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                   An Electronic Journal concerned with the
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Contents:  _EJournal_ Volume 1 Number 1

March 1991 - 421 lines.

Principal essay:

"Electronic Journals of Proposed Research"
        by Robert K. Lindsay
           Mental Health Research Institute
           University of Michigan
        226 lines.

Abstract:

Scientists and other scholars should use the networks to share ideas before
preparing elaborate grant proposals.  Publication in this preliminary form
would attract cooperative peer review, would "register" the concepts involved,
would attract qualified collaboration, and would lead to a smaller number of
futile applications for scarce funds.  Notes, Bibliography (TedJ)

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Contents:  _EJournal_ Volume 1 Number 2

May 1991 - 506 lines.

Principal essay:

"Re/View of _Writing Space_"
        by Joe Amato
           Department of English
           University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign
        277 lines.

Abstract:

An essay re/view of Jay David Bolter's book,  _Writing Space: The Computer,
Hypertext, and the History of Writing_.  Joe praises the book, and asks some
questions about the "evangelistic euphoria" with which Bolter greets the
"revolutionary new medium."  Post-modernist theorizing, ideological
assumptions, and "the darker side of hypertext" are some issues raised in a
positive review. (TedJ)

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October 1991 - 426 lines.

Supplemental essays:

"The Brent-Amato Exchange"
        by Doug Brent
           College of General Studies
           University of Calgary
        and Joe Amato
            Department of English
            University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign
        216 lines.

Abstract:

An exchange between Doug Brent and Joe Amato about the re/view of Bolter's
_Writing Space_, including the requested expansion of "ideas on the 'darker
side' of hypertext." (TedJ)

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Contents:  _EJournal_ Volume 1 Number 3

November 1991 - 873 lines.

Principal essay:

"Oral Knowledge, Typographic Knowledge, Electronic Knowledge:
 Speculations on the History of Ownership"
        by Doug Brent
           Faculty of General Studies
           University of Calgary
        686 lines.

Abstract:

The theory of transformative technology (McLuhan, Ong, Heim et al) is applied
to the problem of intellectual property versus communal knowledge.  Oral
cultures have no intellectual property:  knowledge is communally generated and
shared.  Print technology created the book as artifact, knowledge as
individually generated, owned, and protected.  Copyright and plagiarism are
inventions of the print age.  With CMC and hypertext, we may be returning to an
age in which personal ownership of knowledge becomes virtually impossible by
the nature of the medium itself. This will require profound shifts in our
attitude to knowledge and the way we use its ownership as an incentive to
produce it. (DB)

[ Note:  Volume 1 Number 3-1, published in July 1992, is a Supplement to this
issue.  It is devoted to an exchange of views between Bob Hering and Doug Brent
about the "power" exerted by technology and by economics.  We urge readers of
V1N3 to send for V1N3-1 as well. ]
[ Note:  Volume 1 Number 3-2, published in September 1992, is another
supplement to this issue.  It contains an essay by John Dilworth arguing that
reputation is as important a reward as money for contributors to electronic
networks.  New readers will probably want to look at all three issues. ]
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April 1992 - 351 lines.

** This first issue of our second year is aimed especially at new subscribers **

CONTENTS:
  Introduction/Editorial
  Summary of Network Commands

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June 1992 - 760 lines

Editorial 1:  Should we say goodbye to "text"?
Editorial 2:  Writing as reward, not punishment

Principal essay:

"Literacy for the Next Generation:  Writing without Handwriting"
        by David Coniam
           Chinese University of Hong Kong
        417 lines

Abstract:

The chore of drawing the alphabet correctly has always been a barrier between
a child's verbal imagination and words on a page.  But "good penmanship" --the
requirement to scribble legibly-- need no longer disrupt the flow from composer
to composition.  Keyboard-display technology will relegate manuscript writing
to the closet crammed with useful but supplemental knowledge like
multiplication tables and Latin conjugations.  More and more children will
associate text-making with pleasure instead of pain.  (TedJ)

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July 1992 - 549 lines

Editorial:  Electronic Time Travel

Abstract:

This issue is a Supplement to issue V1N3, devoted to an exchange of views
between Bob Hering and Doug Brent about the "power" exerted by technology and
by economics.  We urge readers of V1N3-1 to send for V1N3 as well.  (TedJ)

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August, 1992 - 727 lines

Editorial:  Call for editors; call for essays; letters to the editor.

Abstract:

This issue contains five responses to David Coniam's essay about children and
keyboards (and to my editorial).  One of them was a request to reprint his
piece in the _Journal of Computing in Childhood Education_.  One, from Brazil,
was a report of a "test," of sorts, of David's hypothesis.  David's essay can
be found in EJRNL.V2N2 .  (TedJ)

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September 1992 - 449 lines

Editorial Notes:  List Purging; Money; Reader Survey

Principal essay:

   CREDIT, COMPENSATION AND COPYRIGHT:
   OWNING KNOWLEDGE AND ELECTRONIC NETWORKS

        by John B. Dilworth
           Department of Philosophy
           Western Michigan University, U.S.A.

Abstract:

This issue is the second Supplement to issue V1N3, an intriguing contribution
to the polylog about who owns electronic texts.  Professor Dilworth argues that
the difference between intellectual property and legal property makes copyright
essentialy irrelevant, at least for electronic publications in an academic
context.  We urge readers of V1N3-2 to send for V1N3 and V1N3-1 as well.  (TedJ)

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Contents:  _EJournal_ Volume 2 Number 4

December 1992 - 642 lines

Editorial Notes:  Surveys

Abstract:

This issue carries a followup exchange on the subject of ownership and
copyright of electronic texts, a thread that started a year ago.  Issues V1N3,
V1N3-1 and V1N3-2 contain the original article and followup letters on this
topic.  This issue also delivers two questionnaires.  One is about electronic
journals and libraries, and one is about you, the reader of _EJournal_.

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December(2) 1992 - 984 lines

Editorial Notes:  Usenet Oracle

Principle Essay:

   THE USENET ORACLE:
   Virtual Authors and Network Community

      by David Sewell
         English Department
         University of Rochester

Abstract:

David Sewell's essay couldn't come much much closer to _EJournal_'s
announced interests, "the implications of electronic networks and
texts."  From a sentence near the end of his text: ". . . the
computer's ability to create self-contained virtual worlds is
beginning to affect what we traditionally call 'writing' or
'literature'. . . ."  There's an intriguing observation about
"emergent conventions"; there are plausible hints about ways the
network culture may resemble pre-print communities. (TedJ)

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         University of Rochester

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Editorial Note -

David Sewell's essay couldn't come much much closer to _EJournal_'s
announced interests, "the implications of electronic networks and
texts."  From a sentence near the end of his text: ". . . the
computer's ability to create self-contained virtual worlds is
beginning to affect what we traditionally call 'writing' or
'literature'. . . ."  There's an intriguing observation about
"emergent conventions"; there are plausible hints about ways the
network culture may resemble pre-print communities.

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THE USENET ORACLE:
Virtual Authors and Network Community

      by David Sewell
         English Department
         University of Rochester
         dsew@troi.cc.rochester.EDU

1. What Happens to Authors in Cyberspace?

Many literary theorists who have addressed the phenomenon of
"electronic writing" -- a catch-all category that includes word
processing, hypertext, and all communication on wide-area networks --
argue that its immateriality as a medium calls into question the
notional status of authors who publish using it.  For some,
digitized writing is the technology finally responsible for the
"death of the author" that Roland Barthes proclaimed two decades ago
("Death of the Author"), a "death" that has been a tenet of
poststructural thought ever since.  Their basic argument
runs something like this: The traditional view of an "author" as a
single autonomous agent, the sole intentional creator of a work, is a
product of the age of the codex book, when writing was both material
and unalterable.  But the electronic medium, in Jay Bolter's words,
"denies the fixity of the text, and . . . questions the authority of
the author" (_Writing Space_ 153).  When written words are stored as
electronic bits in memory, they are not objects to be owned.  When
authors are incarnated as electronic texts that can be erased,
annotated, downloaded, linked, and redistributed, they are
"textualized"; at that point their identities merge into a communal
hypertext or discussion thread.  Although he wasn't speaking of
computers, Barthes had already hinted in that direction by writing
that "the metaphor of the Text is that of the _network_ ("Death" 161).
Peggy Kamuf finds confirmation of Barthes's formula in the "general
incapacity of a conceptual framework to support or contain the author
function disseminated by computer-aided modeling and composition,
video reproduction, hypertext data banks, nanotechnology, and so
forth" (_Signature Pieces_ 16). Perhaps, as Mark Poster suggests, an
electronic newsgroup or conference "becomes a single text without an
author in the traditional sense of the term" (_Mode of Information_
122).                                                                [line 105]

Curiously, though, electronic communication has tended to hang on
tenaciously to the single, identifiable author: on-line journals have
conventional tables of contents and author attributions, nearly all
e-mail and news-posting systems identify message senders, and on
networks like Usenet the elaborate ".sig" or signature appended to
one's postings has become a way of transcending the uniformity of the
medium.  (A ".sig" is a signature file automatically appended to
postings by news software; Usenet posters fill them not only with
their name, business or academic affiliation, and e-mail, telephone,
and fax information, but also with ".sig quotes" or epigrams, and even
fancy ASCII graphics.)

Despite the network's potential to allow anonymous collaboration,
it is rare for even experimental network art and participatory
projects to be anonymous.  For years there have existed on BBS's and
conference systems so-called "storyboards" or "never-ending stories,"
where one person begins a narrative line, and others are free to
develop the plot and add characters within the constraints of
agreed-upon conventions.  (The Usenet group alt.callahans is entirely
devoted to communal fiction of this sort, for instance.)  Since in
most cases contributions to these multiply-authored texts are sent as
regular e-mail or news postings, they are identified, sometimes
intrusively, as the products of specific authors.  Such was the case
with "Les Immateriaux," an experimental e-mail project on which
twenty-six French intellectuals collaborated in 1984 as part of an
exhibition at the Centre Georges Pompidou.  Participant Jacques
Derrida observed that while the computer erases the author's voice,
each contribution was nevertheless signed and therefore "owned" in the
traditional way, making the experiment less radical than the
technology allowed.  (See Poster 114-115.)  Even where an editor
intervenes to eliminate tags associating a given author with a portion
of the completed text, contributors are typically identified or
acknowledged by name.  For example, in the collaborative fiction
"Thirty Minutes in the Late Afternoon" created and published on the
Whole Earth 'Lectronic Link (WELL) in 1990, editor Judy Malloy
rearranged posted contributions to create a seamless narrative in
parallel columns, but used parenthetical numbers linked to author
names to identify the individual contributions.^1^  When claims are
made, then, that the electronic medium inherently tends to assimilate
the solitary author to a network or collaborative group, they need to
be tested critically against the actual practice of writers on the
nets.
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2. The Usenet Oracle: Description and Background

Yet there are forms of on-line writing which, if taken seriously *as*
writing, challenge traditional definitions of authorship because both
collaboration and anonymity are enabled or even required by their
design.  One widely-used example is a real-time conferencing program
like the Daedalus Group's "Interchange," which allows pseudonymous
login; many writing teachers find that letting students write as
make-believe characters can free them to explore a range of voices and
attitudes that signed writing might have made threatening.  Another
example is the Usenet Oracle, in which I have been a
participant-observer -- as both anonymous author and named editor --
for some months now.  It is one of the most prominent experiments in
collaborative creation, an automated mail server that allows two
people, a questioner and a respondent, to create a text without
knowing one another's identity.

Interestingly, the form of anonymous question-and-respose turns out to
be less postmodern in approach than one might expect.  It reflects
perhaps not so much a postmodern as a premodern approach to
authorship, like that of Shakespeare's day, when literature

         was a by-product of learning or study, which presupposed
         leisure.  The gentleman might take pride in his by-product, but
         he considered it as only one of many accomplishments in an
         active life.  He never wrote for money, never put his name on
         what he wrote, and rarely even condescended to put what he wrote
         in print.  His work was addressed to a small group of equals.
         (Charvat, _Profession_ 6-7)

The technical basis of the Usenet Oracle is a software program
developed and installed by Steve Kinzler (with assistance from Ray
Moody) on a computer at Indiana University.  Although based on earlier
programs that ran on local systems, the Usenet Oracle was the first to
allow any person with e-mail access to the Internet to participate.
The concept is simple.  A questioner, or "Supplicant," e-mails a
question to the Oracle.  The Oracle software puts the question at the
end of a "question queue"; when its turn comes, it will be mailed to
someone else who has submitted a question.  That person now becomes an
"Incarnation" of the Oracle and must e-mail a response to the question
back to the Oracle's address.  Finally, the Oracle combines question
and answer and mails the completed "Oracularity" to the Supplicant
while saving a copy for itself.  Because the software encodes all
names and addresses, neither questioner nor respondent know one
another's identities.
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[For a help file explaining how to participate in the Oracle, along
with a brief history of the program, send e-mail with the subject
"help" to oracle@cs.indiana.edu.]

In its most basic form, then, the Oracle software essentially
automates a party game where a central organizer gathers questions on
slips of paper, makes sure that the questioner is not given his or her
own submission, and distributes them to be answered.  In its early
days as a local Indiana University program Oracle was not much more
sophisticated than that, its one-line questions and brief answers
ranging from witty to flippant:

   The oracle has pondered your question deeply.
   Your question was:

   > Why is a cow?

   And in response, thus spake the oracle:

   } Mu.

   You owe the oracle 2 big kisses.  [000-42]  ^2^

["Mu" is the Zen master's traditional response to an unanswerable
question.  Questions to the Oracle are always quoted with the ">"
character, responses with "}".  The original Oracle software
automatically appended a randomly-chosen "payment" line to the
response; the Usenet version does not, but asking the questioner or
"supplicant" for some appropriate payment has become a convention.]

Beginning in October, 1989, when Kinzler publicized the Oracle's
existence on a number of Usenet news groups and began posting
selections of the best Oracularities to the widely-read rec.humor
group, questions and responses became increasingly creative and
elaborate, and over the three years of its existence the Oracle has
grown far beyond its origins into a genre with its own conventions,
formulas, and mythos.  The Oracle now has its own Usenet newsgroup,
rec.humor.oracle, with current estimated worldwide readership of about
25,000; another 600 subscribers receive digests of Oracularities via
an e-mail list ^3^.

Two or three digests of ten Oracularities are published most weeks;
less than ten percent of all submissions are selected for
publication.  Beginning with the 100th digest a voting system was
introduced so readers could rate Oracularities; every few months the
highest-rated ones are collected into a special "best of" collection.
After he had read and edited some 20,000 submissions during
the Usenet Oracle's first year of existence, Kinzler established a
"Priesthood" of volunteer editors--currently about two dozen--who
filter incoming Oracularities and pass along the best ones.
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Not surprisingly, many of the published Oracularities involve
computers: parodies of Unix documentation; jibes at Microsoft, DEC,
and other companies; elaborate text-adventure games; sessions where
the Oracle logs onto a mainframe at "heaven.com" or onto someone's
brain (various parts of the psyche are typically represented as files
in a user's home directory); satire aimed at the hated VMS operating
system (for instance, a clever comparison between VMS and PMS, which
"have pretty much the same features, as anyone familiar with both
could tell you" [310-10]).  But many other species of Oracularities
have evolved: parodies of everything from sociological jargon through
pop-cult TV shows to Sam Spade mysteries and 18th-century bawdy drama;
humorous and nonsense verse; mock-scientific explanations of obscure
phenomena; manic invented histories and science-fiction scenarios.  In
one of the highest-rated Oracularities [135-08], the Oracle runs a
simulation program that pits Merlin against Stephen Hawking in order
to determine whether magic is real. (Hawking wins when Merlin violates
causality by invoking a future self who accidentally kills his earlier
self.)  The best-received Oracularities are ingenious comic
miniatures, often products of considerable effort and imagination.  In
the following Oracularity, quoted in full, the question sets up an old
punch line: "Make me one with everything!"  The respondent, however,
makes it an occasion for an extended comic monologue:

   The Usenet Oracle has pondered your question deeply.
   Your question was:

   > What did the Tibetian [sic] monk say to the hot dog vendor?

   And in response, thus spake the Oracle:

   } The most famous exchange between a lama and a hot dog vendor
   } occurred one block south of Times Square in July 1988.
   }
   } Hot Dog Vendor: What can I get for ya today?  Footlong with
   } the works?  I said, what can I get for ya today?  Hey, ya
   } wanna hot dog or not?  Listen if yer not going to order willya
   } move on, I gotta business to run.  Stop starin' at me, man.
   } And wipe that silly grin off yer face.  Say something, dammit,  [line 284]
   } yer givin' me the creeps.  Hey, I get it.  Ya don't [speak]
   } English, do ya?  Uh, lessee, yo, uh, tengo los, uh, hot dogs,
   } uh, perros calientes.  Okay, fine! just stand there.  See if I
   } care.  Just don't scare away the customers.  Jeez.  Forget it.
   } Ya wanna Coke?  Coca-cola?  I don't care where yer from, ya
   } gotta understand "Coca-cola".  Coca-cola?  Stop smiling.
   } People'll think yer up to something.  Hey, I got all-beefs,
   } beef-n-porks, turkey dogs, polish sausage, and kielbasa.  You
   } can get ketchup, mustard, mayonnaise, relish, pickles, or
   } onions on them.  I've got plain and whole grain buns.  I don't
   } care what you want, just order something or leave.  I'm
   } serious, man, if you don't go away, I'll call the cops and
   } have them arrest you for loitering.  Jesus Christ, will you
   } stop staring at me!  STOP IT!  At least blink once in a while.
   } You're driving me crazy!  You wanna Coke?  Wait, no, I already
   } tried that.  Listen, man, I'm serious, stop starin' and grin-
   } nin' at me.  I gotta gun under the counter.  I'll use it.  I
   } mean it.  STOP STARING AT ME!  STOP IT!  STOP IT!  STOPIT-
   } STOPITSTOPIT! YOU'RE DRIVING ME CRAZY!  AAAAARGH! STOPIT-
   } STOPITSTOPITSTOPIT!  PLEASE LOOK AWAY!  HERE!  OKAY!  I'M
   } MAKING YOU A HOT DOG FOR FREE!  TAKE IT!  EAT IT! JUST GO
   } AWAY!  STOPITSTOPITSTOPITSTOPIT!  YOU WANNA COKE?  OKAY!
   } HERE'S A COKE!  IT'S ON THE HOUSE!  NOW PLEASE GO AWAY!
   } I CAN'T TAKE ANY MORE OF THIS!  YOUR EYES ARE DRIVING ME
   } INSANE!  PLEASE STOPITSTOPISTOPSTOPSTOPSTOPSTOPSTOPSTOPSTOP!
   }
   } Then the lama widened his grin just enough to barely show
   } his teeth.  At that moment the hot dog vendor was enlightened.
   }
   } You owe the Oracle a better koan.  And a new deli.
     [293-03; formatting of the original text has been modified]

If this is taken as a representative Oracularity, its most striking
features might seem to have nothing to do with "electronic writing."
Generically, the response is a dramatic monologue framed as a Zen koan
or teaching story.  It uses dialect and concrete detail admirably, but
no differently than any creative writer would.  Even the arbitrariness
of the question which the respondent must answer could be mirrored in
a traditional writing situation: one can readily imagine a creative
writing instructor asking students to compose a scene between a
hot-dog vendor and a Tibetan monk as a warm-up class exercise.  In
fact writing an Oracle response has a good deal in common with
impromptu narrative and improvisational drama, two forms that require
inventive response to an unforeseen assignment.
                                                                     [line 329]
3. Features Unique to Online Collaboration

Other aspects of the Oracle as a writing situation are unique to its
medium.  Most importantly, questioner and respondent are invisible and
unknown to each other.  They share neither a physical location nor a
common time of writing.  Both writers must guess at the likely range
of cultural references, terminology, and specific knowledge that their
co-authors share.  (The Oracle's help file alludes to this problem in
its suggestion that writers avoid "slang, jargon, and obscure
references," since "[p]eople of all different backgrounds located all
over the world use the Oracle.")  In the quoted Oracularity, the
respondent assumes that readers will understand the humor of the
confrontation between New York vernacular culture and Tibetan
Buddhism, and that they will catch allusions to the "beatific smile"
and the teaching style of Zen (the smiling monk of course plays
_roshi_ to the befuddled vendor-novice who is finally enlightened).
Mark Poster claims that every author-audience relationship in
electronic writing is to some extent a fiction:

         [I]ndividuals engage in telecommunications with other
         individuals . . . without considerations that derive from the
         presence to the partner of their body, their voice, their sex,
         many of the markings of their personal history.  [They] are in
         the position of fiction writers who compose themselves as
         characters in the process of writing. . . .  The traces of their
         embeddedness in culture are restricted to the fact that they are
         competent to write in a particular language, writing perhaps at
         the infinite degree.  (Poster, _Mode of Information_ 117)

But Poster exaggerates the degree of uncertainty about audience that
electronic networks create.  Our respondent's assumption that readers
would catch the Zen references was not arbitrary.  As a discourse
community, Usenet has its historical roots in hacker subculture, one
of whose best-known features is a predilection for Zen-like paradox;
before the Oracularity of the Tibetan monk appeared, there had been many
published Oracularities reflecting this interest.  (The frequent
references to Zen in Douglas Hofstadter's _Goedel, Escher, Bach_
[1979] merely brought to the attention of the wider public an interest
that had been part of hacker culture for years.  See, for example, the
"AI Koans" in Appendix A of Eric Raymond's _The New Hacker's
Dictionary_, pp. 404-405.)  Even though Usenet readers are growing far
more varied in background as wide-area network use mushrooms, the
Net's discourse conventions derive from hacker subculture as surely as
the prescriptions of traditional high-school English classes are
rooted in neoclassical grammar.
                                                                     [line 375]
Why does such a talented comic writer as the Master of the Hot Dog
Koan choose not to identify himself or herself to gain what we usually
consider a major reward of authorship -- recognition?  While the Oracle
software makes anonymity possible by withholding participants' names
and e-mail addresses, the complete anonymity of published
Oracularities is actually a matter of convention and authorial choice.
In the introductory Oracle help file, participants are explicitly
told, "If you do not wish to remain anonymous, you may include a
phrase in your answer like "incarnated as <insert your name and/or
address here>."  Nevertheless, fewer than one percent of authors
choose to do so.  This was one of the first things about the Oracle
that intrigued me: writers like the Master of the Hot Dog Koan were
evidently putting real effort into writing that went "unrewarded" by
the conventional association of name with publication.

4.  Why are Usenet Oracle authors content to remain anonymous?

In August, 1992, I conducted a survey of Oracle participants to seek
answers to this and other questions about the Oracle, receiving via
e-mail 125 returned questionnaires.  Of the 80 active authors who
answered the question "How do you feel about the anonymity of
Oracularities?" 59 (79%) felt it was helpful or crucial, while only 5
(7%) said they would prefer to be identified.  Narrative responses to
the question indicate that anonymity provides two crucial advantages:
freedom of self-expression, and the shared aesthetic illusion of an
Oracle persona.  Like college professors who publish murder mysteries
or romance novels under pseudonyms for fear of being thought
unprofessional, Oracle writers sometimes feel safer when unidentified:

         I think [anonymity is] essential.  I wouldn't have the guts to
         use the Oracle if I knew my name was going with everything I
         wrote.

         It helps me to give answers which are much more uninhibited. If
         I knew my identity would be made public I might be a little
         reluctant to write, since I would not want co-workers to know
         how much I am involved.
                                                                     [line 413]
But the second reason for accepting anonymity more resembles that of
the medieval author, who, in Hans Robert Jauss's words, wrote "in
order to praise and to extend his object, not to express himself or to
enhance his personal reputation" (Ede and Lunsford, _Singular Texts_
78).  The "object" in this case is the collection of a corpus of work
by a personality, the Oracle, whose characteristics derive from the
collective efforts of contributors.  (The Oracle help file
acknowledges "the thousands of Oracle participants over the years who
have created the personality, mythos and history of the Usenet
Oracle.")  And in fact the Oracle has accreted an identifiable
personality.  Like a Greek god, he is polymorphous: now a crotchety
old man, now a super-intelligent computer program, now a deity.  A
jealous, omniscient and omnipotent being, he is apt to strike with
lightning (or "<ZOT>") supplicants who insult him or fail to grovel
sufficiently.  Nevertheless he is vulnerable to having his plug pulled
by his creator Kinzler, his computer's system administrator, or an
irate "god@heaven.com."  Like Zeus, he has a consort: Lisa evolved
from the cliche-geek's fantasy-fulfilling "net.sex.goddess" to the
Oracle's companion.  It may be that one reason for leaving Oracle
submissions unsigned is generic constraint: like Scripture,
Oracularities should seem to participants to proceed directly from the
voice of God.  As E. M. Forster once observed of unsigned newspaper
editorials, "anonymous statements have . . . a universal air about
them.  Absolute truth, the collected wisdom of the universe, seems to
be speaking, not the feeble voice of a man" (_Anonymity_ 8).  A number
of Oracle authors who responded to the questionnaire identified
similar reasons for leaving their contributions unsigned:

         I'd put less effort into writing for the Oracle if [my identity]
         were public.  I prefer the idea of an all-powerful Oracle rather
         than the various incarnations scenario. . . .  Sometimes it
         would be nice to say, "I wrote that!" but I prefer to just smile
         knowingly...

         I don't care who wrote it, but it sort of loses something when I
         see a signature line.  Destroys the myth, so to speak.

         When I read Oracularities . . .  I prefer to think of a faceless
         deity in a cave somewhere, not joe@lharc.netcom.edu.  I prefer
         anonymity.
                                                                     [line 454]
So one of the most powerful conventions governing Oracle responses is the
attempt to give voice to the Oracle's persona, a wise but world-weary and
sometimes petty deity for whom answering queries is just a 9-to-5 job:

   } Day in, day out, the Oracle hears the cries of despair and
   } ennui that rise from people like you, trapped in an absurd
   } human condition.  "What does it all mean?" you want to know.

   } Time was, a younger and more energetic Oracle tried to answer
   } every existential query individually.  But Usenet has grown
   } apace, and let's face it, "What is reality?" is FAQ number 1.
     [i.e. "Frequently Asked Question"; 453-03]

The willingness of Oracle authors to experiment with different voices
and personae mirrors something Trent Batson has noticed about
network-based writing classrooms: they seem almost "meant for
simulation" (Batson, "ENFI" 4) -- that is, for playing with roles,
scenarios, and invented characters.  Participants seem to agree that
the Oracle is in a small way a verbal world constructed by the
community.  Good Oracularities, one questionnaire respondent wrote,
"are necessarily creative and humorous, but I think the very best ones
display a sort of *attitude* that the Oracle has.  This is hard to
define.  It's sort of an agreed-upon personality that the collective
mind has."  Another respondent observed that Usenet in general is "an
artifice by which digitheads like ourselves can communicate with each
other - it's a really crude precursor to cyberspace, and is a lot of
fun.  But it's definitely a simulation."

