerce and is there any ground inbetween?

I, personally, want to be published.  Publishers want to make money.  I want

to be paid some of that money.  Publishers are looking for certain things in

the books that they publish with regards to formula, genre, etc.  There are

established rules and norms.  If you step outside these, you may lessen your

chances at being published.  Being a professional writer (one who gets paid

to write) means that you will walk this tightrope every day.  You want to

express yourself freely, they want and demand certain things from you.  It's

a compromise.

Taking the high and literary road may personally fullfill your soul, but you

may not be able to take it to the bank. Reading those folks you mentioned,

the filmmakers and the writers, may enrich your understanding of the human

condition and thereby improve your writing, your empathy, but when push comes

to shove, you're gonna have to pay rent.

I saw enough snobbishness and eliteism  during my 4 years in the writing

program at San Francisco State to last a lifetime. I accuse you of neither,

but who would you rather be, John Grisham or an unpublished writer?  There is

no right or correct answer to this question.  Each person is on their own

path and each path is correct and true, so forgive those of us who look for

formulas or how-to-write books to enable us to continue on OUR path.


Lecture mode off,


 - Bill in St. Petersburg.


Subj:  Re:four arcs?

Date:  96-08-14 21:53:33 edt

From:  ANDIDVM         

Posted on:  America Online


Wow. Interesting.  When I started writing, with no formal training, I read a

few books, all titled some variation on 'How to Write A Mystery', joined a

writers' group, and away I went!  Don't know that I got much from the books,

but I've been conscious from the beginning of a certain rhythm to good

stories, a wave effect, if you will, and after writing an intense scene if I

need a breather I'm pretty sure the reader does too.  So my protagonist stops

for dinner or takes a shower.  Then maybe a talky scene, then we need some

action again.  


A few years ago I attended a well-known seminar called STORY STRUCTURE, by

Robert McKee, which many of you receive twice-annual invitations for.  I took

home very little that was 'new', but found an awareness of what I'd been

diong instinctively.  I'm now able to step back and 'see' what I'm doing.


Bottom line, to get and keep my attention, a story needs pace, rhythm,

danger, and mental stimulation.  Tension is a combination of pace and danger.

Having read a lot of books in my life, and not willing to devote my life to

studying other peoples' work, I want to enjoy the story rather than working

to understand what the writer was trying to accomplish.  I've seen several

versions of the 'four arcs' theory, and they all have merit.  The real trick

is to write a book that fits the pattern without 'appearing' formuleic.

That's where plot twists come in.  Give the reader something s/he doesn't see

coming!


Nothing new here I guess.  The only rule is, there are no rules!


Yes, I'm published.  Or will be in October.  RIDING FOR A FALL, Fawcett.

First in a series.


Lillian M. Robert


Subj:  Re:four arcs?

Date:  96-08-14 22:41:39 edt

From:  JKenn10050      

Posted on:  America Online


Well said Lillian!!


Subj:  Re:four arcs?

Date:  96-08-15 08:53:47 edt

From:  JeHager         

Posted on:  America Online


Lillian, you're so right.  I still read how-too books, mostly to get ideas

for the workshops I teach on occasion.  But what I've discovered in them is

that they are basically setting forth what I did instinctively did before I

read such books.  I think you absorb the rhythm of a good story from a

lifetime of reading stories.  You may not be able to articulate it, but

you've got it in your bones.  However, in defense of Carolyn Wheat (who

writes great mysteries, BTW) she is a writing teacher and loves teaching.

I'm sure she's good at it, too.  


Jean  


Subj:  email/web guide for writers

Date:  96-08-15 20:59:19 edt

From:  MrWriteVA       

Posted on:  America Online


Subj:  email/web guide for writers

Date:  96-08-15 20:48:50 edt

From:  MrWriteVA       


I'm finishing up the last section of  my "No Nonsense E-mail & Website Guide

for Writers." Contained are hours of searching on several of the search

engines across the internet, scouring directories/reference guides, etc.,

etc., to compile one of the most complete guides to the internet specifically

for writers! Need an email address for the editor of the LA Times, NY Times?

