Star Trek: Out In the Open
Path: moe.ksu.ksu.edu!zaphod.mps.ohio-state.edu!ub!acsu.buffalo.edu!ubvmsb.cc.buffalo.edu!v130qh57 From: v130qh57@ubvmsb.cc.buffalo.edu (sandra guzdek) Newsgroups: alt.startrek.creative Subject: revised version, "Out in the Open" Message-ID: <BowyHC.7nC@acsu.buffalo.edu> Date: 27 May 92 15:19:00 GMT Sender: nntp@acsu.buffalo.edu Organization: University at Buffalo Lines: 857 News-Software: VAX/VMS VNEWS 1.41 Nntp-Posting-Host: ubvmsb.cc.buffalo.edu this story was posted previously, oh, about two weeks ago. i got lots of nice comments, but also a lot of very helpful constructive criticism (thanks, aryk!!!!!). being the anal-retentive person that i am, i couldn't sleep until i had fixed what was wrong (although most of you would agree it was petty). so i hope you all like it. if you don't want to be bothered again, that's fair: hit "n" now. :) once again, all comments, good and bad, are greatly appreciated. sandra g.