5. The Oracle and Textual Authority

Because Oracle writing is fluid, improvisatory, and infinitely variable, it
tends especially to mock forms of discourse, from computer documentation to
scripture, that are formulaic and authoritative at the same time.  In Bakhtin's
terms Oracularities are thoroughly "heteroglossic," composed of pastiche,
parody, fantasy, imitated voices, conventional genres, comic dialogues.  If the
traditional model of authorship is what Barthes calls the "Author-God" ("Death
of the Author" 146), the Oracle undermines it at every opportunity.  Parodies
of the Bible abound.  There is a "Very Strange Version" [391-08], and a
marvelously blasphemous version of Biblical history in which (among other
things) Jesus is sent to earth to warn man not to ask the Oracle the Woodchuck
Question [460-05], and even a dialogue where the Oracle uses a synchronous
"talk" program to summon God on behalf of a supplicant:
                                                                     [line 497]
   } Somebody wants to talk to you, God.
   }
   } >Yes?  Can't you just give them my Internet address?
   }
   } Sure would like to, God.  But you see, in the context of an Oracular
   } message you've degenerated from a halfhearted joke into an
   } irrepressively [sic] boring formulaic answer.
   }
   } >What is this?  What are you saying?
   }
   } God, you're dead.  Not because of that asshole Nietzsche, not because
   } you're old, not because you hang out at the terminal room on Saturday
   } nights.  You're dead because you are invoked for answering questions
   } like "How much would does a wood chuck chuck if a woodchuck could
   } chuck wood?" and "Is Lisa good in bed?"  You're such a stiff. [155-05]

(This dialogue ends when the Oracle deletes his "God" program,
casually noting that "God is simply a mathematical construct of mine
that I use to amuse myself during spare clock cycles.")  Of course,
the Oracle's own textual authority is no less vulnerable.  If he is an
AI program or a computer, he can be undone by system errors, infinite
loops, and line noise.  (In one Oracularity, the Oracle is on trial
for dereliction of duty.  Called to the witness stand, "Kinzler" is
asked if he knows the defendant.  "Yes I do. He's an executable file
in my home directory"  [238-10].)  As a deity, he is beset by Homeric
squabbles with other gods and by his own arrogance.  As a human male,
he is often bested by Lisa in an ongoing battle of the sexes, or held
up to ridicule for his thoroughgoing paternalism.

Always, however, the Oracle is a product of writing, and his status as
text is often underlined by metafictional play with the Oracle
conventions or, more generally, with narrative and language
themselves.  Asked which types of Oracularities they preferred,
respondents to my questionnaire chose as their favorite genre
"meta-Oracularities (self-referential plays on Oracle conventions)."
Given the preponderance of participants with strong computer
backgrounds (78% are, or are preparing to be, "computer
professionals"), this is not surprising: of the six distinctive
characteristics of "hacker humor" identified by Eric Raymond, the
first is "fascination with form-vs.-content jokes, paradoxes, and
humor having to do with confusion of metalevels" (_New Hacker's
Dictionary_ 203) ^4^.  Some of the best Oracularities play with
surrealistic and metafictional frame-breaking in the best tradition of
Italo Calvino and John Barth.  For instance, in one of readers'
all-time favorites, the Oracle is asked who would win a fight between
Superman and the Hulk. Finding the question too trivial for his august
consideration, the Oracle runs a simulation program on the Vax in
search of an answer.  Sim-Hulk and Sim-Superman batter each other
until the Hulk, about to lose, decides to smash out of the simulation,
whereupon he and Superman begin showing up on users' terminals all
over Indiana University, and "Kinzler" receives an electronic message
from an irate administrator: "Stephen, what is that goddamned Oracle
of yours up to now?  We have memory faults all over the place, iuvax
is threatening to 'smash puny workstations' and this errant process is
invading every die green behemoth!  You see what I mean? Knock it off!
Smash!" [140-05].  Another Oracularity is an extended self-referential
tour-de-force along the lines of Barth's "Life Story"; if anything it
is more effective in showing narrative giving birth to itself since no
identifiable author stands behind the prose:
                                                                     [line 557]
   The Usenet Oracle has pondered your question deeply.
   Your question was:

   > This is the first sentence of my question, which wants the Oracle to
   > know that all the sentences of my question grovel humbly before the
   > Awesome presence.  . . .
   >
   > Boldly reclaiming the path, this sentence starts out a new and improved
   > paragraph.  This sentence is confident we will finally get to the
   > point, since it can see the next sentence will, indeed, ask the
   > question.  This sentence wants to know if there is anything profound in
   > self-reference. . . .

   And in response, thus spake the Oracle:

   } This is the first sentence of the Oracle's response.  This is the
   } second sentence of that response.  This sentence appears several times.
     [. . .]
   }
   } This is actually the third sentence of the first paragraph but has been
   } placed here in error.  This sentence appears several times.  This
   } sentence attempts to abandon the self-referential style so that your
   } question may be answered, but fails.  This sentence makes the same
   } attempt, but fails just as miserably.  This sentence appears several
   } times.  This sentence, though not able to abandon self-reference,
   } nonetheless succeeds in tackling your question in that it postulates
   } that while the selfreferential style may seem horribly vague and boring,
   } it *does* give ample opportunity for playfulness on the part of the
   } author.

6. The Oracle and the Network Community

The preceding Oracularity is somewhat anomalous in the thorough
undermining of authorial presence it borrows from the "high-culture"
experimental literature it imitates.  Ordinarily, techniques like
self-referentiality and frame-breaking in the Oracularities differ
subtly from their analogues in literary metafiction.  In the latter,
they serve to efface the concrete social reality of the author by
providing the illusion that the text writes itself.  The "author" of
literary metafiction is presumed to be the sheer intertextual
conjunction of other books, or perhaps an arbitrary language game,
like the combinatory that generates the books in Borges' Library of
Babel.  By claiming origin in pure formal systems, metafiction denies
that it is a product of a given society, let alone of an individual
author.
                                                                     [line 603]
However, the Oracle's obsession with logic games, paradox, and
infinite regress mark its collective author as a member of a
distinctive and identifiable subculture, that of the hacker.  Where
literary metafiction can be -- perhaps most often is -- apolitical,
the Oracle's very existence on the Net is an implicit endorsement of
hacker politics: information (both data and text) should flow freely;
authority over information systems should be decentralized; the
aesthetics of programming (or any other creation; a poem can be a
"good hack") is more important than the material uses to which it may
be put.  Jim Cheetham, one of the Oracle Priests, finds awareness of
"hacker culture" important to Oracle participants "because I think
it's a good and correct outlook to try to educate 'net users into,"
especially since the Oracle "has a (slightly) moderated version of the
'net's government by anarchy" (personal communication).  The core
characteristic of Net governance is that conventions and rules emerge
from community practice and consensus rather than being imposed from
the top.

In many ways the development of Oracle conventions (like those of
Usenet writing in general) resembles the evolution of epic in an oral
culture: any individual participant is free to alter, supplement, or
redirect the narrative, but only those innovations that are accepted
by the community survive ^5^.  Fascination with recursion is, one might
say, sociologically grounded in the Oracle community, as reflected in
a wickedly clever Oracular response to the question, "Why don't
computer scientists have any sexual stamina?": "Their problem is a
fear that any repetitive process is actually the dreaded infinite
loop.  Providing a proof that the usual termination condition will
still occur should suffice" [089-10].  Roger Noe, a computer scientist
and Oracular Priest, believes the Oracle's persona reflects "self-
satire at its best":

         [W]e're really making fun of ourselves, the users of computers,
         and the designers and implementers of computer hardware and
         software, which is not necessarily distinct from the group of
         users.  . . . [M]uch of the Oracle mythology is simply a satire
         of the stereotypical computer nerd.  He's a know-it-all who
         holes up in his sanctum sanctorum, surrounded by every kind of
         computer hardware and software imaginable, connected to every
         network that might exist (including olympus-net, god-net,
         cthulhu-net, you name it) and continuously engaged in multiple
         simultaneous conversations from people obsequiously seeking his
         knowledge. (Personal communication) ^6^
                                                                     [line 647]
In identifying self-satire as a generic motive, Noe helps explain why
most Oracularities are *not* couched in terms that only a computer
scientist or electrical engineer can understand.  A few Oracularities
have in fact been written entirely in C programming code (inevitably
beginning with the header "#include <stdgrovel.h>"--i.e., an imaginary
standard library grovel file), and others that elaborate the syntax of
a context-free grammar for Oracle questions and answers, but a heavy
concentration of these generally provokes irritation from Oracle
participants.  As one respondent to my questionnaire, an engineer, put
it, "I HATE (!!!!) Oracularities which rely on some intensive
knowledge and familiarity with computers, operating systems and
languages - computer nerd 'humour' of this sort is pathetic."  This
even though Oracle authors tend to imagine their audience as composed
precisely of computer nerds; as one participant described it, "a room
full of sophomore and junior undergraduate computer science geeks with
x-rated gifs on their xterms, speaking technobabble to each other, and
nary a one of them has had a date or a bath for a month." (As a matter
of fact, the average age of Oracle readers turns out to be a
comparatively elderly 26.)  One motive for not writing technobabble,
then, might be to satirize those who can write nothing else.  (In his
entry on "Hacker Speech Style," Raymond says, "One should use just
enough jargon to communicate precisely and identify oneself as a
member of the culture; overuse of jargon . . . is considered tacky and
the mark of a loser" [_New Hacker's Dictionary_ 20].)

The members of the Oracle Priesthood who answered my questionnaire
agreed that a broad cultural knowledge is important to give competent
responses to questions.  Here is how they rated a number of categories
of knowledge on a scale from 1="not important" to 5="very important":

         Classical (Greek & Roman) mythology:           3.5
         Classic English and American literature:       3.4
         Illuminati, Tolkien, other cult literature:    3.4
         Current world affairs:                         3.3
         American popular culture/politics:             3.2
         Geography and history:                         3.1
         Hacker culture and lore:                       3.1
         Oracle mythos (Lisa, ZOTting, etc.):           3.0
         Natural and biological sciences:               2.8
         Unix operating system:                         2.8
         C programming:                                 2.6
         Movies:                                        2.6
         Other computer systems (VMS, DOS, etc):        2.5
                                                                     [line 691]
There is a clear continuum here from literature down through current
affairs and history to formal and scientific systems.  These responses
suggest a catholicity, a desire to open the network subculture up to
any form of culture it can incorporate.  To the extent that it is a
hacker phenomenon, the Oracle is the vehicle of a discourse community
that is actively assimilating older modes of thought and writing
rather than turning inward. So it is no surprise to find, for example,
an updated version of the old Davy Crockett backwoods boast:

   > I am a Unix Guru: I debug programs from octal dumps.
   > I eat VMS hackers for lunch.
   > I know the entire Ada manual by rote, never use Ada anyway since I write
   > all my programs in machine language and never use assemblers since I
   > type in the binaries directly using cat. [a Unix program that displays
         output]
   [. . .]
   > I write device drivers in my sleep.
   > The DEC salespeople worship me as a minor deity and sacrifice young,
   > buxom secretaries to me at full moon.  [141-10]

It wouldn't be too far off, in fact, to call Davy Crockett a nineteenth-
century version of the Oracle.  The jests, tall tales, and embroidered
history published in the popular Davy Crockett almanacs were anonymous
vehicles for solidifying the folk culture of the frontier, as the
Oracle is for the electronic frontier.  The Oracle differs chiefly in
its inclusiveness: the electronic frontier is a circle whose
circumference is nowhere, and in principal anyone with network access
can join the community.  Consider the Swedish participant who reported
that he appreciates the Oracle because it allowed him to have "a
fruitful cooperation with a total stranger, which other people (also
strangers) have liked so much as to put [the result] in the
oracularities."  The evidence is that writing for a virtual community
like the Usenet Oracle's can be its own reward.  "It's wonderful,"
another participant wrote; "there is an immediate reward in the form
of your own question being answered.  And if your answer is good,
immediate reward by publication."
                                                                     [line 728]
The existence of the Usenet Oracle by itself is hardly enough to
herald the "death of the author," especially when so much
electronic writing still takes traditional forms.  Nor does working with
computers diminish individualism simply because networks constitute a
kind of communal reality or because programming emphasizes formal
systems rather than subjective expression; Eric Raymond notes that in
its anonymity "the Oracle is atypical.  Most hacker-community projects
are undertaken as ego expression, a way to earn the respect and
approval of peers" (Personal communication).  And the same can be said
of most non-hackers who publish on the Net.  But the energy and
creativity that writers put into their Oracle participation is one
among several pieces of evidence that the computer's ability to create
self-contained virtual worlds is beginning to affect what we
traditionally call "writing" or "literature" as distinct from "mere"
game.

Just as the players in 3-D interactive adventure games of the future
will "become" knights, hobbits, or New York cabbies, virtual writers
in interactive network spaces take on new identities in a universe of
discourse where their supposedly "real" selves may never be known, and
where even their simulated identities may not be fixed.  The Net may
yet turn out to be that culture imagined by Michel Foucault "where
discourse would circulate without any need for an author . . . [and]
would unfold in a pervasive anonymity" ("What Is an Author," 138).  In
such a culture writers may lose the rewards of traditional authorship,
while gaining the satisfaction of helping to create art forms and
genres that could not have existed otherwise.  As one of the
questionnaire respondents wrote, "Oracularities are designed for the
medium in which they are read--I can't imagine it working on anything
but Usenet."  It remains to be seen whether such innovative forms will
become, figuratively, the cathedrals of cyberspace that countless
unacknowledged builders and designers will collaborate on for the sake
of creation itself.


(Special thanks to Steve Kinzler and all the Oracular Priests and
participants who corresponded with me as I was doing research for this
article.)
                                                                     [line 767]

NOTES

(^1^) "Thirty Minutes" was published in the online journal ART COM, Number 42
(October 1990); for information on obtaining back issues send e-mail to
artcomtv@well.sf.ca.us.

(^2^) All Oracularities quoted in this article were originally published in
on-line digests; the first number refers to the digest volume, while the
second is individual Oracularity.  The Oracle help file referred to above
includes information on retrieving back digests.

(^3^) The readership figure derives from Brian Reid's period estimations of
Usenet group readership posted to the newsgroup news.lists.

(^4^) The others are "Elaborate deadpan parodies of large intellectual
constructs"; "Jokes that involve screwily precise reasoning from bizarre,
ludicrous, or just grossly counter-intuitive premises"; "Fascination with
puns and wordplay"; "A fondness for apparently mindless humor with subversive
currents of intelligence in it" (Marx Bros., Monty Python); and "References
to the symbol-object antinomies and associated ideas in Zen Buddhism and
(less often) Taoism" (203-204).  All of these are common in the
Oracularities.

(^5^) Asked how Oracle conventions developed, Steve Kinzler replied,
"emergently.  Someone tries something in an Oracle question or answer, it
gets published in the Oracularities, everyone else reads it, catches on and
starts using it themselves.  The durable ones stick, the weak ones fade away"
(personal communication).

(^6^) Another of the highest-rated Oracularities manages to interpret Creation
in hackish terms at the same time that it satirizes the stereotyped male
hacker:

   The Usenet Oracle has pondered your question deeply.
   Your question was:

   > Why is it that most men suffer a complete loss [o]f personality when
   > exposed in any manner to a computer?
                                                                     [line 807]
   And in response, thus spake the Oracle:

   } In order to explain this I must detail the story of creation...
   }
   } In the beginning there was a Computer.  And God said to the computer
   } % vi creation.c
   } He then wrote the universe, and compiled it and it was good.
   } And God ran it in background, and saw that it was good.  He
   } then noticed that the Universe was eating CPU time and tried
   } to kill it, so that he could do his important work, which
   } was to determine the Ultimate Question of Life the Universe
   } and Everything.  The Operating System had a glitch and the
   } Universe could not be kill -9'd.
   }
   } It came to pass that a lady friend of His wanted to visit
   } with Him.  He snarled at her for the interruption.  Then Man,
   } being made in His image, forever duplicated this when being
   } interrupted by women while he was working on a computer.
   }
   } That is why men react poorly when being interrupted on the
   } computer.  It is a Divine trait.
   }
   } You owe the Oracle the source code for the Universe.  [175-10]


REFERENCES

Barthes, Roland.  "The Death of the Author."  In _Image, Music, Text_.
Trans. Stephen Heath.  New York: Hill and Wang, 1977.

Batson, Trent.  "ENFI and Drama."  _EnfiLOG_ 1.1 (1992).

Bolter, Jay David.  _Writing Space: The Computer, Hypertext, and the History
of Writing_.  Hillsdale, NJ: Lawrence Erlbaum, 1991.

Charvat, William.  _The Profession of Authorship in America, 1800-1870_.
Ed. Matthew J. Bruccoli.  Columbus: Ohio State UP, 1968.
                                                                     [line 845]
Ede, Lisa, and Andrea Lunsford.  _Singular Texts/Plural Authors: Perspectives
on Collaborative Writing_.  Carbondale: Southern Illinois UP, 1990.

Forster, E. M.  _Anonymity: An Enquiry_.  London: Hogarth, 1925.

Foucault, Michel.  "What Is an Author?"  In _Language, Counter-Memory,
Practice: Selected Essays and Interviews_.  Ed. Donald F. Bouchard.  Trans.
Donald F. Bouchard and Sherry Simon.  Ithaca: Cornell UP, 1977.

Kamuf, Peggy.  _Signature Pieces: On the Institution of Authorship_.  Ithaca:
Cornell UP, 1988.

Poster, Mark.  _The Mode of Information: Poststructuralism and Social
Context_.  Chicago: U of Chicago P, 1990.

Raymond, Eric S., ed.  _The New Hacker's Dictionary_.  Cambridge, Mass: MIT
P, 1991.

David Sewell      English Department            dsew@troi.cc.rochester.edu
                  University of Rochester

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                   An Electronic Journal concerned with the
                implications of electronic networks and texts.
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              University at Albany, State University of New York

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CONTENTS:

   Editorial Notes                                        [ Begins at line 58 ]

   Electronic Journals and Libraries                     [ Begins at line 102 ]

   About _EJournal_'s Readers                            [ Begins at line 316 ]

   An Ownership/Copyright Exchange - Allen and Dilworth  [ Begins at line 409 ]

      by John B. Dilworth          and Jonathan Allen
         Department of Philosophy     Dept. of Information and Computer Science
         Western Michigan University   University of California, Irvine

   Announcement about Simulation and Gaming              [ Begins at line 521 ]

   Information -                                         [ Begins at line 530 ]

      About Subscriptions and Back Issues
      About Supplements to Previous Texts
      About Letters to the Editor
      About Reviews
      About _EJournal_

   People -                                              [ Begins at line 604 ]

      Board of Advisors
      Consulting Editors

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Editorial Notes                                                       [line 58]

    This issue carries a followup exchange on the subject of ownership
and copyright of electronic texts, a thread that started a year ago.
    It also delivers two questionnaires.  One is about electronic
journals and libraries, and one is about you.
    Please respond to both of them.
    They are not audience surveys to help us make promises to
advertisers.  They have to do with our sliver of what the networks
are-- or can be --all about.
    If all 2787 of you decide not to respond to the first one, about
libraries and how they ought to treat the fledgling phenomenon of
electronic journals, librarians might find it easy to ignore us.
    No matter what reputation _EJournal_ and other experiments build
for ourselves inside cyberspace, we'll all remain merely virtual if
librarians decide we're too much trouble to share with
non-subscribers.
    That first questionnaire consists of 22 items designed by an
Information Science investigator; they can be responded to easily with
an "extraction" maneuver and e-mailed to Meta Reid at an RPI address,
or they can be printed out and penciled in and sent via fax or snail
mail.
    The second one, ten items, asks about your relationship with
_EJournal_.  Your responses will help us understand how diverse a
group you are and what you want from us.
    You can e-mail to peter.gorny@arbi.informatik.uni-oldenburg.de or
to us, or fax or snail mail to us.  We can't quite promise you
anonymity, but we will remove all message-header information (from
everything sent here) before we start looking at what respondents say.
    We anticipate coming up with some interesting totals and
percentages to share with you, but you shouldn't anticipate
sophisticated cross-referential analysis.
    We want to refer to the two questionnaires as "1992 Surveys," so
please don't file this issue under "to be taken care of later" --
respond now.  (We can use January responses, though.)  Our thanks.
    The next issue, which we hope to have on its way in just a few
days, delivers an essay about the interactive "Oracle" writing space,
with observations about the nature of "authorship" in an electronic
context.                                                              [line 96]
    May you savor a super solstice season, and a noteworthy 1993.

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(There is a sample answer sheet at the end of this 22-question survey.)

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 1. Libraries can ignore the existence of electronic journals (e-jrnls)
    for at least another 5 years.

    Strongly disagree                             Strongly agree
    1        2         3         4         5         6         7

 2. Making e-jrnls available in libraries is necessary for their
    success.

    Strongly disagree                             Strongly agree
    1         2         3         4         5        6         7

 3. Libraries should be leaders in encouraging e-jrnl use.

    Strongly disagree                             Strongly agree
    1        2         3         4         5         6         7

 4. People for whom computer links to e-jrnls are not available will be
    left out of the information age.

    Strongly disagree                             Strongly agree
    1        2         3         4         5         6         7

 5. Creating a static copy of an e-jrnl defeats the reasons for
    publishing in electronic format.

    Strongly disagree                             Strongly agree
    1        2         3         4         5         6         7
                                                                     [line 134]
 6. E-jrnls may be useful for small specialized groups, but not for
    large diverse groups.

    Strongly disagree                             Strongly agree
    1        2         3         4         5         6         7

 7. E-jrnls are apt to proliferate so rapidly and without standards that
    no library will be able to keep up with the information contained
    in them.

    Strongly disagree                             Strongly agree
    1        2         3         4         5         6         7

 8. E-jrnls are currently accepted in the academic world as equals to
    print.

    Strongly disagree                             Strongly agree
    1        2         3         4         5         6         7

 9. Libraries should accommodate e-jrnls as equals to print journals.

    Strongly disagree                             Strongly agree
    1        2         3         4         5         6         7

10. E-jrnls will not be acceptable until abstracting services, e.g.
    _Science Citation Index_, reference their contents.

    Strongly disagree                             Strongly agree
    1        2         3         4         5         6         7

11. E-jrnls may be useful in reducing costs of publishing, storing and
    making available technical information.

    Strongly disagree                             Strongly agree
    1        2         3         4         5         6         7

12. Are you currently reading EJournal (a) at home (b) in an office
    (c) in a school (d) in a library?                                [line 172]

13. If you are reading this at a place other than a library, would you
    like a library to make it available?

    (a) Yes
    (b) No

14. E-jrnls in a library should be made available in a library's _______.

      (a) information area
      (b) journal stack area
      (c) multi-media area
      (d) (a), (b), and (c)
      (e) other:______________

15. In the computer terminal area where e-jrnls are made available
    there should be ________________.

      (a) a reference manual for help
      (b) help screens on the terminal
      (c) a sign-up sheet for a mini-course on using e-jrnls
      (d) a librarian stationed there to give individual instruction
      (e) some form of announcement that the computer
          terminal has e-jrnls available
      (f) all of the above
      (g) other______________________

16. Would you advise that libraries "advertise" e-jrnls?

      (a) Yes
      (b) No

    b. If you answered Yes, should advertisement be in the form of:

      (a) Newsletters
      (b) Notices on bulletin boards
      (c) "highlighting" the area to make it stand out
      (d) all of the above                                           [line 210]
      (e) in other ways, for example...______________________

17. How should a library identify e-jrnls accessible at some library
    other than its own?

      (a) in a list near the terminal
      (b) in a list on a help screen of the terminal
      (c) in other ways, for example_______________

18. If your library could make e-jrnls available, would you be willing
    to pay any part of the subscription fees, computer account fee, or
    the cost of printing or downloading it to a disk?

      (a) Yes, some nominal fee of $2.00 or under
      (b) Yes, a fee of under $10.00, but more than two
      (c) Yes, associated fees of any reasonable amount
      (d) No, no fees of any kind

19. Do you often read e-jrnls?

      (a) Yes, but it varies from month to month
      (b) Yes, at least once a month
      (c) Yes, at least once a week
      (d) Yes, at least once a day
      (e) This is the first time I have read an e-jrnl

20. Do you refer to e-jrnl articles when you write?

      (a) Yes
      (b) No

21. How did you find out about this
    e-jrnl?______________________________________________

22. Do you read any electronic journals besides this one?

      (a) Yes, I read _______________________________
      (b) No                                                         [line 248]

                         General Information:

Country in which you read this journal: _______________

Your age is _________

Position of respondent: (a) professor, (b) student,
                        (c) librarian, (d) other_______________

 a. If in school:
      Name of school: _________________________
      Field of study/teaching: __________________________

Name of Reader (optional): ______________________________

Comments are welcome:



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                               Responses

     (Please send your response in any one of the following ways)

   By mail:                    By fax:                  By e mail:

  Meta Reid                    518: 276-3017            amendc@RPI.edu
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                          Sample Answer Sheet

 (For Questions 1-11; please answer with appropriate numeral)

 1)__  2)__  3)__  4)__  5)__  6)__  7)__  8)__ 9)__ 10)__ 11)__     [line 286]

 12) a, b, c, d
 13) Yes / No
 14) a, b, c, d, e
 15) a, b, c, d, e, f, g____________________
 16) Yes / No  a, b, c, d, e
 17) a, b, c
 18) a, b, c, d
 19) a, b, c, d, e
 20) Yes / No
 21) How did you find out about this e-jrnl?____________________
 22) Yes, I read ______________________________________________
     No


                          General Information

Country: __________________
Age: ____
Position: a, b, c, d
 a) If in school:
    Name of school: ________________
    Field of study: ________________
Name (optional): __________________

Comments: _________________________________________________________

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1.  If you are affiliated with a not-for-profit organization, what kind
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        (for instance: library, museum, government, education        [line 324]
                [arts and letters, math and science, social/behavioral
                sciences;
                engineering, law, medicine, business])?
        Other not-for-profit?


2.  If you are affiliated with a for-profit organization, what sort is
    it?
        (for instance: computing, engineering, finance, law,
        manufacturing, medicine, publishing)?
        Other for-profit?


3.  How is _EJournal_ delivered to you for reading (e-mail [you are a
        subscriber], Usenet connection, library terminal, paper
        copy, other)?


4.  What sort of 'ware do you use to read _EJournal_?
        a.  Is your connection a central computer facility
            (via UN*X, VAX, IBM, other)?
        b.  Is it via a commercial program (CompuServe, Prodigy, MCI Mail,
            other)?
        c.  What kind of platform do you sit in front of (dumb terminal,
            PC/DOS, PC/Windows, Apple/Macintosh, Commodore/Amiga, other)?


5.  Do you print _EJournal_ to save? to share?


6.  Do you forward _EJournal_ to one or two people, or to a list of people?


7.  Do you file _EJournal_ electronically for future reference?


8.  Have you retrieved _EJournal_ issues (or Contents) from the FILESERV?
                                                                     [line 362]
        a) How often?


9.  What do you hope you will find when you admit _EJournal_ to your
    screen?  Please close your eyes and recall (and record for us)
    what sort of text you hoped you would find when this issue arrived.



    [Here are some hints about subjects you could add to the hopes you
    expressed above: education and pedagogy, matrix/network/cyberspace
    musings, thoughts about "text" and "display," discussions of virtual
    reality, arts, hypertext, interactive fiction, MUDs; *examples* of
    uniquely electronic fiction and poetry and other arts; costs/benefits
    of networking; ownership and copyright; controversy and polemic about
    gender and power and disability and access to and uses of technology.]


10. Do you have any comments about what would prompt you to recommend that
    others subscribe, and what act or omission would push you to unsubscribe?
    (Please don't unsub because you hate surveys!)



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An extracted survey with your responses beneath each question, or a message
containing numbered responses, can be e-mailed directly to:
       peter.gorny@arbi.informatik.uni-oldenburg.de
You could reply to _EJournal_ at our usual address:
       ejournal@albany.bitnet
but we will forward your text to PG, who has kindly offered to compile your
electronic responses.

If you decide to use paper, you can fax your page or two, or use snail
mail, to our pseudo-virtual office:

FAX:    (518) 442-4599  (ATTN: Ted Jennings)                         [line 400]

Snail:  Ted Jennings
        Department of English
        University at Albany
        Albany NY 12222  USA

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An Ownership/Copyright Exchange - Allen and Dilworth

    by John B. Dilworth           and Jonathan Allen
       Department of Philosophy       Dept. of Information and Computer Science
       Western Michigan University    University of California, Irvine

Supplement to the Volume 1 Number 3-2 (September, 1992) essay by John B.
Dilworth, "Credit, Compensation and Copyright: Owning Knowledge and Electronic
Networks."