Got it--along with hundreds of other  daily newspapers across the nation and

around the world. Not to mention, e-mail, websites, addresses, phone numbers,

contacts of  book publishers, magazine editors, resources, and writers. 


Here's where you come in....need to finish up the Writers E-mail section.

Want a free listing?


E-mail me for a form. Publish date is Oct. 31, 1996, so hurry.



Anthony Carr

New Earth Communications

PO Box 629

Herndon VA 20171


Subj:  Re:Four Arcs

Date:  96-08-15 21:07:11 edt

From:  FGSnyder        

Posted on:  America Online


Writing fiction isn't like painting.  It's like architecture.  You've got to

know where the support beams go or the whole thing will fall in on you.  For

some it's instictive.  For others, like me, it's good to study a little

Engineering 101 before we start.  I also note that anyone who thinks Bergman

didn't study the nuts and bolts of the craft first is mistaken.


BTW, Kerouac is a life style, not a writer.


-- Frank


Subj:  Re:Four Arcs

Date:  96-08-16 01:59:03 edt

From:  ANDIDVM         

Posted on:  America Online


I did not mean to slight Carolyn Wheat in any way!  I admire people who can

articulate theories.  I always am left thinking "well, yeah.  Yes.  Wow!"

It's only later that I realize it's the same theory, different approach.

I've gleaned a lot of enthusiasm, as well as knowledge of publishing which I

appreciate more than I could have known, from the various writers'

conferences I've attended.  I encourage all beginning writers to go to as

many as you can!


LillianSubj:  Re:Four Arcs

Date:  96-08-16 14:16:25 edt

From:  LinoScott       

Posted on:  America Online


I've taken a half-dozen or more of Carolyn Wheat's workshops, each running

for six sessions. She's terrific; there's always something new.  And she's

FUN!  She also writes excellent books, with a wonderful dark humor in the

voice.


Frank, love that analogy of Architecture...or was it engineering? Or both?

Anyway, I agree completely.


Caroline


Subj:  Re:Four Arcs

Date:  96-08-16 19:42:18 edt

From:  KLouise         

Posted on:  America Online


Wow, this one really started up the ol' conversation, didn't it?  


Frank, I love the "Kerouac is a life style" comment.  


Yes, Carolyn's workshops are good, and FUN.  I've been to two and always come

away with something I can use, or at the very least a raised awareness of

something I already knew on some level.


Karen


Subj:  Re:Four Arcs

Date:  96-08-19 15:35:36 edt

From:  Note On         

Posted on:  America Online



If you all are interested in archetypes and myth structures (which you seem

to be, judging from this discussion), I'd like to recommend "Myth, Dreams,

and Mystery" by Mercea Eliade.  It's only tangentially related to mystery

writing, but the tangent is fascinating.



Keith



Subj:  New Web page of interest

Date:  96-08-20 11:16:11 edt

From:  SAKwriter       

Posted on:  America Online


You might want to check out a new monthly newsletter called The Independent

Reader at 

http://www.independentreader.com.  The first issue (August) is up now.

Thirteen well-known independent bookstores from around the country present

their five book recommendations every month.  Links are included to the

bookstores' home pages where available.  One of the stores is Partners &

Crime, which lists 5 mystery recommendations.  Back issues of the newsletter

will be online for a year.

Worth taking a look at.


Shirley


Subj:  GHOST STORIES!

Date:  96-08-21 16:58:40 edt

From:  Note On         

Posted on:  America Online



Please forgive a few cross-postings -- I'm not sure where best to put this:


The Cosmic Debris (the music & spoken word group I perform with) invites

mystery authors to tell Hallowe'en ghost stories with us!


