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15:59:00 edt

From:  Nicburnham      

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I went to a workshop on this very topic in Dallas - it was called "Down and

Dirty Advice for Selling Your First Novel".


The speaker said that when this happens, if they don't tell you clearly what

the problems are, call the editor.  First, ask if it's a good time for her to

talk, and then, BRIEFLY, tell her you received her letter, and would like to

revise.  Ask her what SPECIFICALLY she thought was wrong.  Do NOT be

defensive, just listen.  Then, ask if you can think about her advice, and

call her back to run your ideas for revision past her.  Then write like crazy

and resubmit.


This worked for LOTS of people who were in the room for the workshop.  Anyone

online had a similar experience?  Anyone else should definitely put in their

two cents!  In any event, revise and resubmit.  It sounds like you've got a

great shot!


Have a celebrat                        Subj:    Re:Guess what?

Date:  96-08-24 22:16:52 edt

From:  MaryM18536      

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Great news, Tina.

Boy, you're on a roll.

Mary                        Subj:    Re:Guess what?

Date:  96-08-24 23:39:20 edt

From:  Gtlhrt          

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Hey Denise I got a rejection from the Star this week and so did Amy.  The

winners circle!!


Tina                        Subj:    Re:Guess what?

Date:  96-08-25 08:55:55 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Tina - Congratulations!!!  Remind us then, so we can pick it up!  (We got a

Barnes & Nobles here that picks up Affaire Du Couer!)


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Guess what?

Date:  96-08-25 12:05:42 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Tina,


That's simply terrific!!! They don't publish much fiction so you are some

kinda genius!!

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Guess what?

Date:  96-08-25 20:20:17 edt

From:  Asandrin        

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Tina:


Congrats!  Way to go.


Amy                        Subj:    Re:Guess what?

Date:  96-08-25 20:20:51 edt

From:  Asandrin        

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Wow Denise:


Star must be on a roll.  I got rejected on Friday.


Amy                        Subj:    Re:Guess what?

Date:  96-08-25 22:07:19 edt

From:  Luv2rit         

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Wonderful news, Tina!  Congratulations!

                                   Deb                        Subj:    Star

Date:  96-08-26 09:42:28 edt

From:  DCamp76         

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What's with the mass rejections?  Did someone come back from vacation at the

Star and catch up on their reading or did they hire Barbara readers to catch

up?


=Denise=                        Subj:    Re:Guess what?

Date:  96-08-26 12:32:45 edt

From:  Punkybean       

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Great news, Tina!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  I can't wait to read it.


Phyllis                        Subj:    Re:Star

Date:  96-08-26 13:35:38 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Denise - No, from what I understand (and Tina & Carole would know this, from

having been published with them), the Star sends out their acceptances

quickly, but the rejections seem to be put aside and are sent out together.

Actually, good way of knowing the status before it happens (I guess!).


Connie                        Subj:    Releases

Date:  96-08-26 15:51:00 edt

From:  Luv2rit         

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Yippee!  I just got a release in the mail for the December TR!  It's a story

I wrote about a rookie volunteer firefighter who sets fires just so he can

look like a hero.  His girlfriend turns him in after she discovers

incriminating evidence.  I am SO excited!


Deb                        Subj:    Re:ReleasesMEtoo

Date:  96-08-26 16:12:03 edt

From:  J00DLynn        

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I got mine..the one about the sisters who fight, with a chrismas theam! I'm

so excited, who else is in this one??


Jodi                        Subj:    Re:Guess what?

Date:  96-08-26 17:13:28 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

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Tina,  Great news!  What's your story about?  The really have a long lead

time, don't they?

Patty                        Subj:    Re:Releases

Date:  96-08-26 17:17:07 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

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Deb, Congrats on your sale.  Your story sounds interesting and very

up-to-the-minute.

I was surprised and delighted to get two Dec. contracts from TR.  So I've got

2  in Nov. TL & 2 in Dec. TR.  I'll be rich around the end of the year?  Of

course, with Christmas....maybe I won't be.

Patty                        Subj:    Re:ReleasesMEtoo

Date:  96-08-26 17:18:36 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

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Hey Jodi,  Another December TR.  How terrific!  I love holiday themes,

especially Christmas.  can't wait to read it.

Patty                        Subj:    Re:Releases

Date:  96-08-26 18:04:02 edt

From:  Asandrin        

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Deb:


Congrats!


Amy                        Subj:    Re:ReleasesMEtoo

Date:  96-08-26 18:04:25 edt

From:  Asandrin        

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Jodi:


Congrats to you too.


Amy                        Subj:    Re:Releases

Date:  96-08-26 18:05:19 edt

From:  Asandrin        

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Patty:


Congrats to you too!  Man, we're either all getting rejected or we're all

selling.


Amy                        Subj:    Re:Releases

Date:  96-08-26 18:40:30 edt

From:  DCamp76         

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Deb,

  I guess we'll be kissing cousins (along with a bunch of you, it sounds

like)---I'll be in Dec. True Love -I got my release for the Grandma Driving

Story (proposed for the DI 1 issue).   The sad thing about after Christmas

Sales are the after Christmas Sales--new meaning to gone in 60 seconds.


=Denise=                        Subj:    Re:Releases

Date:  96-08-26 18:41:18 edt

From:  DCamp76         

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Congrats Patty--I've never made two in one issue.  Hmmmm, a new goal.


=Denise=                        Subj:    Re:Releases

Date:  96-08-26 18:55:32 edt

From:  Gtlhrt          

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Congrats to all of you!  Nothing in that department for me yet.  

My story for next June (yes quite a lead time) is about a man and his very

young son who learn the same   "Love Lessons"  about  the women in their

lives.


Yeah Connie that's my theory on the Star too.


Tina                           Subj:    Re:Star

Date:  96-08-26 19:20:30 edt

From:  DCamp76         

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Connie,

  Don't you reconize a pathetic plea  hope?--I'm not hearing from the Star at

all and I'd woven this little fantasy that mine have yet to be discovered.

Now you've made me face reality--they aren't selling.  Sigh.


=Denise=                        Subj:    Re:Star

Date:  96-08-26 19:23:49 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Denise - Aw!!  <G>  That Not Knowing business can be really painful, too!


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Releases

Date:  96-08-26 19:26:36 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Okay, let me get this straight:  Congrats to Denise for TL (yay!  Granmama

found a home!  <G>) and to Jodi, Patty (2 in there - yes, you're rich!!!),

and Miz Debbie!!!  I'll be in there with you, too - just got my contract from

TR for that mayor who used to be a male prostitute.  Quite a while issue!!!

What?  Did everybody at these publishers get back from vacation or

something??


Does anyone know when England finishes THEIR vacations?  (My novel is STILL

at Harlequin!)


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Releases

Date:  96-08-26 19:28:00 edt

From:  Luv2rit         

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Connie,

   I think it's a good sign with Harlequin for your book to be there for a

long time.  I think it must have made it just a little bit further.  This

might be the big one!

                                          Deb                        Subj:    Re:Chat

Date:  96-08-26 19:29:00 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Okay, gals!  If anyone's up for is, why don't we do the chat on Saturday

night at about 9:00 EST?  That's tentative, of course, for Aug. 31.  The name

of the room will be e-mailed, but let us know who can make it!!


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Novel #2

Date:  96-08-26 19:30:51 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Girls - I have a question about novel #2.  Is it highly unusual to have a

hero (in an ethnic romance)  who still has to, shall we say,  "practice"

speaking English?  My hero just came on the boat from Cuba, so it's really

unrealistic to think he'd speak the King's English!  <G>



Connie                        Subj:    Re:Chat

Date:  96-08-26 21:45:44 edt

From:  Punkybean       

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That's fine with me.


Phyllis                        Subj:    Re:Releases

Date:  96-08-26 22:03:24 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Deb,


You are a genuine heroine yourself. Congrats. 


I just "sold" a story myself. For two copies--to a magazine named Calliope. I

think there might be two and this is the other one (?) I'm not sure. It's a

"literary" story.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Guess what?

Date:  96-08-26 22:04:15 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Jodi,


Merry Christmas!!!!!!

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Releases

Date:  96-08-26 22:04:56 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Patty, 


You wild woman. Sell, girl, sell.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Chat

Date:  96-08-26 22:05:32 edt

From:  Luv2rit         

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I think I can make the chat.  That is, if we don't visit the family in

Atlanta for the holiday weekend.

                                                                     Deb                        Subj:  

Re:Releases

Date:  96-08-26 22:06:55 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Hey, hey, Denise!!!!!


Tina, I like the theme. 


In re the Star. I submitted (finally) too recently to be rejected yet. (I

hope.)


Gail                        Subj:    Re:Novel #2

Date:  96-08-26 22:09:03 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Connie,


I like realism in a novel!!! People are logical. I like logic!!! I've had too

many movies spoiled for me because there were a lot of jumps in logic. You're

right. Let the hero practice his English. Women always like to help anyway!

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Novel #2

Date:  96-08-27 06:29:05 edt

From:  Gtlhrt          

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Congrats to Gail too!


I'll be in Tulsa for the holiday, so e me the minutes. Can I bring anyone

back a cowboy or two? 


Tina                        Subj:    Re:Chat

Date:  96-08-27 08:49:15 edt

From:  CMyersTex       

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I'm up for the chat Saturday.  I'm still waiting to hear on the story I

submitted for Dec. TR.  Maybe today!  I swear it takes longer for mail to get

to this little town than anywhere I've ever lived.  We call in the black hole

in the mail system.

Cindi                        Subj:    Re:Novel #2

Date:  96-08-27 08:50:47 edt

From:  CMyersTex       

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I like the idea of your hero still having to practice English.  It could be

very charming.  Also some possibilities for humor.  I just have this picture

of this gorgeous Cuban guy with this wonderful accent.  What woman wouldn't

be swept off her feet.

Cindi                        Subj:    Re:Releases

Date:  96-08-27 14:02:03 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Thanks, Deb!!  I'm going to check the actual date it was sent off.  (Again

with that log!!!)



Connie                        Subj:    Re:Releases

Date:  96-08-27 14:02:45 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Gail - Congratulations!!!  Boy, the mailboxes have been great lately!!


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Novel #2

Date:  96-08-27 14:04:26 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Thanks, Gail!!!  It's really funny, too.  He talks just like my heroine did

in the story Pat published, about the arranged marriage with the Cuban girl,

so it's "familiar territory!"


<G>

Connie                        Subj:    Re:Novel #2

Date:  96-08-27 14:04:52 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Tina - Cowboys are always welcomed by Bad Girls!!!


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Novel #2

Date:  96-08-27 14:05:50 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Oh, thanks, Cindi!  That's what I'm going for, too!


<G>

Connie                        Subj:    Phyllis, Lynda, Patty

Date:  96-08-27 14:07:37 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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& Gail & (I believe) Larita:  how's everybody coming with their novel lately?

I find the hardest thing is working on the confessions & the novel both,

finding the time to squeeze everything in.  The "spirit" of each individual

story, if you know what I mean, seems to infringe sometimes on the other

story's "spirit"!


Connie

                        Subj:    Re:Phyllis, Lynda, Patty

Date:  96-08-27 16:22:36 edt

From:  Luv2rit         

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Connie, you're right about it being hard to work on confessions and a novel

at the same time.  I keep trying to go into first person in my novel.  Every

now and then, I have to check for any "I"s or "me"s.  Does anyone else have

that problem?  I find that it's easier to get the emotion in the first person

writing, but the third person story can have more than one POV.  That's the

beauty of writing for both markets.  It helps us to stretch our skills as

writers.

                                                                    Deb


                        Subj:    Finding time

Date:  96-08-27 16:25:06 edt

From:  Luv2rit         

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The way I've been squeezing all my writing in is to ignore all the dust

bunnies and the dishes that pile up in the sink, waiting to be loaded into

the dishwasher.  I stick my own in there, and eventually one of my children

or my husband will load it.  One of these days, they might get the idea that

if they each put their own dishes in the machine as they go, the task will

run much smoother.  

                                                                     Deb                        Subj:  

Multiple stories

Date:  96-08-27 16:27:34 edt

From:  Luv2rit         

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I've already asked Connie this, but I was wondering about everyone else's

experiences.  How many stories have you had in one magazine at one time?  The

reason I wanted to know is that one of the romance writers I saw on a news

show said that she used to make a living at confessions.  I wonder what she

consideres "a living"?


Deb                        Subj:    Re:MIA's

Date:  96-08-27 18:22:45 edt

From:  Asandrin        

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Hey everyone:


Lynda says Hi.  Larita says Hi.  They both miss us bad girls.


Amy                        Subj:    Re:Phyllis, Lynda, Patty

Date:  96-08-27 19:31:10 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Debbie - Yes!!!!  Exactly!!!  LOLOL!!  I just did that today, too; I kept

thinking,  "Well, what if I switch off & come from Maritza's point of view,

let her talk?"  That's my main problem; I feel like an observer, and when we

do the confessions, we're actually in there on the action.  What I've found

helps is something I read somewhere - an author saying that when she wants

those characters to reveal themselves, she lets them go into dialogue.  She's

right:  I found that's a good way to get the emotion in there.


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Multiple stories

Date:  96-08-27 19:32:43 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Deb - The most I've ever had is 4 stories in the same month, with 2 in TL and

2 in TR the same month.  In one magazine, the biggie was April 95 TL, with 3

stories at once.  Yes - it was GREAT fun!!


<G>

Connie (Now if I could only do that AGAIN!!!)                        Subj:    Re:MIA's

Date:  96-08-27 19:33:30 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Amy - Any news on L & L's end?  (Larita the Model Mom & Lynda the Cutie Cop?)


<G>

Connie                        Subj:    Re:Finding time

Date:  96-08-27 21:31:55 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Connie,


There's really no way to find the time!!! Especially since I spend a lot of

time writing email and messing around. I'm getting ready to do query letters

on my novel. In the meantime I've come to a dead halt on stories. Once my

queries go out though!!!

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Novel #2

Date:  96-08-27 21:33:10 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Connie,


I "reuse" a lot of my characters. But they also change. I'm sure you all know

what I mean!


Gail                        Subj:    Re:Phyllis, Lynda, Patty

Date:  96-08-27 23:21:41 edt

From:  Punkybean       

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The POV thing is bugging me right now too!   URRRGH!!


Phyllis                        Subj:    Re:Multiple stories

Date:  96-08-27 23:22:54 edt

From:  Punkybean       

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Deb,


Wow!  She made a living writing for the confessions.  Mmmm, if I could do

that, I probably wouldn't bother with this &^%$^#@ book!


Phyllis                        Subj:    Re:MIA's

Date:  96-08-27 23:23:48 edt

From:  Punkybean       

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I called Lynda last night to help her through her AOL withdrawel while her

computer is on the blink.  She misses everyone!!!!!


Phyllis                        Subj:    Re:MIA's

Date:  96-08-28 07:27:22 edt

From:  Gtlhrt          

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Phyl you are so nice!!!


Tina                        Subj:    Re:Releases

Date:  96-08-28 09:00:27 edt

From:  DCamp76         

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I told a friend about Connie's mayor/male prostitute story and she can't wait

to buy the magazine!

This may out-do Lynda's  waking up in bed with another woman story.  Any word

on Lynda's computer yet?


=Denise=                        Subj:    Re:Novel #2

Date:  96-08-28 09:03:48 edt

From:  DCamp76         

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Don't forget, a lot of people just off the boat speak English more correctly

than we natives.  Just have him with an accent that melts her toenails and

have him stumble over slang and idiocyncracies (sp?) that they don't teach in

language classes.  


Don't use a lot of dialect, that is such a turn-off in a book.

That's my 2 cents worth of advice.


=Denise=                        Subj:    Re:Novel #2

Date:  96-08-28 09:05:09 edt

From:  DCamp76         

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Tina--Fed ex the cowboy

Connie--I'll try to be there but my mom may be visiting, sooooo


=Denise=                        Subj:    Re:Novel #2

Date:  96-08-28 09:08:53 edt

From:  DCamp76         

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Yes, Yes, Yes, I have trouble switching from book to confession.


From some of the complaints I heard via National in Dallas, we'd best not

give up our confession writing careers, some of the already pubbed are

hitting lean times in the industry.


=Denise=                        Subj:    Re:MIA's

Date:  96-08-28 10:00:07 edt

From:  Asandrin        

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Connie:


Lynda knows nothing yet about her computer.  I'm going to loan her my lap top

so she can get some writing done and talk to us at the same time. 


Amy                        Subj:    Re:Novel #2

Date:  96-08-28 10:50:52 edt

From:  J00DLynn        

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1st to 3rd person switching is hard,and going between works like that is

difficult- but I also get so into the characters that it's hard to write both

in the same day....the novel I'm working on has children in it...but my confs

are more 'adult' .


Jodi                        Subj:    Hellos

Date:  96-08-28 10:52:53 edt

From:  J00DLynn        

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Well I'm so busy here working...not only is it the BIG back to school season,

but the store only has 6 workers including managers. They keep asking me to

come in...so my writing is getting ignored, I'm concerdering gettting up in

the morning to write, anyone do this? How do you find the time?


Jodi (Waiting for Oct..when the Big season is OVER)                        Subj:    Re:Hellos

Date:  96-08-28 13:11:46 edt

From:  Asandrin        

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Well gang, I've been quering like crazy.  Just got a great response from

Dutton.  They sent me a form letter stating that thanks, but they weren't

hiring freelance readers at this time.   Huh?  I got a chuckle out of that

one.  Had to send them a second letter requesting that they respond to my

first letter.  Somewhere out there, there is a freelance reader shaking

his/her head and wondering whey they want to see a manuscript that he/she as

never written.


Amy                        Subj:    Re:Novel #2

Date:  96-08-28 13:52:52 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Gail - Oh, so I'm not the only one who "re-casts" characters they like!!  I

do that especially when a story or novel gets rejected, and that character

"worked really hard" & deserves another chance!!!


Funny how we get attached to these fictional guys & gals!


<G>

Connie                        Subj:    Re:Phyllis, Lynda, Patty

Date:  96-08-28 13:53:34 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Phyllis - You're not alone!!!  The 1st person POV rules!