Here, with their permission, is correspondence between John B. Dilworth and
Jonathan Allen on the subject of John B. Dilworth's "Credit, Compensation and
Copyright: Owning Knowledge and Electronic Networks" essay in our September,
1992 issue (V1N3-2).

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--  from Jonathan Allen:

Dear Professor Dilworth,

I found your recent Ejournal essay interesting and useful.  It
opened my  eyes to the importance of indirect compensation--the
gains in prestige  and future career progress--for rewarding the
creation of intellectual  property in the electronic era.  Indirect  [line 438]
compensation will be enough motivation to produce intellectual
property in more cases than are commonly assumed, I agree, but in
how many more cases?  If most compensation is indirect, how will
the mix of intellectual artifacts produced be affected?

Indirect compensation, it seems to me, rests on two assumption:  1)
that  the value of intellectual property is primarily related to
the value and  the creativity of the ideas, rather than the effort
put into the collection, assembly, and expression of information;
and 2) that the career paths and personal motivations of authors
are closely tied to the  potential for future publication.  These
assumptions are valid for many  academics, for instance, but not
always.  I would guess that textbooks  would be undervalued
relative to their commercial value.

In the larger publishing world, I would guess that the lack of
direct compensation would relatively discourage the production of
published materials that emphasize mundane effort over creative
ideas--manuals, directories, and reference works of all kinds.  The
author that spends  many months or years compiling a list of bed-
and-breakfast inns, or a detailed repair manual for a Honda Civic,
is probably a lot more interested in being compensated directly
than in adding an item to their  vita.  The increased uncertainty
(of an economic kind) could become a powerful disincentive to
produce.  I don't want us to fall into the trap  of thinking that
academic research work is the norm for our electronic  future.

Thanks again for an interesting essay.  Sincerely,

Jonathan Allen
Dept. of Information and Computer Science
University of California, Irvine.

--  reply from John Dilworth:

Dear Professor Allen,

Thanks for your interesting comments on my _EJournal_ essay.         [line 476]

I agree that indirect compensation may be a less significant factor
in overall reward in the case of more routine literary tasks.
However, I don't regard this as clearly a problem which will have
to be addressed as electronic media become more prominent.  Nor is
indirect compensation significant only in academic contexts.

If we go back to basics for a moment, and ask why people are
motivated to write anything at all, financial compensation (whether
direct or indirect) is only one factor. It has to be adequate
enough so that talented people think their efforts will not go
unrewarded, but not much more than that.  Publishers generally are
swamped by literary submissions of all kinds, submitted for all
kinds of reasons, so some falloff in volume might even be welcomed
by them.

If excellent submissions became hard to obtain, publishers would
have to pay more direct compensation to non-academic authors, or
offer promises of larger advances on future works (another form of
indirect compensation).  Electronic media could finance such
payments for general electronic publishing by charging subscribers
a fee of some kind. This is not clearly undesirable, because a
willingness to pay at least a minimal subscription fee does give
evidence of genuine demand for a literary product. Perhaps we need
not be too concerned about potentially discouraging authors whose
efforts no-one would have wanted to read anyway.

On the relevance of indirect compensation to non-academic as well
as academic authorship, adding an item demonstrating authorship
skills to one's job Resume is just as potentially rewarding as a
publication in an academic Vita.  With the increasingly volatile
job market in every area, solid evidence of past achievement is
exactly what is needed for speedy promotion or beneficial re-
hiring. Though I emphasised creative originality in my essay,
superior expression or presentation would also be generally
rewarded through indirect compensation in such contexts.
With best wishes,
                                                                     [line 514]
John B. Dilworth
Dept. of Philosophy, Western Michigan Univ., MI 49008
Dilworth@gw.wmich.edu

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CONTENTS:

   Editorial Notes -                                      [ Begin at line   62 ]

   Letters about V2N2 (David Coniam on "Literacy ....")
        from Peter Graham                                 [ Begins at line  92 ]
        from Bret Pettichord                              [ Begins at line 147 ]
        from Philip Taylor                                [ Begins at line 254 ]
        from Alvanir Carvalho                             [ Begins at line 343 ]

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   Letter about e-journal layout, ASCII, bandwidth        [ Begins at line 379 ]
        from Murry Christensen

   Announcement from Joe Raben about SCHOLAR              [ Begins at line 477 ]

   Inquiry from Michel Lenoble about Computer Generated Literature
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Editorial Notes -

        This is our first "letters" issue.  There have been five
responses to David Coniam's essay about children and keyboards (and to
my editorial).  One of them was a request to reprint his piece in the
_Journal of Computing in Childhood Education_.  One, from Brazil, was a
report of a "test," of sorts, of David's hypothesis.  I have not been
able to reach David to solicit his replies to the writers, but I am
taking advantage of the medium to share the letters now, knowing that we
can distribute his reactions to them, if he wants us to, as soon as we
do reestablish electronic contact.
        There is also an "unprovoked" letter to the editor, this one
about the ways that network transmission constricts communication in one
dimension even as it makes exchanges quick and easy in another.
        There are also an announcement and an inquiry that seem
related to _Ejournal_'s purpose and (probably) to our readers'
interests.
        Han Geurdes has had to resign as a Consulting Editor.  I am
canvassing ten people who have asked about joining that group to see if
they are still interested, and would be happy to receive names,
addresses, interests and "qualifications" from anyone else who would
like to be in the queue.
        _EJournal_ would especially like to look at essays about virtual
reality (including MUDs) and about interactive fiction (hypertext
make-believe).  Robert Coover's article "The End of the Book" in the
NYTimes Book Review of 6/21/92 pointed to _EJournal_ as a place where
such essays appear; a review of Stuart Moulthrop's _Victory Garden_
would seem especially appropriate.  Any volunteers?
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[Mid-June, 1992
Editor, _EJournal_]

A few comments on 2.2 just received:

1) The jargon reference to text being "privileged" over sound was
jarring to me.  I associate it with a school of historical and literary
analysis.  Is that an explicit association you intend?  Outside of that
context, use of that verb is unusual and I suspect unnecessary.

2) I found David Coniam's article on handwriting and keyboarding fairly
self-indulgent.  In spite of the seeming authentication lent by the
references, the assertions in the paper seemed to me very ad hoc and
anecdotal.  His early references to the times-tables seemed ambiguous to
me:  should we or should we not memorize them?  If not, what other means
is there than rote, or going through numerous repetitive exercises?  In
memorizing a poem, for example, I don't pretend to be trying to feel and
understand its meaning as I work on each line and phrase; yet having
memorized it I feel I have something of enormous value that comes back
for years.

Coniam's swipe at Latin is another example of an assertion, not backed
up, and for questionable purpose.  Perhaps he doesn't like Latin; that's
his privilege.  But many people have found it indeed an aid to thought
and expression even in English; his blanket condemnation is just as ad
hoc as their own approval.

I'm delighted to hear of the successes and progress of his child, but it
doesn't seem of a whole lot of generalizable use to me.  Does the
editorial board listed at the end of Ejournal do reviews and comments of
mss?  Did they on this one?

--Peter Graham, Rutgers University.

[Editor's reply, 15 June  1992]

Dear Peter - Thanks for your letter about _EJournal_ v2n2.  May we
consider it a formal (or even informal) "letter to the editor," intended
for publication?  David Coniam might want to respond -- or might not.
                                                                     [line 131]
Meanwhile, my quick answers to two of your questions: I didn't mean to sound
like an advocate of a particular "school" of analysis, but I do find that the
way I thought I was using "privilege" strikes chords in me that other phrasings
do not.  Perhaps "giving undue weight, by implication, [to sight] because of
the absence of an alternative [hearing] not explicitly mentioned" would have
been more thorough.  But I'm not sure that that phrasing would have done the
job as well as "priviliged" seemed to -- to me.

The board does and did offer comments, suggestions, opinions, approvals,
disapprovals; I alone am responsible for assessing the several responses and
deciding whether to accept a particular essay.

Thanks again for your thoughts.     Best,  Ted Jennings

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[Mid-June, 1992]
To: Ted Jennings and David Coniam
Re: Writing as punishment and work

Ted, You mention [in the Editorial] that writing is often used as a
punishment and that people often don't look forward to this. You mention
that people rarely enjoy having to take notes at meetings. You contrast
this with speech, which people don't have to learn at school and which
is not a punishment.

Anyway, i wonder if these reactions aren't better described as a
difference between being told to do something and doing something on
your own initiative. For example, people often take their own notes at
meetings without displeasure. What makes the task possibly onerous is
having to take them for everybody. This means that you'll have to make
sure you don't forget anything that other people think is important, and
the like. But people often dislike having to speak in front of other
people as well.

In regards to your and David Coniam's remarks on the future of
handwriting, i'd just like to say that i have machines both at home
and at work, but that when i'm working on serious writing, i prefer
doing the first draft by hand on paper.  Maybe i'm a luddite, but i
can't look forward to a day when children will not know how to use a
pen.                                                                 [line 171]

Also i wonder if it will really happen. A pocket calculator can now be
purchased for the price of a notebook. But even to use one, one needs to
know how to write letters in order to write down the results. The
alternative would be to get a paper-tape calculator, but those are far
more expensive.

Will electronic keyboards and word processors someday be as common as
calculators are today? Will you be able to buy one for ten bucks at the
grocery store? Will it have a built in printer? What will the market be
for such a device? Students, professionals, managers, anyone else? Would
people use it for their grocery lists?

What seems to me to be more likely is that a growing class of
illiterates will be created alongside a computer-literate elite and that
the computerization of education will accelerate the split between these
two classes. Giving children a computer may enhance their sense of
control over the world, but so would giving them a slave. But not all
children are going to get computers, and those that don't will have
their sense of control reduced. Also, for the price of one piece of
decent educational software, i could get my son several perfectly fun
and educational activity books.

I used to teach logo to children. I once taught it to a three-year-old.
My son is now 6 and i haven't taught it to him. Maybe i will someday,
but he hasn't asked and i think it's more important to just encourage
his drawing/writing skills, his vocabulary, and his social skills.

That's a point that neither of you mention: learning to draw letters and
to draw them well helps one learn how to draw. I think that people's
general unwillingness to draw is more problematic than their
unwillingness to write. I'm presently employed as a graphics software
tester, but i still think that it is much easier to do quick sketches
with pencil and paper than with a computer.

On pen-based computing: it is not proposed as a replacement for a
keyboard for those with a large amount of writing. Instead it is
proposed as an interface to sales-forms, pocket calendars, and for
marking comments on things other people have written. Whether these
tasks will taken over by pen-based computers or not, they will require
people to have hand writing skills.                                  [line 212]

You mention all the labor and thought that it takes to form letters and
words by hand and contrast it with the ease of the computer.  However,
you ignore the fact that computers have a larger amount of overhead. I
have to name the file, remember the name, save it or it will be lost.
With paper none of this is necessary at all. Does your son know how to
do this, or do you come in and help him? When you've finished drawing
your letters, there they are, done. With a computer, you have to
remember the print command. I still have to help my wife, much less my
son, with this sometimes to get it to print right. With paper, this
isn't even an issue.

Regarding Papert's enthusiasm over computer's in the school: Children do
well whenever they are given a lot of attention. Computers are one way
of doing this. Is this the best way? Is this the most cost-effective?
Will it provide better job training? I don't know, but i think that you
and Papert are over-enthusiastic on these matters.


Bret Pettichord
bret@ileaf.com

P.S. Ted, you should include the address you want letters to be sent to
in "About Letters".


[15-JUN-1992 11:02:35.55]

Bret - I particularly appreciate your thoughts because you, too, are a
witness to the environment David Coniam writes about.  May I assume that
your letter is indeed a "letter to the editor," and that you wouldn't
mind our publishing it, with (or without) other letters, responses,
etc.?

Thanks, too, for the idea of putting _EJournal_'s address even closer to
the note about Letters!  I thought the address was in too many places,
but I left it out of a crucial slot.

Best, Ted Jennings
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[Mid-June, 1992]

Sir ---

_EJ_, V2N2, raises some interesting questions to which I would like to
respond.

>>> Editorial 1 - Should we say goodbye to "text"?

Surely not; everything that I have read so far in _EJ_ is, purely and
simply, text (with the sole exception of the _EJ_ Logo).  Unless and
until contributions to _EJ_ contain non-textual elements, `text' will
remain the most descriptive term for its content.

>>> In contrast, the Mathematics section of the U.K. High Schools' National
>>> Curriculum (1990) states that pupils still need to know their times tables,
>>> but that the tables should not simply be rote-learnt.

I do not have a copy of this document to hand, but I most sincerely hope
that it does _not_ refer to their ``times tables''; the tables are
_multiplication_ tables, and any reference to them as ``times'' tables
will only encourage that most sloppy of usages, sadly only too common
among today's comprehensively [sic] educated children, ``to times by'',
meaning ``to multiply by''.

> A popular slogan was "Learning Latin is good for your mind".  What nonsense:
>>> the learning of Latin was simply a test of memory and very little else.

I think that as the author has permitted himself the use of ``What
nonsense'', I may respond in kind:  What nonsense:  the learning of
Latin forms the soundest basis not only for the learning of modern
European tongues (many of which reveal their Latin or Greek origins in a
most transparent way to the classically educated scholar), but also for
the appreciation and understanding of one's own native tongue, be it
<Am.E> or <Br.E>.  If today's children were still educated in the
classics, the nonsensical ``flammable'' designation now apparently
mandatory on _inflammable_ substances would never have been deemed
necessary for widespread comprehension.
                                                                     [line 292]
>>> The typed instructions:

>>>      BK 200   LT 90   FD 100

>>> would produce a figure that resembles the letter "L," for instance.

But how much better, surely, if the instructions had read

        Back 200 Left 90 Forward 100

such that the child would be using natural English commands, rather than
a particularly arbitrary, cryptic and terse computerese. Is it entirely
coincidental that cryptic consonant groups are becoming equally
widespread both within (CD, LS, MV) and without (Toys <Reversed-R> Us,
Fish N Chips) the computing domain?

>>> The way in which written Chinese used to be taught in the first years of
>>> Chinese primary schools (and still is in many schools in China and Hong
>>> Kong) can be seen as representing an extreme of misplaced emphasis. Not
>>> only was the order of the strokes in which one wrote a character
>>> important, but considerable emphasis was also placed on the way the
>>> brush that produced those strokes was held.

Misplaced emphasis?  Surely the most appropriate and correctly placed
emphasis in the world.  The fortunate Chinese child who is properly
instructed in the ancient art of Chinese calligraphy will be able to
produce manuscripts which are a joy to behold, even to those of us
unfortunate enough not to be able to appreciate their semantics.
Compare the elegance of the characters formed by traditional Chinese
brush strokes with the puerile scribblings of the average European or
American child whose only experience of a writing implement is a
disposable ball-point pen.  Once, Sir, we too valued a well-formed hand
as a mark of education, and taught copperplate; now we regard the
acquisition of _any_ skill in writing as a significant achievement, and
teach only the most simple and rudimentary letter forms.  The increasing
use and ultimate ubiquity of the personal computer will simply hasten
the day when literacy and numeracy finally cease to exist.
                                                                     [line 330]
                                Yours provocatively,
                                Philip Taylor, RHBNC.


[15-JUN-1992 12:15:39.80]

Dear Philip - Thanks for your provocative letter.  We expect to assemble
and distribute a bundle of "What Nonsense" communications, accompanied
perhaps by David Coniam's responses.  Best, Ted Jennings

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Date: Wed, 29 Jul 92 14:19:50 BS3
From: "alvanir carvalho - Rio de Janeiro, Brazil" <ALVANIR@BRLNCC.BITNET>
Subject: Letter to the Editor

Illiteracy rate is quite high in Brazil. It is part of the reason for
the backwardness of my country.

Perhaps you folks would like to know that, after reading the article
    "Literacy for the Next Generation : Writing Without Handwriting"
           by David Coniam, Chinese University of Hong Kong

I decided to give it a trial.

As it happens, my wyfe and me do enjoy entertainning, from time to time,
a 5 years old girl, the daughter of the concierge at our apartment
building, in Rio de Janeiro. The parents of that girl are both
illiterate so I undertook the job of teaching her to read and to write.
She was already able to recognize some letters I did print on small
peaces of papercard.  However, after reading David Coniam's article, I
asked the girl if she would like to use my electric typewriter ( for I
do not have a micro computer in the house ). Her progress was
astonishing.

The girl was much excited about typing words she would already
understand its meaning, such as the names of her parents and her own
name. She is now able to formulate short sentences of her own.  There is
no doubt, however, how much more she would be learning if she would be
able to use a micro computer.                                        [line 370]

    My congratulations to David Coniam for his most useful "discovery".

                                        [Alvanir Caravalho
                                        alvanir@brlncc]

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Date: 24 Jul 92 09:58:15 EDT
From: Murry Christensen <71521.2515@CompuServe.COM>
Subject: letter to editor

        Greetings from the network nation.  In keeping with the
informality which is (at least partly) in keeping with one of the stated
purposes of EJournal, I'd like to explore two related, though for the
sake of clarity best kept distinct, issues which might be interesting to
the readership (which is what?? an interesting question in itself,
better suited to the survey inclined?).

First, though, a quick precis of my background will make my interest in
these topics more clear.  MA in English Literature and writing from
Univ.  of Michigan, with BA minor in Philosophy.  15 years experience in
the media business: starting with advertising typography and mechanical
production; industrial multi-media (slide shows, theater/trade shows,
videotape) as designer, writer, producer; information design (slides
mostly) for financial, biotech, computer and telecommunications;
interactive software and hypertext design and production.  I list this
not as some ticketpunching, credential-waving exercise, but to give a
sense of what experience drives the following concerns.

I'd be interested in seeing EJournal address in some form two issues
that over time have come to concern me more and more:

1.) A consideration of the ways in which formal narrative structure
might be adapted to or expanded by the capabilities provided by
interactive software platforms.  Hypertext linking, interactive
"front-ends," direct manipulation of view point are a few of the new
capabilities available to the author of narrative fiction.  I've built
several of these to varying degrees of sophistication.  I've also been
working on a more formal article and/or essay along these lines.  In its
best-realized form this article would itself be a hypertext, including
examples of the kinds of interfaces described.  But, in order for this
to happen we'd (in the generic sense) have to confront the second of my
concerns...                                                          [line 414]

2.) Is ANYBODY else out there as frustrated (to the point of beating my
head against the monitor) by the absolute paucity of communication tools
*actually* available to the _cyberspace_ communicator? :-(

Look at this last sentence...what a pathetic arsenal of communication
tools.  And that pretty much exhausts what's available!  This in a world
that gives any user of any reasonably-competent word processor scaleable
typefaces, embedded graphics, at least simple text linking.  Yet the
instant you want to make that "document" available to others on-line all
the meaning inhering in anything other than raw ASCII text gets stripped
away.  Put it on the wire and instantly we all become visually
disadvantaged (and I wouldn't be afraid to propose perhaps in some way
intellectually-mangled also).

A single example: the typographic industry spent several hundred years
developing the _technic_ and the _technique_ to accomplish quite subtle
feats of explicit and implicit communication, only to find that at the
very moment the means became available to distribute that artifact in
ways that would enrich all of us...it was all taken away.  "The Lord
giveth and the Lord taketh away."  I hope that I'm not the only one on
whom the irony is not lost.  Just as a simple metaphor, the kinds of
academic publications that form the community of which EJournal is some
(slightly renegade?) part are very conservative in general typographic
and visual convention, extremely formal understates it, yet even they
make use of a much broader range of cognitive clues, tools, and devices
than does EJournal.  I'm absolutely not arguing for the kind of
wacked-out layout and typography you might see in "Mondo 2000" or "The
Face," nor am I delivering any particular critique of EJournal (except
as it provides an example of my point).  But there are so many subtle
aids to understanding that can't be crushed into the "ASCII cage."
Reminds me of the story about the kindergarten teacher who began to find
it difficult to talk to adults, so atrophied had the intellectual skills
become.

Until this loss of capability is acknowledged and remedied it seems to
me (with my particular view of how the medium can be used) that much of
the breathless discussion of millenarian impact is pretty hollow.  Until
we fix this "loss of band-width" we're only talking about distribution,
not revolution...or at best a revolution hand-delivered, like 1848.  At
a cognitive level we might consider the ways in which the restricted
vocabulary (in the larger sense I'm arguing for) offered by cyberspace
as it currently exists is in fact "dumbing down" our discourse.  Or the
political implications of islands of capability (IBM vs. Mac vs. NEXT
vs.  whatever) which, if able to communicate at all, have to do so by
stripping out all strictly non-textual, non-linear clues/cues before the
words can pass the border.  Pretty Stalinist?                        [line 461]

I'll turn the word-machine off for this first pass, but these issues
warrant some consideration and it seems like EJournal might be a good
place to begin some discussion.  I've tried other places (like CompuServe),
but the conversation always seems to end up with endless chat about the
merits of paint program A vs. paint program B.  Not very rewarding.  I hope
this doesn't sound like a rant (except where I wanted it to), but I guess
my frustration shows.  All that (potential) capability and so little of it
accessible.  What a shame.

Murry Christensen
Art & Science, Inc.
71521.2515@compuserve.com

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[Received from Joe Raben in June 1992]
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The first release of SCHOLAR, an online news service
for natural language processors, will be available
in mid-August 1992. Its contents include

Abstracts from the following journals:

     Computational Linguistics, 17:4
     System, 19:1/2,3,4
     Machine Translation, 6:1,2,3
     Computers and the Humanities, 25:1,2/3,4,5

Reports on the following projects:

     A European Ph.D. in Linguistics
     CTI Center for Textual Studies
     Georgetown Center for Text and Technology
     ARTFL: American and French Research on the Tresor
          de la Langue francaise

A short review of _Memex to Hypertext: Vannevar Bush
     and the Mind's Machine_ by James N. Nyce and Paul
     D. Kahn                                                          [line 501]

A full-length review of _Hypermedia and Literary Stud-
     ies_ ed. Paul Delaney and Gedorge P. Landow

A notice of WinGreek: Fonts for Greek and Hebrew

A CD-ROM of Latin texts

A calendar of language-processing-related events

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To receive this release by anonymous ftp send the
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At the login: prompt, type

     anonymous  or  SCHOLAR

At the password: prompt, type

     [your own login id]

To locate the SCHOLAR files, type

     get index.SCHOLAR                                               [line 541]

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SCHOLAR, P.O. Box F, New York NY 10028-0025.

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Michel Lenoble asked that we publish his request for information about
Computer Generated Literature west of the Atlantic.  There's a
sketch of CGL following Michel's note.  Please send responses to
lenoblem@ere.montreal.ca

        I am gathering information about Computer Generated Literature
(CGL) in order to write a long article on the state of CGL on this side
of the Atlantic.  Information about bibliographical references,
databanks, and e-adresses of persons or groups involved in CGL is
especially welcomed.  I seek information in particular about:

        - active groups or individuals or former researchers, including
programmers and writers
        - different movements, associations, schools
        - published or distributed CGL texts, or anthologies, or journals
        - short stories, novels, poems or scenarios
        - monographs, journal articles, research papers devoted to CGL
        - references to CGL in "normally" written literary texts

        Computer Generated Literature (CGL) refers to fully automated
literary text generation -- to literary texts produced by computer
programs.  CGL does not include literary texts written by human authors,
even if they were written directly on computers.  (One might debate
whether Interactive Fiction (IF) and multi-authored literary texts
(MALT) belong to the realm of CGL.)                                   [line 579]

        A typology of Computer Generated Literary texts could be
organized according to several different criteria, such as:

   - the starting data: vocabulary databases, knowledge bases,
redaction rules, textual corpora, etc.
   - the generation programs: substitutional, aleatory, autonomous,
interactive; typographical animation, modulatory programs with
integrated auto-corrective functions, etc.
   - the various "types" of generated texts: full texts versus frames or
scenarios, short stories, poems, unique finite texts versus infinite
texts (perhaps interactive fiction and multi-authored texts), etc.
   - the transmission / inscription medium: printed texts, floppy
texts, potential texts (literature to be generated when the user
/ reader starts the CGL program), etc.

        CGL appears to be more common in Europe and particularly in
France, where it is part of a literary tendency to explore the limits of
literary writing, literary texts and literariness.  At its origin, we
could mention combinatory literature, OULIPO endeavours, the
automatists, etc.  Nowadays, two or three Computer Generated Poetry
reviews are regularly issued by active writer / programmer groups on
floppy disks.  One conference has already been organized, at
Cerisy-la-Salle.

        Thank you for your help.
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We do not, however, solicit and thus cannot provide review copies of fiction,
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disseminated to subscribers as soon as they have been through the editorial
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Writers who think their texts might be appreciated by _EJournal_'s audience are
invited to forward files to EJOURNAL@ALBANY.BITNET .  If you are wondering
about starting to write a piece for to us, feel free to ask if it sounds
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we look forward to experimenting with other transmission and display formats
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Board of Advisors:                                                    [line 689]
                         Stevan Harnad        Princeton University
                         Dick Lanham          University of California at L.A.
                         Ann Okerson          Association of Research Libraries
                         Joe Raben            City University of New York
                         Bob Scholes          Brown University
                         Harry Whitaker       University of Quebec at Montreal
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ahrens@hartford            John Ahrens         Hartford
ap01@liverpool.ac.uk       Stephen Clark       Liverpool
userlcbk@umichum           Bill Condon         Michigan
crone@cua                  Tom Crone           Catholic University
dabrent@acs.ucalgary.ca    Doug Brent          University of Calgary
djb85@albnyvms             Don Byrd            University at Albany
donaldson@loyvax           Randall Donaldson   Loyola College
ds001451@ndsuvm1           Ray Wheeler         North Dakota
eng006@zeus.unomaha.edu    Marvin Peterson     University of Nebraska, Omaha
erdt@pucal                 Terry Erdt          Purdue Calumet
fac_aska@jmuvax1           Arnie Kahn          James Madison University
folger@yktvmv              Davis Foulger       IBM - Watson Center
george@gacvax1             G.N. Georgacarakos  Gustavus Adolphus
gms@psuvm                  Gerry Santoro       Pennsylvania State University
nrcgsh@ritvax              Norm Coombs         Rochester Institute of Technology
pmsgsl@ritvax              Patrick M. Scanlon  Rochester Institute of Technology
r0731@csuohio              Nelson Pole         Cleveland State University
richardj@surf.sics.bu.oz   Joanna Richardson   Bond University, Australia
ryle@urvax                 Martin Ryle         University of Richmond
twbatson@gallua            Trent Batson        Gallaudet
wcooper@vm.ucs.ualberta.ca Wes Cooper          Alberta
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June, 1992               _EJournal_  Volume 2 Issue 2           ISSN# 1054-1055
                       2545 Subscribers in 37 Countries

            An Electronic Journal concerned with the implications
                      of electronic networks and texts.

              University at Albany, State University of New York
                            ejournal@albany.bitnet

                      There are 760 lines in this issue.

CONTENTS:

  Editorial 1:  Should we say goodbye to "text"?

  Editorial 2:  Writing as reward, not punishmment

  LITERACY FOR THE NEXT GENERATION: Writing Without Handwriting

     by David Coniam
        Chinese University of Hong Kong

DEPARTMENTS:

  Summary of Network Commands
  Letters   (policy)
  Reviews   (policy)
  Supplements to previous texts   (policy)

  About _EJournal_

PEOPLE: Board of Advisors, Consulting Editors                        [l. 39]
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Editorial 1 - Should we say goodbye to "text"?

_EJournal_ began as a strictly "text" journal, but the nature of text is
changing.  _EJournal_ started out to be a place where people could discuss the
kinds of changes in "writing" that the electronic screen would encourage.  Even
though we expressed interest in text "broadly defined," we were still thinking
mostly in images of "words on a page."  We also wanted to sidestep as many
print-journal conventions as we could.  There would be no deadlines set by
printers' schedules, no straightjackets of layout or "making up a book" or
formatting.  Why accept the constrictions imposed by a superseded delivery
mechanism?  So we worked with one essay per issue, a publish-when-ready
approach, and plain-vanilla ASCII.