We play weekly at a little bookstore and coffee/pastry place called The Book

Grinders in Van Nuys, across from L.A. Valley College, and they've agreed to

let us overrun the place, either on Sunday, October 27 during late

afternoon/evening, or on Hallowe'en night itself, Thursday, October 31.  I

have not yet settled on a date because I don't yet know which will be best

for the storytellers.  Although I like the idea of late-night scary stories

on Hallowe'en itself, a Sunday early evening might make more sense for those

of us who have to get up early on weekdays.


Any interested L.A. authors -- or those who might be visiting -- please let

me know.  I think this sounds like a HELL OF A TIME, CACKLE, CACKLE,

CACKLE...


MUUHAHAHAHAHAHA,



Keith

http://www.hooked.net/mammoth/showcontrol

http://www.cosmic-debris.com



Subj:  Karen's Good News

Date:  96-08-25 16:50:23 edt

From:  KLouise         

Posted on:  America Online


I wanted to share my good news with the online community, and to reinforce

the credo that perseverance pays off.


After several months and 75 queries, I have acquired an agent.  She will be

marketing my suspense novel this fall while I write the next one (already

begun).  I am satisfied both with her credentials and her level of enthusiasm

for my work.  So keep your fingers crossed for me, everyone!


In addition I just heard Friday that Red Herring Mystery Magazine has

accepted one of my stories. 


Am I feeling good?  Nah, not a bit.


Thanks for all your support, everyone.

-Karen


Subj:  Congratulations

Date:  96-08-25 17:48:05 edt

From:  MsSleuth        

Posted on:  America Online


Hi Karen,


What wonderful news. Just I needed to hear. Congratulations!


Denise


Subj:  Re:Congratulations

Date:  96-08-25 18:05:16 edt

From:  RCHERIN         

Posted on:  America Online


well done


Subj:  Re:Karen's Good News

Date:  96-08-25 18:19:35 edt

From:  DFlanagan       

Posted on:  America Online


Well, Karen!


Great news, and after you're rich and famous you'll have a fantastic story of

perseverence to tell at writer's conferences!


Congratulations!


- Dale


Subj:  Re:Karen's Good News

Date:  96-08-25 18:55:59 edt

From:  FGSnyder        

Posted on:  America Online


Great job, Karen!  Congratulations!


-- Frank


Subj:  Re:Karen's Good News

Date:  96-08-25 20:32:21 edt

From:  Kthirty         

Posted on:  America Online


Congrats!


"What an author like to write most is his signature on the back of a check."

-- Brendan Francis


Kathy


Subj:  Re:Karen's Good News

Date:  96-08-25 20:43:55 edt

From:  RAINDEAD        

Posted on:  America Online


Congratulations, Kiddo!  Well done!



Phyllis


Subj:  Re:Karen's Good News

Date:  96-08-25 21:38:33 edt

From:  MsMcL           

Posted on:  America Online


Congratulations, Karen!   Thanks for sharing.


Kate


Subj:  Re: Karen's Good News

Date:  96-08-26 01:04:31 edt

From:  Carito          

Posted on:  America Online


Congrats from me too! Enjoy!


Barb


Subj:  Re: Karen's Good News

Date:  96-08-26 02:14:53 edt

From:  ESFowler        

Posted on:  America Online


Yeehaw!


Earlene


Subj:  Re:Karen's Good News

Date:  96-08-26 04:23:03 edt

From:  Note On         

Posted on:  America Online



Congratulations, Karen!  :)



Keith



Subj:  Re: Karen's Good News

Date:  96-08-26 11:53:08 edt

From:  SuprNanny       

Posted on:  America Online


Congratulations!!


-julie-


Subj:  Karen's Good News

Date:  96-08-26 13:54:43 edt

From:  DianneDay       

Posted on:  America Online


I didn't log on yesterday and so just saw your good news today.  I'm thrilled

for you, Karen!  Wish you all the luck in the world.

Dianne


Subj:  Karen's Thanks

Date:  96-08-26 17:05:16 edt

From:  KLouise         

Posted on:  America Online


To Denise, Robert, Dale, Frank, Kathy, Phyllis, Kate, Barb, Earlene, Keith,

Julie, and Dianne --


THANKS!!!!!