Connie                        Subj:    Re:MIA's

Date:  96-08-28 13:54:12 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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I second that, Phyllis!!  You ARE a sweetie!


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Releases

Date:  96-08-28 13:55:14 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Denise - I hope she likes the mayor with the jaded past!  (Let me know!)

That one gave me trouble!


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Novel #2

Date:  96-08-28 13:57:21 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Denise - Thanks for the advice!!  Actually, he has trouble with tenses (past,

present, future) and mispronouncing a little, some problems with

contractions, which would come out something like,  "I thinking maybe we go

today to the park!"   <G>  That part about American slang ALWAYS is so funny!


<G>

Connie                        Subj:    Re:MIA's

Date:  96-08-28 13:58:20 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Amy - What a good friend you are!!  Like that she can pop in!!


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Novel #2

Date:  96-08-28 13:59:55 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Jodi - Yes, that's an interesting point, too.  Your novel has kids, and mine

is Christian/inspirational, so the confessions tend to be more - is this a

good term? - cutting edge.


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Hellos

Date:  96-08-28 14:01:19 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Jodi - I don't know about the girls, but I write mostly at night.  Also at

lunchtime at work (and sometimes in between work, but that's harder for you).

Find an island.  Skip the TV.  Have more coffee to stay awake.  Whatever

works!


<G>

Connie                        Subj:    Re:Hellos

Date:  96-08-28 14:03:28 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Amy - LOLOLOL!!!  That's not all that unusual, though, you know?  I once sent

off a query to a book packager for my middle grade series, listing my

experience, and the letter that came back said,  "Your idea for `True

Confessions' sounds very intriguing, however, it does not meet our list."


I almost wrote back to that editor, saying,  "Lady, what do you want, to end

up in a lawsuit here???"  LOLOL!!!


Connie                        Subj:    English

Date:  96-08-28 15:40:26 edt

From:  Punkybean       

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Connie,


I read a Harlequin Temptation a while back, where a hero (Russian I think)

learned textbook English from an outdated book.  So he kept using slang from

the 70's and getting it all wrong.


It was really good!


Phyllis                        Subj:    Re:Phyllis, Lynda, Patty

Date:  96-08-28 15:43:54 edt

From:  Punkybean       

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The line I'm targeting (Arabesque) put out a first person book this

month!!!!!!  I'm seriously thinking of making some changes in my MIP.


Phyllis                        Subj:    Re:Chat

Date:  96-08-28 17:43:27 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

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Connie,  Yes, I can make it Saturday.  Please let me know.

Patty                        Subj:    Re:Releases

Date:  96-08-28 17:45:46 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

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Gail,  Don't put the sale in quotes.  That's definitely a sale.  Even if my

confesiionals are selling well, I can't seem too give away my literary

stories, and I'd love to. Congrats

Patty                        Subj:    Re:Oklahoma

Date:  96-08-28 17:47:29 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

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Tina,  Say hi to Oklahoma for me.  I went to school there (OU) and I haven't

been back for a while.

Patty                        Subj:    Re:Oklahoma, PS

Date:  96-08-28 17:48:59 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

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Tina,  P.S. A cowboy with a heart of gold would always be appeciated!.

Patty                        Subj:    Re:Novels & Stories

Date:  96-08-28 17:53:12 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

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Deb, I chuckled when I read your comment about slipping into the first person

when working on your novel.   I'm working on a romantic suspense novel that I

started in the first person because I'm more comfortable with it due probably

to confes writing.  I changed it to the third person because it really wasn't

working, but yesterday I was proofreading the first draft of the third

chapter and one scene myseriously got written in the first person anyway.  It

seemed to want to be told that way.

Patty                        Subj:    Re:Multiple stories

Date:  96-08-28 17:57:36 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

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Deb,  In answer to your question about having more than one story in one

magazine, I have two in Nov. TL & two in Dec. TR so I know it's possible,

although I never had more than one in an issue before.  As to the question of

making a living from confes writing alone, I'm not sure it's possible any

longer, though it probably was at one time.  I'm not sure of my facts, but I

believe that years ago the confes paid close to what they pay now and fifteen

years ago you might have been able to support yourself on $250.00 a story.

Wish it could still be done.

Patty                        Subj:    Re:Phyllis, Lynda, Patty

Date:  96-08-28 18:10:56 edt

From:  CMyersTex       

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Re: working on the novel and confessions at the same time.  I think it helps

that I write historicals.  They're -so- different there's not as much

overlap.  I just have trouble finding time to write much on either one these

days -- too much work, but I won't complain.  It's money for taxes and

Christmas and.....

Cindi                        Subj:    Re:Multiple stories

Date:  96-08-28 18:12:24 edt

From:  CMyersTex       

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I wonder how long ago that romance author made a living writing confessions.

Sad to say, the magazines pay the same per word amounts now they did back in

the 1950s.  Three cents and five cents went a lot further back then.

Cindi                        Subj:    Re:English

Date:  96-08-28 18:16:18 edt

From:  CMyersTex       

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Phyllis, what was the name of that Harlequin with the Russian?  Sounds so

cute!

Cindi

                        Subj:    Re:Novels & Stories

Date:  96-08-28 18:17:43 edt

From:  CMyersTex       

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Sometimes when I'm having trouble with a scene in my book, I'll go ahead and

write it in first person.  Then I'll change it to third later.  I suggested

this to a critique partner who was having trouble staying in one character's

point of view and she said it really helped.

Cindi                        Subj:    Re:Novels & Stories

Date:  96-08-28 18:32:53 edt

From:  Asandrin        

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Yeeeeaaaahhhhh!  Yiiiipppppeee!  Yahooooooooo!  I finished my dang-blasted

story for DI-3.  24 pages long.  Thought I'd never get there.  I was gonna

send in two, but I guess that's a matter of my eyes being bigger than my

stomach.  Now I can work on my novel again.  Lynda and I both want to enter

the Golden Heart this time and they are moving the date up.  


I can see it now, long nights.  No sleep.  No sex.....wait, that's research,

gotta have it!


Amy                        Subj:    Re:Novel #2

Date:  96-08-28 19:03:29 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Connie,


I do love my characters. I can't understand it if the rest of the world

doesn't. They must be crazy!!!!


Patty, Thanks. Sometimes I can't give 'em away, either.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:English

Date:  96-08-28 19:11:15 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Phyllis - I agree with Cindi!  What was the title of that book?  Sounds like

fun!!


Groovy, like outta site!


<G>

Connie                        Subj:    Re:Novels & Stories

Date:  96-08-28 19:13:19 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Patty - That's interesting, because a suspense novel, hmmm...yeah, that's a

tough one, because you like to get "behind the scenes" without your narrator,

so you can cause trouble.  But it can be done - my thriller confession was

originally a YA novel I never sold in 3rd person, and it was tricky, but you

can switch off to 1st.  Advantages, disadvantages - like Debbie says,

sharpens us even more!


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Novels & Stories

Date:  96-08-28 19:14:30 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Amy - What date is the Golden Heart moving up to?  I'd like to give it a

whirl, too, this time!  (I was late last time, and I hear they have a section

for inspirational...that true, Denise?)


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Novel #2

Date:  96-08-28 19:15:26 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Gail - I'm with Patty.  I'm willing to give away free M&M's with my lit

story, which is going for free as it is.  Has that ever been done?


<VBG>

Connie                        Subj:    Re:English

Date:  96-08-28 20:56:56 edt

From:  Punkybean       

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Cindi - I can't remember the name of the Temptation I read, but I think it

came out this year.


Phyllis                        Subj:    Re:Novel #2

Date:  96-08-28 22:23:32 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Connie,


When I was a kid my sister and I used to sell comic books we had read and we

gave away bubble gum with them as an incentive. That's sort of like giving

away m&ms with with stories.


What you have to do is keep mailing--as with everything else. Just buy

stamps!

Gail                        Subj:    Sort of Back!!

Date:  96-08-28 23:57:30 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

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Hi Strangers!

Forgive any typos, please.  Amy was a goddess of astronomical proportions to

lend me her laptop, but typing on this tiny keyboard is like trying to

squeeze my 31 year old rump into 18 year old's jeans!!!  I don't have the

energy to respond to everyone personally-----it has taken  (oops---laptop

demons just did something weird.  If it comes out, sorry).  me nearly an hour

to catch up with everyone's posts.  Bad news from this front:  Bantam

rejected Luck of the Draw.

:-(

Truly, the news didn't bum me out.  We're writers, right?????  We have to

expect rejection.  Right before my computer became Satanic, I queried ten

other agents.  TEN!!!!  Hopefully I'll have some luck.  Besides that, I'm

dreadfully behind on everything computer-related, but I just decided to go

with the flow.  News on my spawn-from-hell computer:  the motherboard decided

it didn't want to be a parent anymore.  The nerve.  Should be fixed anytime

between two weeks and eternity.


Please feel free to fill my mailbox!!!  I'm in serious AOL withdrawal!!


Your wayward pal, Lynda C.                        Subj:    Re:Releases

Date:  96-08-29 00:07:14 edt

From:  IRWriter        

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All right Gail!  You just keep adding to those clips!  Congratulations, you

"literary" snob you! ;-)

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:Hellos

Date:  96-08-29 00:13:19 edt

From:  IRWriter        

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Hi Jodi!  I used to get up early and try to write.  I just have to face the

fact that I'm not a morning person.  Now, I come home, change my clothes, and

go straight to the computer room.  (I should work out first, but oh well.)

My husband doesn't get home from work until about 2 or 3 hours after I get

home, so I have time to work, and still have time to throw something together

for dinner.  (thank god for microwaves, frozen instant meals, and rice

cookers!)  It works for me, but I realize I'm really lucky, because most

people can't work at that schedule.  Often after we eat, we're both back on

our computers until we go to bed.  But then, a lot of times we turn on the TV

and veg, too!

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:Sort of Back!!

Date:  96-08-29 00:16:50 edt

From:  IRWriter        

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Don't you just HATE motherboards!  They should have named them fatherboards!

Well, anyway, glad to have you back, we missed you!

Sherril, who wishes she had your 30-something rump, instead of the one she's

got!                        Subj:    Out of the Doldrums!

Date:  96-08-29 00:18:48 edt

From:  IRWriter        

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Well, I just got a contract for the DEC TL in the mail, a story I sent about

6 months ago called "My Christmas Gifts are Driving me Crazy!"  I kind of

based it on the gifts from hell my mother used to send me from QVC.  Bless

her heart, I'm sure she never thought she'd me the inspiration for a story.

Thanks Mom!

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:Releases

Date:  96-08-29 00:50:15 edt

From:  Magicwrd        

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Gail-  


Congrats on selling your story to Calliope.  When will it be coming out?  Can

you get that mag at B&N?  I haven't read anything literary for awhile, except

Jane Austen.  It'd be cool to read a story from a highbrow author like

yourself.


Susan


                        Subj:    Re:Chat

Date:  96-08-29 00:52:50 edt

From:  Magicwrd        

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We've got some family thing going Saturday, so I'm not sure I can make the

chat.  But I will definitely try. 


Thanks-  Susan                         Subj:    Re:Novel #2

Date:  96-08-29 00:56:49 edt

From:  Magicwrd        

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Connie-


I sometimes think dialect in a novel is disruptive, but you did a great job

of handling it in the story with the Cuban girl.  I think it would definitely

give you some possibilities for humor, as long as it's coupled with

understanding.  (Remember Lucy & Ricky?)  


Susan                        Subj:    Re:Out of the Doldrums!

Date:  96-08-29 01:04:19 edt

From:  Magicwrd        

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Congratulations on your sale, Sherril.  The story sounds like a cute one, and

the story behind it is especially touching.  I'm looking forward to reading

it.


Susan                        Subj:    Re:Sort of Back!!

Date:  96-08-29 09:45:26 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

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Sherril-

Should've named them fatherboards?!?!?  LOLOLOLOL!!!  How true it is!  Then

again, they are the lifeblood of the computer, so motherboard DOES fit!!!

Lynda C.                        Subj:    Re:Out of the Doldrums!

Date:  96-08-29 09:46:09 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

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Yay Sherril!  Congrats!

Lynda C.                        Subj:    Re:Guess what?

Date:  96-08-29 10:29:23 edt

From:  JWBOIES         

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Good for you!  There are so many markets if we just keep our eyes open. 


...and if we have stories written to submit.  Can't add to the posts about

rejections.  I have to get more stuff in the mail first.


Hope you celebrated!    Jan Boies


                        Subj:    Re:Novel #2

Date:  96-08-29 10:34:37 edt

From:  JWBOIES         

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Connie,


The only thing to careful about is using too much dialect.  It can get

distracting.  Yes, it can be charming and humorous.  My advice...


I aim to make my writing flow -- not to have places where a reader stops to

re-read a sentence to wonder what it meant, or go back three lines to figure

out who is speaking, or flip back a few pages to remind themself who the

secondary character is supposed to be.   See what I mean?  As authors we draw

our readers into a fantasy world.  They become part of it and if we lose

them, it is hard to draw them back.


I gave up reading one historical romance that had so much dialect that I

couldn't follow the dialogue.  I doubt you would do this, but just a

suggestion.  Ethnic is great.  A hero who is struggling with English is very

timely.  I'm sure you can achieve the right balance.   Jan


                        Subj:    Re:Chat

Date:  96-08-29 10:37:44 edt

From:  JWBOIES         

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I'm putting it on my calendar.  That's the first step for me.  Then I have to

make sure everyone else stays off the phone!                        Subj:    Everything else

Date:  96-08-29 10:47:54 edt

From:  JWBOIES         

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I'm logging these new posts as I go along.  Finally, I decided I have to post

my replies online or I never remember to post my comments when I get back

here.  Just want to apologize for not responding to all the good news

individually.  You are an inspiring group!


Jodi -- know what you mean about getting more hours at the store than you

want.  The Petsmart where I work is new and now many of the kids are going

back to school.  We have two daytime cashiers (I'm one of them) and two night

ones.  Very short staffed.  And standing several hours and being friendly for

several hours is very tiring for me.  I can scribble a few paragraphs during

my break, but I have little energy to come home, make dinner, and then sit

down at the computer.  I have today off and I'm catching up on all the online

news.  One other thought about sore feet -- if you have to wear nice shoes

like I did when I worked at a department store -- Dr. Scholl's makes an

insert for dress shoes.  They really help cushion your feet.  But nothing

helped me yesterday when I sprained my toe before work and then had to go

stand on it for 6 1/2 hours.


First person:  I have written a couple first person YA books.  I love it.  I

remember a writing teacher who said it was hard to maintain first person in a

story.  Not for me.  I love being right inside my character's head, sharing

her thoughts.  On the other hand, my critique group had suggested a change a

short story from first person to third.  In that case, it improved the story

and it sold to 'Teen.  I'm beginning to think the choice of person depends on

the story.  I want to write a novel about a teenage girl who is sexually

harrassed.  And it seems that story is begging me to write it in first person

to really capture her inner feelings.


I'm with all of you who can't find enough time.  My head is full of

characters demanding their turn.   Have a question?  Probably it is the ton

of stress in my life but I can't find the passion for writing that I used to

have.  I've heard several authors say if they talk about a story in progress

that they lose the energy from it.  If keeping my mouth shut (very hard for

me) would help my harness the energy, I'm going to have to try it.  Any

thoughts? 


Online addiction.  It's hard, but I try to limit my message boards visits to

once or twice a week. I have to do it during the day, because my dh hates

when I'm online.  But he hates everything else I do, too, so I don't take it

too seriously.  But my hard drive is full of logs that I need to read!   I

can only conclude that days are too short!


Jan


                        Subj:    Re:Phyllis, Lynda, Patty

Date:  96-08-29 11:19:36 edt

From:  DCamp76         

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Phyllis,

  Who wrote the 1st person Arabesque?


=Denise=                        Subj:    Re:Multiple stories

Date:  96-08-29 11:21:22 edt

From:  DCamp76         

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Confessions definitely paid the same 15 years ago.  My first sale was $200

(95 cents a word True Story)  and it went a lot farther.


=Denise=                        Subj:    Re:Multiple stories

Date:  96-08-29 11:21:41 edt

From:  DCamp76         

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Make tht 5 cents a word.  So I can't type either.


=Denise=                        Subj:    Re:Novels & Stories

Date:  96-08-29 11:23:24 edt

From:  DCamp76         

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Connie.

They definitely have an inspirational category and ENTER the Golden Heart

because numbers are low and if there aren't enough entries, the category is

dropped.  If you entered last year, read the rules, they've changed this

year.


=Denise                        Subj:    Re:Sort of Back!!

Date:  96-08-29 11:24:49 edt

From:  DCamp76         

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Lynda,

  Welcome back and BTW I've seen your rump--it would fit into size 18 month

old jeans, dear.


=Denise=                        Subj:    Re:Novels & Stories

Date:  96-08-29 11:56:11 edt

From:  Asandrin        

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Connie:


Dates for Golden Heart will hopefully be posted in the next RWR.  The lastest

one just mentioned that it was moved up.  Deadlines, deadlines, deadlines.

Guess we gotta get used to them...they're not going away.


Amy                        Subj:    Re:Out of the Doldrums!

Date:  96-08-29 11:59:57 edt

From:  Asandrin        

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Sherril:


Cyber confetti:  * ' * ~ ` *

                        ~ ` * ~ 

                          * ` ~


Congrats,


Amy                        Subj:    Re:Sort of Back!!

Date:  96-08-29 12:29:01 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

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Thanks for the vote of butt confidence, Denise!  When's your article coming

out?  The RWR, eh?  That's so exciting!

Lynda C.                        Subj:    Re:Sort of Back!!

Date:  96-08-29 14:05:45 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Now my computer is acting satanic!!!  I keep getting shut off on AOL, so I

hope this goes through!!!


WELCOME BACK, LYNDA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  (You were missed.  Can you tell?  <G>)  I

feel sorry for Bantam - "Luck of the Draw" is one to wait for, so one of

those 10 agents will have a brain in their head!!!



Connie (who also believes, from the picture in TL, that you could fit into an

18-year-old's jeans - or even Susan Lucci's, for that matter!!!)