Now, however, ASCII and the connotations of "text" are beginning to constrict
our perception.  "Text" is linked too closely with "print" and "printing" to
suit the scope of electronic display.  Even "hypertext," in so many ways
properly dislocating and descriptive, (i. e., the three-dimensional image
embedded in "hyper"), is somewhat limiting now that sound and motion can be
included in what we transmit and display.   What then should we call that
stuff, those sequences of phosphor images and digitized wave forms that we are
transmitting and receiving and messing around with in the Matrix?

I propose "display" as a useful term.  If its appearance didn't make you blink
and back up in the second sentence of the paragraph above, then it might serve
until a more obvious replacement slides into general use.  Perhaps some
analogue of "recording" will eventually dominate, but for now "display" seems
suitable even though it privileges the visible over the audible.

In any case, even if we don't dismiss the outmoded word "text" all at once,
_EJournal_'s commitment to challenging inky-paper conventions continues.  We
look forward to opportunities to experiment with essays (and make-believe) that
contain a-textual displays, and to essays addressing the ramifications of such
a change in the distribution of imagination and information.

Ted Jennings                                                            [l. 81]
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Editorial 2 - Writing as reward, not punishment

One of those memorable flashes of comprehension in my career occurred when a
colleague pointed out how often and how much the process of writing is
associated with punishment.  "Go to the board and write ...."  "Sit still in
your seat, you, there, and write ...."  Even though teachers in grade school
did sometimes like what I wrote, writing has ever since then been associated
with unpleasant work.  How many people rub their hands and grin when asked to
take notes at a meeting?

Even after that plausible association had been pointed out, and I realized that
many college students still bore the scars of elementary-school discipline, I
continued to overlook another negative association with writing: the agonies of
struggling to make proper R's and to get those infernal capital I's -- the
backslanty cursed cursive I's -- to line up properly.

David Coniam reminds us in this issue's essay that young people are orally
fluent long before they have enough control over their muscles to make "proper"
letters.  What would happen if articulate three-year-olds, even toddlers, could
begin to make visible versions of their jabbering?  What if the imaginative
songs and stories they chant so easily could apppear on a screen?  What if a
chance to "write" became an attractive reward?  Interesting questions, perhaps,
but until recently questions that could hardly be answered.

We can expect to begin getting answers soon.  Display technology will reduce
the agonies of "handwriting" and "penmanship"; composing will not be associated
with punishment as often.  "Writing" will include noise and pictures; fewer
imaginations will be wounded; many youngsters will look forward to playing with
keyboard and screen.

No one person will be able to recall having learned *both* penmanship
exclusively and keyboarding exclusively, so only historians will be able to
speculate about the precise effects of the change in the way young people are
conditioned to undertake "writing."  But the changes are occurring, and the
difference will be there, and our grandchildren's children won't realize that
writing once was a psycho-motor struggle as well as a mental challenge.

Ted Jennings                                                           [l. 120]
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LITERACY FOR THE NEXT GENERATION: Writing Without Handwriting

by David Coniam
Faculty of Education,
Chinese University of Hong Kong

This essay argues that keyboard and display technology will change the way
young children learn to compose texts.  They will not have to learn how to
"write" with pen on paper; without those mental and physical barriers between
their thoughts and a screen's visible, shareable version of their words,
children will be happier about "really" writing than they are when a piece of
blank paper is thrust in front of them.

I       New technologies, new orientations

How many of us will still be writing with a pen in the next century?  In the
22nd century, how many people will actually know what a pen is for?  These
questions may seem facetious, but we need only think back to our parents, who
had inkwells on their school desks, to realize that the answers are not
obvious.  Fifty years ago, writing could only be done in a special environment:
the ballpoint pen was unknown, "fountain" pens could be unreliable, the only
medium for "writing" was paper.  With only a few exceptions, a "writer"
produced "manuscripts," and typewriters were for two-fingered newspaper
reporters, and secretaries.                                         [l. 145]

Technology has already changed the way arithmetic is learned. At high school in
maths lessons in the 50s and 60s, we all had to learn by heart our times tables
(Remember chanting: "one nine is nine; two nines are 18; three nines are 27
..."?). In contrast, the Mathematics section of the U.K. High Schools' National
Curriculum (1990) states that pupils still need to know their times tables, but
that the tables should not simply be rote-learnt. Thanks to the ready
availability of pocket electronic calculators, elementary maths classes no
longer require pupils to simply memorize and recall facts. Indeed, the National
Curriculum recommends that time in the maths classroom be divided between
"cerebral" work involving pupils working with their tables, and work involving
the use of a calculator.

Certain older educators, however, lament the use of calculators in much the
same way that they rue the fact that Latin is not taught in schools any more.
A popular slogan was "Learning Latin is good for your mind".  What nonsense:
the learning of Latin was simply a test of memory and very little else.  The
previous allusion to learning one's times tables holds equally true for the
learning of Latin, which required no processing of language and no linguistic
communication between students.  In maths teaching, the widespread use of the
calculator has resulted in a greater emphasis on application and less on the
teaching of numbers and numeracy monitored by tests of memorization.
Examination authorities recognize this.  They allow calculators to be taken
into examinations and they require candidates to apply their knowledge to
complicated tasks, rather than simply testing students' powers of memory.
                                                                     [l. 171]
The rise in popularity and acceptance of the personal calculator bears rather
close analogy to what is happening with regard to writing: future generations
will need to worry less about struggling with the medium, we might say, and
will be able to attend more to the message. Keyboard and screen technology will
let the child produce larger amounts of interesting text, more proudly and yet
with less effort, than the old muscle-bound technology permits.  The thrust of
this essay, then, is that computer technology will have profound implications
for what and how our children -- or our children's children -- learn to write.
It will also affect and alter the way in which they acquire the skill of
writing, both inside and outside the classroom, both with and without
teacher/adult guidance.

II      Old technology versus new

Pen, paper and hand-writing will not disappear entirely.  Furner (1985) reports
a study by Templin in the early 1960s on types of handwritten material produced
by a cross-section of professional and blue-collar workers.  Templin concluded
that handwriting was used primarily for casual or short-delivery type tasks,
such as writing cheques, dealing with social correspondence, filling in forms,
drawing up shopping lists, and so forth.  Interestingly enough, Templin
commented that professionals made rough drafts in handwritten form, even when
they had access to secretarial support.  Furner believes that with increases in
portability and decreases in cost, computers will be used more and more in
homes, classrooms, and workplaces.  She feels that word processing programs for
children and adults will be increasingly widely used in writing, and that the
uses of handwriting will diminish in the future.  Because of this decline, she
recommends that only one form of handwriting be taught in schools in the U.S.A.
(^1^).  She does conclude, however, that handwriting will still have a place in
societ("Handwriting Instruction for a High-tech Society...," 1985, p. 5).
                                                                       [l. 201]
People will still write by hand, so instruction in "penmanship" will still take
place.  Handwriting has long been regarded by schools and educators as
essentially building up appropriate motor skills in young learners, with a lot
of emphasis given to such behaviouristic practice as copying, tracing and other
exercises and writing drills. Furner comments that such practice is generally
of limited value and she argues that effective instruction needs to take
account of handwriting as a perceptual-motor skill:

     To learn to write the child must form a mental representation of
     lower-case and capital letter form, numerals, punctuation marks, and
     general procedures of writing including size, spacing, alignment,
     straightness or slant, joining of letters ... (pp. 5-6).

This is a succinct description of how much a young person must learn and
remember in order to write by hand, yet it still does not address the
difficulties of applying such "knowledge" to the task of physically inscribing
those different shapes legibly on a piece of paper.  Tapping a keyboard is
easier.

My son is a case in point. He is now four and has been (literally) bashing away
on the computer since he was nine months old. This was not intentional:  when
he was eleven months old we discovered he was asthmatic, and letting him play
on my old BBC computer for ten minutes a day distracted him long enough for him
to take his medication with a minimum of fuss.  By the age of twenty-two
months, he knew where all the letters were on the keyboard, and could type in
different letters upon request.  His "keyboarding" has continued and developed
over the last two years, and it was not until he reached the age of three and a
half that I made the decision to begin teaching him to write with pencil and
paper.                                                                 [. 230]

I would like to comment on a few of the problems my son has faced.  Some of the
problems I examine are English-language specific; nonetheless, I feel much of
what I put forward can be extrapolated generally to the case of younger
learners faced with the task of writing.

The keyboard is an obvious visual palette from which the child can see and
choose the letters he wants to write with.  And even though the QWERTY keyboard
layout is not user-friendly (either to the ergonomics of the hand or in the
layout and assignment of keys) these factors have little impact on early child
writing.  The overriding factor for a child is not speed or efficiency, that
is, but simply the labour required to produce the characters.  The easier it is
for the writer to make letters, the more letters will be made.  Papert makes
the point that an adult with a word processor expects a first draft to be
essentially "unacceptable" -- expects to revise because it will be easy to
revise.  This kind of fluency, however, is a luxury that a young child who is
writing with a pen does not have, since:

     The physical act of writing [is] slow and laborious.... For most
     children rewriting a text is so laborious that the first draft is
     the final copy, and the skill of rereading with a critical eye is
     never acquired. (_Mindstorms_, p. 30)

When working with a pen, a child must remember how to move arm and wrist and
fingers to shape each letter.  On the keyboard, all the letters are available
at a glance; different letters do not need as much deliberation while - or
before - they are retrieved from the memory store.  The load on short-term
memory is therefore lighter.  The fact that on the keyboard a letter can be
quickly picked out means the writer is less likely to lose track of his next
target, the next letter.  When my son uses the computer to write his name, he
says to himself "Kevin" and moves easily from one letter to another.  With a
pen (to reiterate the contrast) he has to recall each letter, frame it
"correctly" on the page and between the lines, size it, and concentrate on
making the proper trail of ink on the paper.
                                                                      [l. 265]
Penmanship practitioners have to learn two alphabets, upper and lower case.  In
terms of handwriting, common practice has been to teach children to write
everything initially in upper case.  Lower case is introduced later, and the
struggle to differentiate when to use which case then commences.  The
difference is less of a problem when the child is working with a keyboard.
Initially, my son worked at the keyboard in upper case; the move to the concept
of:

     When writing a name, the first letter is big and the rest are small

was surprisingly easy.  All the child has to do is press the SHIFT key before
typing.  The logic - or confusion - of why English needs both upper and lower
case can be left for later explanation.

Learning to put spaces between words is accomplished much more easily on a
computer than with pen and paper.  My son moved to:

     Kevin [SPACE] Coniam

without a great deal of prompting.  In contrast, figuring out the proper
spacing between the two names on paper is not as easy for a child as it
is for an adult:  How big should the space between each word be?  Should
it always be the same size space?  Why does the space between two words
need to be bigger than that between two letters?  Why not a new line
between words instead of a space?

One major convention (in English) is that writing proceeds from left to right
across the page. (Brodie comments on how the linguist Sir Richard Burton
recalls his experiences of first learning to write Arabic. Since he was
teaching himself, Burton wrote from left to right as he did English, [rather
than from right to left] - only realizing his mistake when an Arab friend
happened to look at some of his writing! [_The Devil Drives_, 1984].)  This may
not offer as great a hurdle to handwriters as some other conventions, but it
offers none at all to users of keyboard and screen, even left-handers like
Kevin.
                                                                      [l. 300]
These four conventions -- letter formation, cases, spacing, direction -- look
easy to adults.  But they are at least as great a barrier between a young
learner and "writing" as grammar and punctuation and spelling are for older
children.  Why, if it were not for pressure and promise, would anyone choose to
suffer through learning to write with pen and paper?  The fact that with a pen
each individual letter is such a struggle is quite demotivating for the young
learner.  Too often, when he was younger, the only way to get Kevin to complete
a handwriting task was to threaten him.

The ability -- or indeed desire -- to work by oneself is another point worth
examining here.  I quite frequently hear the computer being turned on and my
son doing some letter or word-writing or word-recognition games by himself in
his bedroom.  A very successful piece of software here has been Superior
Software's "SPEECH!", which produces human-like sound.  I wrote a simple BASIC
program which interfaces with the speech software so that when a letter is
typed in, the computer speaks the name of that letter:

     "K" -->  /kay/
     "E" -->  /ee/
     "V" -->  /vee/
                       and so on.

-- finally concatenating all the individual letter sounds to produce a
"word" or string of sounds.

"Hey Dad, come and look at this funny word I've typed in - is that a real
word?" I hear my son call out.  Upon seeing something like "asdfsefm" I smile,
and say - I hope not too condescendingly - "Good stuff, Kevin; well, that's not
quite a word, but let the computer try and say it anyway."
                                                                      [l. 331]
"Hey Dad, come and see this word I've written" is a cry I have never heard from
my son when he is writing with pen and paper.  That kind of writing -- with a
pen -- is done only at my request. The colours and sounds and feedback that the
computer gives (no matter how overtly behaviourist the learning styles
currently employed in software may be) hold interest and lend much more
motivation even than a cajoling parent sitting beside the child.

Levin (1988) reflects the same perspective.  She comments on the tedium of
writing for a kindergarten child, and suggests that computers can provide
support for kindergarten writers:

     Children can experiment with letters and words without being
     distracted by the fine motor aspects of handwriting....  Perhaps
     more importantly, five-year-olds can learn to use the computer as
     a tool for exploration and experimentation ("Methodologies of
     Reading and Writing ....," pp. 58-9, 1988).

She discusses the fact that for kindergarten children written language is
scarce and it is the spoken language that gives them control over their
environment.  Use of the computer -- to enable children to write, or even just
begin to write -- may, she suggests, give children a greater sense of control
and power over their environment.

Guddemi and Mills (1989) likewise note, in a study of literacy development,
that children seemed to prefer computer-activities to pen-based ones; they were
more aware of general alphabetic principles following computer-based work; and
they were more willing to experiment and take risks with their own writing when
at the computer ("The Impact of Word Processing ....," 1989).
                                                                       [l. 360]
Imaginative software encourages children to pick up skills.  I have struggled
hard with paper-based activities for my four-year-old, and have not got far
beyond basic copying and such not especially inventive moves as crosswords and
hangman!  In contrast, the computer has a considerable number of different
focuses:

        - speech-producing software, (e.g., Superior Software's SPEECH!)
        - simple large-font word processors (e.g., Tedimen Software's FOLIO)
        - simple phonic picture games where the child has to type in the
                 first or last letter of an object
        - letter and word-matching games

According to the computer manufacturers, the next significant change in
computers and computer use for the average person will be the introduction of
pen-based computers.  Such machines work on the basis of handwritten input:
The computer is equipped with a "pen" and a writing tablet.  A user uses the
pen to write in hand upon the tablet, and handwriting recognition software then
interprets the different handwriting.  Ironically, I do not feel the advent of
pen-based computers will significantly change the way we write. Pen-based
computers pose exactly the same problems as do ink pens and paper:  One cannot
write fast enough with a pen.  In contrast, even if one is not a touch-typist,
the amount of data that can be got down on a keyboard at any one time still
represents at least a four-fold increase over what can be physically written
with a pen, a point that is confirmed by investigations into college student
writing (see Edwards, "How Computers Change Things," 1991; Bangert-Drowns,
"Research on Wordprocessing and Writing Instruction," 1989).

III     Getting beyond barriers
                                                                     [l. 389]
Guddemi and Fite (1990) report on a computer literacy project in the US called
Head Start.  Their project examined instruction among a group of 115
kindergarten and preschool children, half of whom had instruction centering
around a computer and half who did not.  The researchers concluded that the
computer-managed exercises had resulted in pupil gains, even though the study
was limited by duration and amount of computer time per student.  This matches
with my personal observation that not only does computer use result in easier
access to the written word for the child in terms of equal time spent on pen-
or computer-based writing, but that the child is prepared to put in his/her own
time in the exercises or "games."  Guddemi and Fite further comment that:

      . . . computers strengthen specific skills, foster creativity and
     problem solving, and enhance the writing process ("Is there a
     Legitimate Role for Computers ..." p. 5).

For the younger learner, pen-based writing is essentially an exercise
consisting of output with no communicative purpose.  The child may be copying
something:

     Parent: "Come on, Kevin; write 'Happy Birthday James' on this
     present before you give it to James this afternoon.  I've written
     it; now you copy it."

Or the child may be pressed to pretend to want to write something:

     Parent: "What would you like to write this afternoon, Kevin?"
     Child : "Bus."
     Parent: "OK, how do you spell bus?"
     Child : "I don't know; you tell me."

And so the charade of pen-paper "writing" continues.  In contrast, on a
computer, the child can get a reaction to "writing" he has chosen to experiment
with.  The speech-synthesizing program itself, mentioned earlier, provides
response to letters, words, or indeed nonsense "scribbling" that is typed in on
the keyboard.
                                                                      [l. 425]
There are other ways to associate keyboard and screen with acomplishment.  One
moderately formal system involves LOGO, a computer language designed for
children.  With it a young child can create lines by using simple commands to
move the "turtle" icon.  The typed instructions:

     BK 200   LT 90   FD 100

would produce a figure that resembles the letter "L," for instance (see
Papert).

The point here is that the child comes to realize that pressing the keys
produces a recognizable outcome, and (by extension) that writing need not be a
tiresome activity which is only done under duress at Daddy's insistence.
Papert discusses certain aspects of the traditional teaching situation (with
regard to mathematics).  He suggests that where children have to learn "what is
good for them" no matter what, an unfavorable attitude towards learning is all
too easily engendered:

     . . . by forcing the children into learning situations doomed in
     advance, [school] generates powerful negative feelings about
     mathematics and about learning in general (p. 9).

This uncomfortable feeling is one I have got myself in connection with the
foisting of pen and paper writing on my son.

Concerning the use of LOGO mentioned above, what the child is doing is
effectively scribbling on the computer.  Scribbling as an activity is now
regarded as an essential part of a child's writing-development process (Warash,
"The Computer Language Experience Approach," 1984).  Rather than being simply
garbage and thought of as a waste of paper, scribbling is now seen as an
integral part of the learning-to-write process.  What might be a meaningless
scribble to an adult may well have meaning for the child who produced it.
Warash discusses the degree to which preschoolers ascribe importance and
meaning to scribblings or other forms of "illegible" written output. She
comments that just as a scribble a child has made on paper has more meaning for
him/her than something an adult may have written (however "legibly"), a
"scribble" on the computer may have even more "meaning" for the child for two
reasons:  It has been produced by the child, and the "components" of the
scribble are more easily deciphered.  She comments on the advantage the
computer has in this respect:

     . . . it gives the child the opportunity to produce a
     perfectly-typed picture or letter.  The child has the responsibility
     of making the decision about what he wants to type (p. 4).    [l. 469]

Further, she comments that the computer is a great motivational tool because
the child:

     has complete control over all the keys. Each key the child pushes
     does something different.... A child is given control over a machine
     that enables him to draw shapes that he normally cannot draw
     freehand (p. 4).

In Warash's study at the West Virginia Child Development Laboratory, children
were found to verbalize considerably more over pictures they had "drawn" on the
computer than over those they had "drawn" freehand.  She concludes that young
children appear not to have been given the credit they should have for their
capability of working meaningfully with computers:

     Working with words may not seem appropriate for preschoolers but
     the children have set the pace... (p. 6).

Lawler, in another report (1980), discusses how he encouraged his six-year-old
daughter, Miriam, to write letters with a word processor. He comments that
motivated focus on the message may well produce unintentional developments in
the child's appreciation of the form:

     . . . if the child can create text which she is willing to dwell
     upon as reader, she may gradually perceive the structure of the
     text....  Thus an initially unstructured form of expression would
     be fit, piecemeal, into those conventional forms which have been
     found effective for communication ("One Child's Learning ...," p. 16).

Getting a child to focus on the content, then, may result in unexpected
spin-offs in the child's perception of form, even though this may not have been
explicitly taught.  Admittedly, Lawler is discussing the use of the word
processor by a child who has mastered the rudiments of literacy; nonetheless,
the arguments which here concern motivation and peripheral learning hold in a
comparable manner for much younger learners.                        [l. 50]

Papert comments that word processors can make a child's experience of writing
more like that of a real writer.  Adults need to accept the premise that as
they write with word processors, so should children (even though children may
not have the same purpose or produce similar outcomes):

      The image of children using the computer as a writing instrument
      is a particularly good example of my general thesis that what is
      good for professionals is good for children (p. 30).

IV      A transition scenario

Computer technology has advanced remarkably since the advent of the PC in 1981.
With regard to advances in computer miniaturization, and the feedback of such
technology into daily life, significant progress has been made even over the
last two or three years. In early 1990 I made the move to buy myself a laptop
-- a machine that weighed seven kilos, and represented (in those days) the
height of portability. Two years on, seven kilos with a 40-megabtye hard disk
of storage space depicts obsolescence -- with even the moniker "laptop" now
standing for out-of-date technology. The current trend is toward smaller,
lighter and even more portable; first came the two to three kilo "notebook,"
and now the half-kilo "palmtop," which is literally the size of a big fist, has
arrived.

As technology brings us more portable and affordable computers, and as our
attitude toward such technology changes, the process of helping young people
learn to write is likely to change.  Inkwells and "times tables" will be buried
in history lessons; learning to shape letters with a pen in order to make
convenient personal lists will be postponed until mature muscles can handle the
task easily.  Penmanship, hand-writing, manu-scribing won't be a barrier
between mind and message.  Keyboard and display will make composing, creating,
expressing and story-telling easy and fun instead of boring and hard.  "Look
what I did!" will be the cry, not "Do I have to copy it over?"

The way in which written Chinese used to be taught in the first years of
Chinese primary schools (and still is in many schools in China and Hong Kong)
can be seen as representing an extreme of misplaced emphasis.  Not only was the
order of the strokes in which one wrote a character important, but considerable
emphasis was also placed on the way the brush that produced those strokes was
held.  And the content of writing classes rarely involved more than copying and
recopying of characters.  For many youngsters, the form that "writing" took far
outweighed any actual message that was conveyed.
                                                                    [l. 547]
The future the computer holds for initial writing (in English at least) is that
our youngsters will be presented with a much more transparent medium for
self-expression than that which they encounter at present.  It may also result
in a rather different classroom environment in that there will be greater
flexibility for learner manoeuvres; the greater array of writing activities
available to learners may lessen some of the tedium of accommodating to the
medium of writing.  There could be less teacher pressure and more learner
independence. Opportunity to experiment with the new medium may enhance
learners' motivation to write.  As for education outside the classroom, Papert
eloquently prophesies the empowering potential of the computer:

     I believe the computer presence will enable us to modify the learning
     environment outside the classroom so that much if not all the knowledge
     schools currently try to teach with such pain and expense and such
     limited success will be learned, as the child learns to talk,
     painlessly, successfully, and without organized instruction (p. 9).

The computer will let our younger writers of the future express and negotiate
"meaning" without the worries that go with having to draw acceptable shapes on
lined paper.  Whereas at present the final written "product" is always a long
way off, the prospect of getting the story told quickly by way of keyboard and
screen may make children look forward to writing.  In the developed world,
where the school desk of the 21st century will have a computer on it instead of
an inkwell, our children's children may well be the last generation that
receives formal classroom instruction in how to use a pen.  While the demise of
the pen may result in the demise of the skills of calligraphy and "penmanship"
(or result in these skills being brought into the art class), it may also
result in the demise of certain obstacles to communication faced by our young
learners.  With those obstacles out of the way, young children may find writing
an imagination-stirring pleasure instead of a tedious schoolroom exercise.
                                                                     [l. 577]
NOTE
(^1^) Currently both manuscript and cursive forms of handwriting are
taught in the USA.

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Bangert-Drowns, Robert. 1989. Research on wordprocessing and writing
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Levin, Jill. 1988. Methodologies of reading and writing in kindergarten.
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Papert, Seymour. 1980. _Mindstorms_. Basic Books: U.S.A.

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David Coniam                                b096770@cucsc.bitnet
Faculty of Education
Chinese University of Hong Kong

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computer-mediated networks. The journal's essays will be available free to
Bitnet/Internet/Usenet addresses.  Recipients may make paper copies; _EJournal_
will provide authenticated paper copy from our read-only archive for use by
academic deans or others.  Individual essays, reviews, stories-- texts --sent
to us will be disseminated to subscribers as soon as they have been through the
editorial process, which will also be "paperless."  We expect to offer access
through libraries to our electronic Contents, Abstracts, and Keywords, and to
be indexed and abstracted in appropriate places.

Writers who think their texts might be appreciated by _EJournal_'s audience are
invited to forward files to EJOURNAL@ALBANY.BITNET .  If you are wondering
about starting to write a piece for to us, feel free to ask if it sounds
appropriate.  There are no "styling" guidelines; we would like to be a little
more direct and lively than many paper publications, and less hasty and
ephemeral than most postings to unreviewed electronic spaces.  We read ASCII;
we look forward to experimenting with other transmission formats and protocols.

Back issues of _EJournal_ are available from a Fileserver at Albany.   [l. 712]

A Table of Contents listing, along with abstracts, can be obtained by sending
the message  GET EJRNL INDEX  to the *LIST* address:  LISTSERV@ALBANY.BITNET .

To get a specific back issue, note its filename and send the message
GET <filename>  to the *LIST* address:  LISTSERV@ALBANY.BITNET .

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Board of Advisors:                           Stevan Harnad, Princeton University
                            Dick Lanham, University of California at Los Angeles
                                  Ann Okerson, Association of Research Libraries
                                          Joe Raben, City University of New York
                                                   Bob Scholes, Brown University
                                Harry Whitaker, University of Quebec at Montreal
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Consulting Editors - June 1992

ahrens@hartford               John Ahrens          Hartford
ap01@liverpool.ac.uk          Stephen Clark        Liverpool
crone@cua                     Tom Crone            Catholic University
dabrent@acs.ucalgary.ca       Doug Brent           Calgary
djb85@albnyvms                Don Byrd             Albany
donaldson@loyvax              Randall Donaldson    Loyola College
ds001451@ndsuvm1              Ray Wheeler          North Dakota
eng006@unoma1                 Marvin Peterson      Nebraska - Omaha
erdt@pucal                    Terry Erdt           Purdue Calumet
fac_aska@jmuvax1              Arnie Kahn           James Madison
folger@yktvmv                 Davis Foulger        IBM - Watson Center
george@gacvax1                G. N. Georgacarakos  Gustavus Adolphus
geurdes@rulfsw.leidenuniv.nl  Han Geurdes          Leiden
gms@psuvm                     Gerry Santoro        Pennsylvania State University
nrcgsh@ritvax                 Norm Coombs          Rochester Institute of Tech.
pmsgsl@ritvax                 Patrick M. Scanlon   Rochester Institute of Tech.
r0731@csuohio                 Nelson Pole          Cleveland State
ryle@urvax                    Martin Ryle          Richmond
twbatson@gallua               Trent Batson         Gallaudet
usercoop@ualtamts             Wes Cooper           Alberta
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                               Isabel Nirenberg, Bob Pfeiffer; Ben Chi, Director
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Editor:                              Ted Jennings, English, University at Albany
Managing Editor:                                Ron Bangel, University at Albany
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April, 1992             _EJournal_  Volume 2 Issue 1            ISSN# 1054-1055
                              2321 Subscribers

            An Electronic Journal concerned with the implications
                      of electronic networks and texts.

              University at Albany, State University of New York
                            ejournal@albany.bitnet

                      There are 351 lines in this issue.