(and if I forgot anyone, thanks to you too!  :)  


Karen


Subj:  Launch Party

Date:  96-08-28 18:01:05 edt

From:  DFlanagan       

Posted on:  America Online


MWA members living in the Los Angeles area are cordially invited to the

launch party for my first mystery, "Death in Little Tokyo," to be held on

Saturday, October 5, 1996, from 7 to 9 PM.


The launch party is a fund-raiser for the Japanese American National Museum,

which is in the heart of the Little Tokyo district of L.A. The Museum is

dedicated to the preservation and communication of the Japanese American

experience, and it’s housed in a former Buddhist temple which is on the

national list of historic places.


For a $30 donation to the Museum, you will receive a signed copy of "Death in

Little Tokyo," and you and a guest can tour the Museum after-hours without

paying the normal $8 admission fee. All proceeds will go to the Museum. 


Naturally, there will also be wine and sodas, mouth-watering desserts, and

live Asian music. We think the proverbial "a good time will be had by all" is

a certainty!


This is the first time the Museum has done this for a book, and if you have

any friends who might be interested in this event, please feel free to pass

the word on to them, too.


For full details, please email me at Dfurutani@AOL.com. Include your mailing

address and I’ll send you complete details, including a map with parking

instructions.


Dale


P.S. Please excuse me if you’ve read this in another folder. I want to make

sure everyone I normally tease has a chance to show up at the party!



Subj:  Launch Party - added info

Date:  96-08-29 12:13:45 edt

From:  DFlanagan       

Posted on:  America Online


I got a phone call this morning from someone who reads this board, and it

makes me think that some additional explanation about my Launch Party is in

order.


First, I posted the invitation to the MWA, SinC and First Mystery folders,

the three folders I frequent most. For some reason, only the MWA invitation

made it to the board. It was *not* my intent to limit the invitation to MWA

members only. I’m an enthusiastic member of *both* MWA and SinC, and it

frankly hurts me that someone could think I feel members of one group are

somehow "better" than the other.


Second, although I am signing the copies of "Death in Little Tokyo," the

Japanese American National Museum (JANM), a non-profit organization, is

providing the books as a premium for your donation. As stated, *all* proceeds

go to the Museum.


Third, I will repost the invitation to the SinC and First Mystery folder, in

the hopes that they will appear this time.


Finally, my wife and I are charter members of JANM, and we wanted my Launch

Party to do more than the standard wine-and-canepes literary ego boost. JANM

was a tremendous resource when I was researching the historical aspects of my

book, and, after reading the manuscript, they’ve gone out of their way to

help me promote the book. As most of you know, I wanted this book to work as

a mystery, but also as an authentic window into the Asian American

experience. If the single posting of the invitation to the MWA folder upset

anyone, I’m very sorry, but please understand that this was totally

unintentional.


- Dale



Subj:  Re:Launch Party

Date:  96-08-29 15:52:09 edt

From:  KLouise         

Posted on:  America Online


Gee whiz Dale --


Your launch party sounds like so much fun this is the first (and probably

only) time I've ever wished I lived in LA!


Karen



Subj:  Re:Launch Party

Date:  96-08-30 08:25:35 edt

From:  B Pomidor       

Posted on:  America Online


Dale--

   First of all, I saw a notice of the launch party on both the MWA and SinC

boards, so I don't understand why anyone would accuse you of favoratism.

   Secondly, the launch party sounds like a fabulous idea.  Wish I could be

there, but it's about 2,000 miles away.  Best of luck to you--you deserve it!

~~Bill Pomidor




Subj:  Re:Launch Party

Date:  96-08-30 10:45:01 edt

From:  SAKwriter       

Posted on:  America Online


Dale,

We all know you're sweet and considerate.  How could anyone accuse you of

playing favorites?  Let's get whoever phoned you & use 'em as a dartboard.