                        Subj:    Susan & Jan

Date:  96-08-29 14:07:51 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Gals - thanks for your advice with my struggling-with-English-hero!  Jan,

your advice is very, very helpful!  I've been trying to keep that in mind.

And thanks, Susan - I tend to be relying on Pat's lead, since she let

"Calida" stumble over her words a little & still understood her.  (Hope the

other editors are as smart!)


<G>

Connie                        Subj:    Golden Heart

Date:  96-08-29 14:08:32 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Denise - Let's keep that category A L I V E then, gal!!!  I'll be looking for

RWR, then.  Debbie - let's do it!!!!



Connie

                        Subj:    Re:M&Ms

Date:  96-08-29 14:10:56 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Gail - Wonder if the book editors would go for that deal?  Should we

experiment with Pat, Kristina, Rose, Lisa, Eileen & Pat B.?  (Example:

"Please find enclosed my story...also enclosed is a bag of Hershey

miniatures, to enjoy while you're reading.  Of course, you needn't feel

obliged...!"


Only teasing!  <G>

Connie                        Subj:    Re:Golden Heart

Date:  96-08-29 14:36:28 edt

From:  Luv2rit         

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Okay, Connie,  I'll start working on it right away.

                                                          Deb                        Subj:    Re:M&Ms

Date:  96-08-29 14:39:25 edt

From:  Luv2rit         

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Hey, Pat,

   If you still read this board, let us know if a delicious chunk of

chocolate would help us any.  If so -- Godiva, Here I come!  I'll resort to

bribery if that's what it takes.  


Deb                        Subj:    Wow

Date:  96-08-29 15:26:20 edt

From:  J00DLynn        

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did this board explode or what? I don't even have time to read it all!


I'm still working long hours...I closed last night. And now we're going to

look into buying a mobile home.(just what I need...to pack and move!- oh

boy!) Here On the Navy lot, that's a very smart thing to do, we get all the

money back in the end.


go to go!

Jodi                        Subj:    Re:Message from Pat V.

Date:  96-08-29 17:14:41 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

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Just got a message from Pat to pass along.  Even though the deadline is

getting close, she said not to rush and definitely plot your story out before

writing.  It sounds like she'd rather have our stories well done but late

than rushed and not our best efforts.Better in a later issue than not at all.


Patty                         Subj:    Re:M&m's

Date:  96-08-29 17:18:06 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

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Connie,  Don't know if M&M's have ever been used as a bribe to get a lit

story published, but it might work.  Just make sure to target a chocaholic

editor!

Patty                        Subj:    Re:Sort of Back!!

Date:  96-08-29 17:22:09 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

.


Welcome back Lynda.  Good luck with the agent search.  Sept. Writer's Digest

has a wonderful article on "The Great Agent Dilema."  P.S.: they also have

one on "10 Secrets of Sensational Sex Scenes." Check it out, although you

probably could have written it!

Patty











                        Subj:    Re:Out of the Doldrums!

Date:  96-08-29 17:24:04 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

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Sherril,  That's wonderful news and it's a Christmas story, too.  It sounds

like it's a funny one.  Can't wait to read it!

Patty                        Subj:    Re:Raises

Date:  96-08-29 17:28:41 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

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Not to be pushy, but what's with not raising the pay of us writers for 20

years (or more.)? At my real job, our pay rates have been frozen for two

years and you should hear the complaints!  The cost of living had never

frozen and the price of the magazines can't have stayed the same for 20

years.

Patty                        Subj:    Re:M&Ms

Date:  96-08-29 17:54:39 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Connie,


You're teasing, but I'd do it!!! I'd take them out to lunch, too. Bribery

should work. If someone bribes me, I'm nice to them.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Raises

Date:  96-08-29 17:56:45 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Patty,


I've thought about it, but I wonder if the circulation of the mags hasn't

dropped over the years. I don't know, of course. Plus their cover price is

not that high. What do the rest of you think?

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Sort of Back!!

Date:  96-08-29 17:58:13 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Lynda,


It's sort of good to have you sort of back. Sorry the eds at Bantam are so

stupid. Your agent will make them sorry they turned down this bestseller.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Out of the Doldrums!

Date:  96-08-29 18:00:02 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Sherril,

I may be a snob--or anyway a slob--but you are getting rich. You are doing

it! BTW, what did your mom send you???? I guess I have to read the December

issue to find out!`

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Releases

Date:  96-08-29 18:02:25 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Susan,


Jane Austin and I are very similiar in many ways although they have not yet

made any movies from my novels. Notice I said "yet." I am not ruling anything

out. Noticealso that  I am not mentioning any ways in which JA and I are

similar, but I'll think of them.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Novel #2

Date:  96-08-29 18:04:11 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Jan,


I am mostly waiting on stuff. I have several confessions out there, but I

know sometimes it takes time. And I have a bunch of other material. Maybe

after Labor Day...

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Out of the Doldrums!

Date:  96-08-29 18:06:32 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Amy,


I like the cyberconfetti. 


^^               That's sort of a Japanese smile.   Gail

---                              Subj:    Re:Out of the Doldrums!

Date:  96-08-29 19:06:49 edt

From:  Gtlhrt          

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Sherrill I love it!  You are the first person to ever mention that

topic....my mother too sends me gifts from QVC and they are incredibly

unreal!  Last year it was an orange(ugh!) cashmere 100 dollar(I cringe when I

open my closet and think of what I could have used that money for!) sweater

that was  way too small.  I also got a bright yellow fleece jacket from

Victoria's secret that was way too big.  I would have looked like a yield

sign in it.  I really think she is trying to tell me something, but I just

can't figure out what because she  has great taste except for MY gifts.  And

she always leaves the price tags on??!!


Tina                        Subj:    Re:Chat

Date:  96-08-29 19:07:20 edt

From:  Gtlhrt          

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Gail that is exceptional news!  Congrats!


Tina                        Subj:    Golden Heart

Date:  96-08-29 19:11:07 edt

From:  Gtlhrt          

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The date on the Golden Heart is Dec 10 I do believe, and then the follow up

date to have your entire msc complete is Jan 10.  Call the hotline they have

it there.  And each category needs 25 entries to stay viable.


Tina                        Subj:    Re:M&Ms

Date:  96-08-29 20:35:01 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Now, of course, Deb, Gail & Patty, you all understand that it could backfire,

too (say, dentist bills, the editor blames you for ruining her diet, etc..!)


<G>

Connie                        Subj:    Re:Sherril

Date:  96-08-29 20:36:47 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Hey, Sherril!!!  Meant to post this earlier - many congratulations on your

Christmas story to TL!!  It does sound like a funny one.  That made for

interesting conversation at work, too - a friend of mine bought one of those

cubic zirconia jobs.  The thing is HUGE.  I said,  "Edie, isn't a

bit...um...you know..."  She said,  "Gaudy?  Yeah - I love it!!!"


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Novel #2

Date:  96-08-29 20:38:24 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Jan & Gail - Yeah, I'm in the same boat!  My submissions have dropped in

number, though I do have a couple of things floating around.  That's okay,

girls - the weekend's coming up!


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Out of the Doldrums!

Date:  96-08-29 20:40:07 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Tina - I got a marquesite watch from them that was really pretty, but the

thing died after a month.  When I took it to the jeweler to fix it, he told

me the cost to fix the watch would be more than how much I paid for it, so I

NEVER bought another thing from them again!  (That orange sweater sounds a

lot like Edie's ring!  <G>)


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Golden Heart

Date:  96-08-29 20:40:45 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Tina - The whole thing has to be ready???  But they don't read the whole

thing, do they?


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Raises

Date:  96-08-29 21:01:24 edt

From:  IRWriter        

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Gail, I think you're right, the circulation may have dropped, but from what I

understand, there aren't as many mags as there were a few years ago, either.

I don't know if that matters.  I think they make most of their money from

advertising, so I think the real question is whether their advertising rates

have dropped because their circulation has dropped.  Even more than a raise,

I wish they'd pay us on publication, instead of having to wait so long after

publication.  

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:Out of the Doldrums!

Date:  96-08-29 21:04:41 edt

From:  IRWriter        

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RICH!!! ha ha Gail, you card!  My mom used to send me stuff like plastic

needlepointed purses, the ugliest silver jewelry I've ever seen, and cheap

knick knacks.  She finally stopped sending me clothes, because she knew that

we just didn't have the same taste.  Of course, once in a while, she really

came through with some great gifts, too.  She had a really big heart, she

just didn't have great taste!

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:Out of the Doldrums!

Date:  96-08-29 21:05:44 edt

From:  IRWriter        

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Amy, I loved the cyber confetti!  Thanks so much for all of your kind words,

everybody!  It's amazing what a little contract can do for the old morale.

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:Out of the Doldrums!

Date:  96-08-29 21:09:29 edt

From:  IRWriter        

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Tina, I'm LOL!!!  My mother was addicted to QVC, because she couldn't get out

of the house and go shopping, due to arthritis.  I swear, the UPS truck wore

a path to their house.  They knew the driver on a first-name basis.  My poor

dad, he'd come home from grocery shopping or something, and find more QVC

boxes on the front porch.  Drove him crazy.  Mom bought more absolute junk

from there!  I found a lot of it when she passed away, and then it was very

melancoly.   (sp?)  She just loved jewelry, and she sent quite a bit of it to

me, mostly trinket stuff.  Most of it was very UGLY! 

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:M&Ms

Date:  96-08-29 22:26:22 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Connie,


Nah! The editor'll be so spaced out from the chocolate that she'll be signing

contracts right and left.


Tina, Thanks. What I want is a sale to the Star!!!! See if you can arrange

that, please.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Out of the Doldrums!

Date:  96-08-29 22:28:37 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Tina, Connie,


That orange sweater sounds GREAT!!!! Cashmere!! If it's soft, wear it under

stuff as an undershirt during the winter. I do that with cashmere with holes.

I recommend it.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Out of the Doldrums!

Date:  96-08-29 22:29:19 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


BTW, girls, lest you misunderstand, the only cashmere I do own has holes in

it. 

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Raises

Date:  96-08-29 22:30:04 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


Sherril,


They don't have a lot of advertising though!

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Out of the Doldrums!

Date:  96-08-29 22:32:21 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Sherril,


Hah! I remember one time I was visiting my mom and she said she was going to

give me some towels. I said great! And she started giving me towels that were

unraveled at the end. I said, thanks anyway, but I already have a bunch of

towels like that. (Now that you know about my sweaters with holes and ratty

towels...)

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Out of the Doldrums!

Date:  96-08-30 15:13:13 edt

From:  Asandrin        

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Connie:


You may not have to send in the complete manuscript for the Golden Heart, but

they are going to randomly ask for them.  If you are the lucky one chosen and

yours isn't finished, I don't think you're invited to enter again.  Not that

any of us bad girls would ever attempt to do anything like that!  


Amy                        Subj:    Re:3 day weekend

Date:  96-08-30 15:14:51 edt

From:  Asandrin        

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Gang:


Since I gave Lynda my lap top, I won't be able to sign on until after the 3 -

day weekend.  Everyone have a great time -- drive safe --- get a lot of

writing done.  (Especially you, Lynda!)


Amy                        Subj:    Re:Raises

Date:  96-08-30 21:36:13 edt

From:  IRWriter        

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No, but what they do have is pretty big accounts, like the cigarette ads that

are always on the back covers.  They also have a lot of little display ads in

the back, for fortune tellers, and home schooling, and things like that, and

they are in there every month, so they must have pretty good contracts with

all of them.

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:Out of the Doldrums!

Date:  96-08-30 21:37:31 edt

From:  IRWriter        

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Gail, that sounds just like my mother, they must learn it in "mom school"

somewhere!  

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:Chat

Date:  96-08-30 21:40:32 edt

From:  IRWriter        

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Connie, I"m going to try to make it, and let William worry about dinner!  Let

me know the name of the room, OK?  Thank you, looking forward to it!

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:Chat

Date:  96-08-30 23:09:47 edt

From:  J00DLynn        

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When and where? I'll be there.


Jodi                        Subj:    Re:Chat

Date:  96-08-31 00:03:03 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

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Ditto on Jodi's question.  If it's Saturday night, I can't make it--sorry!!

I'm working a liquour sting.

Hope all is well with everyone.  Seems like we're all writing away like

crazy!

Lynda C.                        Subj:    Re:Chat

Date:  96-08-31 00:03:56 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

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Hey Jodi-

I think I missed it.  Are you in DI2, too?  Quite a roll you're on!  <g>

Lynda C.                        Subj:    QVC

Date:  96-08-31 00:17:50 edt

From:  Punkybean       

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MMMmmm, I'm just the opposite.  I LOVE QVC, and I order things for my mom. 


You ungrateful brats! <vbg>


Phyllis (who's wearing her genuine Jackie Kennedy pearls and Diamonique

earrings)                        Subj:    Re:QVC, etc.

Date:  96-08-31 08:41:00 edt

From:  JWBOIES         

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Have to admit I have a few good things from QVC, too.  Always wear their

diamonique studs in my second holes in my ears.  Have gotten some nice

necklaces, too.  They used to sell Swaworski (sp?) crystal.  I collect little

crystal animals and S's are the best -- and QVC had great prices.  I had to

sit on my hands during one amethyst show -- I wanted some dangling earrings

so bad it hurt.  But much of the time, you can find the same items at Target

for less money and save the shipping!


The etc:  Have any of you read I DO, I DO...FOR NOW by JoAnn Ross.  It was

one of the launch Love & Laughter books from Harlequin this summer.  Her

heroine is Russian and has an accent.  I really enjoyed that book.


Hope to make it to the chat tonight.   Jan


                        Subj:    Re:Chat

Date:  96-08-31 08:57:02 edt

From:  J00DLynn        

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Lynda,


Yes! I'm in DI 2, my story....Our Sisterly Bickering almost Kill our mom, Or

something like that. they stayed close to the title I gave it, I bet that's a

first. Usally I name them something funny just so they read it and understand

the content of the story.


Jodi                        Subj:    Re:Chat

Date:  96-08-31 08:57:39 edt

From:  J00DLynn        

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I know I just asked this, but when is CHAT? This is the 1st wkend I have off

and I can make it!


Jodi                        Subj:    Re:Golden Heart

Date:  96-08-31 08:59:57 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Amy - Wow, that's good to know!  I kind of agree with that rule, too - if

after all that time, the writer hasn't tended to her novel, it's almost as if

she's not attached to it.  (And with our projects, whether they're short or

long, we can't stay away from our characters too long!)  I think it would be

nice if all the Bad Girls currently working on our novels would go for it,

only because I really think it would inspire us - the ones who aren't writing

a novel will say,  "Hey, I'm going to try!" and we can urge them on including

each other.  The outcome wouldn't matter, either, but as many of us that can

make Orlando this year would add to the excitement - as well as show that

writers who write for the confessions not only strive for excellence in their

long projects, but in our shorter works, as well!  Straight up:  BGORs are

the most versatile writers going.  Just look at our work for the confessions.

We've got training in nearly every area, and if you look at Gail, who does

sci-fi & literary works, we ain't no chopped liver!  <G>  Whether we win or

lose GH makes no difference, because contests are subjective, but having a

whole family of sister writers makes it much more fun!


Only a suggestion.  If anyone deserves a try with Golden Heart, it's

definitely all of us.  I was telling Debbie this week & she had the same

thought that our little gang is a group of winners.  I think in years to

come, other people will lurk in her and say "SHE'S on this folder?" and "SHE

is, too??  WOW!!"  You watch!


Connie                        Subj:    Re:QVC

Date:  96-08-31 09:00:06 edt

From:  J00DLynn        

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Ok, OK-- me too! I like some of the stuff, but you do have to be careful and

know whats out there first. And some of the jewerly prices can't be beat! I

have some nice stuff that I could never buy in a store. I think its bacause

they sell 100's of one ring so they can mark it down where in a store, they

may only have that one ring and they 'need' to sell it.


Jodi                        Subj:    Re:3 day weekend

Date:  96-08-31 09:00:35 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Amy - We'll be waiting for you, girl!


<G>

Connie                        Subj:    LAbor day

Date:  96-08-31 09:01:22 edt

From:  J00DLynn        

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Anyone doing anything fun? Not me....I wanted to work (time and a half)

but someone beat me to the manager and got the hours.

SO i'll just be sitting here, maybe do a yard sale.


Jodi


                        Subj:    Re:Raises

Date:  96-08-31 09:02:35 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Sherril - I was wondering about that.  Did that cross anybody's mind, too?

What if the President does go through that legislation & the cigarette

companies can't buy those big, sprawling ads?  What effect will that have on

the confessions, which, like most magazines, make their big money in

advertising?


Connie                        Subj:    Moble home

Date:  96-08-31 09:03:38 edt

From:  J00DLynn        

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Did I tell?

we're thinking about buy a used one. Did I ask if anyone else lives in one

and if you have any suggestions? I'm thinking we're going to buy

anyway....What AM i going to do with all this STUFF i have? I guess it just

sits around and never gets used anyway, like the rider exerciser that I got

:>

SELL IT ALL, is what I think!


Jodi                        Subj:    Re:Moms & Shopping

Date:  96-08-31 09:07:04 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Sherril & Gail - You know what's funny?  Speaking of mom's taste & ours?

When I was younger, I always loved these little itty purses, the kind with

the long strap, and my mother used to lug this much bigger bag you could fit

the kitchen sink into!  She was fanatic about her purse, too - it was a big

deal, oh, I have to get something really pretty & different from last time!

I used to think,  "Why does she carry that giant thing around?"


Well, today, I look for BIG purses.  <G>  Ironic, huh!  I find I can fit a

small notebook or paperback in one of these - or BOTH!!!  And I like lots of

compartments, like she did, for makeup, wallet, papers, etc.  If I use a

smaller purse, I get a little totebag.  Funny how they rub off on you

sometimes - mothers!


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Lynda

Date:  96-08-31 09:08:31 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Lynda - You're working on a liquor sting?  Hmm.  Sounds like a whiskey sour!


<G>

Connie                        Subj:    Re:QVC

Date:  96-08-31 09:09:10 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Phyllis - those diamonique earrings sound pretty cute!!!!



Connie                        Subj:    Re:QVC, etc.