** This first issue of our second year is aimed especially at new subscribers **

CONTENTS:
  Introduction/Editorial
  Summary of Network Commands
  Contents of Volume 1 (1991)
  Subjects
  Personnel
  Ancient History
  Other History

DEPARTMENTS:

  Letters   (policy)
  Reviews   (policy)
  Supplements to previous texts   (policy)

  About _EJournal_

PEOPLE: Board of Advisors, Consulting Editors
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_EJournal_.  Permission is hereby granted to give away the journal and its
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INTRODUCTION/EDITORIAL

This is _EJournal_'s second year of publication.  Our recent push into Usenet
space has brought hundreds of new subscribers.  It seems like a good time to
bring all 2321+ readers up to date.

This issue contains a skeleton table of contents for volume I (1991), with
brief notes about the essays.  There is a section suggesting the *kinds* of
subjects we would like to see essays about.  The emphasis is on suggesting, not
limiting; your list is as good as ours.  There are also some preliminary
thoughts about how to staff _EJournal_ as we grow.   Near the end, just before
the listing of Editors and Advisors, there is a quick history of how the
journal began and what we said, back in 1989, about what we hoped to
accomplish.

First, though, here is a summary of how to SUBscribe, how to GET back issues,
and how to GET the cumulative Table of Contents.
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CONTENTS of Volume 1 (1991)

\V1N1\:  A 226-line essay by Robert K. Lindsay, "Electronic Journals of
Proposed Research."  Scientists and other scholars should use the networks to
share ideas before preparing elaborate grant proposals.  Publication in this
preliminary form would attract cooperative peer review, would "register" the
concepts involved, would attract qualified collaboration, and would lead to a
smaller number of futile applications for scarce funds.  Notes, Bibliography
(TedJ)

\V1N2\: A 275-line essay re/view, by Joe Amato, of Jay David Bolter's book,
_Writing Space: The Computer, Hypertext, and the History of Writing_.  Joe
praises the book, and asks some questions about the "evangelistic euphoria"
with which Bolter greets the "revolutionary new medium."  Post-modernist
theorizing, ideological assumptions, and "the darker side of hypertext" are
some issues raised in a positive review. (TedJ)

\V1N2-1\: A 216-line exchange between Doug Brent and Joe Amato about the
re/view of Bolter's  _Writing Space_, including the requested expansion of
"ideas on the 'darker side' of hypertext." (TedJ)
[This issue was our first try at extending discussion of a subject via an
electronic "thread" sequence -- volume one, number two "continued," so to
speak.  Therefore the designation \V1N2-1\, which we could have distributed at
a later date than \V1N3\.]

\V1N3\:  A 686-line essay by Doug Brent, "Oral Knowledge, Typographic
Knowledge, Electronic Knowledge: Speculations on the History of Ownership."
The theory of transformative technology (McLuhan, Ong, Heim et al) is applied
to the problem of intellectual property versus communal knowledge.  Oral
cultures have no intellectual property: knowledge is communally generated and
shared.  Print technology created the book as artifact, knowledge as
individually generated, owned, and protected.  Copyright and plagiarism are
inventions of the print age.  With CMC and hypertext, we may be returning to an
age in which personal ownership of knowledge becomes virtually impossible by
the nature of the medium itself. This will require profound shifts in our
attitude to knowledge and the way we use its ownership as an incentive to
produce it. (DB)
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SUBJECTS

We're not yet sure what to call the texts we distribute.  They lack some of the
attitude and apparatus of the stuffiest traditional scholarship in the
humanities, but they are as interesting and authentic and sensible as the
better articles in more conventional publications.  It seems silly to call our
pieces "papers," yet the borderline "oral" quality of our medium makes that
label, a reminder of spoken academic presentations, almost appropriate.  For
now, at any rate, the generic label "essay" feels most comfortable.

Here are some subjects that we think our readers might be interested in:

Changes in amount of and access to "information."  Will we be overloaded, as
alarmists worry, or have people usually been able to adapt to expanding pools
of information?

Indexing, cataloguing, paying for, producing, maintaining, accessing DATA
BASES, especially TEXT-based data bases...

The implications of electronic texts and networks for research, especially in
the humanities but also in relation to general issues of collaboration,
intellectual property, intercultural literacy, privacy...

The relationship of cyberspace-matrix environments and teaching-learning
situations.  What happens when instructors can give up the power to force
students to gather in the same place at the same time...?

Hypertext: research, creativity, interaction, network access, interpretive
con-structures, pedagogy, delivery systems...

Virtual reality (text-based versions): are these unprecedented, network-based
mini-societies to be thought of as escapist utopias, as realtime scale models of
social-evolution processes, as participatory fictions?  Can they be considered
art/fiction/SF/fantasy/game/simulation?  How do they integrate into the
virtual society of Internet?  How do Inter-Relay Chat networks integrate into
the virtual society of the Internet?

Modifications in the epistemology of "text" (and other arts): What happens to
concepts like sensation, association and imagination when "performance"
incorporates audience participation?  Mixtures, compounds, intersections of the
above: e.g., bibliographic overload within research specialties; transnational
(textual) databases that will become world-scale archives/ memory banks,
thereby providing cultural roots that transcend ethnic-linguistic boundaries;
the implications of interactive hypertext "documents" for issues of
intellectual property, primacy, and privacy.

[Digression/segue:   If you would like to arrange a cluster of essays in any of
these realms, or on other subjects, or feel like suggesting a collaborative
piece, we encourage you to do so.  Our format should make it easy to share
responsibility for organizing "threads" of comment and controversy.  We have
already devoted one issue to a response to another issue [\V1N2-1\], and can
easily keep several threads going at the same time.  One experiment we'd like
to try is a hypertext issue (or thread) that would be written using the
"Storyspace" hypertext engine and BinHex protocols for distribution for readers
with access to Macintosh hardware.  But we will need a special editor to put it
together.]
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PERSONNEL

This brings us to _EJournal_'s staff and procedures.  Who edits a "special
issue"?  There is no checklist of qualifications; if there is a subject you
think the journal should address, please think about who could write the
essay(s) you want, and inquire about preparing a special issue or sequence.

Who gets to be a consulting editor?  Not exactly anyone, but all subscribers
are invited to volunteer; we settled on a panel of about 20 members as
manageable cluster.  The time may come when we'll seek some kind of balance, or
even representation of specialized interests, and from time to time
individuals will want to leave the panel, so I have started asking volunteers
to provide an outline of their expertise.  But the "waiting list" of potential
consulting editors is not long.  Do not hesitate to express your interest.

The panel of consulting editors is asked to read the submissions that I think
might interest our (imagined) audience.  I synthesize the comments from the
panelists who respond, and communicate with the authors.  So far, not even half
of the proposed or submitted essays have been sent out for reading, and we have
published about half of those.  When everything works out, Ron Bangel and I set
up and distribute an issue.
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ANCIENT HISTORY

_EJournal_ got started with this announcement in October, 1989.

"I propose starting a refereed electronic journal for discussing relationships
among electronic media and "texts" of all sorts.

"Electronic texts are not yet considered academic "publications."  They are not
likely to be looked at in the course of deliberations about tenure and
promotion.  This can be attributed, in part, to a latent, unchallenged
premise--a default assumption--that ideas aren't quite real until they have
been printed and bound and received in the mail.  Another factor may be the
deliberate informality of the exchanges on computer networks.  Perhaps most
restraining is awareness of how pushy it would be to put forward "ideas" whose
merit remained unacknowledged by one's peers. But an edited and refereed
"paperless" journal, one devoted to electronic texts and the implications of
the medium, would stand a good chance of acquiring legitimacy even if (and
perhaps because) it appeared principally on-line.  What's more, network
communications ought to permit speedy exchange of submitted texts; reading,
critiquing, revising and distributing ought to happen faster than with
paperbound media.

"Here are a few of the subjects we imagine might be discussed on the screens of
a forum called *BIT.TXT* or *NET.TXT*.  Please imagine each of these "headings"
and listed items intersecting with other items and headings to generate other
subjects.

"MEDIA: digitized information: visual, audial, alphanumeric; disks, CDs,
networks; micros and minis and mainframes (including parallel processors,
neural networks); hypertext, relational databases, spread sheets...  GENRES:
essays, fiction (interactive, aleatoric...), drama, ethnography, criticism,
memoranda, committee writing, satire...  SUBJECTS: education (distance
learning, collaboration...); cultural evolution; intellectual history;
futurology; semiotic and information theory; technology and literature and
theory and criticism; index/filter/categorization/abstraction approaches to
overloads of information...  PROFESSION/DISCIPLINE: role of journals;
marginalizing of technophiles; pedagogy; psycho/socio/eco implications of it
all...

"If there's enough interest and advice forthcoming in response to this
announcement, we will revise it and then solicit submissions and promulgate
procedures."
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OTHER HISTORY

By the fall of 1990 we had a good start on an Advisory Board and a multi-
disciplinary group of Consulting Editors.  Our first issue was sent in
March 1991.  By December 1991 we had distributed \V1N2\, \V1N2-1\, and \V1N3\.
This issue of March 1992 is \V2N1\.  We expect acknowledgment of Copyright
registration of \V1N1\ from the Library of Congress any month now.  It looks as
if _EJournal_ is launched.  Welcome aboard.
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About letters:

_EJournal_ is willing publish letters to the editor.  But at this point we make
no promises about how many, which ones, or what format.  Because the "Letters"
column of a periodical is a habit of the paper environment, we can't predict
exactly what will happen in pixel space. For instance, _EJournal_ readers can
send outraged objections to our essays directly to the authors.  Also, we can
publish substantial counterstatements as articles in their own right, or as
"Supplements."  Even so, there will probably be some brief, thoughtful
statements that appear to be of interest to many subscribers.  When there are,
they will appear as "Letters."
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About reviews:

_EJournal_ is willing to publish reviews of almost anything that seems to fit
under our broad umbrella: the implications of electronic networks and texts.
We do not solicit and cannot provide review copies of fiction, prophecy,
critiques, other texts, programs, hardware, lists or bulletin boards.  But if
you would like to bring any publicly available information to our readers'
attention, send your review (any length) to us, or ask if writing one sounds to
us like a good idea.
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About "supplements":

_EJournal_ plans to experiment with ways of revising, responding to, re-
working, or even retracting the texts we publish.  Authors who want to address
a subject already broached --by others or by themselves-- may send texts,
preferably brief, that we will consider publishing under the "Supplements"
heading.  Proposed "supplements" will not go through full, formal editorial
review.  Whether this "Department" will operate like a delayed-reaction
bulletin board or like an expanded letters-to-the-editor space, or whether it
will be withdrawn in favor of a system of appending supplemental material to
archived texts, or will take on an electronic identity with no direct print-
oriented analogue, will depend on what readers/writers make of the opportunity.
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About _EJournal_:

_EJournal_ is an all-electronic, Bitnet/Internet distributed, peer-reviewed,
academic periodical.  We are particularly interested in theory and practice
surrounding the creation, transmission, storage, interpretation, alteration and
replication of electronic text.  We are also interested in the broader social,
psychological, literary, economic and pedagogical implications of
computer-mediated networks. The journal's essays will be available free to
Bitnet/Internet addresses.  Recipients may make paper copies; _EJournal_ will
provide authenticated paper copy from our read-only archive for use by academic
deans or others.  Individual essays, reviews, stories-- texts --sent to us will
be disseminated to subscribers as soon as they have been through the editorial
process, which will also be "paperless."  We expect to offer access through
libraries to our electronic Contents, Abstracts, and Keywords, and to be
indexed and abstracted in appropriate places.

Writers who think their texts might be appreciated by _EJournal_'s audience are
invited to forward files to EJOURNAL@ALBANY.BITNET .  If you are wondering
about starting to write a piece for to us, feel free to ask if it sounds
appropriate.  There are no "styling" guidelines; we would like to be a little
more direct and lively than many paper publications, and less hasty and
ephemeral than most postings to unreviewed electronic spaces.  We read ASCII.

Each issue's "feature article," and those from other issues of _EJournal_, are
now available from a Fileserver at Albany.  We plan to distribute a "table of
contents" to a broad population occasionally, along with instructions for
downloading.  A list of available files from the _EJournal_ Fileserv may be
obtained by sending the message INDEX EJRNL to this address:
LISTSERV@ALBANY.BITNET .  To "get" one of the files in the EJRNL Listserv,
send the message GET <filename>  to LISTSERV@ALBANY.BITNET .
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Board of Advisors:                          Stevan Harnad, Princeton University
                           Dick Lanham, University of California at Los Angeles
                                 Ann Okerson, Association of Research Libraries
                                         Joe Raben, City University of New York
                                                  Bob Scholes, Brown University
                               Harry Whitaker, University of Quebec at Montreal
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Consulting Editors - April 1992

ahrens@hartford        John Ahrens            Hartford
ap01@liverpool.ac.uk   Stephen Clark          Liverpool
crone@cua              Tom Crone              Catholic University
dabrent@uncamult       Doug Brent             Calgary
djb85@albnyvms         Don Byrd               Albany
donaldson@loyvax       Randall Donaldson      Loyola College
ds001451@ndsuvm1       Ray Wheeler            North Dakota
eng006@unoma1          Marvin Peterson        Nebraska - Omaha
erdt@pucal             Terry Erdt             Purdue Calumet
fac_aska@jmuvax1       Arnie Kahn             James Madison
folger@yktvmv          Davis Foulger          IBM - Watson Center
george@gacvax1         G. N. Georgacarakos    Gustavus Adolphus
geurdes@rulfsw.        Han Geurdes            Leiden
        leidenuniv.nl
gms@psuvm              Gerry Santoro          Pennsylvania State University
nrcgsh@ritvax          Norm Coombs            Rochester Institute of Technology
pmsgsl@ritvax          Patrick M. Scanlon     Rochester Institute of Technology
r0731@csuohio          Nelson Pole            Cleveland State
ryle@urvax             Martin Ryle            Richmond
twbatson@gallua        Trent Batson           Gallaudet
usercoop@ualtamts      Wes Cooper             Alberta
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Editor:                             Ted Jennings, English, University at Albany
Managing Editor:                               Ron Bangel, University at Albany
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State University of New York University Center at Albany  Albany, NY 12222  USA

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September, 1992        _EJournal_  Volume 1 Number 3-2          ISSN# 1054-1055
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                   An Electronic Journal concerned with the
                implications of electronic networks and texts.
                       2632 Subscribers in 38 Countries

              University at Albany, State University of New York

                            ejournal@albany.bitnet


CONTENTS (Second supplement to V1N3 of November, 1991):

   Editorial Notes - This Issue; List purging; money;
                     readers' survey                      [ Begins at line 53 ]

   CREDIT, COMPENSATION AND COPYRIGHT:                    [ Begins at line 91 ]
   OWNING KNOWLEDGE AND ELECTRONIC NETWORKS

        by John B. Dilworth
           Department of Philosophy
           Western Michigan University, U.S.A.
           Dilworth@gw.wmich.edu

   Information -                                          [ Begins at line 340 ]

      About Subscriptions and Back Issues
      About Supplements to Previous Texts
      About Letters to the Editor
      About Reviews
      About _EJournal_

   People -                                               [ Begins at line 411 ]

      Board of Advisors
      Consulting Editors

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* This electronic publication and its contents are (c) copyright 1992 by       *
* _EJournal_.  Permission is hereby granted to give away the journal and its   *
* contents, but no one may "own" it.  Any and all financial interest is hereby *
* assigned to the acknowledged authors of individual texts.  This notification *
* must accompany all distribution of _EJournal_.                               *
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Editorial Notes - This Issue; List purging; money; readers' survey

This issue consists principally of an intriguing contribution to the polylog
about who owns electronic texts.  Professor Dilworth argues that the difference
between intellectual property and legal property makes copyright essentialy
irrelevant, at least for electronic publications in an academic context.

This issue also carries an announcement about the journal "Simulation &
Gaming."

About e-mail and subscriptions to _EJournal_:   We delete addressees when our
Listserv reports an inability to deliver an issue of the journal.  If you
should get an unexpected message saying you have been removed from our List,
*please* understand that it was prompted by a report of undeliverability.  If
you know anyone who stopped getting the journal and wasn't even informed,
please explain that we were not being surly and capricious.  For that to
happen, TWO communications had to have bounced.  An issue of the journal itself
and the follow-up message about being removed from the List came back to us as
undeliverable.  It would help, if your address changes, if you would send
appropriate `unsub' and `sub' messages to LISTSERV@albany.bitnet  .

Please do not send money.  _EJournal_ was started with the hope that edited
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     CREDIT, COMPENSATION AND COPYRIGHT:
     OWNING KNOWLEDGE AND ELECTRONIC NETWORKS

                       by John B. Dilworth
                    Department of Philosophy
               Western Michigan University, U.S.A.
                    Dilworth@gw.wmich.edu


Recently _EJournal_ contained a stimulating paper by Doug Brent
("Oral Knowledge, Typographic Knowledge, Electronic Knowledge:
Speculations on the History of Ownership," _EJournal_ Volume 1
Number 3, November 1991) on the subject of ownership of knowledge
and related issues.  An additional useful exchange between Brent
and Bob Hering (_EJournal_ Volume 1 Number 3-1, July 1992) on the
subject showed (among other things) some of the fundamental
disagreements which are easily possible on these topics. A key
issue raised was whether ownership and property rights must be
protected in a workable and generally acceptable dissemination of
knowledge in "cyberspace".

Instead of directly addressing Brent's paper and the exchange, I
shall briefly develop an alternative view, according to which
copyright or other property rights are relatively unimportant. In
my view, publicly giving credit to authors for original ideas is
much more important, and it can also help to ensure long-term
compensation for authors even in the case of electronic
dissemination of works.  Hence I am optimistic that electronic
media can flourish, whether or not capitalism and concerns about
personal reward remain part of the dominant world economic
system.


1. Intellectual Priority versus Legal Property Rights

A key distinction which needs to be made is that between
intellectual or conceptual priority and legal property rights.  A
person who first conceives an idea is both its discoverer or
inventor, and the source of any publicly communicated form of the
idea. If we wish, we may say that such a person has "intellectual
ownership" of the idea, but it is important not to confuse this
intellectual or conceptual ownership with any legal ownership or
right.                                                               [line 133]

For example, note that one cannot steal or destroy intellectual
ownership of an idea, however much one tries to appropriate it as
one's own or meld it with other material.  Nor could this
"ownership" or priority be transferred or sold to others.  Of
course, in specific cases it may become unclear who originated an
idea, and credit or acknowledgement may wrongly be given to
various borrowers or secondary sources for an idea.  But
intellectual priority with respect to an idea is a historical
fact which cannot itself be stolen or misappropriated.

Another reason why 'priority' is a more appropriate term than
'ownership' here is that there is clearly a sense in which any
ideas whatsoever are owned (or, if one prefers, not owned at all)
by all thinking beings capable of critically considering them.
Any thinkable ideas are part of our intellectual heritage.  We
"own" them by participating in the culture of which they are a
part.  A more specific sense of ownership along these lines is
that in which one owns an idea, or makes it one's own, by efforts
to understand or master it.  In these senses too, ideas cannot be
stolen or misappropriated, and no rights are violated by sharing
them.

Returning to the main topic of intellectual priority, what should
our social attitudes be toward it?  Broadly, we should give
people credit or acknowledgement for initiating ideas. But it is
a mistake to equate such credit with an ineffectual, minor social
politeness or etiquette (see later).

How should we reward or compensate intellectual priority?  One
reason why there is a strong tendency to confuse intellectual
"ownership"  of an idea with legal ownership is that it is
widely assumed that the only adequate reward or acknowledgement
for priority consists in the granting of legal property rights,
such as copyright, to the originator of an idea (or more
specifically, to an idea as expressed in a definite linguistic
way).                                                                [line 139]

This is indeed one reasonable way of rewarding conceptual
innovators, but it is not the only defensible one. We should not
forget that most people work for corporations, under legal
agreements such that any ideas originated in the workplace by an
employee automatically become the property of their employers.
This system is defensible insofar as employees are adequately
compensated for their efforts.

Current copyright law (at least in the U.S.) further encourages
the confusion of intellectual priority and property rights,
because simply by authoring a manuscript one automatically
acquires copyright or legal property rights in it, in the absence
of prior agreements with employers, etc.  (In the U.S.,
registering such a copyright does not create it, but merely
provides evidence which would make it easier to legally defend
the copyright later if necessary.)

However, it remains important to distinguish priority and
property even in such cases of very close legal connection
between authorship and property rights.  For if we examine the
actual workings of our capitalist commercial system for
distributing or publishing original manuscripts, it becomes clear
that copyright or ownership plays only a minor (and somewhat
paradoxical) role in the actual ways in which private authors are
compensated for their original work.

One might expect that the normal or standard case of compensation
in the current system would be that in which the author as owner
of the copyright receives payment for giving permission for
others to read or otherwise use her work.  But in actual fact,
cases where an author publishes his own work under his own
copyright are relatively rare and inconsequential.

Instead, the almost universal actual model is one in which
authors engage in a contract with a commercial publisher, in
which the author unconditionally assigns or entirely gives up her
copyright to the publisher in exchange for certain benefits or
compensations.  A main reason for this practice is that with
traditional media, the costs of publishing and distributing are
so high that contracting with independent publishers becomes
almost a necessity for authors.  But then the "pound of flesh" of
having to give up one's legal ownership rights almost inevitably
ensues.  In such cases we must distinguish between an author's
originality and her copyright ownership, because of course when
her work is being distributed she no longer owns the copyright,
in spite of the originality of her work.                             [line 218]

Because of this confusion or misconception, the whole issue of
whether electronic media involve threats to individual property
rights is misconceived from the start.  Paradoxically, it is only
such innovative media which potentially could make widespread,
inexpensive distribution of manuscripts feasible while yet
maintaining individual copyrights.  Thus there are initial
grounds for hoping that electronic media might provide the last,
best hope of preserving private property rights in manuscripts
against the authoritarian rule of corporate publishing.

However, things are more complex still because of another aspect
of copyrights, namely that as legal rights they may need to be
asserted and defended.  These issues are particularly intractable
in the case of a journal or other compilation which may accept
manuscripts from several authors simultaneously.  How are these
individual copyrights to be protected in the case of copyright
infringements?   No journal could afford to separately defend
each of its individual authors in the courts against such
threats, and almost certainly the individuals couldn't afford it
either.

Thus here we have another main reason why publishers require
copyright assignment from their authors, and in this case it
applies just as much to electronic publishing as to more
traditional media. As long as our legal systems require
traditional judges, courtrooms and lawyers, all publishing which
involves protection of copyrights will have essentially the same
basic legal problems, whatever the publication medium.


2. Defending Priority and Providing Compensation, Independently
of Ownership Issues.

The upshot of the previous discussion is that intellectual
priority and legal ownership rights must be distinguished, and
that even in the present commercial system, issues of financial
compensation for authors are largely independent of property
rights issues.  Here are some further points suggesting more
positively that, as long as authors get credit for their work,
and some reasonable compensation for it (even if indirectly),
issues about legal ownership can safely be put aside as merely
secondary or peripheral issues.                                      [line 261]

To begin with, a useful concept for the purposes of the present
discussion is that of deferred or indirect compensation.
Compensation is deferred if it is not a direct or immediate
benefit of an activity, but instead occurs only as an indirect or
later consequence of the activity. However, in terms of an
author's long-term 'bottom line', deferred compensation can
provide just as much money in the bank as could direct
compensation.

In view of this possibility, even if there is no direct or
immediate financial compensation for authoring and distributing a
manuscript in a medium, we cannot assume that therefore in the
long run such dissemination is bound to be unsuccessful.  Even if
it is true that authors will not write or publish without
compensation, as long as some form of compensation (even if
highly indirect) is available, authors will continue to be
motivated to write.

For example, academic authors producing scholarly papers are
already very much aware that most academic journals pay no fees
to authors.  Neverthess, because there is an indirect but very
powerful link between publishing credits and future or continuing
academic pay raises, promotion, and employment, such publishing
does virtually guarantee substantial deferred compensation to an
author.

Such kinds of case are already more common than is generally
realized.  An otherwise very different example is provided by
various collaborative commercial authorship cases.  For example,
a copywriter for an advertising agency is admittedly paid for
what she does, but if she has some strikingly original idea she
is unlikely to see any immediate increase in her compensation
because of it.  However, in the future she is likely to get to
work on more prestigious accounts, get increased pay raises and
promotions, etc., because her employers give her credit for the
originality of her earlier ideas.  Here too it would be a mistake
to concentrate exclusively on immediate compensation for
authorship.  For in commercial as well as academic settings,
building a 'track record' of original achievements, which give
good prospects for future or indirect compensation, is extremely
important to authors.                                                [line 303]

Next we should ask, where does credit for intellectual priority
or originality come into the picture?  In my view, the
recognition and acknowledgement of intellectual or conceptual
priority is not merely a minor matter of etiquette or politeness
>from one author to another.  Instead, it should be seen in the
broader context of an author's reputation, success and long-term
financial compensation.  Whether in academic or other contexts, a
writer's influence and earning power depends on recognition by
his peers of his original contributions.  The acknowledgement or
crediting of an author with an idea is an essential part of
building that social recognition, and hence it is much more
important to success as an author than copyright or other
ownership rights could ever be.

In conclusion then, provided we give adequate credit and
acknowledgement to authors for their original contributions,
generally they will in one way or another receive adequate
compensation for their efforts.  And since these points apply
just as much to electronic media as to more traditional kinds,
we can justifiably be optimistic about their long-term viability
as vehicles for the encouragement and dissemination of knowledge.

John B. Dilworth
Department of Philosophy
Western Michigan University, U.S.A.
Dilworth@gw.wmich.edu

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   Editorial:  Electronic Time Travel                   [ Begins at line 51 ]

   The Brent-Hering Exchange about Owning Knowledge     [ Begins at line 102 ]

      by Bob Hering          and   Doug Brent
         Drexel University         Faculty of General Studies
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    Editorial:  Electronic Time Travel

    This issue of _EJournal_ is an exercise in time travel.  Doug
    Brent's essay appeared in November '91.  He heard from Bob Hering
    soon thereafter.  Their exchange got lost in electronic limbo and
    didn't reach us until June '92.  We're sending it out in July '92,
    with a note about how you can re-live last November by sending for
    issue V1N3.  Even though it is being sent in 1992, the V1N3-1
    designation aligns this issue with the "publishing year" 1991.
    Whew.

    We will now add a note to the abstract of the November 1991
    essay, in the Contents file of our Fileserv, saying that there is
    a discussion of its argument to be found in the July '92 issue.

    Our electronic existence, that is, lets us telescope and overlay
    and interpolate texts in ways that can't be managed by book-style,
    codex publications.  It would be possible, for instance, for us to
    re-distribute V1N3 with both November's "Ownership" essay and this
    July issue's follow-up exchange.  That's easy to imagine, and it
    might offer worthwhile convenience to many readers, especially to
    recent subscribers who have perilously little context into which
    they can fit this issue.

    But from there it's only a small step, electronically, to an
    editor's revision of the November essay in a way that reflects
    both Bob Hering's reservations and Doug Brent's efforts in
    rebuttal -- without acknowledging Bob Hering's role in the "new
    original" essay.  We could then file the altered issue in the
    Fileserv and pretend that it had always existed that
    way.                                                           [line 81]

    That won't happen.  One of _EJournal_'s obligations has always been
    to provide authenticated copies --duplicate originals-- to academic
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    error.  We have set up our archives (which are way back there, well
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    principle that what we send out will not be tampered with by
    embarrassed time travellers.  That's one reason for publishing
    these supplemental discussions as separate issues, accepting the
    risk of some confusion caused by the distribution of a Volume 1
    ("1991") issue in the middle of the Volume 2 ("1992") calendar year.

    Ted Jennings

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Supplement to the Volume 1 Number 3 (November, 1991) essay by Doug Brent,
"Oral Knowledge, Typographic Knowledge, Electronic Knowledge: Speculations
on the History of Ownership"

Here, with their permission, is a discussion between Doug Brent and Bob Hering
on the subject of Doug Brent's "Ownership" article in our November, 1991 issue
(V1N3).  Bob originally sent his comments to Doug personally, but it seemed to
him (and to the editor) that the difference of outlooks represents a
philosophical crux --not just between slightly left and right political views,
but (as the exchange will suggest) between two views of the relative power of
economics and technology.