Wish I could come to your party.  It's a very original and worthwhile idea.

Good luck with it.  I hope you get a huge turnout!


Shirley, who isn't always sweet & considerate


Subj:  Re:Launch Party

Date:  96-08-30 13:55:44 edt

From:  DFlanagan       

Posted on:  America Online


Shirley,


Thanks for the kind words, but you must not know me if you think I'm _always_

sweet on considerate!!!


>> Let's get whoever phoned you & use 'em as a dartboard<<


We settled our differences over the phone, and once my upset was over I can

undertand why some writers might be sensitive because of MWA's membership

requirements that sometimes makes it difficult for people prepublished and

starting up to join.


Best,


Dale


Subj:  Re:Launch Party

Date:  96-08-30 13:57:20 edt

From:  DFlanagan       

Posted on:  America Online


Hi Bill,


I _thought_ I posted it to three boards, but when I checked after the phone

call it was only on MWA. Mmmm...  the germ of a new mystery<G>?


Best,


Dale


Subj:  Oh, no!!!

Date:  96-08-30 16:06:37 edt

From:  CERYS4          

Posted on:  America Online


It looks as if we may be moving to Pittsburgh, PA,  can anyone tell me if

there is a Pittsburgh chapter, and where do they do their meetings?  how

active?  Any information appreciated.


Jean


Subj:  Re:Oh, no!!!

Date:  96-08-30 19:28:11 edt

From:  Bolitar         

Posted on:  America Online


Jean,


I'm sure there is an area chapter.  I recommend strongly that you contact

Mary Alice or Richard at the Mystery Loves bookshop in Oakmont, PA (right

outside of Pittsburg).  Great people and a great store.  Lots of events,

meetings, teas, etc.

Best,

Harlan Coben


Subj:  Re:Launch Party

Date:  96-08-31 08:42:37 edt

From:  JeHager         

Posted on:  America Online


Dale, wish I could come to your party.  Hope it's a blast!


Jean 


Subj:  MWA September chat

Date:  96-09-08 18:47:39 edt

From:  KLouise         

Posted on:  America Online


Join us Tuesday Sept. 10, at 9 pm ET in the Writers Conference Room.  Our

guest this month is Bill Pomidor. 


  Bill Pomidor, M.D., earned his medical degree from the Northeastern Ohio

Universities College of Medicine (NEOUCOM) and completed part of a family

medicine residency before deciding to trade in his black bag for a computer

keyboard.  He has worked as a medical researcher and medical editor, and is a

member of the faculty at NEOUCOM.  

   His medical mystery series, which began with MURDER BY PRESCRIPTION

(Penguin/Signet) last fall, focuses on a husband/wife pair of physicians from

Cleveland, Ohio.  The characters of Plato and Cal Marley are loosely based on

Bill and his wife, Alice, who is also a physician.  In MURDER BY

PRESCRIPTION, coroner Cal Marley and her family doctor husband Plato—two

young doctors in love and in debt—turn a geriatrics conference into an

all-expenses-paid second honeymoon.  But when other doctors at the spooky

gothic lodge start dying mysteriously, Cal and Plato risk their careers and

their lives to diagnose an epidemic of foul play.  In THE ANATOMY OF MURDER,

second in the series, Plato and Cal agree to tutor a quartet of failing

medical students in their most difficult subject.  But Plato is shocked to

find that the teaching cadaver was one of his favorite patients.  Even more

startling is Cal’s discovery that Marylin Abel—a talented drug researcher and

victim of MS—didn’t die of natural causes after all.  Further dissection of

the case reveals a killer’s twisted mind and a sinister plan to transform the

Marleys into the lab’s newest pair of cadavers.  SKELETONS IN THE CLOSET,

which focuses on forensic anthropology and a Cleveland serial killer who

baffled Elliot Ness in the 1930's, will be released in February '97.