Date:  96-08-31 09:11:25 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Jan - JoAnn Ross is really nice, too!  On the Writing Series Romance folder,

she mentioned making brownies & we all asked & asked her for it - and she

posted the recipe!!  What a sweet lady!


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Moble home

Date:  96-08-31 09:25:22 edt

From:  Luv2rit         

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Jodi,

   My dad was in the service, and my parents lived in a mobile home for about

8 months.  Because they were just a couple, it was a very small one, but the

larger families got double-wides.  They were more like a house.  Isn't it

amazing how many choices of places to live we have to live in this country?

We're thinking about selling our house and buying a cluster home.  I'm tired

of the maintenance.  The only thing that's stopping us is that our kids are

worried about the animals not having the "freedom."  What about mom's

freedom?  Oh, well.  The things we do for our children.


Deb                        Subj:    Re:QVC, etc.

Date:  96-08-31 09:28:19 edt

From:  Luv2rit         

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Connie,

   You mentioned how nice Jo Ann Ross was on the Series Romance board.  One

thing I've noticed about nice people is that if they're nice before they

become successful, they're generally nice afterwards.  When people change, I

think sometimes it's only temporary until someone knocks them to their knees.

Then they're nice again.  However, I suspect that Jo Ann has always been a

very nice person.  Most romance writers are.


Deb                        Subj:    Re:Lynda

Date:  96-08-31 11:32:12 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

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Connie-

LOLOL.  No whiskey sour, sorry!  :-D

Trying to find out which liquor stores are selling to minors.  Should be a

kick in the butt, especially since I get to wear "Party On Saturday Night"

clothes instead of men's Dacrom polyester!!

I'll miss you guys!

Lynda C.                        Subj:    Re:Moble home

Date:  96-08-31 11:35:20 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

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Deb-

We live in a cluster home community, and I love it.  There is a huge

greenbelt area winding through all the clusters (which I don't have to mow or

maintain----there is a God) and the house is bigger than our single family

home we sold.  3 BR, 3 BR, 2600 sq feet total.  It's awesome.  But, yes, you

do have to walk the dogs!  Luckily, ours is on the far end of the community

which backs up to a great little park!

Lynda C.                        Subj:    Re:Moble home

Date:  96-08-31 11:37:07 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

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FYI:

Cluster homes are like town homes, except they aren't in a row and seem much

more "house-like."  They come in a bunch of different layouts and aren't

narrow like standard townhomes.  


Just in case anyone was wondering.

Lynda C.                        Subj:    Re:Lynda

Date:  96-08-31 11:38:54 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

.


(message before last should've read "Dacron," and I don't think I spelled

polyester right, either!

Damn tiny keyboard.  :-)

Lynda C.                        Subj:    QVC

Date:  96-08-31 11:40:18 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

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Okay, okay, I plead ignorance.

What the heck is QVC????????

Lynda C.                        Subj:    Re:Out of the Doldrums!

Date:  96-08-31 13:39:26 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Sherril,


I'd call it disfunctional mom school. They have a school for that, too, you

know.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Chat

Date:  96-08-31 13:40:42 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Ladies,


I think I'm going out to dinner tonight with my friend. If I get back in

time, I'll join in, but I have my doubts. I'll send my vibes. (lucky you.)

Gail                        Subj:    Re:QVC

Date:  96-08-31 13:42:47 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Phyllis,


I wonder what your mom has to say ("you should see the stuff my daughter

orders for me")? Don't worry, I wear diamondlike earrings, too.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:QVC, etc.

Date:  96-08-31 13:44:45 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Jan,


I have a friend who collects those crystals. They're expensive!!!! He must

have several thousand dollars worth! I collect all kinds of little animals,

too, in different kinds of minerals, like malachite, etc. There, now all my

secrets have been spilled. 

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Golden Heart

Date:  96-08-31 13:48:13 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Connie,


I agree. It's amazing how much we manage to accomplish and still post! I'm

sending eight queries out today on an offbeat, 50,000 word project of mine.

We're definitely upandcoming STARS* * * * * * * * * +++++

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Raises

Date:  96-08-31 13:49:41 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Connie,


I didn't think that legislation dealt with magazine ads--does it? Mostly

vending machines and no billboards near schools(?)

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Moms & Shopping

Date:  96-08-31 13:52:16 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Connie,


Are we our mothers? A guy friend I write to online, divorced and living

alone, swears by his mother's domestic advice. She always "bought" linen with

green stamps. He claims he buys linen with pepsi bottle caps. Is he kidding?

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Lynda

Date:  96-08-31 13:54:39 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Connie,


You made me laugh out loud, you sneak, and I was trying to think of something

funny to say to the lady cop. Hey, Lynda, did you watch High Incident the

other night? It centered on a multi-multi car accident due to a fog. I love

these characters. 

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Lynda

Date:  96-08-31 13:56:17 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Lynda,


You're playing the part of the minor?????? Wow! I'm impressed.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Lynda

Date:  96-08-31 13:57:36 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


Lynda,


Sure, blame the keyboard. This keyboard doesn't spell that great, either.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Lynda

Date:  96-08-31 13:59:53 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


Lynda,


QVC is one of those home shopping channels. I always think, "wow, I'd like to

order that." But I have great self-control.

Gail                        Subj:    Chat

Date:  96-08-31 14:06:46 edt

From:  Luv2rit         

.


Hey, gang!

   Connie isn't sure if she's going to make it tonight, so she asked me to

set up the chat room.  I'm not sure how, so someone please help.  How's the

original name "TruelyBad"?  If that's okay, then we'll meet there at 8:00 est

tonight.  See you all there!


Deb                        Subj:    Re:Chat

Date:  96-08-31 14:08:43 edt

From:  Luv2rit         

.


Did I spell that correctly?  It doesn't look right to me.  TruelyBad?

HELP!

                                   Deb                        Subj:    I Do, I Do. . .

Date:  96-08-31 16:16:06 edt

From:  CMyersTex       

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Jan,

I read I Do, I Do. . . For Now.  It was one of the free books at National

Conference.  I really enjoyed it.  Made me want to read more of Jo Ann's

books and more Love & Laughter.

Cindi                        Subj:    Re:Moble home

Date:  96-08-31 16:19:59 edt

From:  CMyersTex       

.


Jodi,

My hubby and I lived in a mobile home -- a 14X70 for the first 12 years of

our marriage.  Frankly, by the time we moved out, I was absolutely sick of

the thing.  My brother and his wife have a really nice one now.  He's built

on porches and decks and everything.


You don't have any storage space in a mobile home, but I learned to be

clever.  I had stuff under the beds, we put shelves in the closets and

everywhere else we could think of.  When we moved into our house, we couldn't

believe all the junk we'd managed to cram into that place.


Cindi                        Subj:    Re:Lynda

Date:  96-08-31 16:26:26 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

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Gail-

Dang--missed High Incident again.  I liked it the one time I saw it!!

Lynda C.                        Subj:    Re:Lynda

Date:  96-08-31 16:28:20 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

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Gail--

I LOVE YOU!!!!!!! :-D

No, I'm not playing the part of a minor.  LOL!  They have to actually sell to

a minor, so our police cadets are making the buys.  BUT.....there has to be a

police officer in the store observing a buy, and no one would make me for a

cop!   Nah----I look old in the face.  Even my mother told me I was starting

to look my age!!  

Lynda C.                        Subj:    Re:Chat

Date:  96-08-31 18:38:27 edt

From:  Dr meow1        

.




    How about TrulyBad?  Is that it?


Julia                        Subj:    Re:QVC

Date:  96-08-31 18:38:29 edt

From:  Punkybean       

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Gail,


When presented with her QVC gift's, my mom ALWAYS says, "I'd rather have the

money you spent."


Phyllis                        Subj:    Re:Chat

Date:  96-08-31 20:00:47 edt

From:  Luv2rit         

.


I think our first chat was in the private room entitled TRUElyBad, a takeoff

from the Trues.  Let's stay with that one.  

                                                             Deb                        Subj:    Chat

Date:  96-08-31 20:11:15 edt

From:  Luv2rit         

.


I think the chat fizzled out, but I think everyone was busy, and that's okay.

My family went to see the movie Jack, and I'll never stop being amazed at

Robin Williams' acting ability.  He makes a great kid (and a convincing

woman, I might add).  As usual, I cried in the movie.


Deb                        Subj:    Re:QVC

Date:  96-08-31 20:54:59 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Phyllis,


That's funny!!!! Don't you just hate it when people do that. My friend at

work gets beautiful flowers from her boyfriend. She tells him he's wasting

money, that she'd rather get jewelry. I guess she's waiting for the ring.

(He's going to get it for her, too.)

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Lynda

Date:  96-08-31 20:57:27 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


Lynda,


How about a story about a teenage boy buying alcohol in a liquor store and

some woman buying some wine and she feels worried about the kid and tries to

help him not get involved in drinking?

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Lynda

Date:  96-08-31 21:04:59 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

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Gail-

You idea genius!  Write it up---I'll                        Subj:    oops--here's the end

Date:  96-08-31 21:05:51 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

.


(continued from last post)


I'll consult.  


Lynda C.   :-)                        Subj:    Re:Raises

Date:  96-08-31 21:12:48 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Gail - Oh, yes!  At least what I heard is that cigarette companies can't take

out those full-page cover ads - only little ones, no pics.  It's going to

have a big impact on advertising in general, I think.


Connie                        Subj:    Enclosing gifts...

Date:  96-08-31 21:14:02 edt

From:  JWBOIES         

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When I read the idea of putting M&M's with a manuscript to an editor.  My

favorite book editor once sent back an entire manuscript for a lot of

revisions near Halloween time.  She enclosed a little pin that said "Your

Plot or Mine?" and a bag of candy corn!!!   How could I be mad about the

revisions when she did all that?   Just had to tell you all.   Jan


Think I might have missed the chat since I didn't realize it was Eastern

time.  But I'm going to try to get there now and see what's happening.   Jan


                        Subj:    Re:Moms & Shopping

Date:  96-08-31 21:14:17 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

.


Gail - I remember green stamps!!!  That was before the days of QVC (& credit

cards, come to think of it!).  In my house, it was green stamps but

ESPECIALLY Montgomery Ward!!!  (Remember them? LOL!)


Connie

                        Subj:    Re:Lynda

Date:  96-08-31 21:18:05 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Lynda - That sounds like one of those fun busts!  (If there IS such a thing!)

We had one in the neighborhood recently, with undercover cops running around

with cell phones and everything.  Thank God they did a great job because

there's a school right up the block, and the guys who got busted weren't

selling school supplies, if you know what I mean.


Connie                        Subj:    I missed chat

Date:  96-08-31 21:39:00 edt

From:  J00DLynn        

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sorry, and I was home! I just didn't check the board in time to find out the

time.


I'm finishing up my story (DI-3) tonight to send out Mon or should I say tues

since there's no mail on Mon. I just hope Pat gets it in time.


Loved the Moble home we saw. It's older, but the guy (Her X) was a

construction worker and fix t up perfectly! it looks better then some of the

new ones! I think we'll buy! I'm so excited.


Jodi                        Subj:    Re:Enclosing gifts...

Date:  96-09-01 10:09:28 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

.


Jan - That is so adorable!!!  I think that was one very "sweet", loveable

editor!


Along the same lines, from what Sherril & others have said, some writers get

really bent out of shape over revisions.  Obviously, everybody's different;

some people will take offense ("why should I change my baby for you?") and

others will have a more professional approach, taking whatever the editor

says into consideration & seeing if they can make it work.  Do you (Sherril,

anyone else that has an opinion on this) think that sometimes editors may be

a little careful, not knowing what the author's reaction will be?  I know on

our side, we sometimes let experiences with other editors color our

perception and are careful (afraid we're bothering them with questions, how

approachable they are, etc.).


One thing that I found really eye-opening and that I enjoyed very much was

discussing 2 stories' revisions with Pat (Patti, you, too know this part!

<G>).  I found that we could talk about the plots & characters with only the

story in mind, going back and forth with,  "I think I need to keep this so

that she'll have some depth" for example, while Pat brought other levels into

it which I hadn't seen and found challenging.  I think when that happens,

it's beneficial and in fact, the revisions aren't seen as "what I did wrong"

but "what I can do better."


Those were my observations, and in the end, it was LIKE getting candy corn!


<G>

Connie                        Subj:    Re:Enclosing gifts...

Date:  96-09-01 11:50:37 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Jan,


That is so funny--"Your plot or mine." I love it.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:I missed chat

Date:  96-09-01 11:52:21 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


Jodi,


Go for it. Enjoy! Take your shoes off and relax in your new home!!!! Good

that the guy fixed it up for you!

Gail                        Subj:    Lynda's story

Date:  96-09-01 11:54:03 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Lynda,


I defer to you. I'm waiting to hear about three confessions. I want a

contract before I write another one. I know you all would just keep sending,

but I have other stuff to do in the meantime.

gail                        Subj:    Re:Enclosing gifts...

Date:  96-09-01 11:55:31 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


Connie,


Yes, some editors are good and have exactly the right suggestions for

improvement and others seem not to have actually read the story.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Lynda

Date:  96-09-01 12:56:27 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

.


Connie-

Yes, it WOULD'VE been a fun bunch of busts, but here's the good news:  not

ONE liquor store in our whole city would sell to a minor, and we rotated and

hit them several times.  I think that's great.

Lynda C.                        Subj:    Re:QVC

Date:  96-09-01 14:44:42 edt

From:  IRWriter        

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HAHA phyllis.  Actually, even though most of the stuff mom sent was icky, I'm

sitting here wearing two rings that were hers, that I've actually come to

really love.  One is like a mother's ring, only with all Dimonique, and one

is Black Hills gold with a turquoise stone in it.  I never take them off.

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:Raises

Date:  96-09-01 14:46:28 edt

From:  IRWriter        

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Well, they'll probably raise their subscription rates for one, and then we'll

NEVER get a raise!

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:Moms & Shopping

Date:  96-09-01 14:48:16 edt

From:  IRWriter        

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Connie, it's scary, the older you get, the more you seem to turn into your

mother...at least that's what's happening in my case.  I have to stop now,

before I become addicted to QVC!  (they did have the John Denver Wildlife CD

before anyone else, so I watched, and I bought!)


Sherril                        Subj:    Re:Moble home

Date:  96-09-01 14:54:06 edt

From:  IRWriter        

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Jodi, my mom and dad sold their home in 1979, and moved into a mobile home.

It was an older one, and when I came back home after 2 years in Arizona, I

swore they'd moved and left me no forwarding address! '-).  I never really

got used to it, or liked it, but I know they are built better now.  Back then

the walls were just made out of that 1/4 inch phoney wood paneling, and no

insulation, and you could hear everything, the TV, the kitchen noise,

everything.  It was a double-wide, and they had 2 of those metal storage

buildings for all their "overflow."  I think that's a necessity, although the

builders were pretty ingenious with putting storage everywhere they could.

Since my dad passed away, I've been trying to sell it, and it's been nearly 2

years, and still not sold, a perfect nightmare.  They depreciate in value, so

be careful there.

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:Chat

Date:  96-09-01 14:55:33 edt

From:  IRWriter        

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Deb, I'm so sorry!  I planned to be there, and TOTALLY forgot!  My husband

was barbecuing, and I was doing the other stuff in the kitchen, and the next

time I looked at the clock, it was 7 pm. oops!

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:QVC

Date:  96-09-01 14:56:36 edt

From:  IRWriter        

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Not me, I'd rather have flowers any day!  I never got flowers at work until I

turned 31, and I swore to my boss I was going to marry the first man who ever

sent me flowers at the office.  Turns out, I did!

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:Lynda

Date:  96-09-01 15:09:44 edt

From:  IRWriter        

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Lynda, that's great.  I saw a clerk the other day sell cigarettes (3

different packs of 3 different brands) to a girl who said, "Oh gee, my id's

in the car, I'm in a terrible rush, I've bought them here before."  I wanted

to say to that woman, "you should be ashamed," but of course, I didn't.

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:Enclosing gifts...

Date:  96-09-01 15:13:28 edt

From:  IRWriter        

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Connie, yes, I think the editors sometimes are more careful, trying to gauge

the response of the writer, and really, that's something they shouldn't have

to worry about!  They are just trying to do their job.  I'm reading a new

book "How to Write a Romance and Get it Published," and that is waht the

first chapter is all about, that this is a business, and we have to act

professional.  I'm still amazed at how many people choose to ignore that.

Personally, if I was an editor, and I had an especially hard time with an

author, I'd be much less enclined to buy their next book, and I'm sure that

happens a lot, too.

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:Enclosing gifts...

Date:  96-09-01 20:07:49 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

.


Sherril - I wonder sometimes how many of OUR chances are spoiled by

uncooperative, unprofessional writers who see their writing as "oh, so

perfect the way it is."  Sometimes I want to add to the end of the cover

letter,  "Hey, if you want rewrites, I won't be a dweeb & say no!"


<G>

Connie                        Subj:    Re:Lynda

Date:  96-09-01 20:41:52 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

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Sherril-

Next time, feel free to tell her she should be ashamed!   ;-)

Lynda C.                        Subj:    Broncos kick butt

Date:  96-09-01 20:44:22 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

.


Hi all-

Just got back from watching the Broncos smear the NY Jets all over the field

at Mile High Stadium.  Ahhhhhh, humiliation is so sweet when it's not your

own!  Big, drunk obnoxious idiot behind us.  Great fodder for

characterization.  Too bad someone didn't sell him a brain to go with that

mouth!


Lynda C.                        Subj:    Re:Moble home

Date:  96-09-01 21:05:46 edt

From:  J00DLynn        

.


I know, I hate that fake wook panels, but they took them out and painted the

walls so it looks nice. On and She's only asking $5,000 for it...so there's

no way we could lose much money. On the Navy lots, people are always buying

and selling...it's just the way of the Navy. 


Jodi                        Subj:    Re:QVC

Date:  96-09-01 23:53:57 edt

From:  Punkybean       

.


Okay, maybe I wasn't completely honest.  I keep all the good QVC things for

myself.  And I send me mom the impulse buys that make you ask, "What in the

heck was I thinking of when I bought this??!!!"