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The Brent-Hering Exchange about Owning Knowledge:

To: Doug Brent
    Faculty of General Studies
    University of Calgary
    DABRENT@ACS.UCALGARY.CA

Subject: "Oral Knowledge, Typographic Knowledge, Electronic Knowledge:
Speculations on the History of Ownership"
                                                                     [line 131]
-----Your Article in _EJournal_, Volume 1 Number 3, November, 1991

    Please accept this message as a means of introduction. I am
    presently an adjunct professor at Drexel University. I teach
    graduate and undergraduate management courses as part of the
    Management Division at Drexel.

    I have a 35-year career background in the Information Management
    industry and a long association with the Sperry Corp., subsequently
    merged with the Burroughs Corp., into the Unisys Corp. I have a
    strong interest in computing, telecommunications and information
    management. My skills are specifically in the MS-DOS arena, with
    proficiency in several business, financial, communications and
    graphics applications.

    Your recent article in _EJournal_ is very interesting and
    thoughtful; I would like to offer my comments and observations to
    you.

    General comments:

    The perspective you offer about knowledge ownership across the oral,
    literate and cyberspace constructs contain important, clearly
    delineated comparisons. In addition to the fluidity provided to
    "text" through cybernetics, and the difficulties associated with
    ownership, there are other issues to be considered: legal, right
    to privacy, and corporate and public networking matters come to
    mind, to name a few.

    Perhaps the key point you raise, as part of your conclusions, has to
    do with economics. That area, linked with communal vs. individual
    ownership, could be considered central to many societies and to the
    systems or constructs devised to differentiate one developmental
    phase from another.
                                                                    [line 166]
    A general observation is that, in my opinion, western societies have
    evolved to the point of demanding individuality, which calls for
    intellectual property, and that individuality can be associated with
    value-added, economic independence.

    Your observation that the "...merging of texts into new wholes which
    are inseparable from their makers" (lines 614 & 615), could ensure
    the downfall of the emerging cyberspace construct.

    I will attempt to explain, in the specific comments below, why I
    offer that consideration.

    Specific comments:

    In Section 2, on ownership of knowledge in oral societies, you
    address the inseparability of creativity and performance in
    transmitting knowledge. The "performance" aspect can be directly
    equated to the "transmission or reproducibility" of the knowledge.
    In that sense, the analogy to either the printing press or
    cyberspace is common.

    Even in oral societies, although knowledge was shared, each member
    of the society had his or her specific role just as the teller of
    tales did. The individuality surfaces in the sense of these
    differing roles within the society, what you (or Ong) describe as
    procedural knowledge.

    I agree with your portrayal of knowledge ownership in literate
    societies, (Section 3) with two exceptions, namely,

    a) the "manuscript age analogy" -- the copying of these manuscripts
    can be equated to that done by a Xerox machine, albeit a very slow
    one. It was a mechanical form of reproduction, performed by humans
    (both of which are now "fossilized");                             [line 200]

    b) the "romantic myth" (line 215) - while it is true that people
    draw on the collectiv[Ae past (text or otherwise), certainly there are
    instances that point directly to individuality, independent of past
    knowledge. Names that charaterize independence such as Einstein, Da
    Vinci, and Newton all demonstrated a creative originality that was
    not dependent on past knowledge and substantiate the "myth."  But,
    in general, your point is well taken.

    In Section 4, your reference to the "Boshwash Times," from Hiltz and
    Turoff, stirs some comments. While the notion of a group Nobel Prize
    is entirely conceivable, the suggestion that no member of the group
    contributed more than any other implies communalism, socialism,
    utopianism or just plain contrived modesty. The scenario begs
    reality.

    In Section 6, relative to copyright in cybernetic space, the
    principal of copyrights can and should be maintained even though it
    may be cumbersome. Stealing of intellectual property, text,
    software, or concepts is not unique to cybernetics - it is simply
    easier in this environment. A key factor is one of human choice, to
    act professionally and responsibly. You seem to agree with that in
    the context of "..acknowledging an original creator of an idea."
    Contrary to your conclusion, that is the same as the claim to
    ownership. It simply is not as easy as it was in "fossilized text."

    I have great difficulty understanding your observation that when
    knowledge enters electronic space, "..it seems equally natural to
    surrender it." It is here that the use of cybernetic space for
    advancing knowledge is at great risk.  If safeguards are not put in
    place to protect intellectual property ownership, economic factors
    will dilute the use of this space significantly. Charging for bytes
    and blocks of data (information) is completely independent of the
    knowledge itself.

    In Section 7, with respect to the Bolter paragraph, and the chaotic
    state of electronic writing space, I can only suggest - so is the
    entire physical universe as we know it.
                                                                     [line 239]
    With regard to your reference to communal knowing as optimistic, I
    would humbly suggest that others would view that as a pessimistic or
    negative outlook. You are correct that ".. the relationship between
    economics and knowledge will be rearranged into new formations,...."
    Again, in my opinion, if cybernetics, as a means of creation and
    transmission, is to contribute significantly to human knowledge, the
    value of the creation and the economic compensation to humans will
    be as or more important than it was/is today.

    I thoroughly enjoyed and appreciated what your article portrayed and
    the effort your article required. Many more educators, government
    agencies and businesses need to do the same if this very exciting
    new era is to come of age. I wish you the best in your current and
    future endeavors.

    Regards,

    Bob Hering
    Drexel University
    HERINGCR@DUVM.BITNET

    * * * * *

    To:  Mr. Bob Hering
    Drexel University

    Bob:

    Thanks for your interesting, thoughtful (and flattering) response to
    my article.  I think that you put your finger on some extremely
    important issues. The differences between our points of view suggest
    two quite different responses to the possible future of cyberspace,
    and reflect, I think, two different philosophies of our relationship
    to technology.  This makes the discussion really interesting.

    Before getting on to what I see as the really important discussion,
    let me clarify the two minor points you address regarding my
    portrayal of knowledge in literate societies.
                                                                     [line 278]
    First, you disagree with my comment that "During the manuscript age,
    the painstaking copying and illustrating of a manuscript was in some
    respects a personal performance of knowledge analogous to the
    performance of an epic poem or folk tale."  You suggest instead that
    manuscript copying can be likened to photocopying.  I don't really
    think so, simply because manuscript copying required the copyist to
    handle each character individually with a loving care that--at least
    until the twelfth century scriptoria made a business of it--was
    often performed as an act of religious devotion.  And although the
    goal was to make the copy identical in *wording* to the original,
    there was no thought of making it *look* like the original.  Each
    was typically illuminated in a highly original fashion that was not
    necessarily copied from the source manuscript.  It is this that
    gives manuscript copying a different psychological texture from
    photocopying, and led Ong to declare the manuscript age "residually
    oral."

    Second, you are not quite happy with my assertion that the idea of
    the individual genius is a romantic myth.  I would certainly agree
    that the idea of the genius is not a myth.  While some toil away
    making minor improvements in the work that has preceeded them,
    others such as the ones you mention make awesome leaps of
    understanding, authoring Kuhnian "paradigm shifts" rather than
    incremental advances.  What I *do* see as a myth is the idea that
    such genius stands alone.  It is always a social genius, a rare gift
    for taking the pieces of a puzzle that others have been forging and
    turning them a totally new way so that they suddenly lock together
    into a new configuration.  It was Newton, I think, who said "If I
    have seen further than others it is because I have stood on the
    shoulders of giants."  (If anyone out there can confirm the exact
    source of this quotation, please pass it on--I've been trying to pin
    it down for years.)

    But enough of the minor details.  On to the meat of the discussion.

    You seems to agree to a large extent with my prediction that
    ownership of knowledge will be more difficult in cyberspace and may
    well disappear.  But you disagree with my assertion that this could
    well be a good thing.  "It is here," you say, "that the use of
    cybernetic space for advancing knowledge is at great risk.  If
    safeguards are not put in place to protect intellectual property
    ownership, economic factors will dilute the use of this space
    significantly."                                                  [line 321]

    What you are saying, in effect, is that given the present economic
    systems that have evolved, people will not continue to produce and
    disseminate knowledge if their right to profit by it (that is, their
    "ownership" of it, not just the polite acknowledgement that they
    thought of it first) is not protected.  If it comes to a choice
    between cyberspace or profit, then, you argue that we will choose
    profit.  Only by protecting the right to profit from intellectual
    labour can we protect cyberspace.

    (I hope I am not mis-paraphrasing you here.  I am not trying to set
    up a straw man, for I think that this is a genuinely tenable and
    respectable position; I am just trying to restate for clarity.)

    You may well be right.  The recent collapse of Communism seems to
    make this view even more persuasive.  A system in which direct
    economic incentives for production were not in place resulted in a
    stagnant economy, a bloated bureaucracy, and ultimately a lack not
    just of consumer goods but of basic necessities.  Human beings do
    not seem well disposed to work (whether planting potatoes or
    developing scientific breakthroughs) for the good of their souls.

    The only way you could be wrong is if the theory of transformative
    technologies states correctly the immense and unstoppable power of a
    communications revolution.  McLuhan asserts, and Ong develops more
    thoroughly, the claim that when communications media shift to the
    extent they did when the alphabet was introduced, everything
    else--social systems, economics, consciousness itself--is dragged
    along with the shift.  This may create short-term economic crises,
    but ultimately the economic system, like everything else, must
    adapt.  This does not mean that the entire capitalist system will
    collapse in ruins; I think that in general capitalism is too strong
    and in the long run too useful (yes, I said useful) to be
    washed away.
                                                                     [line 356]
    This only means that the concept of private property will not be
    applicable to knowledge in the rather crude form that either
    copyright of hard-copy or pay-per-byte electronic systems has thus
    far allowed.  Ownership of knowledge is gradually becoming
    untenable.

    This is a very strong form of technological determinism, but it
    works only on a massive scale.  It does not assert that this or that
    little wrinkle in the technological ether is inevitable -- we can,
    if we like, reject certain forms of technology -- but it does assert
    that some types of global shifts in communications style are
    inevitable in the longer term.  (Try to find a society that has
    successfully resisted literacy once introduced to it.)

    According to this theory, then, if it comes to a choice between
    cyberspace and profit, we will not have the option of choosing
    profit -- at least, not forever. Eventually the cyberspace
    environment will force an entirely new way of thinking about
    knowledge production.  You hit the nail on the head when you call
    this concept, illustrated by Hiltz and Turoff's collective Nobel
    prize, "communalism, socialism, utopianism."  It is indeed
    communalism; that is exactly what I am arguing for.  And it may well
    be utopian, if you mean by that "a good state of being that cannot
    be achieved in today's world."  If you mean "a soft-headed view of a
    future that could never occur," well, I must respectfully disagree.

    In short, then, we have three possible scenarios:

     1.   We manage to maintain ownership of knowledge in cyberspace,
     and cyberspace continues to exist within the present economic
     system.  (I argue that this is unlikely because the nature of
     cyberspace makes it too difficult.  You argue that it is unlikely
     because the nature of economics makes it too difficult.  But
     whereas you think that this would be a positive outcome, I don't.
     Here you and I assign opposite values to the same possible
     outcome.)
                                                                     [line 393]
     2.   We do not manage to maintain ownership of knowledge in
     cyberspace, and cyberspace never develops its potential.  (You
     argue that this is possible because the nature of economics
     prohibits communal knowledge on anything but a relatively local
     scale.  Neither of us likes this possible outcome much, as both of
     us like the possibilities afforded by the cybernetic revolution.
     If we didn't, we wouldn't be sharing this piece of cyberspace right
     now.)

     3.   We do not manage to maintain ownership of knowledge in
     cyberspace, and the capitalist system, *at least as it applies to
     information exchange,* must adapt or die.  (I argue that this is a
     likely, or at least a possible, outcome, and also that it could be
     a good one.  Here again we assign opposite values to the same
     possible outcome.)

    I suppose it would be possible to assign this difference of opinion
    to a left - right "ideological" dichotomy, because I seem to
    support capitalism more reluctantly than you.

    But I don't think our differences are ideological, let alone
    "political."  What we have put our finger on in this
    exchange is the difference in how much we believe in the transforming
    power of communication technology versus the staying power of the
    present economic system.  My Utopian vision depends utterly on
    McLuhan, Ong and Heim being more right than wrong.  The entire
    scenario painted in my "Ownership" article is nothing more than the
    detailed working-out of their theories as applied to a particular
    aspect of knowledge.

    Actually, if the truth be known, I am not absolutely sure that they
    really are more right than wrong.  But I sure hope so.  I find the
    idea of communal knowledge in cyberspace to be truly exciting.`

    All the best,

    Doug Brent
    Faculty of General Studies
    University of Calgary
    DABRENT@ACS.UCALGARY.CA

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Oral Knowledge, Typographic Knowledge, Electronic Knowledge:
Speculations on the History of Ownership

                                         by Doug Brent
                                              Faculty of General Studies
                                              University of Calgary

1.  Using Transformation Theory

It has frequently been observed that computers are revolutionizing the concept
of knowledge ownership.  Old standards of copyright and the ownership of
intellectual property simply do not apply to the universe of knowledge in
cyberspace. In this article I wish to examine more closely the ways in which
concepts of intellectual property are changing as the computer changes our
relationship to knowledge.

The main tool I wish to use in this investigation is the cluster of theories
that Michael Heim has dubbed "transformation theory" (_Electric Language_
1987).  Marshall McLuhan first called attention to the transforming powers of
media in his insightful and infuriating books, particularly his masterpiece
_Understanding Media_ (1964).  In that book, he claims that we cannot learn
anything of importance about a medium by looking only at its content:

          Our conventional response to all media, namely that it
          is how they are used that counts, is the numb stance of
          the technological idiot.  For the "content" of a medium
          is like the juicy piece of meat carried by the burglar
          to distract the watchdog of the mind.  (p. 18)

To avoid that numbness, we must refocus our attention on the ways in which the
technological characteristics of the medium itself reshape our lives not just
by giving us new tools to play with but by reshaping our consciousness on a
fundamental and subliminal level.

In _Orality and Literacy_ (1982), Walter Ong builds on McLuhan's general
philosophy, plus anthropological research on the development of oral societies,
in order to explain the dramatic changes in society that came about with the
advent of literacy.  Ong argues that the shift from oral to literate culture in
about the fifth century B.C. did more than change patterns of art, politics and
commerce.  It enabled a profound shift in human conscious, bringing about the
linear, abstract forms of Western logic that we take for granted today but
which were simply unthinkable without literacy as a means of preserving
complicated original thought.                                      [line 42]

What makes transformation theory a particularly powerful tool for speculating
on the impact of computers is that the information revolution intuitively feels
like a third stage in this process, a revolution as great as the shift from
orality to literacy.  Admittedly, Heim warns severely against extending the
transformation theory developed to deal with the first revolution and facilely
using it to predict the outcome of the second:

          Because it is anchored in the difference between orality
          and literacy, the transformation theory is unsuited for
          an investigation of word processing.  Constant reference
          to the emergence of literacy distorts the phenomenon by
          reducing the emergence of word processing to a new kind
          of literacy.  The use of the metaphor from print culture
          is understandable when we are confronted by the profound
          novelty of digital writing.  But if we lose sight of the
          weakness of the metaphor, we shall pass right by the
          phenomenon in our anxiety to treat it easily in a
          familiar, conventionally manageable way. (p. 113)

Heim's warning is well taken; the second shift is neither simply an extension,
nor simply a reversal (despite what I am about to argue) of the first.  Yet if
historical study is to be justified on any grounds other than idle curiosity,
it surely must be on the grounds that we can learn something about the present
and future by extrapolating from the past.  The important caveat is that we
must not depend only on a metaphor.  To the extent that we see echoes of the
first communications revolution in the second, we must be careful to use the
metaphor of the first transformation only as a means of generating suggestive
possibilities.  Before we can rely on these suggestions even provisionally, we
must corroborate them by close examination of changes in personal and social
behaviour that are already sufficiently far along to be susceptible of
examination.

2.  Ownership of Knowledge in Oral Societies

Ong claims that in a primary oral culture--that is, a culture that has never
known literacy--knowledge is not owned; rather it is performed.  Without print,
knowledge must be stored not as a set of abstract ideas or isolated bits of
information, but as a set of concepts embedded deeply in the language and
culture of the people.  Strictly procedural knowledge--how to build a boat, how
to fight a war--is passed on directly from craftsman to craftsman through the
process of apprenticeship. However, the more abstract knowledge of the
tribe--not just their history but also their values, their concepts of justice
and social order--is contained in the epic formulae, recurrent themes, and
mythic patterns, plots and stereotypes out of which the storytellers of the
tribe weave their narratives.  This  knowledge exists as a pre-existing network
of knowledge, interconnected in extraordinarily complex and non-linear ways and
all known in at least its broad outlines to the storyteller's audience before
he begins (see Bolter, _Writing Space_, 1991).                   [line 91]

Lord's work with modern illiterate poets underlines the implications of this
means of transmitting knowledge (_The Singer of Tales_, 1960).  Although the
storytellers usually insist that they tell their stories exactly the same way
each time, transcriptions of stories told by modern oral storytellers reveal
significant variation.  Rather than memorizing a verbatim "text," as literate
observers assumed, the storytellers fit stock elements to a rhythmic pattern
and a well-known plot to re- produce the story anew each time it is told.
There simply is no "text" apart from each individual incarnation of each tale.

This has implications for how the creative act is seen.  If oral performers
were simply memorizing and reciting a work that had at one time been "composed"
by a single individual, the process would be no more than an oral version of
literate composition, in which a text is composed once and reproduced
mechanically many times.  But Lord's work reveals that the performer of a tale
is combining an act of creation with an act of transmission.  His primary work
is to transmit the culture of the tribe, and in this act of transmission he
must be conservative.  Changes in oral knowledge cannot be undone, for there
are no old copies to go back to.  The tellers must therefore be able to
reproduce the forms and plots in which their tribe's knowledge is contained as
faithfully as possible.  Yet there is also a gradual drift in the stories.  In
a process that Ong calls "homeostasis," the stories change imperceptibly over
time to suit the needs and values of the culture as that culture changes.  If
the values that are held in high regard by the culture shift to suit changing
circumstances, the heroes in the tales will acquire new characteristics, or
even cease to be heroes.  Individual creativity is profoundly rhetorical, for
it is the subtle interplay between teller and audience that shapes the tales to
match the values of that audience; yet it is also largely invisible (Ong 1982).
                                                                   [line 120]
This inseparability of creativity and performance meant that there was no such
thing as ownership of knowledge--or, more aptly, there was no such thing as
_private_ ownership of knowledge.  Knowledge was held in common, entrusted to
the tellers of tales who were maintained by the tribe, not for their individual
contributions to the growth of ideas, but for their ongoing duty to keep
knowledge alive by performing it.

3.  Ownership of Knowledge in Literate Societies

With the introduction of writing, all of this changed. According to Ong and his
anthropological school of communications history, writing had a number of
profound effects, including the development of the self-conscious, rational
self, of the power of abstraction, and consequently of the entire Western
system of logic. For my purposes here, however, the most important result of
the invention of writing was a separation of text and performance, of knowledge
and knower.  As Havelock puts it in _Origins of Western Literacy_ (1976),
writing separates "the knower from the known" by creating a fossilized text
that can achieve a continued existence apart from any knower.  The knowledge
represented by an oral tale is so embedded in mind and action that it cannot be
contemplated as a separate entity; such knowledge travels as an almost
subliminal partner of a performance, as transmission that the performer does
not even think of as "knowledge" but rather as simply a set of actions.  A
manuscript, however, can be handled, stored, retrieved from a vault and
re-performed a millennium after all previous readers have died.  Therefore,
with writing knowledge comes to be seen as something reified, as existing
outside the self.

If knowledge can be separated from the knower, it can be owned by separate
individuals.  In an oral culture, plagiarism is unthinkable, simply because the
survival of the culture depends on plagiarism--that is, on each performer
learning what has gone before and making it his own.  As the manuscript society
came into existence, it became more common to attribute written tales to their
sources in prior texts.  Yet, as any student of early written poetry will know
(Chaucer is a well-known example), prior texts were often so inseparably
mingled with new material that generations of scholars have been kept happily
employed in sorting them out.  During the manuscript age, the painstaking
copying and illustrating of a manuscript was in some respects a personal
performance of knowledge analogous to the performance of an epic poem or folk
tale.
                                                                    [line 160]
It was the printing press that made private ownership of knowledge a necessity,
for it was the printing press that finally severed the connection between the
creation and the transmission of knowledge.  For transmission was now a
mechanical act, performable by a machine.  Originality, once a deadly danger to
a society that had to struggle to maintain its equilibrium, could now be seen
as more valuable than performance.  To claim originality for what was only a
re-performance became a serious breach of the values of the society.
Appropriating another's ideas, once an essential means of keeping them alive,
became the act of a _plagiarius_, a torturer, plunderer, oppressor:

          Typography had made the word a commodity.  The old
          communal oral world had split up into privately claimed
          freeholdings.  The drift toward greater individualism
          had been served well by print. (Ong 1982, p. 131)

Copyright laws were soon created as a means of preserving this intellectual
property.  As Patterson points out (_Copyright in Historical Perspective_
1968), copyright was originally created more as a means of breaking the
stationers' monopoly on texts than as a means of protecting authors' rights.
Yet the commonsense notion that an author's words were things of countable
value pressed the law of copyright further and further in the direction of
articulating those rights against those of the stationers who simply reproduced
the physical text.  By the eighteenth century, copyright was firmly established
not only as a means to ensure that an author will be paid for his ideas, but
also to ensure that he will be able to protect their integrity by granting him
the sole authority to correct, amend or retract them.  In the Miller vs. Taylor
decision of 1767, a decision vital to the shaping of English copyright law into
its final modern form, Mr. Justice Aston commented, "I do not know, nor can I
comprehend any property more emphatically a man's own, nay, more incapable of
being mistaken, than his literary works" (Patterson p. 170).

The modern abhorrence of plagiarism, of course, has never meant that one should
not use another's ideas.  The practice of bringing ideas forward and
integrating them into later works is fundamental to the modern belief that
knowledge is cumulative and improvable.  But a crucial difference between oral
and literate diffusion of knowledge is that as knowledge diffuses through
knowledge networks of modern research disciplines, it leaves behind the tracks
of its passage in the form of earlier texts linked by webs of citations.  Among
other functions, these citations ensure that the producer of a particularly
fertile idea is given due credit for her work, even as that work is being
corrected, amended, extended, and ultimately submerged into the new knowledge
that is being built upon it.  Whereas the oral bard could demonstrate that he
was earning his keep simply by continually re-performing the knowledge of which
he was guardian, the modern researcher must demonstrate that she is worthy of
being maintained by her tribe by creating work worthy of being explicitly cited
by others.  Thus she retains ownership of the ideas at the same time as she
releases them into the world to perform their work--in a sense leasing rather
than transferring them to others.                              [line 209]

Thus the effects of printed texts are somewhat paradoxical. On the one hand,
the explicit pointers to earlier texts reinforce the fact that knowledge is
built communally, through the interactions of thousands of individuals.  On the
other hand, the fact that each idea can be labelled with the name of its maker
has created the romantic myth of the individual creative genius. This myth
manifests itself in the arts as the figure of the brooding artist creating in
solitude, and in the sciences as the individual inventor, the Nobel prize
winner who sees what no-one has seen before.

4.   Ownership of Knowledge in Cyberspace

In this context, then, what might the second shift, from print to the
electronic space afforded by word processing, computer conferencing, and
hypertext, do to our sense of the ownership of knowledge?

One of the most important features of typography, if we believe McLuhan and his
followers, is metaphorical.  Here we are not talking about the investigator's
use of metaphor to extend the past into the future, the metaphor that Heim is
so reluctant to pursue.  We are talking about an entire culture's metaphorical
transfer of characteristics of its communications medium to other aspects of
the culture.  McLuhan suggests, for instance, that the reproduction of texts
from straight rows of exactly repeatable, individually meaningless units of
type is an amazingly close analogue of, and perhaps the model for, the
specialized industrial society in which an entire economy is assembled out of
small bits of individually owned private property--including intellectual
property.  These sorts of speculation can be taken to the giddy heights of
unprovable assertion that McLuhan is justly derided for.  Yet if we accept
provisionally that the medium can sometimes be the metaphor, we can perhaps
learn something about the effects of the second transformation by looking at
the metaphorical ways in which it allows us to conceptualize knowledge.
                                                                   [line 241]
One of the most important ways in which the electronic metaphor operates is not
so much to change what writers do when they build knowledge, but rather to make
this process more immediately and more obviously _visible_ through the types of
operations which it allows and the physical steps which the writer goes
through.  It has, after all, been observed for some time that the myth of the
individual discoverer of knowledge is exactly that--a myth.  Perhaps the best
summary of this literature is Karen Burke LeFevre's _Invention as a Social Act_
(1987), a work that brings together accounts of collaborative invention from
postmodern literary theory, language philosophy and social psychology to argue
for a new emphasis on collaboration by writing teachers.  One of the most
important of these sources is Michel Foucault:

          [Foucault] describes the beginning of a discourse as a
          re-emergence into an ongoing, never-ending process:  "At
          the moment of speaking, I would like to have perceived a
          nameless voice, long preceding me, leaving me merely to
          enmesh myself in it. . . .  There would have been no
          beginnings: instead, speech would proceed from me, while
          I stood in its path--a slender gap--the point of its
          possible disappearance."  Elaborating on this
          perspective, one may come to regard discourse not as an
          isolated event, but rather a constant potentiality that
          is occasionally evidenced in speech or writing. . . .

               Such perspectives suggest that traditional views of
          an event or act have been misleading when they have
          presumed that the individual unit--a speech or a written
          text, an individual hero, a particular battle or
          discovery--is clearly separable from a larger,
          continuing force or stream of events in which it
          participates.  For similar reasons Jacques Derrida has
          criticized literary theories that attempt to explain the
          meaning of a text apart from other texts that precede
          and follow it. (p. 41-42)

Sociologists of science support this conception of knowledge as communal rather
than individual.  Diana Crane's seminal study _Invisible Colleges_ (1972), for
instance, documents the extent to which ideas are nourished and developed
through networks of interaction among scientists who may come from many
different "official" disciplines but who form a powerful social group around a
common problem.  Yet the print technology through which this
communally-developed knowledge is typically delivered-- distanced, fossilized,
abstracted from the network of interconnected minds that formed it--continually
enforces the opposite message.  The metaphorical meaning of print technology is
isolation, not communality.  In particular, the ability to claim one's
particular share of the intertextual web and stamp it with one's own name--an
ability made possible by the same printing press that made widespread
cumulation of knowledge possible as well--suggests that knowledge is
individually owned.                                             [line 290]

I believe that computer mediated communication provides a totally different
metaphorical message, one that can take theories of collaborative knowledge out
of the realm of language philosophy and stamp them indelibly in the
consciousness of the entire society.  Let us begin by looking at what is now
the most mundane aspect of computer-mediated communication, word processing.
Remember that one of the most important psychological effects of writing in
general and the printing press in particular is the fossilization of text as an
exteriorized object.  However, composing on a word processor divides the
production of the text into two distinct stages. Ultimately the text issues in
a final stage of more or less complete closure, once a "final" draft is
published in a hard codex.  But the word processor greatly extends the fluid
stage of text, abolishing the sense of discrete drafts and smaller divisible
units (pages) and turning the text into a long continuous document, a scroll
examined through a twenty-five line sliding window.  Although this small window
can be a problem for students who cannot always visualize the entire text as a
unit (see for instance Richard Collier, "The Word Processor and Revision
Strategies," 1983), expert writers generally lose their dependence on what they
can see on the screen and internalize the sense of a text that exists in an
infinitely mutable state.  Even the printout, apparently hard and immutable,
comes to be seen as purely provisional, for a new one incorporating changes can
be produced at whim.