   Pomidor’s short fiction has appeared in Alfred Hitchcock’s and Ellery

Queen’s Mystery Magazines, and he has been nominated for both the Edgar Award

and the Shamus Award.  He is a member of Mystery Writers of America and

Sisters in Crime.  He lives in northeastern Ohio with his wife and three

children.


We'll be using protocol as usual.

  When you have a question or comment, please type ?

     or ! and you'll be called on in turn by the moderator. 

     When you're done asking or commenting type GA (go

     ahead).  After the response, if you have no further

     comments to make or questions to ask, indicate your

     thanks and type END.  This will signal the moderator to

     call on the next ? or !in line.  Be concise and we'll

     be able to make the most of our time.

        Please refrain from IM-ing the guest so he can

     concentrate on the interview.  Thanks.


See you Tuesday,

Karen


Subj:  News

Date:  96-09-08 18:51:33 edt

From:  KLouise         

Posted on:  America Online


From Karen (KLouise):


It's been a little over a year since the inception of the monthly MWA online

chats and our newsletter Raven Feathers.  Both have been, I believe,

excellent additions to AOL's Writers Club.


I feel that it will soon be time for my tenure as moderator/organizer of the

chats to come to an end.  It's been a unique experience and plenty of fun,

but I'm ready to hand over the reins to someone else and take a back seat.

I plan to continue through March of 1997, since I've lined up guests through

that month.  


Therefore, I'm putting out a call.  If any MWA members out there would like

to do a stint as moderator, send me an e-mail.  If you think you MIGHT be

interested but want to know more details first, e-mail me.  


Karen L. Cooper



Subj:  Meet the new editor of RF

Date:  96-09-10 08:30:38 edt

From:  RAINDEAD        

Posted on:  America Online


A Note from Phyllis (RAINDEAD)

WELCOME SHIRLEY!


     Raven Feathers will have a new editor, beginning with the October issue.

I've had great fun these past fourteen months and now it's time to pass the

mailing list to other hands.  Shirley Kennett, (SAKWriter) has agreed to take

over as editor. Most of you already know her, but Shirley has provided a bio

that puts it all together. 


<< Author Shirley Kennett, a resident of Coralville, Iowa, has a new reason

to frequent book stores these days.  Her novel, Gray Matter, has begun

popping up in New Fiction and Mystery sections in bookstores around the

country.  The book, Kennett's first, introduces a series of thrillers

featuring a 

female computer expert, Dr. Penelope Jennifer Gray (known as PJ).  She is

hired by the St. Louis Police

Department to establish a pilot program which simulates crimes in virtual

reality.  PJ assembles a team which includes computer-phobic Detective Leo

Schultz, who solves crimes the old-fashioned way, but with a twist.  Their

first case involves a serial killer with an unusual appetite.


 The second book in the series, Fire Cracker, is due out in hardback a year

later, the same time that the first book will be released in paperback.

Kennett says it is about a twisted man nicknamed Cracker who breaks into

hospital computer systems and orders inappropriate, and deadly, treatments

for patients.  His scheme for revenge spirals out of his control, leaving PJ

and Schultz to discover and try to thwart the deadly plan he has set in

motion.


 The books reflect Kennett's own lengthy experience with computers.  All of

the technology described in the books, while it may seem amazing, can

actually be implemented now.  Crime scene analysis using virtual reality is

beginning to take hold around the country, although it is still very much in

its infancy.  In the years to come, it will be an established investigative

tool, just like the technique of psychological profiling which was developed

during the 70's and 80's by the FBI, but took years to reach acceptance.

"Characters PJ Gray and Detective Schultz are pioneers in fiction," Kennett

says, "but soon they will have plenty of real-life counterparts."


 At the American Booksellers' Association trade show in Chicago in June 1996,

Kennett signed hundreds of advance copies of her book, which were eagerly

sought by attendees.  Gray Matter, which is the lead title in Kensington's

fall catalog, will be carried by the Doubleday Book Club, the Literary Guild,

and the Mystery Guild.  Author Shirley Kennett will attend the World Mystery

Convention (Bouchercon 27) in St. Paul, Minnesota this October, where she

will participate in writing seminars, a reading, signings, and a panel

discussion on police procedural novels.  Bookstore signings are being

scheduled.