Phyllis                        Subj:    Re:Broncos kick butt

Date:  96-09-02 11:57:32 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


Lynda,


Oh-oh. I picked the Jets (regional loyalty). Glad the stores weren't selling

to kids. I guess I got drunk a few times at 16. Now if I have one drink a

year it's a lot.

Gail

                        Subj:    Re:QVC

Date:  96-09-02 11:59:06 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


Phyllis,


Well, now we know. Don't tell mom though. My friend in the Virgin Islands

just bought a thick irish sweater on QVC. She's tuned to that channel.

Gail                        Subj:    Labor Day

Date:  96-09-02 11:59:46 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Have a fun Day, buddies. 

Gail                        Subj:    Rest, relax, and party!

Date:  96-09-02 12:13:18 edt

From:  J00DLynn        

.


Hope you have a nice day!


we're going to start cleaning and packing, I think we're going to make an

offer today on the M home.


Jodi                        Subj:    Re:Guess what?

Date:  96-09-02 15:40:29 edt

From:  LaRitaMari      

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Tina --


Congratulations!!  I've never tried them before...although I LOVE their

title!!


Larita                        Subj:    Re:Releases

Date:  96-09-02 16:08:29 edt

From:  LaRitaMari      

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Congrats Deb, Jodi, Patty, Denise, Connie, Gail,and Sherril, on your recent

sales!!!!!  I got a contract for my prenuptial story for Dec. TR....also a

rejection from TL ... :(


Larita

                        Subj:    Re:Releases

Date:  96-09-02 16:20:33 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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All right, Larita!!!!  Dec. TR is amazingly, almost entirely Bad Girls of

Romance!!!  It's interesting how it's gone, from the first DI to the one

coming up - the stories still en route to Pat!


I think Patty deserves to take a bow for the magnifique job as coordinator of

DI 3!  And Larita - how does it feel to see the "fruits of your labor"?  <G>


Connie  (Don't worry about the rejection from TL - I got one from TR for one

that was there for a while!  The ladies over there must be cleaning house!

<G>)                        Subj:    Vacation

Date:  96-09-02 16:21:00 edt

From:  LaRitaMari      

.


Hey, girls!!


I missed you all terribly...(Thanks, Amy, for passing on my "hello"!)


I got some excellent stuff for my book...Went on a tour of the Okaloosa

Correctional Institute, got lots of info there....Talked to people at a

museum, the newspaper, etc...But the best (and WORST) thing was the

coincidence that I just happened to run into this guy who overheard me

talking to someone else about the research I was doing, and he began talking

and didn't shut up for over an hour....The good thing was, he was very

informative and his opinions and attitudes will fit right in and give me the

background I need for my book...and they only enforce what I had been told by

my uncle were the attitudes of this town.  The bad thing was, he was

incredibly racist; yes, KKK, and it scared, and angered, the everliving sh**

out of me.  By the end of our "interview", I had a migraine from clenching my

teeth so hard in order to keep from spitting in his face.  I was shaking,

literally, with disgust, anger, you name it...He was so self-righteous, too,

which, (yes, this is a generalization, but I'm going to make it anyway...) I

think, is SOOO typical for people who are SOOOOO stupid and wrong....This guy

actually has a brother whose initials are KKK; is that sick or what??   The

other thing that was amazing to me is all the confederate flag stuff

everywhere, just sold at the t-shirt shops like it's okay...lighters,

tshirts, bumper stickers, hats....


I mean, I'm not naive enough to think that this type of attitude doesn't

exist, but to such a great and obvious extent??????  (Oh, jeez, there goes my

blood pressure.....)  How can anyone be PROUD to be so ignorant and hateful?

:(


Larita                        Subj:    Re:Broncos kick butt

Date:  96-09-02 19:40:40 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

.


Gail!!!

You picked the Jets?!

God, they played so poorly I actually felt sorry for them.  They looked so

downtrodden.  Trent told me to stop acting like a touchy-feely wuss----they

get big bucks to play so they shouldn't suck, and if they do they don't

deserve sympathy.


That's a man for ya.

Lynda C.                        Subj:    Re:Releases

Date:  96-09-03 16:01:13 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

.


Great news about your sale Larita!  We'll be roomates!  

Patty                        Subj:    Re:Vacation

Date:  96-09-03 16:06:03 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

.


Larita,  Did you go on vacation with the intent of doing research for a

novel?  That's such a cool way to spend your vacation time.  Too bad you ran

head on into such disgusting racism, but, you're right.  Some people do seem

proud of having such backward ideas. It's difficult to reconcile with a

civilized society, but it's more prevelant than we like to think.  Where's

your novel set?

Patty                        Subj:    Re:Vacation

Date:  96-09-03 16:35:15 edt

From:  Gtlhrt          

.


Well today I'm one for one...rejection from TR (D2) but sold another story to

Affaire de Coeur!


Tulsa was great and I had a nice time visiting friends!!  Good to be back

tothe old computer though, my fingers were itchy the whole time!!


Tina                        Subj:    Pix

Date:  96-09-03 18:11:32 edt

From:  Gtlhrt          

.


Hey gals check out your new RWR on page 13 is a picture of me and Lynda with

two pals in between.  Laura( who Amy and Lynda frequently mention on board)

is sitting next to Lynda.

Lynda is sitting right behind Laura DeVries( who is sitting second from right

on front row). Then next to Lynda is Laura then next going left is another

friend Maggie, then me in light colors.


Tina                        Subj:    Re:Vacation

Date:  96-09-03 18:18:37 edt

From:  LaRitaMari      

.


Patty --

Yes, I did go (mostly) for the reason of researching...The novel is set half

in Crestview, FL, which is where I was, and half in St. Louis, which is, of

course, where I live.


Larita                        Subj:    Re:Releases

Date:  96-09-03 18:59:27 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


Larita,


You good bad girl, you.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Vacation

Date:  96-09-03 19:02:16 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


Larita,


Ya reap what ya sow, ya know what I mean? That guy's gonna step in a big pile

o' somethin nasty.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Vacation

Date:  96-09-03 19:03:43 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


Tina,


You are cool. Affaire d' cour double bingo.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Vacation

Date:  96-09-03 19:06:21 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


TiIna,


I'm looking at you right now--I think. 

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Enclosing gifts...

Date:  96-09-03 21:33:01 edt

From:  IRWriter        

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I wonder the same thing, Connie!  It would be nice if we could let the editor

know somehow that we are willing to rewrite, if necessary.  maybe something

like, "I'm always happy to work with you," or something that sounds

professional in the cover letter.  Of course, then there's always the danger

of sounding as if you EXPECT you'll have to rewrite it...and sending a

negative message to the editor.  It's so hard to know just what each editor

wants until you work with them, but we have to get used to that, right?

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:Lynda

Date:  96-09-03 21:33:46 edt

From:  IRWriter        

.


Yeah, you know, I really felt bad that I didn't say something to that clerk,

it really made me uncomfortable, because it was so clear what the girl was

doing.

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:Moble home

Date:  96-09-03 21:34:23 edt

From:  IRWriter        

.


Whoa, Jodi, what a deal!  Go for it! ;-)

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:QVC

Date:  96-09-03 21:34:57 edt

From:  IRWriter        

.


Ah Phyllis, now I get it!  That must be what my mom did, too! ;-)

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:Pix

Date:  96-09-03 21:37:08 edt

From:  IRWriter        

.


So Cool!  I haven't gotten my RWR yet, I can't wait to see the pictures

!

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:Tina

Date:  96-09-03 21:37:46 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

.


Yo, Tina!!!  #2 for you on Affaire du couer!  (I took French for 4 years in

high school; you'd think I'd remember how to spell "affair of the heart!"

<G>)  Double congratulations!!


Connie                        Subj:    Re:RWR

Date:  96-09-03 21:38:16 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

.


Oh, I didn't get mine in the mail yet!!!  Can't wait to see all you Bad Girls

together!!


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Racism

Date:  96-09-03 21:46:14 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

.


Larita & Sherril - I knew someone like that, a co-worker who used to come up

to me even before I had my coffee and start talking in a way that really

ruins the rest of the morning.  He knows I'm Hispanic, so he didn't go there,

but he hit just about everyone else.  The worst thing he said was,  "They

should have all been destroyed during World War II."  After that, I just

avoided him altogether, because who wants to hear that garbage?  I can't see

anyone justifying the suffering that went on in Germany in World War II, a

time that showed the darkest side of humanity.


Connie

                        Subj:    Re:Checks came!

Date:  96-09-03 21:56:08 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

.


Anyone who wrote stories for August issues - I think those are on their way!

I got mine today & a good thing, too, 'cause I was broke!  <G>  Also, I've

got the October issues of True Romance, True Love and True Experience, so

please let me know if anyone's in there!  Cindi, I keep thinking your town

bad boy story is in this batch - is it?


My mafioso story made it into Oct. TR, but it's at work!  (My manager was

reading it when I left!  <G>  The master mechanic, who fixes our machines,

read it, too!  He said,  "The girl looks hot!")  It's called "Married to a

Mobster", and he's a cute mafioso!  Also, I thought it was so nice - someone

wrote into TL who liked my large-size model story!  So I had a good day!

(Almost as good as my kids, who got goodies for school with the check!!!)


Connie

                        Subj:    Re:Vacation

Date:  96-09-04 09:14:35 edt

From:  DCamp76         

.


Gee Tina,  I buy enough magazines as it is--now I've got to buy Affaire

deCoure, too.  You BAAAAd girl!  Congratulations!


=Denise=                        Subj:    Re:I missed chat

Date:  96-09-04 10:06:25 edt

From:  CMyersTex       

.


I missed the chat too.  Guess it just wasn't meant to be.  My hubby was

installing a tape drive on my computer.  Now I can back up the -whole thing-

on tape.


Cindi                        Subj:    Re:Releases

Date:  96-09-04 10:11:25 edt

From:  CMyersTex       

.


Got word today that Pat wants my story for the January TR.  I've never heard

anything on the story I submitted for December, so I'm thinking it's a no go

-- or at least on hold for a while.


I got my copy of TE in the mail, too, and the story I was supposed to have in

there got bumped.  Maybe next month.  But I'm supposed to have one in the

October TR, too, so somebody let me know.  It's about the woman with

Muchausen's Syndrome by Proxy.


Cindi 


                          Subj:    sinus surgery

Date:  96-09-04 10:15:56 edt

From:  CMyersTex       

.


Just checking in.  I had surgery on my sinuses yesterday and I'm still a

little groggy.  Trying to take it easy, but that's hard for me to do.  I

really need a lap top, then I could do this in bed.


Cindi                        Subj:    Re:Pix

Date:  96-09-04 10:48:18 edt

From:  Asandrin        

.


Tina:


Look closer....that's me, not Lynda!  :-)


Amy                        Subj:    Re:Sale

Date:  96-09-04 10:51:21 edt

From:  Asandrin        

.


Tina:


Congrats!  Way to go.                        Subj:    Re:Pix

Date:  96-09-04 11:35:41 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

.


Amy-

i'm on the other end, but heck, it's so small and blurry, I could hardly

recognize myself.  Except for the schnaz!

Lynda C.                        Subj:    Congrats all around

Date:  96-09-04 11:40:24 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

.


Cindi-

Sorry about your sinuses, but congrats on your story for January!


Tina-

Story #2!!!!!  Congrats!


Connie-

Can't wait to read your story about the mafioso!  You do wise guys SOOOO

well!


Anyone else I missed:  congrats.


Welllllll, I've gotten two rejections from TR this week.   :-(

The one I got yesterday had a really nice note attached, though, so it wasn't

so bad.  Plus, I got my August check.  Hard cold cash always dampens the

blow.


I did get another bite from an agent (did I already tell you guys this)???

Pesha Rubenstein.  What the heck, not all ups, but not all downs, either!


Talk to you all soon.

Lynda C.                        Subj:    Re:Congrats 

Date:  96-09-04 12:10:19 edt

From:  Punkybean       

.


Congrats Tina!!!!!!!


Cindi, how are you feeling today????


Phyllis                        Subj:    Re:Enclosing gifts...

Date:  96-09-04 13:11:21 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

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Sherril,   I do say in my cover letter that I'm happy to rewrite.  Sometimes

I worry that it sounds negative, too, but mostly I hope it shows a

willingness to act on suggestions.  I once read an article by ByLine's editor

Kathyrn Fanning where she talked about how she likes to give suggestions but

has gotten gun shy after some writers took them the wrong way.  She suggested

that if you value an editor's advice just say so, tell her that you'll take

it in the spirit intended.  So far, I've had great luck doing that and have

learned more than I probably could have in dozens of classes.  Patty

                        Subj:    Re:Tina

Date:  96-09-04 13:13:00 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

.


Tina, Great news.  SOmeone at Affaire De Couer must love your work!

Patty                        Subj:    Re:Checks came!

Date:  96-09-04 13:14:50 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

.


Connie,   Could you please check Oct TR for my visiting nurse story?  It was

supposed to be in in AUg but got bumped.  

Thanks,  PAtty                        Subj:    Re:Checks came!

Date:  96-09-04 13:16:32 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

.


Connie,  IT must have been such a boost to read a reader's lettter

complimenting one of your stories.  I agree. That story was uplifting and

very well done.

Patty                        Subj:    Re:Releases

Date:  96-09-04 13:18:12 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

.


Cindi,  Wow, you got a Jan. acceptance already.  That's great!  Hope you're

recovering fast from your surgery. 

Patty                        Subj:    Re:New Avenue

Date:  96-09-04 13:32:02 edt

From:  Asandrin        

.


Hey everyone, just read this in a chapter newsletter and thought I'd share:


Good Housekeeping magazine is accepting short stories (1,000-5,000

words)--contemporary women's fiction in all genres (except sci-fi).  Send

completed ms with cover letter to:  Anne Quarfoot, Fiction Editor, 9598th

Ave., NY, NY 10019.


Sorry, it didn't say how much they paid.


Amy                        Subj:    Re:sinus surgery

Date:  96-09-04 14:18:36 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


Cindi,


You, poor baby. Congrats on the sale though.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:New Avenue

Date:  96-09-04 14:21:18 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


Amy,


Thanks! I had sent for GH guidelines about a month ago--never got them. But

I'm happy to hear that fiction is in! I'm sure the pay is good, too.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:New Avenue

Date:  96-09-04 14:22:42 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


Connie,


Some people are just sick. We will never be able to understand.

Gail                        Subj:    Amy

Date:  96-09-04 16:21:39 edt

From:  Gtlhrt          

.


By golly that is you Amy...well you and Lynda are so tight you too are even

starting to look alike!


UGH Cindy poor baby, I've taken care of some of you poor sinus surgery

patients.  Just makes you wanna blow your nose!  Take two percodan and call

me in the morning!  I'll be praying for your swift 

recovery!


Tina    Amy thanks for the info-I just entered a short in a contest that she

was judging (Lee Quarfoot from GH)                        Subj:    Sinus problems

Date:  96-09-04 18:27:53 edt

From:  Luv2rit         

.


My sinuses are killing me, and I just found out that one of our area

hospitals is starting to offer accupuncture.  Does anyone know about this?

I'm willing to try anything.  Medicine makes me feel so spaced that I

hesitate to take anything unless it's right before bedtime.  And the thought

of surgery scares me half to death.  

                                                               Deb                        Subj:  

Re:Sinus problems

Date:  96-09-04 20:35:04 edt

From:  EdnaCK          

.


Deb,


I don't know about sinus problems, but I have a friend who has acupuncture

and acupressure treatments for her arthritis and she swears it helps. It

can't hurt to try.   -  Susan                        Subj:    Re:Amy

Date:  96-09-04 20:58:33 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

.


Can you guys steer me?  I got the new RWR & looked through it frantically,

but I'm not sure which picture it is y'all are in.  Is it one of the ones

that shows a lot of people at the Heart of Texas?  Which one?  What's

everybody wearing in it?


I tried so hard, since I know what Tina and Lynda look like - I figured Amy

wasn't far!!!


Connie                        Subj:    Re:New Avenue

Date:  96-09-04 21:00:01 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

.


Amy - I agree with Gail - the pay probably IS good!  I'll wait to see what

they publish first to get an idea, but that 5,000 sounds easier!!  (Wish I

was like Gail & Tina - those guys can do wonders with few words!!!  <G>)


Connie                        Subj:    Patty - TR

Date:  96-09-04 21:09:07 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

.


Patty - I double-checked, but the nursing home is still bumped (and I knew

because I actually looked for it as soon as it came!  <G>  I'm still waiting

to read that one, too!).  You know what I bet's going to happen?  It's going

to hit the month you have 2 in there already - and your check is gonna be B i

g!!!


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Bumped

Date:  96-09-04 21:10:32 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

.


By the way, I'm bumped again, too!  My minister story didn't make it into TL.

Next month TL has the story about the naval officer sooooooo...who knows?


<G>

Connie                        Subj:    Re:Enclosing gifts...

Date:  96-09-04 21:16:58 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

.


Patty - I agree 100%!  I write that, too, just very simply with,  "if have

any questions or need changes, please feel free hesitate to call me."

Sometimes I leave out "need changes", hoping the editor STILL knows she can

give me a buzz if she wants something changed!  Hey, better a changed story &

a sale - and a good relationship with that editor, who'll remember you took

her suggestions cheerfully, than a story that lays around unsold, but

hey...it's exactly the way you want it!


<G>

Connie                        Subj:    Re:sinus surgery

Date:  96-09-04 21:20:14 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

.


Cindi - Hope you're feeling better, girl!  And congratulations on the Jan.

sale (advance notice!).  If I can suggest - get that laptop when you can.  It

really does come in handy, and you can relax with it, and when we're relaxed,

it shows in our writing.  I got mine right after my upper respiratory

infection, which lasted for 3 weeks.


All this talk about allergies - girls, my son's 8 and he's going through it.

His allergy affects his eyes.  Does it get better once the cold weather comes

in?  I feel so sorry for him.  It's an everyday thing.  Is that the way it's

been for all of you?


(I feel for you, too!  <G>)


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Oct. TR

Date:  96-09-04 21:24:24 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

.