A key aspect of this form of text is that it can easily be recombined with
other texts.  Skilled writers who use word processors are well aware of how
often they cannibalize their own older texts for quotations, well-turned
paragraphs, ideas cut out of drafts and saved for future works in which they
might be more appropriate.  But this effect does not become truly significant
until the writer's own text begins to interact with other sources of text
available on-line.  The word processor is often seen as a preliminary stage of
conferencing, for posted text is often prepared initially on some kind of word
processor (whether PC or mainframe editor).  However, this metaphor can be
reversed: the word processor is coming to be fed by on-line information as much
as the reverse.  As other sources of text become available in machine-readable
format--texts received through electronic conferences and on-line publications,
texts downloaded from databases, et cetera--the awareness of intertextuality
that LeFevre speaks of becomes increasingly objectified, its implications
increasingly unmistakable.                                      [line 328]

As I prepare this article I am conscious of two kinds of sources.  Some of the
sources came to me in hard copy; the labour of typing quotations in by hand, of
leafing through separate texts to identify key passages, for me emphasises
their separateness, the claim of the original author over the knowledge.  Other
sources came to me electronically; these I can cut and paste into my document
much more freely, integrating not just another's words but ultimately his very
keystrokes into my own construct.  A well-trained scholar, I am always careful
to acknowledge, always careful not to place my own stamp of ownership on the
words of another.  But the sliding together of texts in the electronic writing
space, texts no longer available as discrete units but as continuous fields of
ideas and information, is so much easier in electronic space--not just
physically easier but psychologically more natural-- that it is significantly
more effort to keep the ownership of the ideas separate.  Intertextuality, once
a philosophical concept, is becoming a way of life.

When information becomes disseminated electronically, not only pretexts but
also posttexts begin to slide more and more fluidly into the text as the author
integrates the comments of others into the evolving document.  As Hiltz and
Turoff put it in _The Network Nation_ (1978),

          The distinction between a draft, preprint, publication
          or reprint now turns into the same "paper" or set of
          information, merely modified by the author as he or she
          builds on the comments from the readership. (p. 276)

Ultimately the distinctions between authors and documents may break down
completely.  Hiltz and Turoff separate sections of their book _The Network
Nation_ with fanciful excerpts from a future "Boshwash Times"; one of these
(from the July 14, 1995 issue) predicts just such a breakdown of individual
authorship under the pressure of computer mediated collaboration:

          A group of 57 social and information scientists today
          shared the Nobel Prize in economics, while 43 physicists
          and scholars in other disciplines captured the prize in
          physics. . . .  When the first such collective prize was
          announced eight years ago, the committee tried to
          convince the group involved to name the two or three of
          its members who were the most responsible for the theory
          developed.  However, the group insisted that this was
          impossible.  Dr. Andrea Turoff, spokesperson for the
          collective, explained "We were engaged in what we call a
          'synologue'--a process in which the synthesis of the
          dialogue stimulated by the group process creates
          something that would not be possible otherwise."  (pp.
          464-65)                                               [line 374]

In short, with electronic communication the notion of the static and
individually owned text dissolves back into the communally performed fluidity
of the oral culture.  When the materials of which they are constructed are
available in machine- readable form, document assembly--a very telling
neologism-- becomes analogous to the oral poet boilerplating stock phrases and
epithets into familiar plots, reaching into the previously existing network of
epic knowledge to create a new instantiation of knowledge that has been in the
public domain from before his birth (see Bolter, _Writing Space_, 1991).  In
the electronic world as in the oral, the latent intertextuality of print is
raised to consciousness: it becomes more obvious that originality lies not so
much in the individual creation of elements as in the performance of the whole
composition.

There is boilerplating and boilerplating, of course.  As he weaves his stories,
the oral storyteller is deeply embedded in a rhetorical and cultural context.
His audience is physically before him, and he assembles his stories in a close
engagement with both that audience and his characters, the tribal ground out of
which his figure arises.  "The individual's reaction is not expressed as simply
individual or 'subjective' but rather as encased in the communal reaction, the
communal 'soul'" (Ong, 1982, p. 46).  On the other hand, certain kinds of
machine boilerplating, augmented by such mnemonic aids as CD-Rom's containing
thousands of form letters and mail-merge programs with which to distribute them
blindly, can become so totally divorced from rhetorical occasion that they
cease to have any connection with human knowledge whatsoever (Cragg, "The
Technologizing of Rhetoric," 1991).  But a process is best defined not by its
pathological extremes but by the central uses to which a society puts it.  When
used by skilled writers who are writing in a rhetorical context, not just
recopying formulae in a vacuum, the relatively easy cut-and-paste embedding of
chunks of prose from various sources can become an important operational
metaphor of intertextual connections.  Language theorists have always assured
us that these connections exist, but we used not to see them so objectively
demonstrated.                                                   [line 407]

5.  Living Mythically in Cyberspace

McLuhan's term for the effects of electronic communication is
"retribalization."  Under the effects of participatory electronic media, he
claims, linear typographic man again learns to "live mythically."  McLuhan of
course never explains precisely what he means by these or any other of his
terms--to do so would spoil the fun of making the reader write her own meanings
into McLuhan's text.  But the concept of living "mythically" suggests far more
than simply being more interconnected, of being able to send messages to each
other more quickly and easily than we could last year.  It means living in a
form of consciousness in which knowledge does not exist outside the knower,
embodied in a physical text, but instead is lived dramatically, communally
performed as the myths of oral man were performed.  This, I argue, will be--to
some extent already is--one of the effects of internalizing the electronic
writing space.

These effects are at their peak in hypertext, undoubtedly the most extreme
example of text that is both nonlinear and participatory.  The constructive
processes performed by any reader of any text find a very physical analogue in
hypertext as each reader takes a different physical path from node to node and
thus metaphorically "rewrites" the text in the process of reading it.
Hypertext documents can be constructed as even more open systems, in which each
reader is invited to become co-author by adding new nodes or new information
within nodes (Slatin 1990). As Moulthrop puts it,

          At the kernel of the hypertext concept lie ideas of
          affiliation, correspondence, and resonance. In this,
          . . . hypertext is nothing more than an extension of
          what literature has always been (at least since
          "Tradition and the Individual Talent")--a temporally
          extended network of relations which successive
          generations of readers and writers perpetually make and
          unmake. (1991, par. 19)                               [line 438]

Hypertext is still too new and relatively rare to be the object of much close
study, although it has created a great deal of interesting informed speculation
(see in particular Bolter 1991).  It can be seen, as Slatin does, as a very
different form of text, the only form of computer mediated communication that
is entirely unique to the computer and has no analogue in hard-copy
communication whatever.  For my purposes, however, I do not think that we need
to separate hypertext from other forms of computer mediated communication.
Rather, I see it as simply the most extreme extension of a change in
communications media that permeates all aspects of the electronic writing
space.

6.   Copyright in the Cybernetic Tribe

One of the most visible signs of the first transformation of consciousness was,
as I have noted, the development of copyright laws to safeguard intellectual
property.  It is not difficult to speculate on what could happen to these laws
if the computer really does change our attitude to knowledge.  We can
understand this change not by postulating a simple reversal, but by invoking a
more complex concept:  McLuhan's "break boundary," the point at which anything,
pushed to its limit, breaks into a new form that is in many respects its
opposite.  Mechanical duplication, once so easy that it separated performance
from creation and brought about copyright to protect the latter, has now become
so very easy that copyright, in the sense of a prohibition on unauthorized
copying, is virtually meaningless.  Small software companies distribute their
products as shareware; large ones have given up on copy-protection schemes and
are hoping to make enough money on site licences to corporations to make up for
the rampant piracy of individuals.  The sense of a single original--an author's
draft, a frame of set type, a master copy--becomes increasingly difficult to
sustain in an environment in which every copy can spawn another copy at a
keystroke, without loss of physical quality.  "In magnetic code," Michael Heim
points out, "there are no originals" (1987, p. 162).  In the intellectual
marketplace in particular, copyright in the sense of preventing unauthorized
copying is becoming vacuous--hence the bold statement in the _EJournal_
masthead that "permission is hereby granted to give it away."

Even the sense of owning a document to protect its integrity is becoming
difficult to maintain as documents lose the physical markers that hitherto
anchored their boundaries in time and space.  In order to own a document, Hiltz
and Turoff (1978) note,                                         [line 478]

          An author has to be able to own one item, which may
          appear in many different places which may change
          dramatically over time, and the author might alter his
          item after it is already in the system.  Delivering
          copies of the item to the copyright office whenever it
          is changed, or a copy of each and every "publication" of
          it, is going to lead to chaos.  (p. 456)

Thus copyright in the sense of securing the rights to a fixed entity is likely
doomed.  The only sense in which copyright can continue to have meaning in
electronic space is the sense of acknowledging an original creator of an idea.
Electronic documents have not done away with the citation network, and even in
an evolving hypertext, newly created nodes are typically stamped with date and
author (Slatin, "Reading Hypertext," 1991). But these familiar gestures are
beginning to _mean_ something different in electronic space.  To acknowledge
parentage is not the same as to maintain a claim of ownership.  Without the
sense of master-and-duplicate that the printing press imposed, there is no
intellectual ground for present attempts to toughen copyright laws in order to
protect "intellectual property."  They are like holding a sieve under a
breaking dam.

We can see signs of this shift in a number of subtle and not-so-subtle ways.
In a previous issue of this journal, for instance, Robert K. Lindsay (1991)
proposes an electronic journal of proposed research in which research proposals
would be openly critiqued by any readers of the journal who felt qualified to
do so, in the hope of improving them through the process of open debate
("Electronic Journals of Proposed Research," 1991).  In a sense this is no more
than an extension and formalization of the oral stage of collaboration, a stage
that now occurs in a less formal way in the halls and coffee rooms of research
and educational institutions, and late at night in the overpriced hotel rooms
of rumpled researchers at conferences.  But Lindsay does not suggest simply
that proposals should be publicly posted for critiquing.  He also proposes that
"These proposals would then be in the public domain: they could be carried out
by anyone with the means and skill, or they could be referred to in
applications to funding agencies."  For the proposer, this means not simply
putting an idea out into the world for a time to see what improvements could be
made to it.  It means surrendering ownership of the idea forever, possibly
letting another person develop and reap the academic rewards for it.  This is
an idea that could just as easily have been proposed in the context of a print
journal of proposals--but I have never seen it done.  When knowledge inhabits a
print space, it seems natural to want to own it.  When it enters electronic
space, it seems equally natural to surrender it.                [line 521]

7.   Caveats and Conclusions

Before announcing a complete reversal of typographically- dominated
consciousness, I want to make explicit a few notes of caution hinted at
earlier.  First, one must realize that analogy is a particularly slippery form
of reasoning.  Seeing history as merely circular without recognizing key
differences is as reductive as it is tempting.  By electronic media, McLuhan
meant electronic mass media such as film, radio and most importantly
television, media largely free of alphabetic text.  It is not at all clear that
computer mediated communication will have the effects that McLuhan claims for
other forms of electronic media. The electronic revolution, despite its
often-cited links with orality, may be returning us not to a secondary form of
orality so much as to a secondary form of literacy from which earlier forms of
audio-visual media had begun to alienate us.  Stuart Moulthrop points out that,
however much an electronic text may be freed by its electronic form from many
of the constraints of print text, it is still _text_, still visual, still
segmented and sequential in its smaller units if not in its larger structure
("You Say You Want a Revolution? Hypertext and the Laws of Media," 1991).  That
secondary literacy is different from primary literacy does not make it
equatable to primary orality.  As Ong points out, primary orality is
characterised not by a different concept of text but by an absence of the very
concept of text itself.

In particular, structures of thought in primary orality are pressured by the
relentless need to preserve knowledge against the threat of annihilation by the
ever-decaying properties of sound.  The textual recombinations performed by the
oral bard were subtle, driven by the needs of the audience but minute enough to
preserve the illusion that each retelling of the story was the same.  As
electronic text breaks up the fixity of print, knowledge will not return to
this endless reperformance of the same patterned phrases, for the elements of
the text are preserved in a form that, while infinitely malleable, _need_ never
be changed.  Unoppressed by the forces of decay that drove tribal symbolizers,
the electronic symbolizer is free to remake texts as creatively as desired.

          Elements in the electronic writing space are not simply
          chaotic; they are instead in a perpetual state of
          reorganization.  They perform patterns, constellations,
          which are in constant danger of breaking down and
          combining into new patterns.  (Bolter, 1991, p. 9)    [line 561]

Here we may recognise the communality of oral knowledge, the close union of the
knower and the known, but for all that we cannot recognize primary orality.  We
can never get all the way back there again.

Moreover, given the economic structure that we have painstakingly built on the
back of print-induced linearity and specialization, it will take more than a
new attitude toward texts to make us stop wanting to charge for knowledge.  In
fact, the very technology that has made certain aspects of replication so easy
as to make old-fashioned copyright unenforceable has simultaneously brought
into existence new possibilities of charging by the byte for using
information--a process that Moulthrop calls "information capitalism" (1991,
par. 16).  For every move in the economic game there is a countermove, and
knowledge has been so closely tied to economics for so long that it may never
be dislodged.  Rather, the relationship between economics and knowledge will be
rearranged into new formations, some perhaps more sinister than my rather
optimistic portrait of communal knowing has suggested.

Finally, I do not want to exaggerate the degree or speed with which changes
such as I have outlined are likely to penetrate the society as a whole.
Eisenstein is careful to point out that the effects of the printing press not
only took a long time to diffuse through Europe, but initially only affected a
relatively small elite that she dubbed the new "reading public" (_The Printing
Press as an Agent of Change_, 1979).  The effects on the larger public were
more on the order of secondary effects, though none the less profound for that.
We in the academic community tend at times to forget that there actually are
people in the world who do not have a desk covered with books, papers,
half-done projects, computer disks and banana peels.  Computers have penetrated
everyone's world to the extent that almost every Western household has dozens
of appliances that contain a silicon chip, and nearly every business
transaction is in some way or another involved with a computer.  But this is
not the same as saying that everyone is likely has experienced or is soon
likely to experience first-hand the new consciousness of text that I have been
describing.  As with the printing press, so with the computer, the effects that
diffuse beyond the realm of the knowledge workers themselves may be of a highly
secondary nature. But again, their secondariness will not mean triviality.
                                                                [line 598]
I want to be careful, then, to define the limits of the claim I am making here.
I am not claiming that electronic text will unilaterally undo almost three
millennia of exposure to literacy.  I am suggesting, however, that some of its
psychological effects can be understood in part by referring to the state of
consciousness that existed before writing in general and the printing press in
particular made it possible to separate the knower from the known, to see
knowledge as a commodity that can be owned, traded, rented, and accumulated.
The new awareness of the "polylogic" nature of our knowledge (to borrow Michael
Joyce's term), an awareness that has percolated through such diverse
disciplines as literary criticism, rhetoric, language philosophy and cognitive
science, may well have a technological basis.  The sort of surrender of
ownership suggested by Lindsay's proposal may be more thinkable in an
electronic form than in a printed form, not just because electronic media speed
up the dialogue, but because electronic media make the dialogic aspect of
language overt and inescapable.  The long standing process of trading texts
back and forth becomes transformed into a process of merging texts into new
wholes which are inseparable from their makers.  The modern researcher will
never be metaphorphosed into Homeric bard, but perhaps at least some of her
activities can be seen as more bardic now than they could under the linear
metaphors imposed by print.


                                  References

Bolter, J. (1991).  _Writing Space:  The Computer, Hypertext, and
     the History of Writing_.  Fairlawn, N.J.: Erlbaum.

Collier, R. M. (1983).  The word processor and revision
     strategies.  _College Composition and Communication_, 34,
     134-35.

Cragg, G. (1991).  The technologizing of rhetoric.  Paper
     delivered at the Canadian Communications Association
     Convention, Kingston, Ontario, May 30, 1991.

Crane, Diana. (1972).  _Invisible colleges: The diffusion of
     knowledge in scientific communities_.  Chicago: University
     of Chicago Press.

Eisenstein, E. (1979).  _The printing press as an agent of      [line 639]
     change: Communications and cultural transformation in early-
     modern Europe_.  Cambridge: Cambridge University Press.

Havelock, E. (1976).  _Origins of western literacy._  Toronto:
     Ontario Institute for Studies in Education.

Heim, M. (1987).  _Electric language: A philosophical study of
     word processing._  Yale: Yale University Press.

Hiltz, S. R., and Turoff, T. (1978).  _The network nation_.
     Reading, Mass: Addison-Wesley.

LeFevre, K. B. (1987).  _Invention as a social act_  Carbondale:
     Southern Illinois University Press.

Lindsay, Robert K. (1991).  Electronic journals of proposed
     research.  _EJournal_  1.1.  (EJournal@ALBNYVMS).

Lord, A. (1960).  _The singer of tales._  Harvard Studies in
     Comparative Literature, 24.  Cambridge, Mass.: Harvard
     University Press.

McLuhan, M. (1964).  _Understanding media: The extensions of
     man_.  New York: McGraw-Hill.

Moulthrop, S. (1991).  "You say you want a revolution? Hypertext
     and the laws of media."  _Postmodern Culture_, 1, no. 3.
     (Moulthrop 591; Listserv@NCSUVM.BITNET).

Ong, W. (1982).  _Orality and literacy: The technologizing of the
     word_.  New York: Methuen.

Patterson, L. R. (1968).  _Copyright in historical perspective._
     Nashville: Vanderbilt University Press.

Slatin, J. M. (1990).  "Reading Hypertext: Order and coherence in
     a new medium."  _College English_, 52, 870-883.

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           College of General Studies
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The Brent-Amato Exchange                                           [line 1]
        by Doug Brent
           College of General Studies
           University of Calgary

        and Joe Amato
            Department of English
            University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign


[Doug Brent sent this response in July; I forwarded it (anonymously) to Joe;
Joe's reply came back almost overnight.  The delay in publishing the exchange
is _EJournal_'s fault, not theirs.  Ted Jennings]

                                   * * * * *

Joe Amato's review of _Writing Space_ is a useful and provocative document.
However, I would like to respond to it by picking holes in two specific aspects
of it:  Amato's quarrels with Bolter's format, which I think are misplaced, and
his ideas on the "darker side" of hypertext, which I would like expanded.

First, Amato takes Bolter to task for not pushing his printed document farther
in the direction of hypertext, a direction in which, Amato argues, it is
already beginning to drift as it becomes less linear and more aphoristic toward
the end:

     I would argue that Bolter, for all his attention to the work of novelists
     such as Joyce (of both varieties), gives relatively short shrift to
     several (late-) print-age techniques that might well have provided his
     final section with a bit more oomph. . . .  Specifically, had he
     broken with sentence/paragraph structure -- even within his print-bound
     format -- the resulting *aesthetic* reflexivity could, I think, have
     avoided what must otherwise be read as a sort of tacit irony, the irony
     implicit in having to use print for a discussion of un-printable
     technologies. (l. 205)

I think that this quarrel over form misses completely Bolter's point (or else
Amato simply doesn't *accept* Bolters point, which is fine but he doesn't say
that).  Bolter argues that writers such as Joyce, Tzara and others resorted to
their disorienting techniques precisely because there was no other way to
accomplish the fragmentation that they sought. Their only writing tool was
linear print.  In the computer age, he claims, these techniques are unnecessary
because the electronic writing space is available to do the job.  One does not
have to write against the grain of hypertext to produce a Dada poem; hypertexts
come pre-deconstructed, their oppositions and tensions exposed rather than
hidden.                                                               [l.46]

Thus the print writing space is freed to do what it does most naturally: act as
a vehicle for relatively linear argument.  Since Bolter's book is also
available as a hypertext, why bother to do badly in print what can be done in
the alternate medium?

This is the most general lesson of the technological perspective on
communication.  Texts, and even thoughts, will automatically flow into the
shape that is most congenial to the technology in which they are created,
unless the creator goes to extreme lengths to kick them out of those ruts.  In
the electronic age, there is no longer any need to expend that amount of energy
to kick print out of its linear rut.

Second, his displeasure with Bolter's linear form has, I think distracted Amato
>from his other task, that of pointing out the "darker side" of Bolter's
scenario that he alludes to repeatedly throughout his review.  I am quite
convinced, with Amato, that the scenario does indeed have a darker side, and I
think Bolter is too, although Amato is right that he chooses not to dwell on
it.  But I have difficulty making out from Amato's review exactly what this
darker side *is*.  He states that "it is as yet far from clear that networking
may not itself merely represent a further trivializing of human experience, a
way of de-tuning the political consciousness of groups of individuals" (l.
233).  This seems to be the essence of this darker side.  But Amato does not
develop, to my satisfaction at any rate, the details of *why* this should
represent a further trivializing of human experience.

And so I would like to end with an invitation to Amato to expand on these
ideas.  Why would we "find ourselves at some point unable to re/view the
ideological consequences inherent in such apparent self-authorization" (l.
248)?  What is wrong with a world in which ironic efforts to criticise culture,
including deconstruction, have ceased to be against the grain and become
natural to the medium?  Is it simply that they will thereby become less
self-conscious?  I find myself unable to answer these questions by examining
Amato's review.                                                       [l.80]

In short, even though Amato's dissenting voice cannot be embedded in Bolter's
text as it could be in hypertext, perhaps he could nonetheless take advantage
of this non-hyper space to expand on and clarify his comments.

                                          Doug Brent
                                          College of General Studies
                                          University of Calgary


[Here follows Joe Amato's reply to Doug Brent's response to Joe's Re/View
of Jay David Bolter's _Writing Space_]:

Good, constructive commentary.  But let's see if I can't clarify my seemingly
more tenuous reservations regarding Bolter's work, in accordance with the
aforementioned "two specific aspects" of my re/view:

That texts and thoughts "will automatically flow into the shape that is most
congenial to the technology in which they are created" suggests that one might
do well to interrogate such technologies thoroughly to determine with some
precision the types of aesthetic freedoms and constraints they "automatically"
present to "creator[s]."  True, due to the development of electronic media such
as hypertext, some may no longer perceive the need to "kick print out of its
linear rut." For these folk, print is a dead duck, and has been so for some
time now. It is surely a comment on this "late age of print" that, even among
this group, ambivalence tends to be a shared sentiment.

I simply have trouble in accepting, wholesale, Bolter's contention that the
general features of progressive twentieth century artistic and intellectual
achievements have anticipated the non-linear, fragmented nature of electronic
media -- in effect, that the advent of hypertext has evidently made apparent
the teleology of these older forms -- a claim that, however much I may agree
with it in principle, requires perhaps a good deal more practical elaboration
than even Bolter has managed.  There would seem to be a tendency among
hypertext commentators to put the car [sic] before the horse.  Viewed against
the more traditional scholastic context, what needs to be looked at more
closely, as I see it, are the assumptions we bring to our engagement with
electronic media, assumptions rooted in the methods, insights and critical
conventions of the twentieth century.  In order to accommodate this process,
older print technologies will undoubtedly have to be rethought, for the
technological ferment that has provided for the emergence of newer technologies
represents a fundamental departure from the prerogatives of earlier print forms
(take cybernetics, for example), hence affording the opportunity to view things
in a new light.  And a 'new light' might well entail a fresh approach. [l.124]

Specifically, I would ask for a more palpable sense of what is meant by
electronic "writing space," and, because older print forms -- which are
presumably at stake in this transition -- have provided the standards against
which we are currently, and by default, evaluating the newer technologies, it
is hardly begging such a question to suggest that one attempt something a bit
more imaginative than conventional reference to the (by now) well-documented
aesthetic conventions of late twentieth century literary inquiry.  (That
Bolter's text is available as a hypertext still does not address the
print-based predicament.)  Hence, assertions such as "One does not have to
write against the grain of hypertext to produce a Dada poem" -- which would
itself seem to imply that writing Dada poetry is aesthetically and, more to the
point, politically at one with the aims of electronic media -- might be made to
suffer a more rigorous critical examination.

O.K. -- so Bolter is not a poet (at least, not to my knowledge).  Yet he is a
hypertext co-author, a writer.  And I believe a bit more legible d-d-discomfort
on his part might have made me feel a bit more comfortable.  Surely print is up
to the task.  It may be a matter of taste, finally, but matters of taste are
invariably a function of community norms, and the academic community is chock
full of such norms.

Regarding the "darker side" of Bolter's text: this is indeed given relatively
short shrift in my re/view, largely due to my misgivings as to what I took to
be its already excessive length.  Fortunately, my respondent has provided me
with a convenient articulation on which I would like to "expand":

          What is wrong with a world in which ironic efforts to criticize
          culture, including deconstruction, have ceased to be against the
          grain and become natural to the medium?  Is it simply that they
          will thereby become less self-conscious?

Even assuming that "deconstruction" might be "natural to the medium" -- the
sort of claim, with its premise of a "natural" deconstructive element, that, as
I argue above, requires a good deal more elaboration (and perhaps revision) --
what is meant, precisely, by "ironic efforts to criticize culture"?  How on
earth could electronic media ipso facto guarantee any such thing?  Were I to
assume that everyone had access to electronic media, that a majority utilized
such media on a regular basis, that such media facilitated a variety of
cultural criticism, and that such criticism was -- because of non-linearity?
transience? aphorism? density of reference?  fragmentation? abdication of
authority? -- ironic (and effectively so), would there be any point in
attempting to substantiate in what ways such "efforts" had "thereby become less
self-conscious"?  Would such a "world" -- one evidently replete with active,
culturally informed contributors -- trouble itself with such questions?
Indeed, given the obvious benefits of remaining in the medium -- on-line, as it
were -- why would *anyone* bother to provide answers?  The implication would
seem to be that active engagement within this newer medium somehow
*automatically provides for* those critical efforts directed toward a richer
understanding *of* the medium, and un-self-consciously, to boot.        [l.174]

My commentator has, in effect, trivialized ideological inquiry by suggesting,
to use Bolter's formulation, that the new medium will "incorporate criticism
within itself," an example of the sort of casual hyperbole that I take to be,
again, symptomatic of much of the debate endemic to these new technologies.  Of
course, if we assume that electronic media are merely the evolutionary outcome
of a long line of progressive technological innovations, then the "naturalness"
of such transitions obscures the vast resources, public and private, that have
had a hand both in the production and commodification of information (to speak
in broad sweep).

In concrete terms, one way of looking at this "darker side" is to consider the
extent to which this vast network of knowledge workers -- currently
predominantly white males -- ultimately determines the nodes, or data, of
hypertext databases.  Surely one may cite similar occasions for abuse
pertaining to the older technologies.  And surely hypertext promises to
circumvent difficulties inherent in print by -- to paraphrase a much-touted
benefit -- facilitating the forging of links between various knowledges.  Yet
this does not obviate the need to examine the sorts of control constraints and
technological biases that have been designed and built into the machines --
software, hardware and all.

Even a pragmatist like myself would grant that human experience is trivialized
whenever experiential options are assumed *exhausted* by a specific material
reality.  Hence I find it difficult not to raise at least an eyebrow at the
fact that the relationship between electronic media and the users (or
consumers?) of such media might be defined in terms of a presumed
correspondence between simulation of mind and mind itself -- as I argue in my
re/view, a potentially closed loop with little or no provision for negative
feedback (entirely ironic?).  That print was culpable on the count of similar,
and tacit, delimitations does not warrant the view that the liabilities of
hypertext should go unchallenged, as I am certain my commentator will agree.

There are many reasons to be suspicious of global technological trends, trends
that literally incorporate (presumably) multinational agenda. Aphoristically
speaking, one might ask whether the good things in life really *don't* come
easy.