 With Publishers Weekly lauding Gray Matter as "solid entertainment",  it

looks as though Kennett's writing career is off to a solid start.>>

Subj:  Re:Meet the new editor of RF

Date:  96-09-10 10:56:15 edt

From:  WriteBeth       

Posted on:  America Online


And may I add that I just finished reading GRAY MATTER, and a great read it

was!  Kudos, Shirley. I'm looking forward to the next one.


BethSubj:  Re:Meet the new editor of RF

Date:  96-09-10 11:47:16 edt

From:  SAKwriter       

Posted on:  America Online


Beth,

Thanks for the feedback on Gray Matter.  Just yesterday, I was able to write

THE END on the manuscript for book #2, Fire Cracker.  Now it's back to page 1

to catch all those embarrassing phrases and inconsistencies!  


Shirley


Subj:  Crack the Whip

Date:  96-09-10 11:59:24 edt

From:  SAKwriter       

Posted on:  America Online


Everybody:


Now that I'm the new editor of Raven Feathers, the sense of power is

threatening to overwhelm me.  So is the prospect of putting together my first

issue! Contributions are welcome, and you don't even have to get out your

wallet.  Take a moment to share your publishing news or frustrations, jokes,

schedules, techniques that worked for you, reference books you've worn to a

frazzle, jokes, bad poetry, good web sites, promotion ideas. . .   Did I say

jokes?  Send 'em in.  You can consider the whip cracked.


I'm not sure I can actually fill Phyllis's shoes (nor am I sure I would want

to), but with your help, I'm willing to take a shot at it.   


BANG!!!


Couldn't resist.


Shirley  


Subj:  Re:Meet the new editor of RF

Date:  96-09-10 13:20:20 edt

From:  ANDIDVM         

Posted on:  America Online


Welcome, Shirley!


Let's hear it for THE END'!  (Not of Shirley's book, you want that to go on

and on... or everyone but Shirley does <G>)  


Lillian, whose end is not even in sight...


Subj:  Re:Crack the Whip

Date:  96-09-10 14:53:12 edt

From:  SAKwriter       

Posted on:  America Online


I neglected to say send 'em in *by e-mail*.  But you clever folks already

knew that, didn't you?


Shirley


Subj:  Join The Party

Date:  96-09-10 15:25:25 edt

From:  B Pomidor       

Posted on:  America Online


   Congrat's, Shirley, on both THE END (always satisfying) of FIRE CRACKER

and assuming editorship of RF.  I'm sure you'll do a great job.

   Just wanted to let anyone know who's interested (wouldn't a copy editor

have fun with THAT phrase!) that I'm going to be doing the on-line chat

tonight.  It'll be informative, illuminating, and entertaining, as long as we

have some informative, illuminating, and entertaining people in the chat

room.  I'm just going to sit back and sip Macallan's and watch the action.

   Actually, with my MD background, I'd better have my Washington Manual and

a copy of Harrison's Principles of Internal Medicine, and maybe my forensic

pathology text close at hand.  I'll be answering questions like "How long

does it take a person to die if they've been stabbed with a fondue fork?" and

"Could you kill someone by sticking those defibrillator paddles on their ears

and pushing the button?"

   Hmm...  I may have something there.  Gotta run--I feel a scene coming on!

~~Bill Pomidor (MD)


Subj:  Re:Join The Party

Date:  96-09-10 15:26:54 edt

From:  B Pomidor       

Posted on:  America Online


   Oops!  Duh, thought I was posting to the SinC board.  I know the notice

has already been posted on this board, so the previous post was unnecessary.

I'll copy it over there.