Cindi - Give me a little more info on your story, the Mauchasuan (spelling's

wrong, I'm sure).  The only thing I see is "I Found My Son Hanging From the

End of a Rope."  Is that it?


Connie

                        Subj:    WORK!

Date:  96-09-04 23:02:46 edt

From:  J00DLynn        

.


Will it ever end? My feet are killing me! But atleast my back stop hurting

after I bought a Good bra.


Now, I have to finish on my packing....I just hope things wind down by Oct.


Jodi                        Subj:    dinner talk

Date:  96-09-04 23:13:55 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


I went to a Mystery Writers dinner tonight and some of the people were

talking about the old McFadden. They also put out True Detective or

something. I also found out my friend wrote seven McFadden (full-length)

romances--she then nmoved to Dell with her editor and wrote five. 


Lucky woman. Interesting, huh. I didn't know Mcfadden had published BOOKs.


Gail                        Subj:    Re:Sinus problems

Date:  96-09-04 23:16:21 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


BTW, I have had accupuncture and accupressure. Find out about insurance

coverage. In some states the insurer has to cover it, so they will. I

actually preferred accupressure, but accunpuncture is okay (so is

chirorpractic--in fact my current chiro said that it helped his allergies a

lot).

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Rest, relax, and party!

Date:  96-09-05 00:48:23 edt

From:  Magicwrd        

.


Jodi-


Hope your offer on the mobile home will be accepted.  It's nice to have space

that belongs just to you.  Of course, then you also get the headaches of home

ownership too, but it's worth it.


We're getting a new roof on our house and they're starting the work tomorrow.

I don't think I'm going to be able to get anything done for a week.


Susan                        Subj:    Re:sinus surgery

Date:  96-09-05 00:53:03 edt

From:  Magicwrd        

.


Cindi-


Hope you're feeling better.  My dad had the same surgery and it really did

help him.


Susan                        Subj:    Re:Checks came!

Date:  96-09-05 00:54:41 edt

From:  Magicwrd        

.


Connie-


That's so neat that someone wrote in about one of you stories.  It really

brings home that fact that your writing is out there touching people's lives

and making them think.


Susan                        Subj:    Re:Checks came!

Date:  96-09-05 02:19:02 edt

From:  Gtlhrt          

.


Okay Connie now turn to page 13.  Top picture.Row one has 9 people showing.

With your finger on the first person on right in row one...count and move to

the left...1,2,3,4,5.  Look back to row 2... ME!  See I did shed some ugly

fat!  Okay so you need a magnifying glass!!!!


Tina                        Subj:    Girls in RWR

Date:  96-09-05 15:05:44 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

.


Tina - LOLOL!!!  Okay, I see you - boy, but you do look different!  (From the

picture you sent me, I mean!)  Now where's Lynda there & which one's Amy?  Is

Phyllis somewhere in that shot, too?



Connie                        Subj:    Re:Girls in RWR

Date:  96-09-05 16:16:12 edt

From:  Punkybean       

.


Connie,


I don't have my RWR yet, but Phyllis tried to keep her fat behind out of

photos. <g>


Phyllis                        Subj:    Re:Girls in RWR

Date:  96-09-05 19:10:34 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


Girls,


We need to see you in person! 

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Girls in RWR

Date:  96-09-05 19:13:04 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

.


Phyllis - Not fair!  I wanted to see you!!!  (And besides - the gals all

verified, you're a cutie!)


<G>

Connie                        Subj:    Re:Sinus problems

Date:  96-09-05 21:33:21 edt

From:  CMyersTex       

.


Well, the surgery really wasn't that bad.  I'm just tired, mainly, and that

should go away soon.  i talked to a lot of people before I decided to go this

route, but everyone I spoke with said it was the right decision for them.  I

am just tired of spending half my life on antibiotics for one sinus infection

after another.  


Thanks for all the nice notes and prayers.


Cindi                        Subj:    Re:Oct. TR

Date:  96-09-05 21:35:51 edt

From:  CMyersTex       

.


Oh my goodness!  no -- that story is not mine -- shocking title, though.  My

story is told from the husband's pov.  He talks about how perfect he thought

his wife was, then he finds out she was starving their little girl.  My title

was "I had to betray my wife to save my child."


Cindi                        Subj:    Re:Girls in RWR

Date:  96-09-05 22:10:25 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

.


Phyllis-

If you are fat, I'm tall, blonde, and demure.

:-D      Lynda C.                        Subj:    More agent bites

Date:  96-09-05 22:13:38 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

.


Okay Gals-

I'm batting .500 with these agents now.  I just got another positive response

from my batch of ten queries.  That makes two yes's, one no, and one fix

this, this, this, and then maybe.  (Would that mean I'm batting .750)?


Wish me luck!  (Preferably "Luck of the Draw")!   ;-)

Lynda C.                        Subj:    Re:More agent bites

Date:  96-09-05 23:27:00 edt

From:  Punkybean       

.


Way to go on your positive response.  I've got all my fingers crossed for

you.


Phyllis                        Subj:    Re:Girls in RWR

Date:  96-09-06 00:12:47 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


Lynda,


Well, we're definite that you're not demure. 


But you sure must be

talented!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Do you realize how hard it is to get an agent to respond to anything less

than a rewrite of the Bible, girl? We'll keep all hundred or so of our

fingers crossed for you.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Sinus problems

Date:  96-09-06 00:13:41 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


Cindi,


Glad it's getting better. I'm sure you'll be happy you did it when you can

breathe again.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Oct. TR

Date:  96-09-06 00:15:03 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


Cindi,


Terrible subject. I'm sure it's a good story. I guess you heard about the

woman in NY.......


Gail                        Subj:    Re:More agent bites

Date:  96-09-06 08:33:41 edt

From:  LaRitaMari      

.


Lynda --


Fantastic!!!!!...but not surprising in the least!!  They recognize talent

when they see it!


Larita                        Subj:    Re:More agent bites

Date:  96-09-06 15:37:02 edt

From:  J00DLynn        

.


YEAH on the agents.... sounds great for you!


Jodi                        Subj:    Busy

Date:  96-09-06 15:38:14 edt

From:  J00DLynn        

.


DOES IT EVER END??


I've got to quit my day job.... ;0  :)  but really this move is stressing me

out!


Jodi                        Subj:    Re:Busy

Date:  96-09-06 15:39:26 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


Jodi,


It's like my friend says: It's Friday. Only two more work days until Monday!

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Golden Heart

Date:  96-09-06 16:02:04 edt

From:  Asandrin        

.


How many of us are going to enter the Golden Heart this year?  If I'm

dedicated and write 2 pages each and every day I will be done with my book

right on time.  (the dedicated part is what's worrying me!)  Lynda wants me

to enter three books.  For such a short poop, she sure is a slave driver.  I

agree with whoever said we should try and get as many people from this folder

to enter (was that you, Connie?)


Amy                        Subj:    Re:Lunar Phases

Date:  96-09-06 16:04:17 edt

From:  Asandrin        

.


Okay, I've had enough of this Lunar cycle rejection phase karma do do stuff.

Someone come and get me when it's over.  I'll be out back in the hamock with

a Mai Tai!


Amy                        Subj:    Re:Patty - TR

Date:  96-09-06 17:32:11 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

.


Connie,  Thanks for checking.  I don't suppose anyone likes to be dumped, but

this one just seems to be taking a long time.  Maybe you're right and I'll

have three in one issue.  That would be so cool!

Patty                        Subj:    Re:sinus surgery

Date:  96-09-06 17:35:54 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

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Connie,  If your son has fall allergies that effect his eyes, it probably

will get better after the first frost.  My eyes are irriating me, too, from

allegies.  When I opened my eyes this morning I had to remind myself I wasn't

losing my sight, that the blurriness would clear up after a steamy shower.  

Patty                        Subj:    Re:More agent bites

Date:  96-09-06 17:39:31 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

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Great news Lynda!  Everytime you open your mailbox must seem like the "Luck

of the Draw."

Patty                        Subj:    rejection blues

Date:  96-09-06 18:46:30 edt

From:  Gtlhrt          

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Amy why is it when I get a rejection and a acceptance in the mail the same

day I still moan about the rejection?  And lately my rejections are nicer

than my acceptance letters??!!


Tina                        Subj:    Re:More agent bites

Date:  96-09-06 19:10:17 edt

From:  CMyersTex       

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Congratulaltions, Lynda.  You're on a roll!


Cindi                        Subj:    Re:Agents

Date:  96-09-06 20:53:10 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Lynda - Let us know as soon as you hear something!!!  That's great - you're

one of the best examples of keeping the avenues open, and something's gonna

hit!


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Busy

Date:  96-09-06 20:54:25 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Gail - Here, here!  It doesn't end, Jodi!  :-D  And lest we forget:

tomorrow, I have to clean the house, too, before anything else.  Then watch

an Armand Assante movie, and then...work, work, work!!


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Golden Heart

Date:  96-09-06 20:56:39 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Amy - Yes, I think as many of us as are able should try!  Don't even worry

about winning or losing - we'll just be in it & cheer each other on!  It'll

be just another mile along the journey - but what fun to walk it together!!


(Also:  that 2 page a day rule sounds excellent.  I think of it as 1,000

words per day that I have to accomplish, which is around the same amount!)


Connie                        Subj:    Re:sinus surgery

Date:  96-09-06 20:58:07 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Patty - That's exactly what Brandon has, the same way you describe it!!  I

had to put a warm compress on his eyes just to get everything off them & get

them to open this morning!


Connie                        Subj:    worse than rejection

Date:  96-09-06 21:24:13 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Fellow Sufferers,


Here's my worse-than-rejection story. 


I got my mail this evening and with it a magazine with a story of mine in it.


Good? Well, I never got an acceptance letter. I never signed a contract. And

I withdrew the story and sold it to someone else.


It's like once something leaves your hands, anything can happen. So now I

have to go to this other woman and tell her about this. Plus I couldn't call

these people (they apologized in a note) because they are unlisted and didn't

give me a phone number. So darn unprofessional!!!! It's nice to be wanted,

but could they not have mentioned it first?

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Busy

Date:  96-09-06 21:25:48 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Connie,


Which Armand Assante movie? I love that movie Bellazaire the Cajun. Did we

discuss this? My memory is on the downswing.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Busy

Date:  96-09-06 22:02:05 edt

From:  Gtlhrt          

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Oh my gosh Gail...that is incredible??!!!   Do they at least pay well????


Tina


Lynda I forgot to congragulate you..CONGRATS SWEETIE!   Please e me and let

me know what you want to put in the newsletter.  I swear you are the only one

in a 70+ organisation who has something sold or pending every single month.

You ARE on a roll!!                        Subj:    Re:Busy

Date:  96-09-06 23:20:48 edt

From:  J00DLynn        

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Gail,


I love that! I know that's how it feels


Jodi                        Subj:    Re:Golden Heart

Date:  96-09-06 23:21:25 edt

From:  J00DLynn        

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I don't know what "golden heart' is...a Romance book comp? Right?


Jodi                        Subj:    Settings

Date:  96-09-06 23:26:58 edt

From:  J00DLynn        

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I'm still fighting with the setting in my book. I want to use real Lakes and

Rivers....but then I'd need to use the city names...then if I do, i just know

how much I can make fictional...   Like I may want to move the real indian

reservaion about 60miles North and people who live there(Where I grew up) and

anyone with a map would know that's wrong..I just don't know what to do. I

guess use real names and hope no one cares about the changes I make. Anyone

have this problem?


Jodi                        Subj:    Re:Settings

Date:  96-09-07 00:03:27 edt

From:  LaRitaMari      

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Jodi --


I'm using a real town and taking some real places from it, but many of the

places (churches, etc.) are fictional, esp. since they won't be portrayed in

a very nice way...


Larita                        Subj:    More than just BAD girls

Date:  96-09-07 11:51:06 edt

From:  JWBOIES         

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Have to tell you about a few Saturdays ago at the pet store.  A couple came

in with their parrots, macaws and cockatoos for entertainment.  The one

parrot sang a song, said several things that escape me, but my favorite was

when he said, "I'm a BAAAAAAAD bird!"


Jodi -- hasn't anyone told you about the holiday season in retail?  You keep

saying it will get better in October, and I hate to be the one to tell you

that by the end of December, you will want to sleep for a month!  But I love

it.  Guess I'm a junky for the holiday spirit when you work  retail.  


And isn't it the truth that we think more about a rejection than an

acceptance?  Anyone have hints on the attitude shift we need to make to

celebrate our successes?  How many people wish they could write and sell?

When we do succeed it is a wondrous thing -- this should be the event that

sticks in our mind.  Not the other stuff.  


Lynda -- My son was so proud of the day he turned 18 and could legally buy

cigarettes in Minnesota.  Not that I'm happy that he smokes, but I would have

like to have seen it when he proudly showed the clerk his drivers license and

she wished him, "Happy Birthday."


I always enjoy my visit here, but it's time for me to get on with the

Saturday errands.  Jan


                        Subj:    Re:worse than rejection

Date:  96-09-07 12:29:48 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

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Gail, What a nightmare!  And you're right, it is unprofessional.  Too bad you

did all the right things, withdrawing the story before submitting it

elsewhere, and still got burned.

Patty                        Subj:    Re:Settings

Date:  96-09-07 12:34:13 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

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Jodi,  I'm doing the same as Larita.  My book is set in Boston, in fact in a

actual Boston neighborhood, but I've renamed the street to one that doesn't

actually exist so I can add my own elements.  I'm blending a lot of real

features of the city and of the real hospital the story is set in with

ficional elements.  I think it gives you the best of both approaches;  being

able to use your creativity to invent realities and being able to borrow from

real life. 

Patty                        Subj:    Re:worse than rejection

Date:  96-09-07 13:21:48 edt

From:  Sem Duvida      

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Gail-


If it's not one thing it's another.  We writers can never catch a break, even

when we're getting published.  Maybe somebody didn't get God's story right in

the Bible and he's been publishing writers ever since. (I meant to say,

punishing, but maybe getting published is punishment.  At least in this

case.) 


Susan                        Subj:    Re:Settings

Date:  96-09-07 13:28:28 edt

From:  Sem Duvida      

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Jodi-


Have you ever read Jenni Cruisie's books?  I'm sure lots of authors do this,

but she's who I'm thinking of off the top of my head.  She made up a city and

I think she's used it in all her books.  I'm sure she bases the descriptions

on a real city, but she just made up another name for it.  You could do that

so if you make some stuff up, no one will ever know.


My novel is set San Francisco and I have to keep going around checking to

make sure I'm describing the places I talk about accurately.  I just

discovered that one of the character's apartments isn't quite like I

remembered, but hopefully no one will be pulling over to the side of the Bay

Bridge to check it out.  Next time I'm definitely making up a city.


Susan                        Subj:    Re:More than just BAD girls

Date:  96-09-07 13:30:33 edt

From:  Sem Duvida      

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Jan-


Cute story about the bird.  He'd be great for a secondary character in a

story.


Susan                        Subj:    Denise

Date:  96-09-07 14:15:01 edt

From:  Gtlhrt          

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BTW  I was wondering what happened to Denise...her modem got fried.  So she

and Lynda are in the shop together I guess!


Tina                        Subj:    Re:Settings

Date:  96-09-07 15:27:43 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Jodi - Interesting topic!  My novel is set in Miami, Florida, where there's a

large concentration of Cubans.  Like Patty, I'm staying away from being too

specific with streetnames, but staying true to the area itself, to give it

that flavor.


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Settings

Date:  96-09-07 15:30:56 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Susan - that's neat, that she made up a city & uses it in her books!  Have

you ever noticed, too, that the setting really adds flavor to the story?  The

city I've used the most for the characters to be "on location"  <G> is New

York City.  I've used Miami a few times, but the Big Apple never seems to be

at a loss for sparking the imagination!


Connie

                        Subj:    Re:Denise

Date:  96-09-07 15:31:38 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Tina - I was wondering, too!  Hope you come back soon, Denise!


Connie                        Subj:    Re:More than just BAD girls

Date:  96-09-07 15:36:20 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Jan - Yeah, I like that story, too!!  By the way, the movie I watched

yesterday with Armand (sigh!) was "Fatal Instinct" (did you see that one,

Gail?).  It was hilarious!  There was a part where he goes to the pet shop

after having an affair; he feels guilty and wants to get his wife (who's

plotting to murder him) a gift.  Rosie O'Donnell has a cameo as the pet shop

lady, and she's screaming over all these chattering birds,  "Most men get

their wives flowers when they cheat.  You get her a live animal!!!"


I thought you'd enjoy that, working in a pet shop!


<G>

Connie (who thinks that whole line is filled with one crazy idea for a

confession!!  Remember the Flintstones, with the dodo bird who told on Fred

by screeching,  "Frantic City!  Frantic City!" instead of ATLANTIC City!

LOLOL!)

                        Subj:    news

Date:  96-09-07 16:08:43 edt

From:  Gtlhrt          

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Guess what? Mail just arrived.  I won the Writers' Journal Contest I entered.

I get published in the Jan/Feb issue and get a free copy of the 1997 issue of

Writer's Market. I'm thrilled as I can't afford a WM and have to keep goin to

the library!!  


And I was just sitting heregetting a major headache trying to work on my

novel entry for the Silouhette contest...who's deadline is the 15th.  I don't

know what it is but if I just say the word novel I get a stress headache.  So

I have to psych myself out and pretend I'm writing a short story!


Tina                        Subj:    Re:news

Date:  96-09-07 18:58:24 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Tina,


You're a winner, baby doll. And we know you. We can even ask you to look up

listings for us in your prize. Sensational.

Gail                        Subj:    Getting punished

Date:  96-09-07 19:00:53 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Guys,


And the much worse news is that there's a whole long editorial in this

iditoic magazine that is rampant anti-Semitism. Can you believe that?


I must be in the Twilight Zone. If God wanted to publish me, couldn't he have

published me in the Atlantic Monthly?

Gail                        Subj:    Locales

Date:  96-09-07 19:04:04 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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I use some real locales as story settings, which is why I have good maps

nowadays and other research material.


I think it's fine to make up street names in real towns.


I set a novel in Michigan--have never been there, but I can imagine what's

it's like, can't I?


Connie, I've used South Florida, too, but I know the geography a bit. I guess

you do, too.It's certainly an interesting setting.