                              Joe Amato
                              Department of English
                              University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign
                                                                    [l.216]

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             An Electronic Journal concerned with the implications
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 Editorial                                                        48 lines.
        by Ted Jennings

 Re/View of _Writing Space_                                      277 lines.
        by Joe Amato
        Department of English
        University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign

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 E D I T O R I A L                                                   [line 1]
        This issue's principal text is an essay-review of a book about
electronic writing and hypertext, phenomena that have drawn some people
into a kind of euphoria whence they uncritically celebrate our
"revolutionary new medium."  Joe Amato is concerned about what he calls
"the dark side" of this electronic playland; his note of skepticism
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medium -- and euphoria.
        Our masthead says that we are "concerned with the implications
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A RE/VIEW OF BOLTER'S _WRITING SPACE_                              [line 1]
   by Joe Amato
   Department of English
   University of Illinois, Urbana-Champaign

 _Writing Space:  The Computer, Hypertext, and the History of Writing_,
Jay David Bolter, Lawrence Erlbaum Associates, 1991, 258 pp.

        "Because the subject of this printed book is the coming of the
electronic book," Jay David Bolter writes in his Preface to his timely
and important text, "I have found it particularly difficult to organize
my text in an appropriate manner -- appropriate, that is, to the printed
page." Perhaps as a consequence, *I* have found it particularly
difficult to render a fair account of Bolter's text, a text that exists
both in book form and as a hypertext. Having read the text in codex
format initially, I have chosen to discuss that version, not the
Macintosh - Storyspace diskette.  And I have opted to consider the book
itself in light of this new paradigm of writing, a paradigm that informs
both the material practices and specificities peculiar to "electronic
writing."  It is also a paradigm which -- if we take Bolter at his word
-- is effecting a conversion of culture away from the "unification"
implicit in "high culture" to that of a potentially global "network of
interest groups" (233) -- an interconnected but fragmented global
village.                                                         [l. 24]

        In discussing this intriguing book, I want to examine the darker
implications of Bolter's argument, the ways in which electronic media
and network technologies could end up constraining human consciousness
and culture by splintering and isolating both groups and individuals.  I
want to resist, for the sake of this re/view, the kind of evangelistic
euphoria evident in Bolter's frank assertion that he decided to "remain
the advocate, to argue rather cheerfully that the computer is a
revolution in writing" (ix).

        First, however, a brief account of the book's structure is in
order, beginning with the following rough outline:

Introduction - Chapter 1
Part I   The Visual Writing Space (Chapters 2 - 5)
Part II  The Conceptual Writing Space (Chapters 6 - 9)
Part III The Mind as a Writing Space (Chapters 10 - 14)

        As one can see, Bolter's text is divided into three main
sections, plus a cogently argued and highly engaging Introduction that
whets the reader's appetite.  Part I, "The Visual Writing Space,"
discusses the technological embeddedness of various writing practices,
>from stone tablets to ancient papyrus to medieval codex to the
"Gutenberg Galaxy," including brief and informative forays into
hypertext and hypermedia.  Bolter is perhaps on firmest footing here,
and his careful, lucid style makes for a highly persuasive,
historically-grounded analysis that will be hard to dispute.  This is
the part of the book that those of us with even a modest interest in the
impact of electronic media on writing will want to surreptitiously slip
under the office doors of our Mont Blanc- or Smith-Corona- bound
colleagues. Whatever minor lapses one notes in the early chapters --
such as the somewhat reductive assertion in the Introduction that, "In
the act of writing, the writer externalizes his or her thoughts" (11) --
they are one-by-one accounted for as Bolter proceeds with the
implications of his argument; he writes later, for instance, that
"writing need not give voice to anything" (45).  Again, I regard this
less as contradiction than as a progressive refinement of his argument,
though some may feel that I am being a bit generous here.  [l. 62]

        Part II, "The Conceptual Writing Space," begins by tracing the
ways in which the age-old conception of the "world-book" is shaped and
constrained by particular technologies of writing, including, of course,
electronic print.  In Chapter 8, "Interactive Fiction," Bolter
introduces the reader to Michael Joyce's hyperfiction, "Afternoon"
(1987), and it is here, I believe, that many readers will find
themselves beginning to resist the implications of Bolter's argument.
In such interactive fictions, ordinary distinctions between writer and
reader begin to blur.  Readers are allowed to make (finite) choices
about what to read next even as they proceed through interactive texts,
choices that control the sequencing of the text itself.  Thus there is
really no fixed text, at least from the point of view of the
reader-cum-writer (shall we simply write "wreader"?), and yet the (deep)
structure of the "original" text would seem to be immutable.  One is
reluctant, at first, to think of a text as both immutable and
ever-changing.

        Having had the opportunity to toy both with Bolter's hypertext
and Joyce's "Afternoon," I can attest to that ambivalence with which one
may well confront such emerging writing technologies; clicking away with
my mouse, I began to feel a bit like a mouse in a labyrinth, sniffing my
way to the site of an elusive hunk of Brie or, better still, Swiss.
Bolter does point to Sterne, (James) Joyce, and Borges as literary
precursors to interactive fiction; it is also evident, in these
postmodern times, that the idea of a "fixed" text could be labelled a
"reductivist interpretive construct." These considerations
notwithstanding, interactive fiction *does* encourage a more
disjunctive, less linear, more casual (hence less causal), ostensibly
more open-ended textual experience -- *provided*, that is, that readers
are willing to modify their expectations regarding "text," and aside
>from the sort of rethinking which will invariably characterize the
*writer's* response to this new medium.                 [l. 95]

        In Chapter 9, "Critical Theory and the New Writing Space,"
Bolter's chief concern would seem to be to substantiate his claim that
"Not only reader-response and spatial-form but even the most radical of
theorists (Barthes, de Man, Derrida, and their American followers) speak
a language that is strikingly appropriate to electronic writing" (161).
Bolter's point is that electronic text moots many of the critical
concerns of the last two decades; as he puts it, specifically with
regard to deconstruction, "The deconstructionists seek to disturb, to
alienate, to dislocate, and so by embracing the techniques of
deconstruction, electronic writing seems in a playful way to subvert the
whole project" (164). I really can't do justice within *my* somewhat
limited writing space either to the nuances of contemporary critical
theory or to Bolter's rebuke that current critical bugbears are somewhat
beside the point.  However, I am quite certain that Bolter will be taken
to task in this portion of his text by a number of cultural critics --
Marxist, feminist, what have you.  And I am also quite certain that
Bolter's unasked rhetorical question --"The question is whether the
deconstruction of an electronic text seems worth the effort" -- and what
would appear to be *his* answer -- "In fact, an electronic text is not
hostile to criticism:  it incorporates criticism into itself" (165) --
reveal his complicity in the euphoria referred to above, his otherwise
ambivalent tone notwithstanding.  The past two decades of critical
inquiry, for better or for worse, are not about to be dismissed so
readily, regardless the sorts of changes being wrought by the coming of
hypermedia.                                             [l. 121]

     And yet it is to Bolter's credit that his text does not end here.
Almost as if he has sensed the provisional and somewhat facile nature of
his critique, he devotes Part III of his text to "The Mind as Writing
Space."  Beginning in Part I with the more material, visual aspects of
writing, then, he moved on to consider in Part II metaphorical and
fictional constructions.  He concludes with a discussion in Part III of
the ways in which the symbolic representation of mind (the cognivists'
version of "subject," "self," "agent," "identity") in AI research
reflects a new form of cultural transmission, figuratively and
literally.

        Chapters 12 and 13, "Writing the Mind" and "Writing Culture,"
warrant a few specific remarks.  It seems to be a foregone conclusion
today that any discussion of semiotics -- the study of those signs and
symbols with which we humans construct our cultures, our societies,
hence our collective sense of ourselves -- will of necessity invoke some
aspect of that most prolific polymath pragmatist of late last century,
Charles Sanders Peirce.  Peirce's concept of the "man-sign" figures
mightily in Bolter's formulation; in the subsection entitled "A New
Republic of Letters," Bolter extrapolates Peirce's notion to assert that
"For the new readers and writers, the human mind itself becomes a text
to be fashioned and explored according to the principles of the
electronic writing space" (206).  A new writing space, then, heralds a
new text, a new mind. Bolter's subsection headings give one an idea of
the discursive sweep of this portion of his text:  "The textual mind";
"The intentional gap"; "Perception and semiosis"; "Virtual reality";
"Cultural unity"; "Cultural literacy"; and "The electronic hiding
place."  I found these final subsections to be particularly cursory,
even hasty at times; "intentionality" is perhaps too sticky to be
relegated to a discussion of approximately four pages, and Bolter's
gloss of Hirsch's _Cultural Literacy_, (and his casual reference to what
has since become its companion piece, Allan Bloom's jeremiad) fails to
account for the messy relationship between knowledge and the uses to
which such knowledge is put, a problematic inherent in any such attempt
to establish a measure of "literacy" -- which leads me, full circle, to
my opening remarks, my concern as to the "darker" implications of this
"late age of print."  My reservations begin with the sort of structural
movement I have just outlined.                          [l. 160]

        As I have suggested, Bolter's text appears to become more and
more diffuse as one nears his Conclusion (as does, some might argue,
this re/view).  Note that his major conceptual transitions, the three
parts of his text, each utilize a spatial framing metaphor -- qualified
by "visual," "conceptual," or "mind" -- and in this way replicate
reflexively the notion that what is at stake is indeed a new "writing
space."  Yet the mind is, as Bolter would have it, itself best
represented by the symbolic modeling of mind *via* this new writing
space; that is, the mind is modeled after the simulation, a simulation
whose electronic medium itself is likewise used to orient *his
discussion* along specific, spatially-conceived coordinates.  Bolter's
text, then, represents an attempt to reproduce a curious sort of
designed space, a space out of which emerges both electronic text and,
albeit in printed format, the structural conditions requisite to such
text.

        This is spatial space, in other words.  It is space, however
mutable and fluctuating, that is assigned the mutual functions of, A)
representing (or "simulating"), and B) creating the latticework for such
simulation.  It might be thought of as a cognitivist version of *mental*
space (and an interesting reworking of one of Kant's categorical
imperatives).  Thus, in representing the new (electronic) writing space,
the old (scribal) writing space has begun to exhibit the effects of its
own dislocation.  Little wonder, then, that Bolter's argument should
begin to spin off, fragment into hypercultural "aphorisms." (In this
context, we can note his related remark about the "aphoristic rather than
periodic" nature of electronic text, ix.)  Given this fragmentation, and
with the model having become the motive, there is no ostensible means of
providing for conceptual feedback.  Or is there?                [l. 190]

    I would argue that Bolter, for all his attention to the work of
novelists such as Joyce (of both varieties), gives relatively short
shrift to several (late-) print-age techniques that might well have
provided his final section with a bit more oomph (and, I suspect, might
well have made it that much more difficult for him to locate a
publisher).  Specifically, had he broken with sentence/paragraph
structure -- even within his print-bound format -- the resulting
*aesthetic* reflexivity could, I think, have avoided what must otherwise
be read as a sort of tacit irony, the irony implicit in having to use
print for a discussion of un-printable technologies.  While the move to
hypertext and hypermedia cannot be simulated on the printed page, it
does not thereby follow that the only way to address such technologies
is through the linear, prosaic essay that characterizes, even in today's
intellectual climate, most scholarly endeavor.  And though it might be
objected that this would surely serve to marginalize Bolter's text even
more, it is nonetheless the case that the text as it now stands,
especially its final portion, may be subject to a harsher re/view than I
have indicated.  In effect, and in all good conscience, I am a bit
dismayed that Bolter did not work harder to make good on his claim that
electronic text "incorporates criticism within itself" by rendering a
more aesthetically informed account of this project *in print.* And
given that all aesthetic impulses imply corresponding ideological
assumptions, this leads me to a final reservation.      [l. 214]

        No critic of the nineties can afford to ignore the consequences
of taking for granted one's ethnicity, gender, economic class, etc. (Yes
-- it's almost a platitude by now).  One person's meat is indeed the
vegetarian's poison, and the individual, as many of us now recognize,
may no longer presume to speak for the many, for we each owe our
individual predilections and beliefs to our social birthrights (and
wrongs), in combination with luck, circumstance, genetics, and so forth;
hence the network culture that Bolter describes may be a good thing in
that it makes evident this fact by imposing specific, albeit incredibly
multitudinous, choices from the outset -- who actually *is* capable of
speaking to whom, what choices one actually has in the midst of an
interactive fiction, where one actually ends up situating one's self.
But all of this talk of networking is occurring at a time when the
various global (and national) villages have shown themselves either
unwilling or incapable of dismissing specific cultural imperatives -- in
many cases, justifiably so -- and it is as yet far from clear that
networking may not itself merely represent a further trivializing of
human experience, a way of de-tuning the political consciousness of
groups of individuals, if only non-conspiratorially.  Bolter is, of
course, aware of this; he writes, for instance, that even though
"hypertext has become the social ideal," enabling a heretofore
unprecedented "freedom of choice," it is likewise the case that "for
many Americans this ultimate freedom is not available" (233).  But
"freedom of choice" of the sort Bolter suggests -- what he refers to
parenthetically as the ability to "rewrite one's life story" -- often
obscures the narrative tensions implicit in social and institutional
realities, aestheticizing lived, and felt, experience in what might be
merely the *illusion* of writing one's own destiny -- a theme park with
no admission, no way to write oneself out of the black-and-white box.
And if this is what is to constitute a new culture, and a new form of
literacy, each of us may find ourselves at some point unable to re/view
the ideological consequences inherent in such apparent
self-authorization, falling into our network niches as singular
splinters with little hope of ever recognizing the structure itself --
both trees *and* forest.                                [l. 250]

        Bolter's text, finally, is a text that demands a critical
reading and, I think, re/reading.  It is provocative, useful, and --
unlike many such accounts of new technologies -- sensitive to its
limitations, however much my remarks might indicate otherwise.  To use
an entirely outmoded style of analysis, I would say that Bolter's tone
-- his self-avowed "ambivalence" -- is that of a writer who has just
discovered that he has written himself out of a job.  But it may simply
be that Bolter's job -- each of our jobs -- now requires retooling,
hence a rewriting of our already comprehensive job descriptions.  All
scholars, in fact, are going to have to give some serious thought to
whether or not we can afford to resist the types of changes in print
technology Bolter discusses, to consider whether, in the wake of these
changes, such resistance indeed accommodates the interests and needs of
our colleagues or of our students.  Personally, I find resistance a
helpful strategy once I know what it is I am resisting.  As in
confronting all ultimately *social* technologies, the question becomes
one of participation in the development of an active and informed
community of teachers, writers, thinkers; in this case, a community
(inter) connected in real time both on an experiential and intellectual
plane with extra-academic communities -- simply and fashionably
put,*networked.* In the absence of such a community, how might we
mitigate less sanguine, and more disciplinary, consequences?

Joe Amato                              jamato@ux1.cso.uiuc.EDU
Department of English
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             An Electronic Journal concerned with the implications
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 Electronic Journals of Proposed Research           226 lines.
        by Robert K. Lindsay
           Mental Health Research Institute
           University of Michigan

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Electronic Journals of Proposed Research
       by Robert K. Lindsay
          Mental Health Research Institute
          University of Michigan

Asking the right question and asking the question right, it is often said, are
the most important steps in science.  After that, some say (exaggerating for
emphasis), answering the question is just a mopping up operation.  Nonetheless,
the bulk of scientific publications are devoted to reports of the "mopping-up."
The question-posing steps are most commonly relegated to grant proposals, where
they are examined by a small number of reviewers, at times ill-matched to the
task.  Thus, proposals do not benefit from the open peer commentary that
scientific publications receive, nor do they elicit recognition and reward,
except, at times, in the form of money.  It is safe to assume that some good
ideas, especially if they are truly novel, never see the light of public
scrutiny nor receive the resources necessary to carry them to fruition. The
other side of the coin is that some effort, at least, is devoted to executing
flawed designs or answering unimportant questions, as reflected in the
remarkably low citation rates of research papers (Hamilton, 1990, 1991).  In
emerging fields, especially, the result is often that published research is
followed by retractions, qualifications, and belated criticisms.  Further, it
is likely that some of the best suggestions are delayed or withheld altogether
>from the proposal process because their originators lack the time or resources
to carry them to the point where the rewards of recognition will accrue, and do
not wish others to reap the benefits of developing them.

Why do we not concentrate our most intense scrutiny on the most important
steps?  The current system of limited, anonymous, and selective peer review
without opportunity for rebuttal or clarification is insufficient.  Far more
productive would be journals of open peer commentary (following the format of
the very successful Behavioral and Brain Sciences) that publish research
questions and experimental designs, followed by a dialogue of counterproposals
and modifications before the expensive and time intensive steps of
experimentation, field work, model construction, and data analysis are
performed.  The result would be detailed and carefully designed studies of
acknowledged importance. These proposals would then be in the public domain:
they could be carried out by anyone with the means and skill, or they could be
referred to in applications to funding agencies.

The emerging electronic global communications network will soon make possible
the implementation of such publication channels in a manner far more useful
than print.  The fruits of efforts now underway to exploit the potential for
electronic collaboration has opened the door to electronic publication.  This
technology could do more than simply improve the efficiency of document
dissemination and speed the processing of proposals in the old mode. The
opportunity to publish more than research "results" will be at hand.
Electronic dissemination, combined with the publication of proposals,
hypotheses, experimental designs, and criticism, could reward those who excel
at idea generation but eschew the later stages, speed the progress of science,
save resources now devoted to projects destined to be inconclusive, widen,
rationalize, and make more fair the grant review process, while easing the
(also unrewarded) burdens of grant review.  Further, it could decrease the
frequency with which good ideas lie fallow because of the vagaries of referee
selection and the current review process.

Mention of electronic networks conjures visions of bulletin boards, with scraps
of paper tacked up, electronically, into a hodge-podge of junk mail that has so
little of merit that most of us soon stop searching for the good stuff.  The
present suggestion is not intended to be a bulletin board, but rather a
refereed journal.  The most common contribution for the journal would not be a
one paragraph "idea," but a detailed proposal of several pages that includes
hypotheses, experimental designs, and the logic of the argument.  In other
words, the typical proposal would be similar to the scientific portion of an
NSF or NIH proposal, without the investigator and institutional information and
all of the other administrative paperwork.  Editors and referees would select
proposals that were serious and had prima facie merit, and request some
referees to write reviews.  Referees would evaluate and critique only the
ideas, not the qualifications of the proposer or institution.  The proposal
would be "published" immediately, and the reviews would be distributed as they
came in.  Short, unsolicited reviews would also be distributed as they were
received and edited (not refereed).  The result could be the source of
information for a revised and presumably much better proposal which could serve
as the basis of a conventional proposal to a funding agency, either from the
originator of the contribution or from someone else.  The funding agency would
be immensely helped by the extensive, documented review, and awards decisions
could be made much more rapidly, with less money wasted pursuing ill-conceived
ideas.

The central idea of this proposal is to extend critical peer review to the
earliest and presumably most critical steps of science, the problem and/or
experiment definition.  This would be of some value even if carried out in
traditional ways.  Such review is in fact now done for the very largest
projects, where the costs of mistakes are most obvious. The human genome
project, for example, is going through an extensive planning and review stage.
Most large engineering and business projects are extensively reviewed before
investing in them.  It is my contention that smaller scientific projects should
also receive broader review than they now get.  This is not primarily to give
overlooked ideas a better chance at funding, but rather to improve the
proposals that do get funded before serious design flaws cost time and money.
Savings are increasingly important, since the federal science budget has not
kept up with the supply of researchers and the cost of equipment (Lederman,
1991).  I do not think that the present system of peer review is always
appropriate, because it is too narrowly specialized, anonymous, overly
selective, unrewarding to the referees, and slow.  In electronic networks I see
the possibility of correcting these problems.  An electronic journal of
proposed research is based on the assumption that refereed and edited material
could benefit from the speed of distribution, wide accessibility, machine
searching and editing, and low user marginal cost that are the most important
merits of electronic distribution.

Such journals would not be substitutes for current funding procedures. In fact,
the journals would not be involved in making monetary awards, so the
conventional route would still be needed to obtain funding.  The open peer
review process is rather an alternative for those who, for whatever reason,
choose to use it.  Any investigator unwilling to submit a proposal for open
inspection and perhaps implementation by another person would simply not do so.
Currently there are, of course, many grant awards made primarily on the basis
of the institution/investigator qualifications and abilities, with scientific
specifics being secondary. That is entirely appropriate and should continue; my
proposed journals do not address the issue of reviewing investigator
qualifications, but would confine themselves to scientific questions.  I
believe there are many occasions where the new avenue would be attractive to
serious workers.

What would induce a person with a good research idea to use this avenue rather
than the customary method of seeking funding and the opportunity to carry the
idea to fruition, thus obtaining the intellectual credit that goes with this?
There are several possible motivations.

Science has long been compartmentalized as different disciplines, and the
specializations get narrower and narrower.  Some sciences also specialize along
methodological lines: experimental versus theoretical, apparatus A versus
apparatus B.  Yet it is still not institutionally acknowledged that some people
are better at generating ideas, some are better at criticism, some are better
at seeing the implications of hypotheses, and some are better in the laboratory
or at the computer. It is time to exploit these differences and reward them
equally with recognition and citation, while bringing our best weapon of
reason-- open peer commentary--to bear on all aspects of scientific work.

Second, some research requires expensive or one-of-a-kind equipment and the
appropriate infrastructure of human and other resources.  Not everyone with
appropriate knowledge and creativity has access to the necessary facilities,
which cannot be duplicated for a single project.

Third, many of our most highly creative scientists already have a full plate of
research, and would be eager to see some of their good "excess" ideas explored.
Then, too, there may be cases in which a proposer fully intends to do the
research but wishes to have the benefit of constructive advice from a
scientific community that extends beyond a limited network of colleagues and
advisors.  In still other cases, the "mopping up" operation may indeed be
straightforward and could be done by support staff elsewhere at low cost.

Finally, and more speculatively, there may in the future emerge another source
of research ideas born of computer technology and artificial intelligence.  The
scientific literature is a vast warehouse of information which certainly must
contain the seeds of many important discoveries. Yet these seeds are dispersed
among different, often disconnected literatures that are not commanded by any
specialist. Human efforts augmented by electronic analysis of available
literature databases such as MEDLINE have in a few cases already revealed
previously unappreciated connections that suggest new experiments (see Swanson,
1987, 1989, 1990).  Such discoveries have been and will continue to be made by
information specialists rather than those who are qualified to pursue the
necessary research.  An Electronic Journal of Proposed Research (EJPR) would
provide an avenue to make such ideas public.

For an EJPR to succeed, it is important that it be edited and that it be
indexed into appropriately sized subdisciplines to permit automated, selective
browsing and dissemination, so that readers would not have to sift through
large files of material on subjects foreign to them.  It must provide rapid
turnaround; and most important, there must be recognition of the contributors.
Validating priority of ideas is also important, although this is not a new
problem.  If anything, electronic distribution reduces this problem in
comparison to print distribution which is slower, less accessible, and more
coarsely time stamped.

As I noted above, this proposal is not primarily motivated by the fact that
good ideas go unfunded, although pointing out that good ideas are not always
recognized is not a sour grapes argument, any more than pointing out that
awardees are generally worthy is an elitist argument. The beliefs that no good
ideas are overlooked by current procedures and that all funded research is the
best it can be are too preposterous to bother to counter with specific
examples.  Problems with current procedures have been noted with concern (for
example, Marshall, 1987; Muller, 1980) and even with alarm (Snyder, 1985), and
various suggestions have been offered for reform (Koshland, 1985).  I have
suggested an improvement that addresses these concerns in a new way: wider,
open peer review of scientific content, followed by revision and competition
for funding, expedited by the wide accessibility and manipulation of documents
through currently available technology. Although there would be many such
journals in the sense that there would be many specialized editorial boards,
they would be one journal in the sense that access over the electronic network
is uniform.  I have not seen this proposed previously, and I think that it has
sufficient potential to merit serious consideration.

References

Hamilton, D. P.  (1990)  Publishing by - and for? - the numbers.  Science
     250(4986): 1331-1332.

Hamilton, D. P.  (1991)  Research papers: Who's uncited now?  Science
     251(4989): 25.

Koshland, D. E. (1985)  Modest proposals for the granting system.
     Science 229(4710): 231

Lederman, L. M. (1991)  Science: The end of the frontier?  Science.
     Supplement to Volume 251, Number 4990, January 11, 1991.

Marshall, E. (1987)  Gossip and peer review at NSF.  Science 238(4833):
     1502.

Muller, R. A. (1980)  Innovation and scientific funding.  Science
     209(4459): 880-883.

Snyder, L.  There are problems with the review process.  Communications
     of the ACM.  28(4): 349-350.

Swanson, D. R. (1987)  Two medical literatures that are logically but not
     bibliographically connected.  J. American Society for Information
     Science, 38(4): 228-233.

Swanson, D. R.  (1989)  A second example of mutually isolated medical
     literatures related by implicit, unnoticed connections.  J. American
     Society for Information Science, 40(6): 432-435.

Swanson, D. R.  (1990)  Somatomedin C and arginine: Implicit
     connections between mutually isolated literatures.  Perspectives in
     Biology and Medicine.  33(2): 157-186.

[ This article in Volume 1 Issue 1 of _EJournal_ (March, 1991) is (c) copyright
_EJournal_.  Permission is hereby granted to give it away.  _EJournal_ hereby
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Robert K. Lindsay          robert_lindsay@ub.cc.umich.edu
205 Washtenaw Place
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This "Department" is Joe Raben's idea.  It will appear whenever readers send
similar citations.  Here is Joe's initial list,  now several months older than
when he sent it, along with his suggestion:

        Joe Raben: "One service you might add is a list of relevant articles in
places most of your readers would not be likely to look for them. For example,
the following just appeared in _Signs: Journal of Women in Culture and Society_
16:1 (Fall 1990):

Ruth Perry and Lisa Gruber, "Women and Computers: An Introduction"

Paul N. Edwards, "The Army and the Microworld: Computers and the Politics of
        Gender Identity"

Sherry Turkle and Seymour Papert, "Epistemological Pluralism: Styles and
        Voices within the Computer Culture"

Pamela E. Kramer and Sheila Lehrman, "Mismeasuring Women: A Critique of
        Research on Computer Ability and Avoidance"

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Consulting Editors - March 1991 - Inaugural Issue

ahrens@hartford        John Ahrens            Hartford
ap01@liverpool         Stephen Clark          Liverpool
crone@cua              Tom Crone              Catholic University
dabrent@uncamult       Doug Brent             Calgary
djb85@albnyvms         Don Byrd               Albany
donaldson@loyvax       Randall Donaldson      Loyola College
ds001451@ndsuvm1       Ray Wheeler            North Dakota
eng006@unomal          Marvin Peterson        Nebraska - Omaha
erdt@vuvaxcom          Terry Erdt             Villanova
fac_aska@jmuvax1       Arnie Kahn             James Madison
folger@yktvmv          Davis Foulger          IBM - Watson Center
george@gacvax1         G. N. Georgacarakos    Gustavus Adolphus
gms@psuvm              Gerry Santoro          Pennsylvania State University
geurdes@hlerul55       Han Geurdes            Leiden
jtsgsh@ritvax          John Sanders           Rochester Institute of Technology
nrcgsh@ritvax          Norm Coombs            Rochester Institute of Technology
pmsgsl@ritvax          Patrick M. Scanlon     Rochester Institute of Technology
r0731@csuohio          Nelson Pole            Cleveland State
ryle@urvax             Martin Ryle            Richmond
twbatson@gallua        Trent Batson           Gallaudet
usercoop@ualtamts      Wes Cooper             Alberta

University at Albany Computing Services Center:
        Isabel Nirenberg, Bob Pfeiffer, Kathy Turek; Ben Chi, Director
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Editor:                             Ted Jennings, English, University at Albany
Managing Editor:                               Ron Bangel, University at Albany
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State University of New York University Center at Albany  Albany, NY 12222  USA




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