~~Bil

l


Subj:  Re:Meet the new editor of RF

Date:  96-09-10 17:03:44 edt

From:  WriteBeth       

Posted on:  America Online


Shirley,


Just finished that phase myself last month and I can say with certainty, I

HATE that part of the process. By that point, I'm usually ready to put the

thing aside and start on something new and fresh.


Don't know if you saw my note (can't remember now which folder it was in)

saying we would be only a few days apart doing signings at Booked For Murder

in Madison, WI. Any chance you'll be hanging around there beyond the date of

your signing?


Beth


Subj:  Re:Meet the new editor of RF

Date:  96-09-10 17:48:29 edt

From:  HKlaus6073      

Posted on:  America Online


Shirley-When you finish the corrections,send me the ms for a cover quote.

That way I don't have to wait for the galley:)


Harriet


Subj:  Re:Meet the new editor of RF

Date:  96-09-10 20:56:50 edt

From:  SAKwriter       

Posted on:  America Online


Beth,

I did see your note about the signing at Booked for Murder.  I'll only be

staying one night, sad to say.


Shirley


Subj:  Re:Crack the Whip

Date:  96-09-11 07:45:49 edt

From:  RAINDEAD        

Posted on:  America Online


<<'m not sure I can actually fill Phyllis's shoes (nor am I sure I would want

to), but with your help, I'm willing to take a shot at it.   >>  

Hey!  I was a '7M'  once.......then I had two kids.


Phyllis


Subj:  Re:Crack the Whip

Date:  96-09-11 09:50:45 edt

From:  LTBerenson      

Posted on:  America Online


Shirley,

Congratulations on finishing #2, and taking charge of RF.


Phyllis,

Kudos and many thanks for a job very well done!


Laurie


Subj:  Re:Crack the Whip

Date:  96-09-11 16:19:57 edt

From:  FGSnyder        

Posted on:  America Online


Phyllis -- Echo the kudos and the thanks.  And Shirley, thanks for taking

this over.  I look forward to it every month!


-- Frank


Subj:  Re:Crack the Whip

Date:  96-09-12 16:13:04 edt

From:  KLouise         

Posted on:  America Online


Just to add my two cents --


Welcome Shirley.  Glad to have you taking over the reins - don't worry about

filling Phyllis' Size used-to-be-sevens.  Just do it yooooouuuurrr way.....


A nudge here folks -- who's gonna take over my job after March?  Anyone?

Anyone?


Karen


Subj:  Books for sale

Date:  96-09-15 17:49:26 edt

From:  LaryCrews       

Posted on:  America Online


I am giving up my career as a mystery novelist and have hundreds of great

condition slightly used books on writing I am willing to sell by mail.


Email LaryCrews if you are interested.


Lary


Subj:  What the....?

Date:  96-09-16 18:56:28 edt

From:  WillMize        

Posted on:  America Online


On a very dark day in September, Lary Crews wrote:


<<<<I am giving up my career as a mystery novelist and have hundreds of great

condition slightly used books on writing I am willing to sell by mail.>>>>


 Aieee!  What the ...? <sound of Bill's jaw hitting the floor>


Sadly yours,

   - Bill, in St Petersburg


Subj:  Re:What the....?

Date:  96-09-17 10:37:49 edt

From:  LiseMac         

Posted on:  America Online


Yeah, Lary, it saddens us all. Please give details...


Lise


Subj:  Re:Books for sale

Date:  96-09-17 21:51:51 edt

From:  Valmalmont      

Posted on:  America Online


I went on line trying to find "Ask LaryCrews" and instead find this mssg


>  I am giving up my career as a mystery novelist and have hundreds of great

condition slightly >used books on writing I am willing to sell by mail.


>Email LaryCrews if you are interested.


What's going on?  Lary????


Valerie Malmont


Subj:  SMFS

Date:  96-09-18 22:20:59 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

Posted on:  America Online


    http://members.aol.com/Mystfield/SMFS/newsletter/v01n01/all_text.html


The above is the address of  newsletter of the Short Mystery Fiction

Society--many of the members of which belong to MWA--in fact, most.

Gail


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