Gail                        Subj:    DI4

Date:  96-09-07 20:15:28 edt

From:  Gtlhrt          

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So are we DI4 ing???? I may not ever get in but I am determined!  It's a good

excersize in patience longsuffering and it helps my writing skills!  What's

up this month Connie?


Tina                        Subj:    Re:Getting punished

Date:  96-09-07 22:43:26 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Gail - That's the worst!!!  That editor actually has time for that?  That

editorial doesn't sound worth the paper it's printed on.


Connie                        Subj:    Re:news

Date:  96-09-07 22:44:08 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Tina - It's a banner year for you!!!  Congratulations!  (Imagine what NEXT

year's going to bring??)


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Locales

Date:  96-09-07 22:45:24 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Gail - LOLOL!!!  You've used Michigan & haven't been there?  Hey - for my

first novel, I used Vermont, and I've NEVER been there!  (But movies do help,

don't they?)


<G>

Connie

                        Subj:    Re:DI4

Date:  96-09-07 22:47:48 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Is everyone game for DI4?  (Tina - I didn't get into DI3, either!  I ran my

storyline past Pat, but she passed on "Love Bites When Your Boyfriend's a

Vampire", so I sent it to one of the other gals!)  I'll join in for DI4, and

hey - any takers for the coordinator?  Here's your predecessors:  Larita,

Patty & me!


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Golden Heart

Date:  96-09-07 22:50:41 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Does anyone know how much of the novel gets sent it originally for GH?  I

didn't see anything in the new RWR about it (but I thought there was supposed

to be something in there).  All I saw was that blue slip to become a judge,

which I think would be kinda interesting, but don't know what would be

expected.


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Rewrite

Date:  96-09-07 22:53:49 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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I have a rewrite to do for Pat (which got sidetracked by about 18,000 words

of novel!!  Isn't it maddening how you get focused in on one thing?) which I

want to complete this weekend.  It's a whole new ending and - get this - my

hero's Puerto Rican!


With a Puerto Rican confession hero & a Cuban novel hero, I'm having a ball

with these ethic characters!


<G>

Connie                        Subj:    Re:Getting punished

Date:  96-09-07 22:58:27 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Connie,


It was unbelievable stuff. The rest of the magazine was normal. Why in the

world????

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Locales

Date:  96-09-07 22:59:19 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Connie,


For instance, I know what a small town is like. I know what weather is like.

Ya know?


Apparently you do know.

Gail                        Subj:    ethnic

Date:  96-09-07 23:01:36 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Connie,


Go with ethnic. It's in. Big market there, girl. Did I mention there is a

whole section of black romance at the B&N at 53rd and Lex? Well, there is.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:More than just BAD girls

Date:  96-09-08 00:45:48 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

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Jan-

That's funny about your son!  :-)

Now let's just hope he kicks the habit, right?

Lynda C.                        Subj:    Re:Settings

Date:  96-09-08 00:48:18 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

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Jodi et al....

Luck of the Draw is set in a fictional west suburb of Denver which, gosh

golly, seems to resemble the city I work for.  Coincidence???  ;-)

Lynda C.

(The names have been changed to protect the idiotic, irritating, and those

who sign my paychecks)!                        Subj:    Re:news

Date:  96-09-08 00:49:38 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

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Tina!!!

That's fabulous!

You are just hitting big lately.  Have you bought a lottery ticket yet??

Lynda C.                        Subj:    Re:Getting punished

Date:  96-09-08 00:50:40 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

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Gail-

I haven't been able to comment yet.....

I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT HAPPENED!!!!!!!!!

Tell me more.

Lynda C.                        Subj:    good news, take 2

Date:  96-09-08 00:57:35 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

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Hi Gals!

Gosh I'm so excited about this........

I'm attending the Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers conference this weekend (it

ends tomorrow), and I was fortunate enough to get an agent appointment with

an agent I desperately wanted to meet.  Anyway, to make a long story short,

she wants me to send Luck of the Draw----THE WHOLE THING----and all that I

have done of Unguarded Hearts, and the best part is, she told me she would've

taken it RIGHT THERE had I brought it with me (which they always tell you is

a big no-no)!  Isn't that totally cool???  Of course, I know now that a

request for a full ms doesn't necessarily mean anything, but I'm still

hangin' out up here on cloud nine for a few anyway!

Lynda C.

P.S.  Actually, I had two agent appointments.  The other one went

exceptionally well, too.  He requested partials on both AND copies of all my

confession stories.    :-D     See, they do come in handy!!                        Subj:    Re:good

news, take 2

Date:  96-09-08 00:59:00 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

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Sorry about all my pathetically bad grammar in the last post.  It's late, and

the thin air on cloud nine is affecting my brain.

Lynda C.                        Subj:    Re:good news, take 2

Date:  96-09-08 01:01:06 edt

From:  Gtlhrt          

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LYNDA!!!!  That's sooo great. WOW!  You have this great personality though

that really helps you connect with people.  That really is powerful, then

they read your stuff and zap you are signing autographs for me!

;)


Tina                          Subj:    Re:Settings

Date:  96-09-08 02:16:03 edt

From:  CMyersTex       

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Jodi,

I usually use real lakes, rivers, mountains, etc, but make up the name of the

town.  If you're going to move a real place, then why not just include one of

those 'note to the reader' at the end of the book.  I've seen historical

authors do that if they're changing something in history in order to make

their story work.  I'm willing to forgive a change if the author explains it.

If she doesn't say anything, I'm inclined to think she's just dumb!


Cindi                        Subj:    Re:news

Date:  96-09-08 02:19:34 edt

From:  CMyersTex       

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Congratulations, TIna.


That's wonderful!


Cindi.                        Subj:    Re:Golden Heart

Date:  96-09-08 02:26:11 edt

From:  CMyersTex       

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As a past Golden Heart entrant, I can give you the scoop, girls.  You enter a

synopsis of the book and the beginning pages, up to a total of 55 pages.  So

if you have a 5-page synopsis, you can enter 50 pages of the manuscript. Make

that the first 50.


I judged last year and it was a lot of fun.  Frustrating, though, because all

you get to do is give one numerical score per entry.  No comments or

anything.  And that's a frustrating thing about entering the contest, too.

When it's over, all you have are these numbers that don't tell you much.  Of

course, if you're the winner, or even a finalist, it's a big deal, Soooo


I'm planning on entering two manuscripts -- one of which is only up to

Chapter 6, so I'd better get cracking!


(Of course, I always hope that some time before December, I'll get a call

from my agent on the two manuscripts I have out there and I won't be eligible

to enter.  Wouldn't that be a kick!  I remember talking to Arnette Lamb once

and she said when she sold her first book, one of her first thoughts was "I

don't have to enter the Golden Heart this year.")


Cindi                        Subj:    Re:Getting punished

Date:  96-09-08 02:27:05 edt

From:  CMyersTex       

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OK Gail, the suspense is killing me.  What magazine was this?


Cindi                        Subj:    Re:good news, take 2

Date:  96-09-08 02:28:48 edt

From:  CMyersTex       

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Oh, Lynda, can I touch you?  This is so great.  Good luck!


Cindi                        Subj:    Re:Locales

Date:  96-09-08 10:21:53 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Gail - Exactly!!!  You know, there was a movie a while back about a

businesswoman who left the fast lane in the city to raise a child in Vermont.

I remember it looked so beautiful, lots of snow, small-town kind of folk, and

said,  "no problem!"


<G>

Connie

                        Subj:    Re:More than just BAD girls

Date:  96-09-08 10:25:37 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Jan - I agree with Lynda.  I don't know if he realizes it yet, but he CAN'T

quit when he wants to.  It's not that easy (I know - I average at least a

pack a day!).  I'm watching the effects of smoking long-term destroy my

husband's aunt, and still, it's hard to turn away from them.


I hope he stops now, because the longer it's in your system, the harder it is

to get rid of.


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Settings

Date:  96-09-08 10:26:12 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Lynda - LOLOL!!!  Great postscript!!!


Connie                        Subj:    Re:good news, take 2

Date:  96-09-08 10:28:50 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Lynda - Excellent!!!  The whole manuscript is good, too, because it saves on

sending the rest of it and keeping you going nuts waiting twice!!  Lynda,

that's not unusual about the copies of the confessions:  an agent once asked

me to do the same thing.  It gives them an idea of your style & what you're

capable of, plus it's your PUBLISHED WORK!!!  Let us know as soon as you hear

anything!


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Golden Heart

Date:  96-09-08 10:31:53 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Cindi - Thanks for the info!  I think I'll do it!  It should be fun, but I'll

probably find the rating system frustrating, too.  It's unthinkable to reduce

someone's "baby" to numbers, but it'll be nice to be a part of reading up and

coming stars' work!!


Connie                        Subj:    Guess what I found?

Date:  96-09-08 10:34:21 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Hey - I don't know how many of y'all (got that from Debby!) will be

interested, but in RWR, page 8, there's 2 contests coming up for publishing

contracts for middle-grade and YA novels.  I am definitely going to enter 1

of my babies in each, stories I've had up in my closet for a while.


If anyone's interested by doesn't get RWR, e-mail me & I'll send you a copy

of the info!


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Getting punished

Date:  96-09-08 11:05:24 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Lynda,


Actually, these people are in Denver/Lakewood. The editor's name is John

Moravec--unlisted number, with an address on Colfax. Maybe you can arrest

them for stupidity.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:good news, take 2

Date:  96-09-08 11:07:28 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Lynda,


You are really there. You are just about in the bookstores. I am so excited

for you. 

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Getting punished

Date:  96-09-08 11:09:59 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Cindi,


Sorry--thought I said. I submitted to Pleiades and was published by Epic

Journal--sounds innocent enough, right? The listing was in Short Story and

Novel Markets--you know, the Writers' Digest book.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Locales

Date:  96-09-08 11:10:51 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


Connie,


Baby Boom with Diane Keaton. Cute movie--cute Sam Shepherd.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:news

Date:  96-09-08 12:09:52 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

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Congratulations Tina.  What was your entry?

Patty                        Subj:    Re:good news, take 2

Date:  96-09-08 12:13:47 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

.


Lynda, The agent wanted to see your confessional stories?  Wow, that's

encouraging news.

Patty                        Subj:    Re:Golden Heart

Date:  96-09-08 14:50:00 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

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Cindi-

That's so funny!  Amy and I were talking last night about "hoping" we weren't

eligible to enter the Golden Heart this year because of a sale!  I'm glad

other think that way, too!

Lynda C.                        Subj:    Re:More than just BAD girls

Date:  96-09-08 14:51:16 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

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Connie-

AAAAAACK!!!  I would've never pegged you as a smoker!!!   Quit, honey,

please?!?!  We want you around forever!

Lynda C.                        Subj:    Re:Getting punished

Date:  96-09-08 14:52:52 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

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Gail-

Please e-mail me with details about these guys.  I would LOVE to do a little

private sleuthing into their practices!

Lynda C.                        Subj:    Re:Getting punished

Date:  96-09-08 14:53:38 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

.


BTW, Gail----Colfax is Denver's red light district.  That ought to tell you

something.  <sigh>

Lynda C.                        Subj:    Re:Getting punished

Date:  96-09-08 16:14:52 edt

From:  Gtlhrt          

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Connie- I love Baby Boom ...own the movie.  Now since Lynda said it first I

must tell you, I quit smoking 8 years ago as I watched a wonderful patient of

mine die of cancer.  I spent 10 years giving chemo and finally realized that

is not how I want to die!!  I keep a large jar of hard candy and I fight the

battle of the bulge but I have more choices this way.


Tina                        Subj:    Re:Golden Heart

Date:  96-09-08 16:18:24 edt

From:  J00DLynn        

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Did I ask this, what is Golden Heart? I forget- 


Jodi                        Subj:    Re:good news, take 2

Date:  96-09-08 16:19:22 edt

From:  J00DLynn        

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Lynda-

WOW, may I have some of you're good luck- or should I say talent, cause I'm

sure that's what it is! Way to go! 


Jodi                        Subj:    Re:good news, take 2

Date:  96-09-08 16:48:47 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

.


Thanks Jodi!  (Blush)

Lynda C.                        Subj:    Re:More than just BAD girls

Date:  96-09-08 17:20:43 edt

From:  LaRitaMari      

.


Connie --

I second Lynda's words...I about fell off my chair when I read your post!!  I

just never pictured you as a smoker, either!!!  <G>


Larita                        Subj:    Re:Locales

Date:  96-09-08 19:41:53 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Gail - That was it!!!  I was trying to remember the name & saying "Diane - oh

- Diane - I love that actress - what's her name???"  And lovely Sam

Shephard!!


<G>

Connie (Gail - you know what's sneaky & works, too?  Travel brochures - I

actually England once!!)


                        Subj:    Re:More than just BAD girls

Date:  96-09-08 19:44:57 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Lynda - I know!  <G>  You get to remind me from Carolina (I got the sweetest

reminder to stop, too, on the east with Gail!)


Here's the funny part:  I NEVER smoked as a teenager.  I swiped a couple from

a friend, but I didn't inhale.  After living with my husband over a year (his

whole family smokes & is prone to emphysema.  Lovely, huh?  My dad also has a

touch of it!), I said,  "What does he see in this?"  I hope to stop again

soon - but last time I did, I ate those Werther butter candies by the

bagful!!!


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Smoking

Date:  96-09-08 19:48:13 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Tina - What a hard (and painful) way to learn!  My uncle had a tumor in his

throat after smoking for many years and radiation treatments that actually

burned all his salivary glands.  To counter having his mouth feel too dry, he

has to have more fluids during the day.  He gets upset with me & my cousin

(his son) and tells us,  "I really hope neither of you have to go through

what I did."


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Golden Heart

Date:  96-09-08 19:50:30 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Jodi - I think you did!  Sorry about that!!  Golden Heart is, from my

understanding (Cindi, correct me if I'm wrong) one of the most prestigious

awards given to the unpublished writer of booklength romance.  It's sponsored

by the Romance Writers of America.  Back up a few posts, because Cindi gave

excellent prerequisites on it.


If you're interested, let us know if you needs RWA's address!


Connie                        Subj:    Re:More than just BAD girls

Date:  96-09-08 21:23:35 edt

From:  Luv2rit         

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Connie,

   If you were here in Tennessee, I'd tie you down and tear up every little

cigarette in sight to get you to quit smoking.  I told you about my mother

being nearly 100% paralyzed for over 7 years before dying three years ago.

Yes, it was the result of a bad medical procedure, but cigarettes got her

there in the first place.  When my mother was in her twenties, she was told

that she looked like a cross between Natalie Wood and Liz Taylor.  When she

was in her thirties, she looked more like she was in her sixties because of

the toxins she inhaled, robbing her once-beautiful skin of oxygen.  You may

consider this a lecture about the dangers of smoking, but you're a friend,

and I want you to love a long, happy life.  Just think, if you quit now, your

lungs should be clear and the effects the cigarettes have already had on your

heart should be gone within just a few years.  Please!

                                                            Deb                        Subj:    Re:More

than just BAD girls

Date:  96-09-08 22:57:58 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Connie,


That's funny. I just bought two bags of that candy to take to work. We are

all eating a ton of junk there now. 


I bought a U.S. travel book and sometimes use my CD encyclopedia for

research, Connie. I wasn't going to jump on you right here about smoking, but

now that you brought it up...

Gail                        Subj:    Re:More than just BAD girls

Date:  96-09-08 23:00:00 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


Deb,


My mom died of emphysema. Not much fun watching someone struggling just to

take a breath.

Gail                        Subj:    GH

Date:  96-09-08 23:28:58 edt

From:  Gtlhrt          

.


Jodi- We were really impressed in Dallas this year to note that the majority

of Golden Heart finalists-all unpublished at entry time- had agents and/ or

sold their manuscripts by the time Dallas came around.  If you make it to the

finals it means you are marketable and they are knocking at your door.  


Save your pennies Jodi and join RWR!  It is very much worth it!  Then get

involved on the local level.  I didn't realize how much I didn't know till I

started getting involved.


Tina                        Subj:    Re:Smoking

Date:  96-09-09 08:41:57 edt

From:  Gruesome        

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     My mother had a near fatal heart attack two months before her 57th

birthday.  Her MD attributed it directly to smoking.  My mother smoked a half

pack or less a day.  But, when she played cards she smoked more.  It was

during one of these marathon poker/smoking sessions that she "threw a clot"

Her blood vessels spasmed and caused a blood clot.


     By the time she got to the hospital, she barely had a blood pressure.

It was touch and go for a while.  The most miserable time in my life.


     She and my father quit smoking on the spot.  They gave her medication to

dissolve the clot.  She has been walking 40 minutes or more a day on her

treadmill.  She's in better shape than ever.


     Oh, yeah, hard candies(starlight mints have no fat) helped her, too.

But, nothing gave her incentive like the heart attack.  She quit for awhile

after seeing her sister die of lung cancer due to smoking.  Now she says

she'll never start again.


     I know the trouble I have with dieting.  I'm sure quitting smoking is

difficult, too. 


     Sorry for the lecture.  


Michele                        Subj:    Re:news

Date:  96-09-09 10:11:49 edt

From:  Asandrin        

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Tina:


Congrats on the contest win!  That's excellent.


Amy                        Subj:    Re:news

Date:  96-09-09 14:32:45 edt

From:  Asandrin        

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Connie:


Everyone's said it.....I concur.  We love and need you around.  Please quit.


Amy                        Subj:    Re:Smoking

Date:  96-09-09 18:52:07 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


Michele,


So glad to hear a success story for your mother!!! Glad she's still with us

and exercising.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Racism

Date:  96-09-09 19:46:17 edt

From:  IRWriter        

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Lord Connie, do you still have to work with this guy?  My husband is Jewish,

and stuff like that really brings it home to me.  I'm a Wasp, who has never

really experienced that first hand, until we got married.  Next time he

starts, just ask him if he was Jewish in a previous life....

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:Checks came!

Date:  96-09-09 19:47:41 edt

From:  IRWriter        

.


Hey Connie, I saw your story on the cover of TR, and KNEW it was yours!  I

got bumped again from TE ;-(.  I'm hoping, because I made a slight reference

to Thanksgiving in the story, that they are saving it for the November issue!


Sherril                        Subj:    Re:Releases

Date:  96-09-09 19:48:27 edt

From:  IRWriter        

.


Well Cindi, we're keeping each other in BUMP CITY!  

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:Sinus problems

Date:  96-09-09 19:50:49 edt

From:  IRWriter        

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Deb, I tried acupunture for my migraines, I've tried EVERYTHING for my

migraines, short of chopping off my head.  It didn't work for me, but I'm a

hard case, NOTHING works.  

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:Sinus problems

Date:  96-09-09 19:51:55 edt

From:  IRWriter        

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I forgot...I have a friend whose had 2 sinus surgeries, and they did help her

problem somewhat.  By the way, acupuncture isn't painful at all...in fact,

it's kind of relaxing.

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:Sinus problems

Date:  96-09-09 19:54:04 edt

From:  IRWriter        

.


Cindi, hope you're feeling better in no time, and breathin' better too!

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:worse than rejection

Date:  96-09-09 19:56:47 edt

From:  IRWriter        

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Oh my gosh!  You're right Gail, that is VERY unprofessional, but it seems to

happen more than we'd believe.  See, people are Clamoring over your work!

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:news

Date:  96-09-09 19:59:08 edt

From:  IRWriter        

.


All right Tina!  Congrats!  I'll look for that issue at Barnes & Noble.

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:Getting punished

Date:  96-09-09 19:59:42 edt

From:  IRWriter        

.


Gail, you crack me UP!!!

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:More than just BAD girls

Date:  96-09-09 20:06:29 edt

From:  IRWriter        

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Connie, I have to add my two cents here.  My dad passed away in 1995, right

before I joined up with all you lovely ladies.  He'd had emphysema for the

past 6 years or so, and I want to tell you, it was terrible to watch a

healthy, vital man reduced to a teather of plastic line that reached to his

oxygen tank.  He smoked for years, but only 1 or 2 cigarettes a day.  I'm

firmly convinced that his disease was caused by second hand smoke from my

mom, who smoked 2 to 3 packs a day for years before she quit.  It would have

killed my mom to know that she caused that in my dad, I'm glad she didn't

know.  Connie, from all of us who love you and care about you, and know what

cigarettes can do first hand, please quit.  

Sherril                        Subj:    Writer's Conference

Date:  96-09-09 20:11:47 edt

From:  IRWriter        

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I just got back from a weekend in Las Vegas at the Reader's Digest Writers

Conference.  I went 3 years ago, and met the editor I've sold 7 stories to,

so I figured it would pay to go again.  If any of you are interested in

writing for magazines, and have the chance to attend one of these, I would

recommend it!  I spoke with 5 editors personally, and 4 asked to see my

queries and proposals!  I'm pretty excited, and pretty busy trying to follow

up!  Just to meet and talk to so many editors at once is fun...I even talked

with Phil Osborne, one of the editors for Reader's Digest.  He didn't want my

idea, oh well.  He also said something that should make us all feel better

about rewriting...he said one of his writers said "You don't write for the

Digest, you REwrite for the Digest."  He said to expect 2 to 3 rewrites...so,

we are in VERY good company here!

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:Smoking

Date:  96-09-09 20:58:28 edt

From:  J00DLynn        

.


okay, I've never smoked, or shall I say inhaled- but my dad used to smoke as

I grew up and I believe that mad me a sick child. I was always sick and it

was usally BAD> I even had pnemonia(sp?) and other lung/resp problems. So I

know it's bad for eveyone around a smoker too, not just the smoker.


Jodi                         Subj:    Re:Smoking

Date:  96-09-09 21:30:57 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

.


Wow!  What a response!  <G>  And what an outpouring of love!  You guys are

really kind.  When I do go for it (you have to be very psyched to do it),

I'll let you guys be among the first to know!  I think this is something,

especially from what I've read in your posts, that has effected at least one

person in our lives that we love.  Phyllis would remember the last time I

quit (I told her about my new habit at that time - 2 cookies with tea!  <G>),

and I stayed off for about 2 months, I think, until I sent the novel to

Silhouette - and then I got all nervous & crazy again!


And smoking did nothing to help, since it got rejected anyway!!!  I don't get

offended at all that you guys encourage me to stop; I take that as concerned

affection, which you can never have too much of!  I hope soon to take your

very, very good advice!


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Racism

Date:  96-09-09 21:59:25 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

.


Sherril - No, luckily, it's a BIG company, so I don't see him that often!!  I

know what you mean, too - I hear somebody talk like that and I think of my

friend, Rich, who's also Jewish.  He has the most sarcastic sense of humor in

the world, which is funny, because he'll also go out of his way for you.  (He

came with me to inspect our house before we sold it because my husband was

working in New York, and he even took NOTES for me!!!)


Funny story about Rich, too - we used to tease around that we were an "item"

at work.  I know his wife, he loves Bill, so it was all a tease.  We were on

the elevator one day with another man, and he said,  "Should we go to your

place or mine?"  I said,  "Is your wife home?"  He said,  "She'll be out

until tomorrow."  I said,  "Then your place it is.  Much more romantic."  We

said this so seriously, the guy got off the elevator saying,  "Oh, I don't

think I should be hearing this!!!"


LOLOL!!!

Connie                        Subj:    DI3

Date:  96-09-09 22:00:24 edt

From:  Luv2rit         

.


How many of us sent stories in to Pat this time?  

                                         Deb                        Subj:    Re:Checks came!

Date:  96-09-09 22:05:02 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

.


Sherril - Oh, I hope you like the mobster!  (I want that car!  <G>)


That makes you, me, Patty & Cindi who are bumped this month?  (I thought you

were in TE!  I remembered you had another sale and looked at the titles

saying,  "So which one's Sherril's?")


Connie

                        Subj:    Re:Smoking

Date:  96-09-09 23:16:07 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


Jodi,


Yes, a woman I write to stopped smoking and her child and her dog recovered

from their "asthma."

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Writer's Conference

Date:  96-09-09 23:20:55 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Sherril,


That's so fantastic to go to a conference with editors you will be/are

writing for and who will buy your articles. And what a place to sell material

to. I didn't know you were writing for them.Sherril, I am so impressed. Man,

you are motivated and really doing it. I'm gonna look for your stuff, please

let us know if you have something coming out. Otherwise, I'll just stand at

the newstand and flip through. (It's so much cheaper that way.) You are a

sweetie.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:More than just BAD girls

Date:  96-09-09 23:21:56 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


Sherril,


I know. My dad had a certain amount of lung problems from my mother's

smoking, too.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Racism

Date:  96-09-09 23:24:50 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


Sherril, Lynda, and everyone,


Here's the good news. I called Writers Digest and faxed them the stuff from

this guy and they are taking him out of the Short Story and Novel Markets

they are just putting together. They are sending a memo around to the editors

there not to take any listings from this nut. Thanks for your support,

ladies.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Sinus problems

Date:  96-09-09 23:26:34 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


Sherril,


I used to get migraines a lot--but so did my mother and so does my sister.

It's hormonal, too. Strangely, I found Alka Seltzer will work sometimes when

other stuff won't. (It might be the sodium--don't know.)

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Racism

Date:  96-09-09 23:38:47 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

.


YAY!!!!!!!

Lynda C.                        Subj:    Re:DI3

Date:  96-09-10 10:18:05 edt

From:  Asandrin        

.


Deb:


I sent a story in to Pat.  I'm dying to hear if she wants it!


Amy                        Subj:    Re:The Guy

Date:  96-09-10 10:19:46 edt

From:  Asandrin        

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Gail:


Good going on your part for telling on that guy.  Who knows how many people

he's done this to.


Amy                        Subj:    Re:Good News/Bad News

Date:  96-09-10 10:23:45 edt

From:  Asandrin        

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Bad Girls:


I have good news and I have bad news.  First the bad news.  Loveswept

rejected me last week.  I was so pissed that on Friday I up and mailed three

chapters to each Kensington and to Harper just for the heck of it.

Yesterday, only four days after mailing the package, I get a call on my

answering machine (this is the good news) from Kensington.  They think my

story is perfect for their new line, Precious Gems.  She said my story was

charming and she wants to read the rest ASAP.   I think 1996 is going to be

my year!


Amy                        Subj:    Re:More agent bites

Date:  96-09-10 10:58:43 edt

From:  Moonmyth        

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Lynda--

Wonderful news!  Go get 'em girl.  Been super busy but thinking of all of

you.

Marci                        Subj:    Re:Settings

Date:  96-09-10 11:03:25 edt

From:  Moonmyth        

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Another thought--Use real city and street but fictional number address.  That

is, if you're able to check it out....

Marci                        Subj:    Re:Good News/Bad News

Date:  96-09-10 11:04:06 edt

From:  LaRitaMari      

.


Amy --- 


Boy, if the rest of us had that good of news to go with our bad news, we'd

never fall in rejection slumps!!  That's terrific!!

I'm thinking the rest of us REALLY need to move to Colorado -- between you

and Lynda, some of your good fortune (and TALENT) would have to rub off on

the rest of us!!!

Keep us posted!!

Larita                        Subj:    Re:news

Date:  96-09-10 11:05:54 edt

From:  Moonmyth        

.


Congrats on Writer's Journal contest, Tina.  What a terrific prize!  

Also, good luck in the Yours Truly contest.  I entered, too.

Marci                        Subj:    Re:DI3

Date:  96-09-10 11:39:22 edt

From:  J00DLynn        

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me...


Jodi                        Subj:    Amy's Adorable Story

Date:  96-09-10 12:01:57 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

.


Wait until you all READ Amy's adorable story!!!!!!!!!!!  It is FABULOUS, and

she deserves the sale! Way to go, Amos!!!!!!!!!!  I'm your biggest fan!!!!

Lynda C.                        Subj:    Re:Good News/Bad News

Date:  96-09-10 12:09:48 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


AMY!!!!!!!!


Wonderful. A phone call, no less. Go, go go.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Good News/Bad News

Date:  96-09-10 12:29:11 edt

From:  Luv2rit         

.


Amy,

   Congratulations!  Your story just proves that this business is so-o-o

subjective.  Just because one editor wasn't in the mood for your work, that

doesn't mean there's anything wrong with it.  It simply means that you picked

the wrong editor the first time out.  Kensington was able to spot the jewel.


                                                     Deb  

                                                                                            Subj:  

Re:Good News/Bad News

Date:  96-09-10 16:09:09 edt

From:  Asandrin        

.


Thanks for all the support guys, they haven't bought it yet, but I'm that

much closer!  This is so exciting.  I wish this feeling on each and every one

of you.  Magic vibes coming all of your way. =)


Lynda, I'm YOUR biggest fan, so we're even, chicky babe.


Amy                        Subj:    Re:Gail

Date:  96-09-10 17:10:44 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

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Way to go Gail!  I wouldn't have thought to call Writer's Digest.  How does

it feel to make a difference?

Patty                        Subj:    Re:DI3

Date:  96-09-10 17:13:02 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

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I sent a story in, too, for DR3 about an aspiring Olympic figure skater who

suffers a career threatening leg injury.  I think I enjoyed writing this one

more than any other story I've worked on, so I hope it sells.

Patty                        Subj:    Re:Good News/Bad News

Date:  96-09-10 17:14:07 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

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Amy, Sounds like your news is more good than bad.  Good luck!

Patty                        Subj:    Re:Bumped

Date:  96-09-10 19:36:53 edt

From:  CMyersTex       

.


Looks like I was bumped from TE and TR.  What's going on here?

Cindi                        Subj:    Re:Good News/Bad News

Date:  96-09-10 19:38:37 edt

From:  CMyersTex       

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Oh, Amy!  That is so exciting.  And they responded so fast.  I take that to

be a very good sign.  I'll keep my fingers crossed for you.

Cindi                        Subj:    Re:Gail

Date:  96-09-10 19:45:45 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


Patty,


I am mean--not lean--just mean.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:DI3

Date:  96-09-10 19:46:26 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


Patty,


That story sounds good! Everyone loves ice skaters.

gail                        Subj:    Re:Good News/Bad News

Date:  96-09-10 19:50:21 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Amy - I think that'll be a great story to tell when you get to the next

conference!!!  "I got so ticked off, I just sent my novel somewhere else,

right off the cuff - and it GOT PUBLISHED!!!!"  LOLOL!!!  I like that!!  And

what bad news?  That silly little rejection?  That first editor just made a

mistake.  One day soon she'll see "Love at First Lie" in Barnes & Noble (the

last copy; the rest went like hotcakes!) and say,  "Oh, I hope my boss

doesn't remember this one!"


<G>

Connie                        Subj:    Re:Gail

Date:  96-09-10 19:51:45 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Gail - You tough cookie, you!!  That's the way to do it.  And you acted fast,

too - I think there's quite a few things that should be removed from the

listings, but sometimes we don't move too quickly!  Good for you!


Connie                        Subj:    Re:DI3

Date:  96-09-10 19:53:29 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Patty - that sounds like one straight from the heart!!!  That's probably

going to get in.  And you can feel the ones that are going to make it, most

of the time, so that's in there!  I don't have any for DI3, but my rewrite is

supposed to hit the February issue.


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Bumped

Date:  96-09-10 19:54:35 edt

From:  ESCRITORA       

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Cindi - Which one got bumped from TE?  (I know the Manchausen - still can't

spell it! - was TR!)


Connie                        Subj:    Re:Writer's Conference

Date:  96-09-10 21:06:39 edt

From:  IRWriter        

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Thanks Gail!  I was so pumped up at the conference, and nature has such a way

of keeping us humble!  Did I get a migraine the second day of the conference,

and fly home with it, and was in bed all day Sunday, when I wanted to follow

up on some of my contacts?  Of course!  But, I really am trying to get loose

ends caught up this week, so those editors don't forget me!

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:Racism

Date:  96-09-10 21:07:57 edt

From:  IRWriter        

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All right Gail!  I'm proud of you, you did something about it, and saved

another writer grief and heartache!  Congratulations, and thank you!  Now,

reach around, and give yourself a very big pat on the back, for not sitting

back and letting this guy get away with it.

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:Sinus problems

Date:  96-09-10 21:08:43 edt

From:  IRWriter        

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Gail, do you snort the Alka-Seltzer, or drink it?  Just kidding!  I'll try

it...in fact, I'm at the point I'll try ANYTHING!

Sherril                        Subj:    Re:Good News/Bad News

Date:  96-09-10 21:09:43 edt

From:  IRWriter        

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ALL RIGHT AMY!  You go girl!  I think 1996 is going to be remembered as the

Year of the Bad Girls.

Sherril                        Subj:    bad girls--the best ever

Date:  96-09-10 21:40:23 edt

From:  Pavsi           

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TO ALL THE BEST BAD GIRLS: A brief bulletin on our status. I want to thank

you all for flooding me with great stories. I read your stories first. But I

finally saw what we could make this when I wrote the coverlines for

December--SIX of EIGHT coverlines were bad girl stories! They made great

coverlines! Even my creative director commented during our cover line

meeting: "Where are you getting these stories? So fast?" 

   I just smiled. Felt great. Thank you all for working in this unusual way.

I'd appreciate it if you would E-mail me with story ideas--that seems to have

worked in some cases. Better to write about something I might want, although

I've bought things I never knew I wanted because they were told so well.  I'm

also holding quite a few of your stories because I've run similar things

recently.  I've accepted stories that might not appear for awhile. Keep in

mind that I'm reading them fast & the decision making is way speeded up.

Anyway, thank you all again!--Pavsi                         Subj:    Re:bad girls--the best ever

Date:  96-09-10 21:55:56 edt

From:  Gtlhrt          

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Wow Pat how great...for you and for all the Bad Girls!!


Tina                        Subj:    Re:Writer's Conference

Date:  96-09-10 22:27:44 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

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Sherril-

Your conference sounded GREAT!!  I didn't even know such a conference

existed.  Wow!  I might E-mail you for more info.  I'm sort of a conference

junkie!  :-)

Lynda C.                        Subj:    Re:bad girls--the best ever

Date:  96-09-10 22:29:17 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

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Gee Pat,

You sure know how to make a bunch of bad girls feel great!!!

Can't wait for that December issue.

Lynda C.                        Subj:    Redundancy

Date:  96-09-10 22:32:29 edt

From:  TundraFlwr      

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Know what I just noticed?  The last four posts all had the word "great" in

them at least once.  (Silly us)!  Well, if we MUST overuse a word, I'm glad

it's not "rejection!"


And that's just great, great, great!!!!

Lynda C.  (aka the Great One)                        Subj:    Re:bad girls--the best ever

Date:  96-09-11 07:45:55 edt

From:  Luv2rit         

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Thanks, Pat!  I'm glad to know that it's working on both sides.  There's

nothing like a win-win situation.             Deb


                        Subj:    Re:bad girls--the best ever

Date:  96-09-11 10:24:27 edt

From:  Asandrin        

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Pat:  We aim to please.  Glad everything is working so well.  What ever else

we can do to help, let us know.


Thanks everyone for all your encouraging words.  I'm hoping this is the one

that will do it for me.


Amy--born to be bad.                        Subj:    Re:Racism

Date:  96-09-11 12:00:47 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Sherril, Connie, etc.


It was easy for me to do it with my employer paying for the phone and fax

bill. Otherwise, it would have taken a lot longer--by snail mail.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Sinus problems

Date:  96-09-11 12:01:39 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

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Sherril,


Let me know how you do with the migraines. Hormones, who needs them? I swear

it is that.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:Redundancy

Date:  96-09-11 12:03:07 edt

From:  MaraWayne       

.


Lybda,


That's why you are a great writer and get a great response from editors and

agents.

Gail                        Subj:    Re:bad girls--the best ever

Date:  96-09-11 12:13:26 edt

From:  PattyWrite      

.


Pat,  That's so cool that you actually got a compliment because of us.  Seems

like together we make a great team!

Patty                        Subj:    Re:bad girls--the best ever

Date:  96-09-11 13:13:13 edt

From:  LaRitaMari      

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Pat -- 

Thanks for the words of encouragement!!  Here's to a long and "BAD" <g>

partnership!!

Larita


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